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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *Shifali*

Hahaha! Can't trust you anymore!😆 Never know, u can be one of Ektas creatives too!haha!! i would love ot be one of ekta's creatives!😆 AM should get married in the next part or else, I should start my protest!😆

😆😆hahah!! i wouldn't want that! now would i ...😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: fashionvista

u r tooooooo good love ur fanfic. keep up the good work and update soon plzzzzzzzzz

aww thankyou!!!!😳😳will continue soon!😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Chapter 36

"hello" adi muttered as he rolled lazily in bed.

A: what!!! He anxiously got up.

A: I'm coming right now!

Adi hurriedly got up and wore his shirt. He quickly exited the room leaving a thakyou note to who ever it was who took him to this room and let his rest the night here. He rushed into his car and drove home.

M: I can't believe this guy!! Maithili muttered under her breath as she sat down to have her mehendi put on…

M: stupid!! He's supposed ot be here for the mehendi ceremony, not in some hotel room suffering from a hangover!!

As soon as maithili said that, Adi came rushing into Bajaj mansion. He was dressed in a sherwani, which made maithili laugh.

Adi slowly walked to maithili.

A: what are you laughing at?

M: you…you're wearing a sherwani!

A: and???

M: how did mayuri mamma convince you to wear one!??

A: don't ask!

Adi was about to leave when he saw something and grinned.

He sat back down next to maithili and put his arm round her.

M: uh adi…are you still drunk??

A: what do you mean?

M: last night, you were drunk, and…uh…you started kissing me..

A: what!!! Adi said getting up

M: yeah..i know…at the party…umm…just..just don't do that again..

A: but I can't remember..

Adi muttered as he slowly sat down..

A: i..i didn't Say anything to you, did I?

M: uh no…you just grabbed me and kissed me…

A: uh where?

M; on my…my neck…maithili said, not a deep shade of red….and my cheek…

A: oh…well atleast I did it! I mean you wouldn't want some jerk to be th efirst person to kiss you!

Maithili frowned: fyi! You're not ht efirst person to have kissed me!!

A: haha! Yes I am!

M; no!! I've been on dates before!!

A; oh..yeah sure! Aid said clearly showing sarcasim

M: shut up!!! She yelled

Adi grinned and snuggled close to her again.

M: what are you doing!!! She hissed

A: nothing!

Maihtili saw adi whisper something into the lady's ear and she smiled.

The lady continued putting mehendi on maithili's hands.

Adi got up and went away. Maithili looked at h ebeautiful design on her hands an dsmiled, but she couldn't make out what it exactly was. She stared hard trying ot figure out what it was, Until she called Mallishka to see.

Mall: oh that's sooo beautiful!! I wish I'd done it when I was getting married!

M: yes but what..

Mall: A-D-I…adi!! You've got adi's name on your hands in such lovely designs.

Maithili gasped and looked at adi in shock

Adi grinned at her and winked.

Maihtili was not going to have this!

She got up and ran upstairs, with adi following behind her.

She went into her room to the bathroom and was about ht eturn on th etap when adi pulled her by her waist.

A: And what do you think you are doing?

M: rubbing your name of my hands!!

A: oh but I won't let you do that honey!

M; shut-it!! I want your name off my hands!!

A: but that's impossible! My name's already written In your destiny! You can't rub It off your hands!

M: watch me!

A: oh I will..

Maithili struggled ot get out of adi's arms, but the more she struggled, the tighter her held on to her.

New tactics!! Come on maithili..think!!

Maihtili slowly turned round..

She placed her arms round adi's neck, careful not to let any mehendi soil his clothes.

She brought her face close to him, so close that their lips almost brushed..

Adi was taken aback, he didn't expect this response from her, so he did the only thing he thought logical and tightened his grip round her.

Her nose caressed his cheek and her lips brushed his ear.

Adi grew weak in the knees loosened his grip ever so slightly and in that moment, maithili pushed him away with her elbows and reached for th esink. Hse stopped suddenly when she realised her dupatta slipping and her zip being undone.

She turned round looking shocked at adi..

A: lady! I'm the expert at this! He said slowly removing her dupatta and wrapping it round his arm.

A: you wash the mehendi off, and you'll have to go back down without your chunari, with your blouse half undone!

He smirked and maithili glared at him.

M: I hate you!!!

A: I know!!!

He said winking at her.

Uggh! He annoyed her to such an extent, she felt like pullin gher hair off. And that grin on his face, she felt like slapping him left right left and wiping git off his face.

He slowly came towards her and went behind her. Placing the chuni on her and zipping her blouse up, he turned her round.

