AM Fanfiction: Falling For You updated chap 2 pg 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Guys........After reading some fantanstic fanfictions I have decided to try and attempt to write one myself..... Feedback would be great

It might not be so great so bear with me.................
Chap 1-Page 1
Chap 2-Page 2
Chapter 1: Meeting

"Adi!, Your're going to be late if you dont get a move on!" Yelled Mayuri Adis Mother.

"Coming mum!" Adi yelled. He looked at his reflection in the mirror-Not bad he thought. Adi you're too handsome...whos going to be the lucky girl who gets to go home with you today? He thought to himself.
He checked he had everything...Rings, Presents and Card. He was getting ready to go his friend Prems wedding, and he knew that there would be lots of the brides friends there and he knew he had to look good for them!
He glanced back in the mirror and was satisfied. He walked out of his room and house and drove off in his car.
"Mukti! Stop worrying...Prem loves you........Im sure you're going to be very happy together...." Sighed Methilli....She was surprised at how many times she had to say the same thing over and ovee again. She knew Mukti was nervous but she had no reason to be. She herself had seen the depths of Prem and Muktis love...it was the real deal. she only hoped that she could be as lucky as her friend and meet someone who would love her......care for her her and travel to the ends of the earth to keep her happy and simling.
She looked at her reflection, with her gold sari and white jewellery she knew she looked good. Now if only Pranay would notice her....She sighed to herself.
She stood up and walked Mukti out of the room towards the Mandap where Prem was waiting for her.
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Adi watched the girl bringing the bride towards Prem, he could not take his eyes off her.....The way her eyes were looking down and her hair just falling in front of her face. Wow! He thought....Thats the lucky girl I'll be taking home tonight..
" Don't you dare Adi!" Whispered Prem to his friend..."Thats Metihlli Muktis best friend and anyways shes not that type of girl, so please dont do anything stupid!"
" Dont worry Prem, there is no girl that has been born that is immune to my charms!" He said back with a smirk on his face.
Methilli looked up at Prem and said " Look after her-otherwise you'll have me to deal with!"
She left the bride and groom to complete the ceremory and sat down to watch them.
Out of the corner of her eye she could see the grooms friend leave his post and start walking up to her...She looked at him..Hmmm she thought he's quite handsome, but he's not pranay a small voice in her head said.
He placed his hand in front of her " Hi. Im Adi..and you are?"
"Not interested" She replied
" Im only asking your name...or are to scared that your boyfriend might get jealous?"
" What? You are you talking about?" She asked
"That werid looking guy there, hes been staring at me the whole time Ive been talking to you-Do you know him?"
"Yes, yes I do..." An idea started to form in her mind...was he jealous?
"Lets start the conversation again, and don't worry about him. Im Methilli, pleased to meet you Adi" She said placeing her hand out.
They shook hands, and looked each other in the eye. Each of them thinking of their own hidden agenda...............little knowing that this first meeting would lead to something else......
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Let me know what you think-Shall I carry on??
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Posted: 17 years ago
#2
Wow,tht was cute!😳...You should defo. continue!!!!😃...You'll get many readers;the writing-style is quite different,and your FF seems really cute!!!😳
Pleej,continue soon!
Amina!😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#3
owww another AM ff is always welcomed! really liked the first part continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#4
Wow, another AM ff!
Nice start... I'm game as it seems AM are;) How does toad face Praney always end up in places to ruin... oh well, he's only a pawn!
Please continue.

Cheers,
dc
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Posted: 17 years ago
#5
Yayyy!!!! Another AM ff!!
Nice intro, looking forward to the next chapter.
Anjali
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Posted: 17 years ago
#6
great intro! can't wait to read further....btw i was gonna start a new ff with the same title ol looks like i'll have to look for another one now! lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
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woww that was realli gdd👏👏👏
i like itt
cnt wait for more
continue soon😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg* so luv this!
Plz do continue soon!
hahaha..mets is sooo right when she says..adi is no prancy!! lol
and i can't believe mets' wants that duffers attention..when she has adi!! :D
keep on writing plz!
asap!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow, this seems interesting...........cant wait to find out what happenes next!!!!!
please do continue!!!
tc,
Ruby.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#10
Yaar gud start sounds really gud!!!
do continue!!!

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