A/M FF: Hate2Love: Mods pls. close topic - Page 83

Originally posted by: desi chic

samz, you're slacking😆

Cheers,

dc

haha....ssshhhhhhh😉don't tell my mommie!😆😆

but she'll never find out coz as long as i get A grades she's happy😉😆

dude..wen will u update..
i'm eagerly awaitin.... 😳

I luv your stuff! omg i noticed it and read it ALL in like two dayzz!! Plz continue!! Plz don't bring the 'garima issue' in yet!! Let the luv grow and be finalized from both adi to mets and vice-versa!!! 😛

@tsamhita,
I really like your fanfic.A friend told me about your fanfiction, i m already in love with it.Plz Update the next part soon.
Luv
Zahra

Originally posted by: dudess

dude..wen will u update..
i'm eagerly awaitin.... 😳

don't worry!! i'll do so soon!😳

Originally posted by: sadizzle

I luv your stuff! omg i noticed it and read it ALL in like two dayzz!! Plz continue!! Plz don't bring the 'garima issue' in yet!! Let the luv grow and be finalized from both adi to mets and vice-versa!!! 😛

aww! thankyou! and yeah...teh Garima issue will wait😳😆😉

Originally posted by: radhot

@tsamhita,
I really like your fanfic.A friend told me about your fanfiction, i m already in love with it.Plz Update the next part soon.
Luv
Zahra

aww! thanks Zahra! call me samhita or sam😳

i'll post the next part soon!😳

Chapter 47

She felt his face drop closer to hers and his head sink in the burrow between her head and shoulders. She shut her eyes and held her breath. She was waiting for him to do something, anything at least. She felt nothing and if at all anything, she felt a distinct cold feeling return to her. Slowly opening her eyes, she stared at his face in front of hers…

His cursed himself for ever drowning…for ever sinking in her. But he too realised that he couldn't help it, there was something so magnatising and so mesmerising in her that he failed to understand how he had been able to resist her for so long. He was staring at her now, and she was staring back. He felt naucious even looking at her, a feeling he wanted to subside to but he wouldn't allow himself to.

Not bearing to look at his pearcing gaze anymore, she broke eye contact.

Looking away, he recognised a certain fear in her eyes. He shifted slightly and got up. Holding his hand out to her, he softly nodded. Slowly, she put her hand in his and got up. Both walked side by side silently...pensively thinking about their feelings for each other.

She let out a slight squeal as she ran ahead…

A: maithili? Adi started running after her.

He sighed as he saw her stop before a gola stall..

M: ek kala khatta!!! She enthusiastically asked

"eh madam! Pagal ho kya? Itni raat ko mujhe aapko kala khatta dena padega?"

Maithili looked pleadingly at him…

M: please bhaiya!!!

"hmm…theek hai"

g

The man started crushing ice into the mould while he poured black liquid onto it.

Handing over the kala khatta, he looked at her..

M: oh! I'm sorry! ..adiiiii!!! paisa do na!

Adi shook his head and gave the gola man his money

A: i..i've only got a 1000Rs note!

Gola man: oh bhaisaab! Humare paas utna paisa nahi hai ki hum aapko 1000Rs ka change de!

The gola man held his hand out ot take back maithili's gola..

g

M: no no! adi please! Give him the 1000Rs! Tum mere liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte!!

A: fine!

Adi, rather reluctantly handed over the money

The gola man smiled and took the money

"bhagwaan aap dono ki jodi ko sukhi rakhe"

Adi and maithili both looked at each other and smiled.

Things were changing…and rather quickly…

xxx

On reaching home, adi ran to his bedroom and jumped on the bed

A: Oh My God!!! This night was…

He stopped as he saw maithili enter the room. Wrapped in a nightgown she walked to the window. The open pane allowed wind to gush in and ravel her loose hair. Shaking her head slightly she tried to get the hair out of her eyes. She pulled hard on the indow, but something was wrong, it just wouldn't budge.

Getting more and more frustrated by the minute, it was visable on her face.

h

She felt two warm hands on her own. Startled, she looked back to find him behind her. Staring into his eyes, she allowed him to come closer to her. Gently pulling the pane from the opposite side, he closed the window. His eyes tried to avoid her face but they couldn't…he stared at her and felt an urge creep up, an urge to touch her fair face with his hands. She realised his proximity and paused.

h

His fingers gently caressed her face as he pushed back her smooth strands of hair. His hands began to tremble as he moved his face closer to hers.

"you don't have the guts to kiss me" her voice echoed in his mind. Bending his head further, for the first time, his lips pressed on hers. She melted in his grasp and responded to his kiss. His kiss deepened once he got her concent and turned to a passionate kiss that twisted her very insides, stirring her soul to infinity. She wasn't as astounded as he had expected her to be. He didn't even think she'd respond back, but here he was, with her in his arms, kissing him.

h

Slowly they parted, his head inches away from hers, the taste of his lips still lingered on hers. She stared deep into his eyes again, questioning them, questions even she herself had no answers to.

