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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
part:2

swayum is passing through when ..vasu noticed him and begin to blush really hard 😆 (just imagine vasu blushing 😳 )...swayum notice this and come to her ..

swaytum: vasu ji app itna ..blush kyun ker rahi hein ...ya phir ajj make-up kertey howey blush-on zayada laga liya tha

vasu: (look at him)_ tum nahi samjo and she run from there like 16 years old gal ... 😆

swayum was confused when a charming and handsome person agaed between 26 to 28 years old come over there .....!

swayum: sujal sir hi app kahin ja rehey hein

sujal: haan ..kyun tum ko takleefg hai

swayum: mujey kyun ho gi ji wesey kashish madam ka phone ayaa tha

sujal: kya keh rahi thi wo chipkali

swayun: sir jiii kuch nahi app ka pooch rahi thi bas ..wesey ik baat kahoon

sujal: bako

swayum : app dono ko dekh ker lagta hai ke app ik dewaar ho ....or wo ik chipkali jo app se chipak gye hai ...... 😆

sujal: haan sahi keh rahey ho ..OMG

SWAYUM : KYA HOWA ...

sujal : kuch nahi tum yahin rahoi main ayya

sujal ..goes ..and guess what rishi come over there .....

rishi: hi swayum ......... 😳 😳 😳

swayum: aa...mmmmm rishi sirr..woooooooo main abhi ayya

rishi: ye sab lerkey mujey dekh bhag kyun jatey hein .........just then ....archita come over ther ....

rishi: oh GOD lerki ..main kahan jaoon kahan choopooon ........


ab tu koi continue karo
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
very nice aamna 👏 i like it yarr 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
arre aamna hum bhi hain story mainnnn 😳 ....isse achi khichdii koi nahi pakka saktaaa .... 😆
ok i'll try to write sth ....plz bear it 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
rishii: yeh tow meri taraf hi aa rahi haii .....kahan jaonn .... aman kahan ho tum ... bacha loo mujhyeee....(is confused n doesnot noe where 2 go)

archita cumin towards him bada matka matka kee .... 😆

archita: (sees rishi) rishii tummmm ...!!

rishi rumsaway 4rm deir....sayin main srf aman ka hooonnnnn 😲

archita: arre rishii sunoo towww ...yeh hamesha mujhe dekh kar bhaag kyun jaata hai.... 😕 hmmmmm kahin mere bomb phate balon ke waja se tow nahiiii .... 😳 ....agar aisi baat hai tow aaj hi ja kar straightner le kar aati hoon market se ..... agli baar baal straight kar kar aaongii ....phir nahi bhaage gaa .... 😳 😳 ....

next scene .....

raghuu(real name iqbal): re mamoo woh aa re li haii 😳 ....bas aaj tow bool de ga apun usse ke love karta hai ....acha re ab jaldii se jeeb main se phool nikal aur chalta bun... re idhar hi aa re li haiii ..(his heart ❤️ beatin faster than b4) ... 😳 ... bas mamoo ab apne aap se baatein karna band kar aur usse baat kar......challlllll

shwetlaana cumin very matka matka ke n doesnot see raghuuu ...cumin

shwetlaana n raghu walkin towards each other.. n raghu holdin a red flower in his hand...... n in da background ...yeh gaana chal raha ahii/....,.

" yeh ladka hai Allah kaisa hai deewana ...kitna mushkil hai tauba isko samjhana ...ke dheere dheere dil bekaraar hota hai..... hoote hoote hoote pyar hota haii .....

as soon da song ends raghu bumps into sum one ....its not shwetlana ....but is our very own amna 😆 😉

amna: (does not noe sher has bumped inbto raghuu ) arree dekh kar nahi chal sak....!!!! 😃 😳 (sees raghu)

raghu cums out of his thoughts ....

raghu: hailaaaaa ..... 😡 re mamiiiii dekh kar nahi chal saktii hai kyaaaaa 😡 ...... tujhe kitni baar kaha hai ke mere raaste main mat aaya karrrrr 😡 ....(starts to look 4 shwetlana) .... haila .... mamoo aaj bhi nikal gayiii re sab isss ....mamiiii kii waja se howa hai reeeee 😭 ..... pata nahi apun ka day kab aaye gaa ....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

amna: 😳 .... zaroor aaye gaaa....!!!(lost in her own thoughts) 😆

raghu: in a very hard tone ...pata hai re mere kooo ....tu ab yahan se chaltii bun aur ...AAINDA MERE RAASSTE main maat aana.... samjhii kyaaa..!! 😡


amna: haan hamesha aaongiiii ....... 😳

raghu: (aapna haath sar par marta hai)...uffff tere ko tow apun baad main dekhe ga.....re mamoooo apni shwetlaana kahan gayiiiiii 😭 ...

shwetlaana saw rahul so went towards him coz of dis aall happened 😉


so ab i cud write dis much ab koi aur likhee .....amna tumharii entryy tow hoo gayiii ....ab bakii sab ki bhi karaooooo 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Barnali


ok & the 3rd character, gurry, luvs kashish. bt can t marry her as he is forced 2 marry archie. and archie luvs sujal lik mad.😆


we need twists & multi-angular luv storyaamna. else it cant b interesting.




