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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey eveybody! i know i porimsed all of you that there would be a huge twist in this chapter, but i haven't gotten round to writing it up yet..sorry for this short update lekin this is all i had time for. This is just a part of the chapter and i'll post the other parts later...the twist will come in the next 2 or 3 updates I suppose! 😳

Chapter. 60

"OK ok! So I called all of you here because me and Mallishka have something to announce"

Pranay stood in the middle of the hall and announced with mallihska by his side.

P: Mom, dad…

M: aap…woh…

P: mallishka just say it!

M: you say it Pranay!

P: fine…app…woh…ummm

M: see! Even you cant say that!

Adi: oh for god's sake someone say it!

P: chup ha adi!

Mall: mom, dad, app dono dada dadi ban ne ja rahe hai..

Shikhar+Mayuri: what!!

The room filled with happiness and everyone was hugging Mallishka and congratulating Pranay

Mai: wow di! You're pregnant!

T: finally! So I'm not going to be the youngest in the family anymore!

Shikhar: we definitely have to celebrate this in a grand way! Humara ghar ka pehla baccha aane wala hai!

B: that's right dad!I we should have a grand party tonight!

T: tum theek kehrahe ho…Dad, hum dono party ke saare arrangements karne ja rahe hai…bye everybody!

~*~*~*~

Maithili stood in front of her wardrobe staring at the many dresses and saris she had

A: kya hua? Jaldi tayaar ho jao na..we have to go in 20 minutes

M: adi…help me na…I don't konw what to wear…

A: hmmm…you should wear red…

M: red? But I don't have any red saari

A: koi baat nahi…wear this one..

He spoke taking out a box from behind him and placing it in front of her.

Her eyes lit as she opened the box; there lay a beautiful red sari with silver embroidery and silver border upon it.

M: its…beautiful!

A: It'll look better once you wear it

He kissed her brow and left.

~*~*~*~*~

The party was on in full swing! Everyone came and congratulated Mallishka and Pranay as they came in. A huge bouquet of flowers came into the hall with a note attached to it

Pranay noticed it come in and looked at it

Mallishka: wow! That's the biggest bouquet I've ever seen!

P: I know! There's a note here…it says…

To the Mehra Parivaar…hope your days of happiness last 100 years…

M: aww! That's so sweet! But who sent it?

P: no idea!

A: hey bro, whats up? Adi came to Pranya and Mallishka. He stared at the bouquet and the writing on the card

P: adi, do you know who sent this?

A: huh?…uh…no…he spoke worriedly and went away from there.

His phone rang and he picked it up

A: what's all this?

*: what? I was simply congratulating you and your family for this happiness!

A: shut up! You know you have no right to…

*: shayad tum bhool rahe ho adi, I have evey right to! She spoke cutting into his sentence

A: garima! Just shut up.

The person on the other side is shown…its Garima

G: adi, I'm on your terrace…come and meet me quickly

A: what?? Gairma I told ou never to come to my house!

G: I need..

A: how much more? He brashly questioned her

G: patience my love…

He gritted his teeth and cut the call

Garima grinned as she sat on the bench on the terrace

Adi looked around to make sure no one was looking and went up the stairs to the terrace

"Mallishka di, have you seen adi anywhere?" Maithili iquestioned

Mall: yeah, I think he went upstairs...

M: thanks di

Maitihli smiled and went up the stairs I wonder what he's doing upstairs she thought peculiarly

Adi opened the terrace door and came in. He saw garima seated on the bench and closed his eyes to compose his anger

A: what is it? why are you here?

G: don't pretend as if you don't know!

Garima walked closer to him

A: how much do you need? He asked turning his head away from her

G: adi! It hurts…why can't you just look at me and speak? She spoke holding his chin and turning his head round

A: don't lie…I know you don't love me or anything..

She looked at him seething: you're right! It doesn't hurt…both of us know it…I'm only here for the money!

The terrace door creaked open and Maithili stood looking at adi and Garima

A: how much? Just tell me and I'll give it to you

G: it's a big amount this time…50 lacks

A; what?? Are you crazy? How can I arrange so much money for you

G: its not for me! Its for…

A: just shut up! I know its for you! I already gave you money last time, now what?

G: all I'm asking you for is money! You can't even give me that! I'm not asking you for a place in this house am I? I'm not asking you to marry me am I?

Maithili stood shocked at the door and slowly walked towards them

G: all I'm asking you for, is to give money for you're child!

Maithili's feet stopped moving and she froze right there.

Garima had seen her and stopped immeditly with a mortified look on her face

A: what happened? Adi asked as he turned round to look at where garima looked

He stood shocked as well… "Maithili…" he whispered her name

A: Maithili…he came closer to her but she stopped him with her hand..

M: whats goingon here? She silently questioned

A: its nothing…i..

M: I'm not asking you…she seethed as she looked at him and turned to garima

G: i…woh..I'm pregnant…with adi's child

That was it for maithili…she couldn't hear past that, she couldn't see past that. her whole world came crashing down the moment she heard that sentence.

Adi stood panicked at garima and Maithili… he knew she would find out, but just not this soon..

A: she's lying Maithili!

Garima looked shocked at adi and then at Maithili

G: I'm telling the truth! I'm 3 months pregnant with adi's child!

A: stop lying garima!

G: you stop lying! You low life! How low can you stoop! At least don't lie to your wife!

Maithili looked angrily at Garima

M: if adi says you're lying, then you're lying! I don't want to hear anything else! Just get out now!

Adi felt an imence pang of sorrow at what Maithili said…how could she trust him so much? And here he was, lying to her

A: Maithili…she's right…i…

Maithili stopped and looked at adi. Tears streamed uncontrollably from her eyes

A: i..

