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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: YoursDearly

This is beautiful! Loved it so much!!❤️


Can't wait to see what happens next.😉


hey there!!!! I am so touched to see your love and appreciation🤗 means alot. I will be back quickest as i can. Tc and see you soonish.
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Originally posted by: sohit-mishbir

Wasuu.. 🤗🤗

I have almost recovered dear... And padhai bhi theek chal rahi hai with all good hopes and motivation ,my studies are catching pace😄..... I was a little bored yesterday.. So I have penned down something.. Will be putting it up shortly in the forum.. 😜😜

I hope you are doing fine too.. 😄😃

And you don't have to thank me... You will always find my support and encouragement, no matter what! I will be always there... 😄 bas haan agle mahine se i won't visit forum.. Phone mamma le jaayegi.. So if you write something just pm it.. Whenever I am free.. I will read.. You can pm anytime about anything..

😘😘😘😘 to you too... And even I am lucky to find a friend like you here...

Waiting for the story to unfold... Eagerly... 😃😃😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘

Love you as always.. 😘❤❤❤💕

Very glad to hear about your condition alu🤗 stay strong and study super well.❤️

Arey abhi abhi padhke aayi hoon teri story and kya baat hein such a sweet story. Loved it. Oh i forgot to mention there i just remembered, i would like to see a sequel of it with rohit coming back to apply dawaai on her and she on his😉

I will be pm-ing you. Arey yaar i will miss you alot lekin sab padaai achche karke waapas aaja ok❤️will be waiting. And i too will always be there for anything anytime🤗feeling so lucky to have a bestie like you.

I will try to be as quick as i can. See you soonish

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Chapter two: Tum Chupa Naa Sakogi mein wo raaz hoon

It was nice meeting you too,doctor shurgeon.”

He lost the count of that last sentence echoing in his ears now. Since last evening to now,the next day afternoon he had got nothing in his head except for this.Rohit gulped hard and tossed to the other side of the bed. Pooji and ajit were at the hotel’s downstairs getting lunch but he was in no mood to eat or wonderously, to even drink, given the drunkard he has been.

Chaahat’s big black curious eyes, sweet chuckles, sharaaratein and unique talks made him smile and cry both at the same time inwardly. It’s been a freaking long time since he had felt such bright energy and good vibes around anyone, well it’s the first time at all after Sonakshi rastogi.

Sonakshi rastogi sippy. The woman he loved like no other. The woman he married. The woman he gave away his soul to.The woman he gave all the rights to destroy him believing that she will never ever do it. And finally the woman who crushed him and his beliefs in her both into n number of pathetic pieces.

To the world then she died and yet after hating her so much for what she did,his stubborn heart didn’t want to believe in the fact that she died. death and her cannot just be together while he was fine and alive, well he was not fine but alive unfortunately so in a world where he was alive,the fact that she died didn’t really seem to fit in.He ritually dialled her number every morning hoping that it will ring from the other end no matter what happened in his life. He himself didn’t know why he did that despite of all the hate he had in his heart to shower upon her, but he did it anyway.

He hugged the pillow to his chest and snuggled his knees close to his chest, he wished he falls asleep so that he will forget her at least for a few minutes. There was no point doing this anyway because in every dream no one appeared rather than her throughout these years and tonight it’s going to be the same he knew deep inside his heart. But heck,He just wanted to get rid of those memories he knew.


Aaj phir tum pe pyaar aaya hein...aaj phir tum pe...

Rohit....phir shuru kiya tum ne. She starts chuckling at his singing around her.

Kyun.... mujhe toh aaj pyaar karna hi hein tume, chaahein kuch bhi hojaaye. Weise tum aaj kuch zyaada khoobsurat lagti hein,nahi?

He says that tightening his arms around her as she cuddles her back to his front and turns red in his embrace. He inhales in her scent that makes him crave for her more and he keeps his chin against her shoulder and nuzzles his lips against her ear. She turns her head and their eyes meet and she pouts signallling him a kiss and he nears her lips wanting it to turn real but she shys away.

Rohit.

Don’t rohit me alright. Kitne din hue humari shaadi ko, ab tak normal biwi log toh pregnant bhi hoti hein.lekin tum.ab tak mere saat lukka chuppi khel ti hein bas.

