Update March 21-COMPLETED

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Update March 21.

Kamal comes out side to Jaanki and says Bhabi what is all this why did they take your name and what is this raaz. Jaanki says I am fiding a raaz behind everything, but right now we need to follow this car. We have to see what is in that trunk. Kamal and Jaanki leave to follow the car.

Back in the party Trishna calls attention, and says that to make this party more lively we have some games etc.

Monishka comesup to Praney and asks him why he is alone, he very coldly says just because. She says shouldnt you be happy, today I gave you yourbok's very first draft. She pulls Praney in for a dance and they start dancing. They are dancing and Methli is watching ths with tears in her eyes.

Meanwhile Jaanki and Kamal are still following the car.

Back in the party, Pragati is standing alone crying. Her "new" husband comes to her and pats her on the shoulder and says hey. She just looks away, he asks her to dance. She keeps saying she doesnt want to dance but eventually he pulls her onto the dance floor. Everyone sees them dancing, Tanu whispers something to Tiny, and Bhim. All three of them go onto the dance floor and start dancing with this Batemeshwar guy so that Pragati can get away, and she does.

Sonus husband walks into him on the dancefloor and spills some kind of drink on him. Batemeshwar says, hey brother you have spoiled my whole shirt and he walks away.

Trishna, is drinking and she wonders where Jaanki has gone of to. Survana comes out calliing her name, and Trishna looks as if she has just seena ghost. Trishna thinks how can she be here. Survana asks her wher Parvati is.she wants Parvati to rub her head becase it is hurting. Trishna thinks now how will I bring Parvati here, I will have to do something. Trishna says, why will we bother Parvati for this, I will rub your head for you. Survana says hey I wil not even let you touch my neck! But then basically Trishna convinces her that she wil rub her head and Survana agrees.

There is a dance going on at the party, then the scene shifts to teh car where Parvati and Kamal are following Ashu. Parvati thinks to herself, why is Ashu doing this, she thinks afterall what is it that is in this trunk.

Back at the party everyone is watching this dance. Back in the car, finally the poice car comes to a stop, with Kamal and Parvati right behind them. The police get down and take out the trunk, and Kamal and Parvati both look at each other very confused. They get out of the car to go and follow. They are following inside some kind of station being very careful not to get seen. Finally the police are out of sight and they go in to look for the box. Parvati is very freaked out, when they see a skelaton. They see the trunk beside it and Parvo tells Kamal that this is the exact same trunk that she bought for Mayuri. They open the trunk and there is some kind of tin inside it they says " Dead boy's belonging"😕 Kamal opens the tin,and in it is the same sock that Mayuri was holding before. Also in the tin was a gold bracelet that Parvati had given to Om. She is confused and asks Kamal what is the meaning of al this. Mayuris state and this trunk? They are really confused, and Parvati is on the verge of crying.

Trishna is massaging Survana's head. She is talking away and Trishna is getting very annoyed😆.

It shows another seen where Praney and Pragati are talking and Praney says, that Trishna is only running behind Jaanki Devi because she has the same face as Parvati Agarwal. Praney says that today everythng happened in this pary cause of Parvati. They are both wondering who Parvati is afterall. Pragati says that I cant remember her face but I can remember that she really used to love me. Then Masi comes and sas Parvati was the light of this house and she brought al the happiness into this house. She says that Parvati left all the house's happiness went with it. Just then Shruti comes in from one side, and Jaanki from another. While Jaanki is still standing at the doorway Shruti says, Parvati was the one everyone looked up to. But her reality was that she was responsible fo rmy father and brother's death. Shruti says the reality of her was that she just wanted to live for herself. (Jaanki is watching this).Shruti again says Parvati just wanted to live for her own happiness. She tells Shruti to be quiet, because Parvati was her mother. Shruti seems very against Parvati, and keeps bad talking her, while Parvati herself is watching all this.😉

Jaanki walks up behind Shruti turns her around and gives her one tight slap! Everyone esp Shruti looks very shocked!

