How I wanted the drama to unfold

After seeing today's episode I am super- pissed at makers for making our "breathe-of-fresh-air" show a super melodramatic one. I understand that itv needs drama to survive,but this is not what I expected from khkt. Meaningful drama with a touch of reality is what I was expecting.for e.g.Mhatre track. It had sufficient amount of drama which got unfold so realistically.

Till yesterday Sona wanted to confide in Rohit about this weird blackmailer but suddenly she changed the course today. I don't know if that blackmailer told her to do so or what bcoz as usual I saw the epi in ff mode but if in either case she can trust Rohit enough of protecting "the dark secrets of Sippy family" and being the flag bearer of that secret since so many years he can do it more carefully.

Anyways my motive of making the topic was to rant about how I wanted this drama to unfold. I haven't written any story ever but markers are hell bent in making me do this,so spare with me for sometime.

So this is how I picturised the whole drama in my mind. This story starts after Sona's first face off with d blackmailer.(Here Sona is still not over Mahesh's torture and the same fear has engulfed her again after this face off)

Sona arrives in SM after the horrible face off.She is scared like a hell. She stumbles while entering thru the door n somehow manages to reach her room.She is relieved seeing no one there as she might scare them too.She manages to gulp down some water.At that instant Rohit makes his way from washroom.Seeing her initially he is happy but gets terrified seeing her all huffing- puffing,sweaty,messy,fear dripping off her face.

Rohit:Sona...(reaches her hurriedly)

He tries to calm her down, makes her sit properly.

Rohit:Meri taraf dekho Sona..btao mujhe kya hua...(he makes her look at him).

Sona:(with teary eyes) W...wo...wo e...eek aad...aadmi safed kapdon mein..(she breaks down again).

Rohit: (hugging n caressing her)Main hoon na tumhare Saath..btao mujhe...kya Kia us aadmi ne...btao mujhe...I swear chodunga Nahi main use.

Sona:(now calming down a little)Kuch nhi Kia usne..mere Saath Shankar tha us waqt... usne ye dia mujhe(shows him d red note).

Rohit:(reads it)Kaun he ye...use kaise pata ye sb?

Sona:Mujhe Nahi pata Kaun h wo...achanak se Aaya wo aur ye de k Chala Gaya...he looked so scary.. mujhe bhot dar lag Raha hai Rohit.

Rohit:(cupping her face)Ok...Ok....calm down...tum ab Yaha se Kahi mat jaao...Meri ek surgery hai main wo khatm kar k aata Hun....ok?.... Don't you move from here. Fir hum dekhte hai ki iska kya Karna hai.But dare u move from here...kahin Nahi jaa rhi ho tum...main Vimmi ko Yaha bhejta Hun...wo tum par nazar rakhegi n tumhara entertainment bhi ho Jayega...kahin nhi jaa rhi tum yha se until I come ok?...

Sona: par...Ro...(Rohit stops her)

Rohit:No more arguments....mujhe Der ho rhi hai....(saying this he starts to get ready....he fumbles with his coat while wearing...then suddenly feels pair of hand thru his coat n then finally on his shoulder.. he turns around only to face his wife)

Sona:Kya hua Rohit?tumhe itna nervous to kbhi Nahi Dekha Maine...kya baat hai btao

Rohit:Wo ek high profile surgery hai....heart transplant ki .... patient Africa se aa rha hai.... Ministry of external affairs bhi involved hai to thoda nervousness ho rhi hai...mein kar paunga na ye Sona?

Sona:(reading his tensed face n trying to cheer him up)Are tum to wahi doctor surgeon ho na Jo mujhe Meri har baat par doctor Nahi surgeon Kar k Bolte the...aaj Kaha hai wo doctor surgeon....(Rohit cuts her off)

Rohit:Sona tum na...(raises his hand only to be stopped by his wife)

Sona:Tumse acchi surgery to Parvati Kar leti hai wo bhi Bina degree k aur tum....

Rohit:(again interrupts her)tumm...

Sona:(places her hand on his mouth) Parvati kon hai....Sonakshi ....aur tum Sona k matlab Parvati k pati parmeshwar ho ....... aur tum to jaante ho Parvati to Matarani ki favourite hai...aur tum Parvati k favourite... to indirectly tum bhi Matarani k favourite hue(saying she grabs his hand n kisses it) jaao tumhe Matarani ne aashirwaad dia hai.. tumhari surgery bhi Parvati ki surgery ki Tarah successful hogi...(laughs cheekily)

Rohit:(Lovingly grabs her n hugs her tightly)thank u....thank u sooo much....u know I love you.....

Sona:(pushing him towards the door)I know....I know.. love u too....ab jao Der ho jayegi...bye

...all d best

Rohit:thnx....tumhe Yaad hai na Maine kya Kaha tha...

Sona: ha...ha...Yaad hai ab jaao

So this it...sorry for my typos if any....this my first ever writing experience....I don't know to express emotions into words that perfectly so plz spare with me.Done with my rant.