NICE IDEA.......i ahv only red da 1st page,,,,,so can only coment on dis...........ok..guys..lets start......or is it alredy started 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
Shwetlaana is walking towards rahul and tab hi kashish calls on sujal's cell whisch is with his chamcha swayam.

sWAYAM:hALOOO....Kaun bol raha hai

Kashish:Arre phir tum.....kya phooti hai meri qismat jab hi phone karti hon yeh bhoot utha leta hai

Swayam:Ji kuch kaya aap ne

Kashish:Woh mein Kashish....zara sujal ko do

Swaya:Ji woh to aapse baat nai karenge.........chipkali..heheheh

Kashsish:Kyun

sWAYAM:Bas

Then Sujal Cums

Sujal:Swayam kaun hai

Swayam:Woh Chipkali

Sujal:Ufff aaj to iss se peecha chudwaoon ga.....takes the phone

Sujal:AAKhir tumhe kya chahiye

Kashish: Tumhe nahi pata......tum

Sujal:Apni fizool ki bakwaas band karo aur mera peecha chodo...and he hangs up

yaar i tried...now sum1 else continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
ok guys mujhse aur raha nahi jaa raha tow sujal aur kashish ki entry bhi ho rahii haiiiaiiaiiii...

sujal is in his office n is goin towards his cabin..... 😳 😉 😆

ek dum kashish tapak padhtii haiii.....

kashish: arre sujal tummmmm....!!!

sujal: ufff yeh yahan bhi aa gayiii ....arre koi bahar nikaloo issee

kashish: sujal tumhe tow main abhi batatii hoon ...samjhte kya ho apne aapkooo....

both of them go into sujals cabin....he tries to lock da door but kashish manages to get in 😉

sujal: kashish dekhoo tum abhi yahan se jaoo ... mujhe bohat kaam haiii .... 🤓

kashish: nahii main nahii jaongii tumse baat kare bagheerrr .... tumhare saath chipak kar rahon giii 😳


sujal: (says to himself) sahi kaha tha swayam ne ...waqai main yeh chipkalii hai aur main deewar ... !!!! peecha hi nahi choidhtiiii .... 😡

kashish: kuch kaha tumne...!!!

sujal: haannnn nahiii .....ab plz tum jaoo . yahan see

twist... kashish goes near sujal and .......pulls him 4rm his tie towards her

kashish: tum samajhte kya hooo apne aapkoo...

sujal: 😲 arre yeh kya kar rahii hoooo .... kashish ye ...oooofff

kashish: office haii ....maloom hai mujhe....

sujal: durr hatoo mujhseee.....

kashish: nahiii kabhii nahii ....

sujal falls on his chair n kashish cums n sits in his lap....

sujal: kitnii bhaari ho tummmm ....

kashish: aadha wait tow tumhare pyarr ka haiii ....

sujal: i HATE UUUUUU CHIPKALIIIII ... 😡

actually deir is a fight going on btw sujal n kashish but agar koi bahar se dekhta tow usse lagta ke romance ho raha ahiii ... aur haan its lunch time so one is in da office except 4 2 ppl ..... guesss... wait will noe ....but read further 4 tht.. 😆


bhaskar broo entersss.....in da office n is shocked to see sujal n kashish together coz sujal doesnot like kashish sooo..

bhaskar broo: 😲 yeh kya hoo raha haiiiiii (slowly n gradually is walkin towards sujal's cabin)

he is abt to enter da room when .... sum bodyy stops himmm n tht isss .....saara 😆

she wants to see sujal n kashish together 4 life ..... n also noes tht they r in da cabin iss liyee .... woh unke cabin par nazar rakhee beethii hptii haii takke koi andar na jayeee..

saara: arre jee app kahan jaa rahe hainnnn ....

bhaskar brooo: woh mujhe sujal se kuch kaam haiii..... iss liye mera raasta chodoo aur mujhe jaane doo .....

saara: aaj tow ya iss paar ya uss parr ... nahi jaane doongii main aapko andar sujal bhaiyaa aur kashish bohat zaroorii kaam kar rahee hain....

bhaskar broo: main andar jaa kar hi rahonga... dekta hoon kon eeera geera nathuu kheera mujhe rookta ahiii 😉

saara: WHT aab tow main aapkoo hargizzz nahi jaane doongeee,.....

ok den fight starts btw bhaskar broo n saara ......

ladaii chal hi rahii hotii haii kee ek dum shoor sun kar sujal aur kashish cabin se baahaar aa jaate hainnn...

