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Posted: 17 years ago
jannu! plzzzz update! eagerly awaiting ur work!
mmm sidsk updated from wut i noe!
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Posted: 17 years ago
awww yeahe adi is falling for mets these two hve such a big ego!!!

loved the update 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks all sooo much!!! sorry for the big delay!! here's the next part!!!

Chapter 45

She felt a spur of heat up her arm and she jolted foreword. Leaping into his arms she hugged him. He pulled her towards him and turned round.
Pagal hogaye ho kya??? He shouted at her. She had tears in her eyes and looked down. HE bustled her to the living room and out of the kitchen. He sat her down and looked at her arm…
His fingers grazed her heat burn.
A: half the time you argue with me! Never even think of looking round and seeing eh stove was on!!
A few more tears fell from her eyes.
He felt sorry for her and sighed..
A:i…sorry…its my fault..
Maithili shook her head and wiped her tears off…
M: its mine…I'm sorry…i..didn't see the stove was on and I kept on arguing with you and then, suddenly…

A: does it hurt? Adi asked examining her arm. His face dropped till his lips were in dangerous proximity. Pursing them he gently blew cool air onto her hand. She didn't know why, but she felt a shiver rise up her spine. Her heart thumped faster and her breath quickened. She had no idea why he had such an impact on her, to her it all seemed ludicrous. He reached for the first aid box over the table and gently applied cream to her hand, the touch of his fingers embossed on her arm. She was feeling peculiarly cold and nervous.

He wrapped the bandage round her arm and tucked the residue cloth in, his hand dropped to her hand and rested on it…
A: there! You'll be allright soon
He noticed the vague smile on her lips…
A: what…
She leaned over and kissed his cheek.
He was taken by surprise and remained still
M: thankyou…you're really…sweet..
She murmered and left.

His hand brushed his own cheek…a distinct smile approached his face but morphed to a grin..He watched her go up the stairs and sighed.


That afternoon, maithili lay down on her bed while Adi insisted he would cook for the two of them. She raised her eyebrow on that…
A: what!! I'm just as good a cook as you are!
M: oh! No doubt!…she spoke sarcastically
A: yes well at least I'm not blind and burn my hand on the stove!
Maithili lowered her head down silently
M: just make sure you don't set the kitchen on fire..
She murmered to him as he left.

He nonchallently strode into the kitchen and looked around. It was all pretty straight-foreword! He thought but paused as he looked around for the cooking utensils..
oh boy adi! you don't know what you're at…do you?
Adi arranged all the ingredients on the platform and began flipping pages through the cook book…
A: hmm…curry and rice sounds good…he muttered to himself
That for her….and nuggets for me!! He chuckled at imagining her giving him a lecture of how much 'junk' he was putting in his body and bla bla bla…

He put the chicken nuggets in the oven and began on the curry..
Still struggling with the quantity of ingredients, ! hour later he detected a strange burning smell…his eyes widened in realisation…
A: shit!!! The nuggets!!
He dropped down and peered into the translucent oven door..
Quickly, he opened the door and using gloves, removed the tray. He moaned as he saw the burnt nuggets and threw them straight into the dustbin…
He realised he left the oven door open and the fumes from that, set off the fire alarm.
A: shit shit shit!!! This is soo not happeneing!!!
Water taps burst open from the celing to extinguish the supposed fire
A: adi dude!! What have you done!!

Maihtili came running down the stairs and stood with her eyes wide open, glaring not so much at him…but the kitchens disastrous state.
She stood irate at his doings…
M: OUT!!!! NOW!!!!!
She yelled and he walked away.


Sittign on the couch, he contemplated his situation…
A: there is a very good explanation for this! He declared as she glared angrily, standing opposite him
M: oh there better be!
A: yes…well, you see..
M: oh yes! I do see!
A: I..
M: you!!! you're a complete moron! Stupid idiot! What did you think you were doing?? 1 hour!!!??? You kept the nuggets in the oven for 1 hour!!! What sort of a git are you!!!
A: hey!!! I didn't know!!
M: well ask then!!!! Because of you I've got to clear up all this mess that you made in the kitchen!!! Hell you set off the fire alarms!!! And what were you doing for 1 hour in there anyway??? Couldn' tyou have stuck pizza in the oven!!!
A: I thougt…
M: NO!! just don't think!!! Coz when ever you think things always go wrong!!!
A: oh yeah! Well if it weren't for me, then miss maithili Bajaj! Your arm would be half burnt!! He yeled at her
"its Mrs Maithili Vikram Aditya Mehra!!!Get it right!!!" she yelled back
Edited by tsamhita - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Duuuuuuuude! That was soooo funny! The way she was like out! now!! n he walked away. poor baby! 😆 The cream applying was soooooooo cute wen she kissed him on the cheek. 😉 oy hoyyyy!
Wicked part. For a second I thort u wer gonna do a scene with them both underneath the sprinklers, its sorta like a rin scene init?! 😆 Anyway, I liked the way she corected Adi, becoz that's her name now. 😉

Cont. soon. 😃

Edited by maplez13 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ow that was amazing...........Really good............Keep it up..............Please write soon....(Do you update only once in weekends). 👏 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Gid that was 2 funny twin cont soon wonder wat Adi's reaction would when she said her full legal name 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg!!!!!!!!!!! that was a cute scene!!!!!! lov'd it. do con asap!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
lol
MRS methali vikram aditya mehra
haila isse lamba nahin mila
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was tooo gd sam!!loved the way she yelled at him 4 burnin the nuggets..i could totally imagine that!!and the last line was amazing the way she corrected him!!plz plz plz cont. very soon!! 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
dat was awesum!! 👏
wow cutes scenes were gd and then they argue 😆
bless adi his cooking didnt wrk out rite 😆
luv it!!
cnt wait
continue soon

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