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Originally posted by: Blackwind

After seeing today's episode I am super- pissed at makers for making our "breathe-of-fresh-air" show a super melodramatic one. I understand that itv needs drama to survive,but this is not what I expected from khkt. Meaningful drama with a touch of reality is what I was expecting.for e.g.Mhatre track. It had sufficient amount of drama which got unfold so realistically.

Till yesterday Sona wanted to confide in Rohit about this weird blackmailer but suddenly she changed the course today. I don't know if that blackmailer told her to do so or what bcoz as usual I saw the epi in ff mode but if in either case she can trust Rohit enough of protecting "the dark secrets of Sippy family" and being the flag bearer of that secret since so many years he can do it more carefully.

Anyways my motive of making the topic was to rant about how I wanted this drama to unfold. I haven't written any story ever but markers are hell bent in making me do this,so spare with me for sometime.

So this is how I picturised the whole drama in my mind. This story starts after Sona's first face off with d blackmailer.(Here Sona is still not over Mahesh's torture and the same fear has engulfed her again after this face off)

Sona arrives in SM after the horrible face off.She is scared like a hell. She stumbles while entering thru the door n somehow manages to reach her room.She is relieved seeing no one there as she might scare them too.She manages to gulp down some water.At that instant Rohit makes his way from washroom.Seeing her initially he is happy but gets terrified seeing her all huffing- puffing,sweaty,messy,fear dripping off her face.

Rohit:Sona...(reaches her hurriedly)

He tries to calm her down, makes her sit properly.

Rohit:Meri taraf dekho Sona..btao mujhe kya hua...(he makes her look at him).

Sona:(with teary eyes) W...wo...wo e...eek aad...aadmi safed kapdon mein..(she breaks down again).

Rohit: (hugging n caressing her)Main hoon na tumhare Saath..btao mujhe...kya Kia us aadmi ne...btao mujhe...I swear chodunga Nahi main use.

Sona:(now calming down a little)Kuch nhi Kia usne..mere Saath Shankar tha us waqt... usne ye dia mujhe(shows him d red note).

Rohit:(reads it)Kaun he ye...use kaise pata ye sb?

Sona:Mujhe Nahi pata Kaun h wo...achanak se Aaya wo aur ye de k Chala Gaya...he looked so scary.. mujhe bhot dar lag Raha hai Rohit.

Rohit:(cupping her face)Ok...Ok....calm down...tum ab Yaha se Kahi mat jaao...Meri ek surgery hai main wo khatm kar k aata Hun....ok?.... Don't you move from here. Fir hum dekhte hai ki iska kya Karna hai.But dare u move from here...kahin Nahi jaa rhi ho tum...main Vimmi ko Yaha bhejta Hun...wo tum par nazar rakhegi n tumhara entertainment bhi ho Jayega...kahin nhi jaa rhi tum yha se until I come ok?...

Sona: par...Ro...(Rohit stops her)

Rohit:No more arguments....mujhe Der ho rhi hai....(saying this he starts to get ready....he fumbles with his coat while wearing...then suddenly feels pair of hand thru his coat n then finally on his shoulder.. he turns around only to face his wife)

Sona:Kya hua Rohit?tumhe itna nervous to kbhi Nahi Dekha Maine...kya baat hai btao

Rohit:Wo ek high profile surgery hai....heart transplant ki .... patient Africa se aa rha hai.... Ministry of external affairs bhi involved hai to thoda nervousness ho rhi hai...mein kar paunga na ye Sona?

Sona:(reading his tensed face n trying to cheer him up)Are tum to wahi doctor surgeon ho na Jo mujhe Meri har baat par doctor Nahi surgeon Kar k Bolte the...aaj Kaha hai wo doctor surgeon....(Rohit cuts her off)

Rohit:Sona tum na...(raises his hand only to be stopped by his wife)

Sona:Tumse acchi surgery to Parvati Kar leti hai wo bhi Bina degree k aur tum....

Rohit:(again interrupts her)tumm...

Sona:(places her hand on his mouth) Parvati kon hai....Sonakshi ....aur tum Sona k matlab Parvati k pati parmeshwar ho ....... aur tum to jaante ho Parvati to Matarani ki favourite hai...aur tum Parvati k favourite... to indirectly tum bhi Matarani k favourite hue(saying she grabs his hand n kisses it) jaao tumhe Matarani ne aashirwaad dia hai.. tumhari surgery bhi Parvati ki surgery ki Tarah successful hogi...(laughs cheekily)

Rohit:(Lovingly grabs her n hugs her tightly)thank u....thank u sooo much....u know I love you.....

Sona:(pushing him towards the door)I know....I know.. love u too....ab jao Der ho jayegi...bye

...all d best

Rohit:thnx....tumhe Yaad hai na Maine kya Kaha tha...

Sona: ha...ha...Yaad hai ab jaao

So this it...sorry for my typos if any....this my first ever writing experience....I don't know to express emotions into words that perfectly so plz spare with me.Done with my rant.