She turns to him and she carries a mischievous glint in her eyes. She places her hands against his chest and swiftly pushes him back and he looses his balance and falls on the bed, but what she forgets is that he had been having his arms around her so she falls with him,landing directly on top of him.

Lukka chuppi mein khelti hoon? Really rohit?

Aur nahi toh kya.

And Normal biwi log ab tak pregnant bhi hoti hein?

Of course.

Galat.ulta Normal pati log hi apne wife ko utaakar jaake suhaagraat manata hein,you doctor surgeon.

He rolls her underneath him and hides her from his frame.

Weise mein bhi uss tarha ki pati hoon,just that I couldn’t show it yet.

Ok so mein bhi ek normal biwi hi hoon,agar tum normal pati jeise behave kiya ta toh mein bhi ab tak pregnant hoti.

No actually if I behaved in my pati avatar,tume ek bachcha nahi ek shot se twins hogi you know.

He whispers against her ear and she bursts into laughter throwing her head back. He takes that chance and his lips lands on her exposed skin,just below her jaw and then her neck and her fingers grip tight around his shoulder. He grazes her milky skin and she breathes fast. Her fingers automatically unbutton the top three buttons of his shirt and runs inside it and end up digging her nails directly into his skin. He wonders how effortlessly she turns him on and calms his soul both at the same time as he moves his lips off her and smiles into her eyes.

I think tonight is the night.

I think so too.

Says her as a blush creeps to her cheeks and they stare at themselves for few seconds and next,their lips meet into an earth shattering kiss. sparks fly amongst them and around them as he takes over all the control on her,pinning her hands to her sides and breaking their kiss just to place his lips next on her cheeks then her ears and then the tip of her nose and all over her.as his lips then travels down her beautiful body claiming her as his all over he feels her legs weaving around his torso and his untamed hands then travels down her body and goes inside her saree reaching her sweetest spot and she shudders feeling him like that for the first time.

Trust me. He says as their eyes meet again.

Rohit.

You trust me don’t you?

Khud se zyaada.

Do you love me?

Sab se zyaada.

Then give me a baby tonight sona. He smirks with a wink.

Pehele you give me,phir waapas kardungi wo tume,nau mehene baad.

She chuckles and his lips halt her smile with the next kiss they engage crazily in and as he devours her she haphazardly tears his shirt off.

Sherni. Kaahan chupi thi aaj tak tum.

Asks him as he takes off all the boundaries that were parting them just to be covered under one duvet and there they both be one and her lips take his name in the most heart touching way anyone has ever taken it for him.

Rohit....


He opens his eyes as he wakes up from the dream and all in these five years that is the first time he dreamt of it. The first time that he was finally able to take her name in a dream.That is the first time throughout the dreams of these five years he heard her telling that she loves him. That is for the first time in this freaking five years he dreamt of her saying she trusts him. Instead of the pain and rejection that she had been overtly passing to him even through the damning dreams throughout these damning years. He found himself breathing so fast, his heart beating erratically and he had no idea why on earth he saw something like that. Was it because of the inner hope of having a baby with sonakshi after seeing chaahat? He felt so messed up.


Tumari ye ghar ye so called parivaar ye aashiyana ke peechein chupi hui gatiya raaz hein naa rohit,wo ab mujh par aur meri naam par aur meri zingdagi par boori azar karne laga hein. Agar kal ye sab samaana ki saamne aayenga naa,tumari parivaar ke saat saat in fact tumari parivaar se zyaada meri naam ki dajjiya udayenge society mein. tv actress Sonakshi rastogi ki shaadi itna gatiya parivaar se hua hein,yeh kahenge log. Aur Mein apni reputation tumari parivaar ke wajeise barbaad hone nahi de sakti. So tumari dad ke iss cheap harkatein ki raaz se tum kese chutkaara payenge wo tum khudhi decide karo.mujhe tumari saat aur nahi rehena hein bas. Mujhe jaana hi hein tumse dhoor aur mein waapas lot ke kabhi nahi aana chati. Aur shaadi se pehele sign kiya hua prenup ke mutaabein mujhe monthly tum log ki account se aane waale sab paise jaldi deposit karna mat bhooliye.and haa itna bhi mushkil nahi hoga mujhe bhooljana tume kyunki mein toh raima ki tarha bohot wakt bhi nahi bitaayi tumare saat.so yeah,bas yahi taa mujhe kehene keliye bhaaki.Mujhse dhoor raho rohit,bas mujhse dhoor hi raho.