M: don't touch me! She shouted as adi's hand touched her cheek

A: Maithili..

M: I don't want to hear anything! She ran out of the terrace and into her room.

Adi looked angrly at garima

A: look what you've done! He shouted

G: she was going to find out some day or the other!

Adi stormed out of the room to find Maithili leaving garima behind in the terrace

Garima stared at the both of them and smiled… "adi, tu toh gaya…" she laughed evily at this and left.

Edited by tsamhita - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32

Ok,I wanna be the first one to reply,so me reserving thish plashe!😆😉..Will get bak,but me can already see tht it's a really really short "something"!!;it shouldn't be called a "chapter",atleast!😡😆

--Edit--

Awww,finally Maithili knows the truth;awwww,poor Adi,and poor Maithili,too!!😭😭..and you liar!😡😆..You said we'll be feeling bad for Garima;I aint feelin' bad for her here-Instead,I feel like punching and kicking her hard!!😡..Laalchi kahin kii-disgusting woman!!😡..Ok,stop!..Me gettin' out-of-control,now!😆

I wonder wht next,now-Will Mets be there till the party gets over,or usse pehle hi she'll leave??🤔...I think she should enjoy the Party,atleast!😃😆..Ok,I'm actin' non-sense here,now!;I betta stop!😆😆

Ok,now cont.soon!!😃;and the next one,should be a longer one!😡😆

Edited by ~*~A~*~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
Awwww.... Poor Maithlli,😭 😭 she finally knows the truh.
And that Garima laughing away at Adi's state.... 😡 😡
And Mallishka is pregnant... 😃
I wonder how the party will go??????
Pleaseeee.... update soon, cant wait for the next chapter
Anjali
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34

omg! garima 😡
i totally think garima is not pregnant! I bet adi just passed out when he went with garima..and garima took advantage of the situation...making adi believe something went down when nothing did! she's soooooo not pregnant!!..i think 😳

oh man i hope mets' does not leave adi!...that stupid garima 😡

oh oh..and i think the twist will be that mets' finds out that she too is PREGNANT!!..like her sis..Unlike garima!! (?????)

p.s.
Plz dont drag garima along too much...in this ff! i don't think any1 is ah fan of hers!😆

Edited by sadizzle - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
😳

Originally posted by: ~*~A~*~

Ok,I wanna be the first one to reply,so me reserving thish plashe!😆😉..Will get bak,but me can already see tht it's a really really short "something"!!;it shouldn't be called a "chapter",atleast!😡😆

theek hai jhaasi ki rani😆aapke hukum saraankho pe😆😳

--Edit--

Awww,finally Maithili knows the truth;awwww,poor Adi,and poor Maithili,too!!😭😭..and you liar!😡😆..You said we'll be feeling bad for Garima;I aint feelin' bad for her here-Instead,I feel like punching and kicking her hard!!😡..Laalchi kahin kii-disgusting woman!!😡..Ok,stop!..Me gettin' out-of-control,now!😆hehe😆you were supposed to feel sorry for her 3 parts ago...now there is no need for that😆 you just wait for the twist!😆😳

I wonder wht next,now-Will Mets be there till the party gets over,or usse pehle hi she'll leave??🤔...I think she should enjoy the Party,atleast!😃😆..Ok,I'm actin' non-sense here,now!;I betta stop!😆😆hehe i'll see to all that😳

Ok,now cont.soon!!😃;and the next one,should be a longer one!😡😆chup bet! pehle you update your other fic😳and don't you dare think of closing it😡😆😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: *angel94*

Awwww.... Poor Maithlli,😭 😭 she finally knows the truh.
And that Garima laughing away at Adi's state.... 😡 😡
And Mallishka is pregnant... 😃
I wonder how the party will go??????
Pleaseeee.... update soon, cant wait for the next chapter hehe will post next chapter soon...can't reveal anything now, but there will definitely be a huge twist😳
Anjali

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Posted: 17 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: sadizzle

omg! garima 😡
i totally think garima is not pregnant! I bet adi just passed out when he went with garima..and garima took advantage of the situation...making adi believe something went down when nothing did! she's soooooo not pregnant!!..i think 😳

oh man i hope mets' does not leave adi!...that stupid garima 😡

oh oh..and i think the twist will be that mets' finds out that she too is PREGNANT!!..like her sis..Unlike garima!! (?????)

p.s.
Plz dont drag garima along too much...in this ff! i don't think any1 is ah fan of hers!😆

hehe yup no one is a fan of garima😆 i'll post soon...can' t give any feedback on your ideas for now...its all a big RAAZ😉😆😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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sammie ju updatezed . is it true or i m just dreaming 😆 . ju updatez dis tym so quickly widout any notice 2 ju.

anways d part was brillaint.

praney 2 b papa....n mal 2 b mumma 😆 😆 hw funny..

Gorilla is really 2 evil...

adi n mets really feeling pitty 4 dem. mere pyaar ko uska sacha pyara mets door ja rahi hai.... 😭 😭

better make dem 1. otherwise i will snatch mine bro 4m ju n gve it 2 amina 😆 😆

surprise part i knw berry well i hope so 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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um dat was brilliant but plzz make metalli forgive adi plzzz i can' see dem breaking away n plzz do pm me wen u update
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great twist, Samie! You have us all so hooked yaar!
Aww Maithili trusts Adi so much, and woh idiot ne uska dil toD di! 😡

But I agree with sadizzle, I think woh garima ki bacchi phasa rahi hai bechare ko!

Update soon, want to see what's next!!

-arti.

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