He had no idea what to say, everything seemed so…dreamlike…

h

"adi…" "maithili…" both spoke at the same time.

Pausing, they urged the other to continue..

A: I…

M: no adi…don't say it…

A: lekin…

M: nahi adi…please…mai jaanti hoon ke tumhe iss kiss se koi farak nahi parra lekin..this was my first kiss… this was a beautiful moment for me…and please don't spoil it by your stupid jokes…please don't say you love me…

h

Adi was astounded he had no idea what to say after she just spoke…this wasn't how it was supposed to be! She wasn't supposed to say anything as such! He was supposed to finlly tell her what he wanted to for so long…

He watched her move to the bed and lay turning the opposite way. Sighing, he too lay on the bed, his mind in another time phase.

h

Flashback

Adi sat on the table in college and watched maithili from a distance. Even as a 16 year old he loathed her but there was something so ethereal about her that made him fall for her time and time again. He would hardly call it 'falling' for her, but whatever, that was not important for now.

He smirked as he caught her gaze, she was angry with him, angry for what he'd done.

He wrapped his arm round a girl and watched maithili seeth in anger.

Maihtili frowned and went away.

She sat on the table and quietly wiped her tears away.

Everything seemed hopeless. She desperately liked Adi but he didn't like her.

Adi sat next ot her, causing her to jump..

M: tum?

A: ha mai…

She got up angrily

M: what have you come here to do? Have you come here to annoy me! Can't you see I'm already upset!

A: i…didn't mean to upset you..

He spoke genuinely worried

M: oh and what makes you think you've upset me!

A: i…thought…

M: don't think! Because whenever you think of anything, everything goes wrong!

A: oh fine then!!! I came here to say sorry!

M: sorry for what!!

A: sorry for troubling you and making you jealous so you'd say you like me!

He had spoken ahead of time and far too quickly. He didn't understand what she would make out of this…his slip of tongue.

M: what?? She asked slowly…you want me to say…I like you?

She paused for a moment, everything seemed to get clear now..

M: oh! So you wanted to say I liked you, so you could make fun of me!

A: maithili no..

M: you wanted to mock me didn't you! just because I've been friendly to you in the past few weeks doesn't mean I like you!!!

A; i..

M: shut-up! I don't want to ever speak to you again!!! I hate you vikram aditya Mehra!!! I hate you!!!!

A: fine then!!! I hate you too!!!!

(end of flashback)

he turned to his side and saw her back. He was sure she was asleep and that she had no idea what was going through his mind. He smiled endearingly and turned back.

Flashback

A boy of 17 peered through the window and into the kitchen as if looking for someone. Oil lamps lay on wither side of him since it was Diwali that day. He saw a thin girl, graciously making her way towards the kitchen. She had two diyas in her hand and was carefully balancing them while she strut on her 3-inch heels. He smiled shaking his head – no matter how hard maithili Bajaj tried, she could never have a day of walking on heels without tripping at lest once.

He walked closely behind her, waiting for her to fall in his arms…

He wanted to be the one saving the bell of ball if you could say that…

She stopped and carefully laid the diyas on the platform and began searching the cabinets. He crept behind her and stood in dangerous proximity, his head soo close to her loose locks of hair.

She must have felt his warm breath on her and so she jumped. Turning round, she stared at him. He smirked looking at her…: mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai…

M: par mujhe kuch nahi sun na! She replied harshly

Adi sighed: fine then, if you don't want to know where I've hidden your history project!

Maithili's eyes grew wide and she grabbed onto his arm as he moved away

M: please please! Tell me! She asked widening her eyes and fluttering her eyelashes

Dammit! Why does she always have to flutter her eyelashes! Major turn-on! How does she do it? Must be some trick in the trade…hmm..

Adi snapped out of his thoughts and stared at her

A: hmm…well…lets see…

Maithili looked urgingly at him…

A: hmm…you know…I can't remember where I hid it!

He eyes grew yet bigger

M: adi!!! don't test my patience!!!

A: you see…now my memory is just totally lost! I have no idea where I kept your history project!

M: arrgh!!! You idiot!!! Give me the project NOW!! Or else I'll tell papa…

A: huh! Prem chachu loves me more than he loves you!

M: oh I'm sorry! Did I say papa?? Because I meant…your PAPA…Shikhar chachu!

Adi's breath caught in his throat

She laughed looking at his shocked face

A: um…i…its upstairs…in my room…

Without waiting for him to complete his sentence, she pushed him away and ran to his room….

To be continued…(rest of flashback is remaining)

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!so sweet.so it actually turned out that they liked each other since but didnt accept it.awwwwwwww!well do continue asap 👏 !!!!!!!

Wauw deedzzzzzzzzzzz that was fantastic.......... 👏
Keep it up please do cont. soon 😉