He shut his ears with his palms as that recording rang in his head.The same voice that made him shatter into pieces five years ago started wandering in his ears like that over all the pretty things he dreamt of awhile ago. One sweet moment can forget the harsh reality that dawned upon him but like a rubber ball pushed into the water with force comes into surface once the hand is taken off,the bitter truth of the woman he loved so badly started coming back into his messed up head once again.


That night when he waited for her to come back home,he only received that recording sent by her to him.There he so wished he could have died before hearing that.His heart screamed that this cannot be true and she cannot do that to him. He didn’t believe his sona can utter such harshness at him.she promised to be back from the shoot and went so undoubtly this got to be a bogus prank someone was pulling on him.he dialled her number wanting her to pick up and after few rings she indeed picked it up.

“sona...”

“Mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hein.phone karna bandh karo.”

“You are lying sona,you cannot do this to me.kuch to problem hein jo tume parishaan karta hein warna tum eise kabhi nahi karti I know that.tell me nah hum saat milke sab solve karte.please tell me what’s wrong.”

“Nothing is wrong.infact ab hi sab sahi hone laga hein mujhe.Recording behji hein mein ne,ab tak wo mila hoga tume.uske alaawa mujhe kuch baat nahi karni hein aur aaj ke baad mujhe call mat karo.agar tum eisa karneke koshish bhi kare toh,mein khud aakar tumari mom ko dad aur pooja ke sach bata dungi.tum apne mom ko bohot pyaar karte hein right.so mujhe wo karneke liye majhboor mat karo.”

Rohit gasped at what she told,he couldn’t believe her words he couldn’t believe his ears.

“Aur mein tume kabhi pyaar nahi kiya hein rohit,bas. Naa kabhi kiya aur naa kabhi kar paunga.mujhe srif tumari pese se aur apne reputation se matlab thi. Usske aage kuch bhi nahi hein.Get that into your head.”

His phone slipped off his hand as the other end of sonakshi got disconnected and he felt like all his world crisping off to pieces.he ran to their room to only find all her clothes and belongings to be gone and there all the ends of what she said matched with what has happened.she had honestly left him forever-lying to him not just about the shoot but about everything between them,all promises all love all togetherness all feeling,sab jhoot.


His eyes dried up at that instant,he had all the way supported her in every little and big step she took,had believed her more than even himself and than every single thing in the whole world and had depended on her like he did on no other and this was how she had decided to repay him.


Two days later, a charred body arrived at sippy mansion that was said to be found with sonakshi’s vehicle which had gone missing till then. All the family members who had no idea about the whole ruckus sonakshi has created and gone in rohit’s heart broke down at the news of her death while he didn’t shed a single tear for her. When rohit decided to reject that being her body,naren sippy and YK decided to apply for DNA compatibility of the dead body and it turned positive breaking everyone’s heart.


Ye reports ke hisaab se toh wo laash sonakshi ki hein.your wife is no more rohit.We are sorry,sorrier than we can ever say.


The family thought rohit has gone into a shock as he went to a laughter fit at the police officer’s declaration that day but it was actually otherwise. He was facing the reality he alone made up inside his world thinking that she cannot just die like that. He was in a continuous denial whenever someone thought to talk about it with him. Everyone couldn’t just understand why he repeatedly declared that he doesn’t love her anymore and also that he didn’t believe that she died both at the same time.


It was nishi who found the recorded message sonakshi sent him but rohit made her promise him that she would not utter a word about it to their family because then again, had anyone heard it, that is going to be his father’s dirty secret that would be indirectly going to resurface by that. Nishi’s hands were bounded but she hated sonakshi for doing this to her nephew whom she loved like her own son.


No matter what rohit hated to love her and loved to hate her still he couldn’t erase her memories off him.How easily she crumpled on his heart like that and how easily she threw away all what he gave herHe hated for having to be so vulnerable over a woman who took his whole life as a joke.

Ek TV actress iss ghar ki bahu kabhi nahi ban sakti.

The so called father of his said so before he married her.And he hated her for making what his dad said to turn true and what he believed to be false.

Despite all these,despite all these damning things.

Yet everyday he dialled her number, the bewakoof he is.