ok guys ab aaj ke liye meri taraf se itna hiii ....sum1 else continueee 😉

hope u aalll enjoyyyy ..... 😉 .....aur haan

ab vasuu ...swayam...rishii...archita.....raghuu.... shwetlana ....amna....bhaskar broo.....sujal.....kashish.....n saara hav been introduced soooo bakii characters ko bhi introo karoooo 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 😆 haila .....plz plz plz raghu ....i mean iqbal ka demagh theek ker do ....us shwetlaana ki tu main band baja ti hoon ...!

sujal : ye kya horaha hai yahan ..

bhaskar: mujey tum se baat kerni hai ..

kashish: kya baat kerni hai tum ko sujal se bhaskar ...

sujal: aye chipkali chal bas ker bhoot ho gya tera chalo jao yahan se

kashish : nahi main nahi jaongi

sujal: pata hai teri addat hai chipkana ..

kashish: 😳 😳 😳

bhaskar: sujal ..this is not fair tumhari shaadi hoi thi choco ke sath

sujal: arey yaar mujey yaad hai ....is chipkali sey lakh derjey achi apni choco hai

bhaskar : woh hi tu magar ye ye ...sara ...samjhti nahi baat ...

saar: plz bhaskar bro ..app ..essay mat kerya plz ..app per ganna fit hai set hai ...ZAMANA DUSHMAN DUSHAM ................

rishi by chance comes over there ..sujal and bhaskar run from there ...and rishi in scared condition come to kashish and saara

rishi: suniya

kashish: kya hai

rishi: wo app ney merey aman ko kahin dekha ....

saara : tum sey chup ker kahin betha hoga ...

as rishi leave amna come overe there ...she is sad ...

kashish: kya howa amna why are u upset

amna: wo raghu ...

kashish: tum fiker mat kar tumharey liya koi prince charm aye ..ga dekh lena

amna: i hope so

amna is about to leave she bumps in to ...some one (her habbit 😉 😆 )

amna: andhey ho kyua

guy: sorry miss

amna looks up a guy is none other then ...real iqbal khan ! 😉 😉

amna: oh i m sorry

iqbal totally lost in amna's eyes ...

amna: hello ..andhey ke sath bherey bhi ho kya hato merey rastey se ...

iqbal: ..app ka naam

amna: jhansi ki rani samjey

iqbal confused and walk behind amna ...kashish and saara also just then sujal come back ...with a sweet gal kashish got furious

kashish: kon hai ye

sujal: ye hai choco .... 😉

now some one continue .................
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: cute_face86

U guys dont like it 😭

Awwwwwwwww.....Aamna itz realli nice waitin for the nest part......😃

Nice idea....try and participate

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Posted: 19 years ago
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arre amna yeh toiw bohat achii ja rahiii haiiii....ok i will cont... 😆

kashish: kon choco ....i dont noe her ....theeroo abhi jaa kar main apnii mother in law ko shikayat lagaati hoon ...woh batain gii tumheee... 😭

sujal: MAMA NAHIOIIIIII .....!!!!

kashish: tow phir chodo isse aur mere saath chalooo

sujal: haan chaloo...!!!

choco dii: sujal idhar aaooo khabar daar tum kahinn gaye yahan see 😡 .....

sujal: par mama....

choco: tumharii mama toe tumhe baad main bataingee pehle.... mainnn

saara: tum dono chodo mere bhai kooo ..... acha ... 😡 😆

yeh sab ho hi raha hot haiii ke BARNALII DII enters

sujal: shukar ahi saara ...tum aa gayiii bachaoo mujhee....

saara: jab tak main hoon naaa...!!!

barnali dii: ummhhhh uuummmhhh ...yeh yahan kya ho raha haii ....office hai yeh fish market nahiii....yah phir kahonn court nahi jahan tum sab case ladh rahe hooo ...!!!!!

sujal-kashish-choco-saara: barnalii diii yeeh dekhooooo.....!!!!

barnalii dii: uff chup karoo tum sab ....ek ek kar kar bolo...!!! 😡

kashish: barnali dii sujal mera hai...

choco: nahiii mera hai...!!

kashish: mera .....

sujal: CHUPP MAIN KISI ka nahi hoon... 😡 ....isse behtar tow yeh hoga ke main saari zindagii kunwara rahooonnnn.... 😉 😭

saara: nahiiiii bahi aapkoo ...kashish ke paas jaana haii ...script yahi kehtii haii...

sujal: haan mujhe pata haii par yeh choco beech main aa gayii haii ab kya hoga....!

barnalii dii: arre sujal woh toe ....tumhara usse divorce ho gaya haiii....

sujal: shaadi kab hoiii thiii 😕

sumone enters

bhaskar broo: barnaliiiii diiiiii 😡 😉 .....khabar daar jo aage kuch boola ..... chup .... aap merii side par hooo

saara: nahiii diii merii side par hain ...khud divorce karwa ya haiii inhoo neee

barnalii dii : haan ye tow haii ...lekin bhaskar ki baat ..... 😕 ab main kahan jaoonn 😭

ab koi aur continue karee 😉

Edited by saara 1 - 19 years ago

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