She tells Shruti that there was a mosquito on her so she wanted to get it off, because it is so easy to get malaria these days, and that Shruit had just been in the hospital and she doesnt want her to go there anymore.😆 Jaanki tells her to take care, and turns around. She silently thinks to herself. Shruti why are you doing this, cant you understand a mother's pain.

In the morning.

Shruti comes into talk to Sameer. She asks him to look at the first draft of Praney's book. Sameer does not look the least bit impressed. He tells Shruti I don't even know how Praney can be my son. Instead of joining the family business he has to go out and become a writer.

Praney is passing by and hears this. He says please dad. Even you did the same thing. You left your family business to come and join the Agarwals. Sameer points his finger at Praney and says you will not become a writer you will join the business. Praney just grabs the book from Sameer and says, you may not believe in me dad, but I believe in myself, and he just walks out.

When he is gone Sameer, tells Shruti, whatever I said to him was absolutely right and he just walks away leaving Shruti with tears in her eyes.

Jaanki Devi is shown sitting in her home, and thinking about the party when Ashu came in, and said that the person that should be recognizing this chest is Parvati Agarwal. She has tears in her eyes.

Janki is watching the news about the trunk on her TV,the scene shifts to a room,where another person of the Aggarwal household is watching the same thing. His face was not shown,but as soon as Tiny and Bhim come near his room, he in a panic-stricken state switches of the t.v and then the scene shifts to Shikar's place.

Shikar, is watching the news and something about the trunk comes on. It says that inside it was found a bracelet and a child's sock. The news said that the CBI agent investigating this case is Mr.Ashutosh Mehra. Shikar is mad with rage he throws the remote and says Dam it, the raaz which I was keeping a secret for so many years, the whole world will come to know about it today. He is wondering OUTLOUD what will happen if that raaz comes out. He then sees Mayuri sitting on the bed right beside him. He kneels beside her and says, what are you thinking that today if you were well, then everyone would come to know about this raaz, and perhaps you want this right? Shikar says that he wont let that happen and he wont let Mayuri get well. He tells her that he has tred to keep her away from the family from the house, and from that Jaanki Devi who she thinks is Parvati. He in a very harsh tone tells her he is going to send her away. Mayuri is shaking and is frightened.

Shikar starts packing her bag, when Adi comes in and asks him why he is packing Mayuri's clothes. Shikar tells him that he is taking her away so that the doctors can take good care of her. Adi tries to object but Shikar doesnt budge.

Adi says you cant take this decision alone. Shikar says yes I can because Mayuri is my wife, and I have every right to do so. Adi tells Shikar, Dad you know your right, but you never know your duty. Adi says that if you had done yoru duty then right now mom would be okay. Adi tells him dont ever talk of taking mom anywhere. Shikar gets very frustrated and leaves.

Mayuri is shaking very much. Adi kneels beside her and tells her not to worry, that she wont go anywhere and she will stay with him. He goes back to teh suitcase and unpacks all her things and a book falls out. Adi picks up the book and discovers that it is Mayuri's diary, he then says something about a photo which I did not get, and it ends on his face.

The End

PS: Sorry for the delay, my internet got disconnected.

Edited by strawberry007 - 18 years ago

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ashbipasha thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Will more be added ??? 😭 😭 😭
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Originally posted by: ashbipasha

Will more be added ??? 😭 😭 😭

Yes ofcourse, sorry for teh delay!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks a lot 😃 !! will wait for the rest...take ur time.
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Oh please take your time. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thankz janki slapped shruti !!! the mostique was funny i love janki
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Originally posted by: ejaz_biggestfan

thankz janki slapped shruti !!!

Yup and with a funny Excuse 😆

Thanks 4 the Gr8 Update!! 👏👏👏

Maddz xxx

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Posted: 18 years ago
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the scene where janki slaps shruti just rocked 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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when r u going to complete it?? 😭 plss. we r waiting for it..
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Originally posted by: mickey82

when r u going to complete it?? 😭 plss. we r waiting for it..

Hey can you just bear with me for a bit, my internet just got disconnected. Ill complete it now.

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