He walked here and there in the anger that was surging up his veins so badly. Why am i thinking all about what I don’t even to think a bit about. What the hell. Why on earth why. Why me. And even if it’s me,why her memories? It’s not like I lived with her throughout my lifetime but still. He told to himself superficially but his mind always wanted it the other way,that is what he was unaware of. Why the hell is she the one who yet can take control of all his emotions despite not even being at his vicinity.


“Rohit dekho mein kaun lekar aayi hein”

his walk came to a halt hearing his door being pushed open and pooji’s voice came in. There he saw ajit carrying chaahat into the room and placing her on the floor.

and soon as that he didn’t know why but he forgot all what happened with him till now. His face filled with a bright smile as he knelt down to take the little girl who came running into his arms.

“Hi mishter shippy.”

“Chaahat..”

He said as she clunged into his shoulder with her tiny hands.

“Kahaan se mili ye tum dono ko”

He asked planting a kiss on her cheeks.

“arey sharanya aur chaahat yahaan lunch karne aayi thi aur hum dono se mila neeche buffet mein so haan.uss wakt se ye siddi karne lagi ki uski patti uncle ko dhekna hein wagera bol ke.so we brought her up here.” Answered pooja.

“Pata hein aapko mishter shippy I mished you sho much.i told maa ki mujhe aaj hi milna hein aapshe,par unhone kahi ki eisha yuhi aapko milne keishe jaa shakti and all that...lekin taqdeer ko dekhi aapne,mujhe sheeda yaahan aapki paash hi lekar aaya gaya hein.”

Rohit found himself smiling at all her sweet talks and the way her eyes turn big and small as her expressions changed every second.

“Taqdeer nahi hum leke aaya hein tume yahaan.in fact Mein neh tume itne dhoor utake aaya tha.” Said ajit pulling her leg.

“aapki bhai ranveer shingh bohot cute hein par bohot annoying bhi hein you know.” She whispered to rohit making everyone laugh.

“Haan ye ranveer shingh hamesha se thoda crack rehete hein.don’t mind.” Rohit replied her with a smile.

“bhai.not fair man.you side her instead of me?”

“Haan,of courshe mishter shippy mere hi shide lelenga.pata hein kyun?” Asked the little girl cupping rohit’s cheeks with her tiny hands.

“Kyun?” Asked rohit,pooja and ajit in unison.

“Kyun mein,Doctor shippy ki taqdeer hoon.” She uttered cutely and ajit and pooja stared in an awe but rohit felt a tug at his heart.

Aur tum taqdeer hoon meri.

He heard himself telling the same words,the same way he confessed his love to sonakshi years back,cupping her cheeks the exact same way chaahat did on his as. A flash of how her eyes stared at him with happy tears rolling down her cheeks that day did a quick picturing in his mind and faded away.

Did she really act those tears out as I confessed my feelings to her? Did she.

“Kahaan ko gaye aap?”

He came back to reality when chaahat waved her hands in his view.he nodded in negative and gave a smiled forced out.

“kissi ki yaad aayi aapko?” She asked again. He waited a while and gave a nod to say yes.

“Toh pakka meri mumma ki yaad aayi hogi aapko.shab log kehete hein ki mein bohot milte hoon mumma she.” She said excitedly as rohit stared at her.

“Oh fo.i am sho dumb.aap toh kabhi usshe teek she dekha hi nahi hein.” Then she said.

“Of course dekha hein baby. Uss din boutique pe dekha naa mein.yaad nahi? Par mujhe nahi lagta ki aap aapki mom ki tarha hein.shaayad paapa jeise honge aap.” Rohit replied.

“Mumma kehti hein ki meri kuch adaa paapa she mila hua hein...”

“Jeise?”

“Jeise ki nange pau jaati ho to mujhe jaldi zukaam hoti hein.aur.....agar neend mein thoda sha bhi meri poshture badli toh meri neck shtrain ho jaati hein....aur mujhe naa karela thoda sha bhi nahi pashand.....aur inshtant noodlesh ke alaawa meri favorite kaana hein...dhokla aur shamosa.....”

Rohit stared at her with a shock.

Meanwhile pooja and ajit looked at each other in an equal stun.

“Bhai aapko pakka yakeen hein naa ki aap ne apni beti ko nahi koi kissi maha kumbmehla mein?” He heard ajit asking but he remained in a shock still.