He pulled her very close to him. Maithili grew a little apprehensive. She wanted to run away, but she couldn't.

M: wh..what are you doing?

Adi stared at her compelling her ot look straight into his eyes..

His stubbled cheek brushed against her soft flesh as he grabbed her into his arms.

The next thing she felt angered her.

"umma umma umma!!!!" aid pretended placing kisses on her shoulder while abruptly shaking the living day lights out of her.

Maihtili began thumping his chest with her elbows.

M; let go you freak!!! She yelled as he retreated…

A: that hurt!! He whined

M: you!!!! you stupid donkey!! Monkey!! Chimpanzee!! You!!! I HATE YOU!!!
adi laughed even more at the insults he received from his wife-to be…

M: aaargh!! Maithili stomped out of the bathroom and went down.

Maihtili came into the hall and sat down to let her parents and other old ladies admire her mehedi as she cursed under her breath.

She wondered where adi was until she heard a distinctly femiliar voice boom through the speakers. She turned round to see Adi singing and dancing. "oh no…" she muttered… "he's really drunk…"

dil da mamla hai dilbar
hun na zor hai is dil par
khalbali hai dil ke andar
ho mast ae, mast kalandar

Adi walked towards maithili and stood near her.

dil da mamla hai dilbar
hun na zor hai is dil par
khalbali hai dil ke andar
ho mast ae, mast kalandar

one, two, three, four

Prem's voice boomed as he pushed maithili towards adi…

Adi began singing again

dil da mamla hai dilbar
hun na zor hai is dil par
khalbali hai dil ke andar
ho mast ae, mast kalandar

He gripped her arm and made her dance along with him

mast ae, mast ae, mast ae, mast ae
mast kalandar

Maihitli danced in sync with Adi to the steps from the song in the film heyy baby
mast ae, mast ae, mast ae, mast ae
mast kalandar

Maihtili tried ot please her parents by showing all was well in 'paradise' when things were quite the other way…
mast ae, mast ae, mast ae, mast ae
mast kalandar

She smiled, laughed and danced with Adi but when turned round, she glared at him giving him the evils
mast ae, mast ae, mast ae, mast ae
mast kalandar

Pranay joined with Adi and both brothers sang side by side

dil da mamla hai dilbar
hun na zor hai is dil par
khalbali hai dil ke andar
ho mast ae, mast kalandar

Bharat joined with his brothers and sung too

dil da mamla hai dilbar
hun na zor hai is dil par
khalbali hai dil ke andar
ho mast ae, mast kalandar

The three brothers pulled in the three sisters (maithili, mallishka, tannu)

mast ae, mast ae, mast ae, mast ae
mast kalandar
mast ae, mast ae, mast ae, mast ae
mast kalandar
mast ae, mast ae, mast ae, mast ae
mast kalandar
mast ae, mast ae, mast ae, mast ae
mast kalandar

all six danced merrily

meri nazar jo…
tujhpe padee to…
ban baitha,tera saedaayi
Adi sang as he hugged maithili, shaking her.

betaabiyon ko…
raahat mili to…
door hui,meri tanhai

he hugged her again and she struggled to free herself.

tere noor da
tere noor da
hai asar tere hi surroor da
Maithili finally got away from him but found herself unning round the hall escaping from Adi

mere haal se
mere dard se
tu hai
bekhabar

She bumped against Prem and immediately turned to adi pretending to dance with him

dil da mamla hai dilbar
hun na zor hai is dil par
khalbali hai dil ke andar
ho mast ae, mast kalandar

All six once again danced

mast ae, mast ae, mast ae, mast ae
mast kalandar
mast ae, mast ae, mast ae, mast ae
mast kalandar
mast ae, mast ae, mast ae, mast ae
mast kalandar
mast ae, mast ae, mast ae, mast ae
mast kalandar

kalandar, kalandar, kalandar…
mast kalandar
kalandar, kalandar, kalandar…
mast kalandar

teri adaa mein
jadoo hai jadoo
karta hai, mujhko deewana

Adi danced next to maithili slightly pushing her while she rolled her eyes.

meri tammanaa
kehti hai mujhko
sirf mujhe, hai tujhe paana
He sang this time kissing her cheek, which left maithili gaping

meri aarzu
meri guftagu
tu hi tu hai bas meri justaju
He swung her in his arms and then suddenly dropped her to the floor.

