'Haqeeqat': MADI ff,p.30(utd 10/05) END - Page 20

Originally posted by: desi chic

Siddu!! Thanks yaar... I was hoping it was alright, I mean it was so long and gloomy, I hope I didn't turn ppl off... u make me feel so much betta!😃 You're words are priceless *hand on heart* Much appreciated, I am deeply humbled!😳 *slap hand on forehead* u didn't cry did ya? lol... yea it was true. It wasn't a dream. She was preggers with his child and... Yep, pig-head is back and with a bang... what's his role?... Find out soon!

Cheers,

dc

Hmm... i know she was pregnant but i was confused abt the "crying together" part.............Nah i dint cry but I did become a lil emotional😳

Of course u dint turn people off.Sometimes things need to be gloomy for the story to move ahead,cant always have happiness around😉

Do continue soon.😳

Originally posted by: sidsk

Hmm... i know she was pregnant but i was confused abt the "crying together" part.............Nah i dint cry but I did become a lil emotional😳 I dunno... I just wanted them to be sharing their sorrow together. So he was at his place and she just comes to meet him to seek solace as he is the only one capable of bringing response from her at that point (being her child's father).

Of course u dint turn people off.Sometimes things need to be gloomy for the story to move ahead,cant always have happiness around😉 Ditto! Thanks for understanding😛

Do continue soon.😳 Will do soon.

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: *VaVaVoom14*

haha DC u put the wrong date up there....shudnt it say 9/26??? i duno u guys write the dates the other way round there 😕 😆

Oye... I totally did na?😳 Erm... will change that. Tu na, I can count on you to notice that!😆 Besides... your clock kinda gets messed when all you do is work and school😳

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

Oye... I totally did na?😳 Yes..what were u thinking...moving back a month 😆 Erm... will change that. Tu na, I can count on you to notice that! Yeah well lucky I am thereeee😉What what ya do without me 😛😆 Besides... your clock kinda gets messed when all you do is work and school😳 yeah i'll let u off on that case..because I kno ur a busy behenji 😆 sharks eaten u yet 😆

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

omg i jus luvv ur ff
dat i get speechless cnt figure out wat to say but its absolutely fantastic 👏 👏 👏
cnt wait
continue soon 😃

Thanks Shaz! You humble me dearly😳

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: May1902

WOW that was intense!!!!!!
Continue soon 😃 😛

It was?... Lets see what you think of the upcoming...

Cheers,

dc