“Shut up yaar ajit,kya bolte jaa rahe hein tum bhi.” Warned pooja noticing rohit’s changed face and expressions.chaahat stared at rohit for a while and turned to his two siblings.

“Aap logo ke bhai hamesha itne losht kyun hojaata hein?ekdum gumshudha typesh.”

Pooja shrugged coming forward and carried her into her arms.

“Chalo ab aapki patti uncle se bhi mili hein.mein aapki maa ko promise hui hein isse milne ki baad aapko ghar drop karneki.ab chale?”

“Arey nahi nahi.mujhe thodi aur reheni hein mishter shippy ke shaat.” The little girl started waving her tiny legs while being in pooja’s hands to oppose her. Rohit stood up meanwhile and took her into his arms from pooja.

“Aap aayengi chaahat mere saat beach dekhne keliye?” He asked then.

“Beach!!!! Yesh yesh yesh yesh.” She started to claim excitedly.

“pooji ajit tum log ek ghante ki baad wahaan aakar chaahat ko pickup karo so that you both can go and drop her home.tab tak mein isske saat honge beach pe ok.” Rohit said before leaving from the room.

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“Toh aapko bhi nange pau jaate hein toh zukaam hoti hein?”

Chaahat asked as she kicked the waves that were coming to the shore with her tiny feet while rohit held her tiny hands in his.

“Hmmm.”

“Neck shtrain bhi hote weird poshitions mein?”

“Yes.”

“Karela bhi bilkul no no?”

He gave a nod,unable to utter a word.

“Dhokla and shamosha?” She asked again and he looked at her to flash a fake smile.

“aap aur meri paapa related hein shaayad then.”She said putting her finger in her mouth and trying to connect the dots she was figuring out.

He took her finger off of her and clutched both hands to his palms.

“kya karte hein aapki paapa?” He asked.

“Wo mumbai mein kaam karte hein.you know mumbai? Earlier it wash called Bombay.”

She said very seriously as his lips formed an honest smile at her cuteness.

“Haa meri maa mein bhi mumbai se hoon.malabar hill mein reheta hoon mein. Sab pata hein bombay kese mumbai hue wagera.Toh aap aapki paapa ghar aate wakt poochlo ki kahi wo Rohit sippy ke rishtadaar ho yaa nahi? Ok?” He asked holding her chin. She agreed.

“Tume ice cream chahiye?” He asked.

“Ish cream toh shab ki pashand ka kaana hein,mein bhi wo shab ki ek hissha hoon.”

“A simple yes would have been enough,drama quee...”

he was saying but halted at his track of words realizing what he just uttered.

Drama queen.

Sonakshi.

Sonakshi his drama queen.

His? Was she even mine? His mind asked him that moment.

Baar baar mujhe uski yaad kyun dilaati hoon aap,chaahat?

Taking her to his arms silently he walked to the ice cream vendor.

“Kya flavor chahiye?” He asked.

“Kya flavor matlab,shaari duniya mein shrif ek hi ish cream flavor hona chahiye aur wo hein chocolate.ish cream uncle,mujhe ek choco cone dedijiye okaysh?” She said.

“Aur bhi flavours hein lekin butterscotch aur strawberry wagera for your information.” He said.

“Haan hogi.phir ye ish cream ki eheshaash shirf chocolate flavor de shakte hein for your information.” She said making her eyes bigger.

Taking the ice cream to her hand she waited excitedly as he paid the vendor and rohit then turned back to find her already seated on a bench enjoying her favourite. He walked to her and sat down.

“Aapke ish cream kahaan hein?” She asked stopping her work mid way. He smiled without an answer.

“Kya aapko meri ish cream chahiye? No no no,mein apni ish cream kisshi ki shaat share nahi karti.”

His smile faded away as it replaced tears in his eyes. He was falling in an awe with this little one and at the same time he was falling down so badly as she triggers memories of someone else in his mind.

Sonakshi. Are you trying to trouble me this much? As if what you did before being gone wasn’t enough?

“Shach shach bataao aap mujhe doctor shippy,mein aapko kisshiki yaad dilaati hoon right?”

“yes.” He answered after a long pause.

“kisshki?” Was the next question.

Rohit took a deep sigh in.

“Thi koi.mere bohot kareeb.”