kya bataun
tere bagaer main
kitna besabar

He held out his hand but thought otherwise and moved away. Maihtili glared at him as she got up dusting her lehenga

dil da mamla
hun na zor hai

Adi tugged maithili into his arms and danced with her

dil da mamla hai dilbar
hun na zor hai is dil par
khalbali hai dil ke andar
ho mast ae, mast kalandar

Both danced fakely smiling at each other.

dil da mamla hai dilbar
hun na zor hai is dil par
khalbali hai dil ke andar
ho mast ae, mast kalandar

Adi pulled maithili into his arms and sang loudly into her ears

Aaya main aaya
leke mohabbat
anjaano, mujhko pehchaano
She pushed him away but tugged at his dupatta and pulled him close to her

meri nazar mein
hai ik chehra
maano tum, chaaho na mano
She dismissed him and pushed him away, rolling her eyes and walking away.

meri chaahatein
meri raahatein
badi manchali meri hasratein
mere khwaab mein
koi raat din
rehta humsafar

Adi didn't let maithili go away and pulled her close.

dil da mamla…

dil da mamla hai dilbar
hun na zor hai is dil par
khalbali hai dil ke andar
ho mast ae, mast kalandar

mast ae, mast ae, mast ae, mast ae
mast kalandar
mast ae, mast ae, mast ae, mast ae
mast kalandar
mast ae, mast ae, mast ae, mast ae
mast kalandar
mast ae, mast ae, mast ae, mast ae
mast kalandar

Both danced closely to each other, sometimes stepping on each others toes and tugging at each other – sometimes pushing each other and sometimes pulling. The way they danced amused the audience and they thought of the couple as 'cute'.

Maithili finally went up to her room and got changed into her red bridal lehenga. She adorned herself in jewellery and sighed at herself in the mirror.

It was funny how she always dreamed of being in this dress, looking like the most beautiful girl in the whole world at that moment, but now she wished otherwise.

She couldn't believe her fate. She had hated adi for all her life and would probably continue doing so, but now she was expected to fall into his arms and love him.

She felt a hand touch her shoulder and she turned to look at her two mothers.

M: beta…I know what we have asked of you is very big, but now you are going to get married to Adi, and beta I want you to give him another chance

S: beta, marriage is a huge step in a women's life as it means that she forever becomes her husbands and her husband becomes hers. Please beta, forget everything and start afresh…start a new life from this day on..

Maithili had a little tear in her eye which she wiped away before shruti or mayuri could see it. Hse got u and hugged bother of them

Ma: I promise mamma, I'll give Adi and myself another chance…I'll give our relation and other chance…

Both hermothers smiled and took her downstairs.

Maihtili sat in the mandap and continued with the ceremonies. Adi sat beside her, muttering the chants.

Both had to hold heac others hands and put the ghee in the sacred fire. Both of them got up for ht eseven pheras and then sat back down. Adi bent over and put sindoor in her maang and mangal sutra in her neck.

They got up and signed the actual documents of marriage….

Maithili closed her eyes. From this moment on, she was no longer Maihtili Bajaj…she was Maithili Vikram-Aditya Mehra.

Edited by tsamhita - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey

woohoo!!They r married 😃 😃 😃
Oh if only this was happenin in da show as well 😍
But hey lovin this FF for it 😉
Plz continue writin and i luv it that u update regularly...thx for dat 👏

Chao
Preetz
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: priyagurung

Hey hold on u missed PRAGATI

😆😆she isn't in my fanfic...😆she doesn't even exist in this ff..😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Pretz

Hey

woohoo!!They r married 😃 😃 😃 haha!
Oh if only this was happenin in da show as well 😍 i knoww!!! i wish this happened on the show😍
But hey lovin this FF for it 😉 aww thankyou!😳
Plz continue writin and i luv it that u update regularly...thx for dat 👏

why thankyou! i shall update regularily!😉😆😆

Chao
Preetz

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Posted: 17 years ago
Wah wah Ramji! Kya baat hai!
They're married woot woot! 🥳
Adi was shooo cute!
Amazing part...continue sooooon. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thnxs goodness they got married without no problems I thought garima would cum n create sum problems but she didn't. Can't wait to read the next part plz continue soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: maplez13

Wah wah Ramji! Kya baat hai! hahaha!!!
They're married woot woot! 🥳 lol..yeah i know!
Adi was shooo cute! isn't he always😳
Amazing part...continue sooooon. 😃 will continue on tuesday or wednesday!😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Inshira

Thnxs goodness they got married without no problems I thought garima would cum n create sum problems but she didn't. see!! i told you to trust me!!😆Can't wait to read the next part plz continue soon 😃

will continue soon!😛

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