“Koi jissne aapshe bohot pyaar kar rahi thi?”

He nodded in negative.

“No chaahat.i loved her,she didn’t.that is what she said before leaving.”

“Leaving? Matlab.marchuki hein wo?”

Rohit looked at her in a jiff. Even the little one got stunned at his look.

“Nahi.marchuki nahi hein wo.bas mujhe chod ke hi chali gayi.”

“Good bye bholi jaane she pehele?” Asked her.

Rohit waited and gave a no.

“Arey toh aap fikar mat karo.jab koi bina good bye keheke chale jaati hoon na, wo sharoor waapash aane ke iraade shaat leke jaati hein. Trusht me.eisha hi hoti hein.wo waapash sharoor aayengi.”

“I don’t know what I want anymore baby. I don’t know if I want her to come back or I don’t know if I want to go to her.i don’t know what I want.”

“It’sh not needed for you to know what you need mishter shippy.kyun ki mein,yaaniki chaahat jaanti hoon ki aapka chaahat kya hein.Aur aapke chaahat aapke shona ko waapas paanekaa hi hein.”

Rohit left shocked at what she said. Sona? How does this little girl know that.

“Tume uski naam kese pata?” He asked with a shivering voice.

“Arey no,mein neh yuhi eise bataadi.shona for shweetheart.you know the shong hey shona hey shona from that shaif ali khan movie. Eishe.” She said restarting to finish her ice cream.

Rohit stared at her as time passed by.

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Ajit and pooja has picked chaahat from where she waited at the beach with rohit and then left to drop her home.meanwhile rohit walked towards the hotel they resided lost in a chain of thoughts.

A day,another day that he is stucked up with repeatedly rolling memories. Of the same one.

He just didn’t know why. No well he knew why, it’s chaahat who was bringing back all her memories to him. And weirdly andhar hi andhar she gives him feels of being connected,just that he couldn’t depict what that connection was. Ye bhi toh ho sakta hein ki eise yuhi hum dono ki aadat milte hein. Don’t be stupid, asal zingdagi hein ye.


Coming to Goa looked like a real bad option. Zaari galti uss ajit ka hein. Shit.

He cursed thinking it’s good if he could go back home.should he just do that?

Then again chaahat?

Can I leave chaahat? And go away?

What chaahat? He heard his mind questioning. Anyways they have to leave here in a few days. It’s not like she is your daughter or you can take her with you.

Rohit felt tired. He was constantly being tired of the problems that were daily tiring him off.

I cannot take this anymore,thought he and after few minutes he was at the lobby bar wanting to get lost in the so called excuse liquid he used to run away from the reality.

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He got up to get back to the room but stumbled. The bartenders came to help him but he shrugged them all off and walked away from there in a total inebriation. Meanwhile it was past midnight and upstairs ajit and pooja went tensed finding rohit’s room empty after returning back.They frantically called the reception to find a clue but failed.

Rohit wandered here and there coming out of the main gate of the hotel. He wanted to cross the road and go to the beach where he spent his evening with that little girl. He was feeling so lonely and the intoxication was not helping him either.

Looking through the darkness as his eyes gave away the chance of seeing clearly thanks to his drunken state he made his eyes small and stared at what was looking directly at him from the other side of the road.

“S.on...a.....” he whispered.

It was her,the whole surrounding was blurred but she was clear. He smiled weakly as he felt sure that it is her,she had the mangalsutra he tied around her neck years back on their wedding day and her wrist had the friendship band he tied on their engagement. She wore his favourite transparent saree she was clad on the anniversary party of nishi bua and YK and her loose hair danced in the wind that was coming from the sea side. Her eyes fixed at him and he was sure of what he wanted now.

“It’sh not needed for you to know what you need mishter shippy.kyun ki mein,yaaniki chaahat jaanti hoon ki aapka chaahat kya hein.Aur aapke chaahat aapke shona ko waapas paanekaa hi hein.”

Yes chaahat was right. I need my sona. I need her. I need you sona. Please don’t go.

He took weak steps to her totally forgetting her surrounding. He saw her taking a step back as he took a step forward to cross the road.

“Sona...don’t go....please.let me t...alk to you.” He screamed from this side to stop her but she seemed to not want to be around him.

Rohit was tensed seeing her walking away and ran across the road in his inebriated state.

“Sona....pleas...e don’t go p.lease..sona suno mere.....”

that was all what he could tell as he ran forward and he got hit by a car that came from the right side. He fell down with a thud and that’s all he could see last.

The driver of the vehicle came running to the injured pedestrian who now lied all unconscious in the road and he carried him into the car and soon rushed to the hospital.

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Rohit regained a slight consciousness and he felt his head being so heavy. He stirred to find himself in the backseat of a car that was moving so fast.

“Please don’t move.your head is bleeding.” Said a voiceover and he tried to feel where his head was paining but already a hand was covering the wound in an attempt to stop bleeding.

“Kuch nahi hoga tume.hum bas pochne waale hein hospital.please....aakhe khol kar raho...please.” The voice said again and he felt his eyes drooping not listening to what the voice said.

He was going to go unconscious but for some reason he opened his eyes again trying to say something. His voice was weak but he moved his face towards the waist of whose lap he was right now on and snaked his arms around the frame.

“Sona....tum ho naa? Ye tum hi ho. Bas....tum aayi hein....ab.mujhe....jeena hein...tumari saat.....so mujhe marne mat do....sona....please...mere saat raho...please....”

He begged and begged and begged until everything turned back and he fell into a deep slumber.

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Rohit was taken into the emergency treatment unit and doctors started attending him immediately. As the person who brought him sat in the waiting area burying the head among hands unable to register what just happened, a nurse came there.

“Aap iss patient ko personally jaante hein?”

“Ye surgeon Rohit sippy hein.saalo pehele isne mere maa ki ilaaj kiya hein.of course mein jaante hoon isse.”

“Do you know where he lives....yahaan kisske saat aaya hoon wagera?”

“Nahi....so mujhe isske ghar ke number toh pata hein.phir yahaan kisske saat hein wo toh mujhe nahi maalum.”

Came the reply.

“Toh hume wo number dedijiye please.we have to contact them immediately.aur saato saat aapke details bhi likhdeejiye please.Agar kuch legal formalities ho toh wo sab keliye.”

The nurse said handing over the writing pad.

“Ye lijiye,agar Doctor sippy ko yaa uske parivaar ko iss accident ke liye case karna chahenge toh kahiye unko ki mujhe contact karne keliye. Ok?”

The nurse nodded taking it back.

“Aap nahi puchenge ki uska haal chaal kese hein?” The nurse asked from the person who stood in front of her then.

“Uske koi sarroorat nahi hein.mujhe pata hein.ussko kuch nahi hoga. Itna toh yakeen hein mujhe.” Got the answer and the nurse smiled.

Then she looked down at the writing pad to read the details. She received a shock reading them details on it.raising her head the nurse stared at the walking away form of the lady wearing a scarf around her head and a pair of shades covering her eyes. A stunned two words escaped her lips then.

“Sonakshi rastogi?”


Chapter title credit: mein yahaan hoon (veer zaara 2004)

Edited by wasuthecrazy - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#34

Wasuuuu... 🤗🤗

Take a bow... ❤️🤗

This was marvellous...👏

I have got badly hooked to this story... I check on for updates every single day... 🙈

Sonakshi cannot do this to Rohit... I won't believe it under whatever damn circumstances..❤💕She must have been forced by some classless sippy to like that.. I am pretty sure about this.. Her dying love for Rohit 💕💕 cannot be washed away by her so called bletent words..

Rohit.. My heart broken into millions of pieces imagining his condition.. 💔💔💔

Chahat is Ronakshi's daughter... ❤❤💘💘Guaranteed... ❤💘💘Likhawake lelo... 😄😍😍And I am already doing a happy dance...🥳 Rohit ko sirf usski beti hi sambhal sakti hai.. No one else... I am in love with this chota paket.. ❤❤❤😍😍😍😍💘💘💘 I loved her dialogue to Rohit when she said.. Agar koi goodbye nahi kehta toh woh zaroor wapas aayega... And saying aapko aapki shona miljayegi.. Did something to me too... ❤❤😍😍

I loveeee youuuu Wasuuuu❤❤ For giving me this..❤😭Mere forum se jaane se pehele.. You have given the best thing... ❤❤💕💕💘💘

Waiting for the next update.. ❤ more eagerly than ever.. ❤❤💕💕💕😍😍

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#35

I just can't express in words. You have written it too beautifully... I am just in awe of your writing...

I am your fan...🤩 Can I get your autograph?😉

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Posted: 5 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: sohit-mishbir

Wasuuuu... 🤗🤗

Take a bow... ❤️🤗

This was marvellous...👏

I have got badly hooked to this story... I check on for updates every single day... 🙈

Sonakshi cannot do this to Rohit... I won't believe it under whatever damn circumstances..❤💕She must have been forced by some classless sippy to like that.. I am pretty sure about this.. Her dying love for Rohit 💕💕 cannot be washed away by her so called bletent words..

Rohit.. My heart broken into millions of pieces imagining his condition.. 💔💔💔

Chahat is Ronakshi's daughter... ❤❤💘💘Guaranteed... ❤💘💘Likhawake lelo... 😄😍😍And I am already doing a happy dance...🥳 Rohit ko sirf usski beti hi sambhal sakti hai.. No one else... I am in love with this chota paket.. ❤❤❤😍😍😍😍💘💘💘 I loved her dialogue to Rohit when she said.. Agar koi goodbye nahi kehta toh woh zaroor wapas aayega... And saying aapko aapki shona miljayegi.. Did something to me too... ❤❤😍😍

I loveeee youuuu Wasuuuu❤❤ For giving me this..❤😭Mere forum se jaane se pehele.. You have given the best thing... ❤❤💕💕💘💘

Waiting for the next update.. ❤ more eagerly than ever.. ❤❤💕💕💕😍😍


Alu meri baby🤗

I am so glad that you loved it. Thank you so so so so much for loving my work and appreciating my work as usual. I look forward to know how was my update in the eyes of you guys and it excites me to the core when I read all these feedbacks aluuu.thank you so muchhhhh mein bohooot kush hoon😳

I shall not comment about why sonakshi did that😛😛😛😛 but uska har ek baatein aur baatein se zyaada aur bohot bhi boho kuch ke wajeise rohit toot chuke hein. 😭 I am trying to bring out him being extremely messed up as a result of it as best as I can. Let’s see how it unfolds.

Chaahat kisska hein?😛 wo bhi hum dekh hi lenge. In case I shall write down what you said 😆 aage aage dektha hein hota hein kya.😉 However expect the unexpected and expect the expected too. However I shall try to keep the chota packet ki dialogue baazi to be exciting. Hehehehehe.

I love you too meri alu baby. Thank you for loving me and my work always. It pushes me to do better day and day. I will be back soonish as I can. Wish time to pass soon and you will come back to the forum soonish.

Hugs and tc baby.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mischief

I just can't express in words. You have written it too beautifully... I am just in awe of your writing...

I am your fan...🤩 Can I get your autograph?😉

Arey how very sweet of you.i am blushing!!! Thank you so so so so so much for pushing me for better like this. It truely means alot!!!!

Dost ke beech autograph nahi yaadein hogi alwayssss🤗❤️😃 May I know your name please? You can call me wasu.

Tc and hugs.

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Originally posted by: wasuthecrazy

Arey how very sweet of you.i am blushing!!! Thank you so so so so so much for pushing me for better like this. It truely means alot!!!!

Dost ke beech autograph nahi yaadein hogi alwayssss🤗❤️😃 May I know your name please? You can call me wasu.

Tc and hugs.

I am glad that you consider me a friend.

So sweet of you

Myself Tanya.

🤗

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Originally posted by: Mischief

I am glad that you consider me a friend.

So sweet of you

Myself Tanya.

🤗

Nice to meet you tanya🤗 so glad to have befriended you like this. Much love for loving my work again. See you around and tc❤️😘☺️

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That was beautiful. How cute can the little girl be? I really love Chahat and the way you write about her. I stalk everyday hoping there is an update cause I am so eager to find out when they’re gonna meet but I’m so glad you made her alive here. Seriously I don’t like nail biting suspense, such torture. What made Sona to take such a harsh decision, I’m serious curious to know. My instincts are telling me it’s Naren sippy but let’s wait for the story to unfold. I’m damn sure Chahat is Rohit’s kid so please let him find out about her in the next one itself. Hehehehe


rohit is wrecked in these years, please get him to meet sona in the next one ok? Hehehehe

Update soon with all my requests above fulfilled🤗😉

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