Kuch daag acche hote hain : A RoNakshi OS

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Posted: 5 years ago
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As I've said before, you can take the Ronakshian out of the forum but you cannot take the Ronakshi out of them. So m back. Couldn't stay away from Ronakshi or you all

Came up with a tiny little kidish one-shot on Mehendi Function

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I've no clue what I've done with this OS🤣. This is my second ever writing on Ronakshi. Enjoy Reading

Sandz this one's for you ;) please don't kill me if you hate it😛

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Lying lazily on her bed. A couple of soft pillow under her stomach for support, hands stretched in the front. No not doing the superman exercise, just trying to stay comfortable while the mehendi is being applied to the back of her hands.

The guests had left, the mehendi function was over but this bridal mehendi was taking forever.

'Should've gone the Meera Rajput way, just two gewars on the back of your hands and your done with the mehendi. Par nai. Mujhe hi shauk chadh rha tha itni mehendi lagwane ka. Ab bhukto ' She thought

knock knock

'Haha ye kya kar rhi ho. aise kaun mehendi lagwata hai' Walked in Rohit, casually placing a kiss on her cheek, sitting next to her (How cute she looked, he thought)

'Tumhe pata hai Bridal mehendi me kitna time lagta hai. Teen ghante se baithe baithe thak gyi thi. To ab aise lagwa rahi hoon.'

Amused, he looked at the ladies applying mehendi on her hands and smiled at them. And then looked at the untouched plate of fruits kept near her

'Sona kuch khaya tumne ya sube se ye drawing me hi lagi hui ho' He asked pointing towards her mehendi

'Haan bas ye complete hojae fir khati hoon'

'Ye to abhi yaha tak banegi na' He asked looking at her still almost blank hands and pointing towards her elbow. 'Abhi to bohot time lagega'

'Tum seedhi baith jao, I'll get you something to eat, Aap log bhi jaiye kuch kha lijie fir resume karlena' He said getting up

(The ladies went outside, Rohit too went to get her something) (Rohit has no mehendi on his hands in my version of the scene)

She got up with utmost difficulty trying to save her mehendi and the bed cover. She sat upright and he entered with a plate full of food in his hand.

'Yelo ji ma'am banda hazir hai apki sewa me' He said sitting next to her

He picked up some rice and daal in a spoon to feed her.

'Arey Rohit mujhe dedo main kha lungi . Aage ki mehendi sookh gyi hai' Said Sona trying to take the spoon from him

'Arey ye mehendi wale haath door rakho mujhse. This mehendi thing stinks'

'Aur Sona maine itti Bollywood movies to dekhi hai ki main samajh saku ki tumhe abhi khana khilane ka, tumhare mu pe girti hui sulf hatane ka, tumhari mehendi me apna naam dhundhne ka kaam sab mera hai' He said while feeding her

'Rohit! Jitni Bollywood movies ka tum reference dete rehte hona, mujhe pura doubt hai ab tumhari us I watch only Hollywood movies wali baat pe'

'Waise Rohit, ye mehendi aur iski smell to abhi aramse 6-7 din tak rahegi. To agar tumhe isse itni problem hai to matlab tum hamari first night pe bhi alag room me soge. Kyunki iski smell me tumhe neend kaise aegi na.' Sonakshi said with her tongue in her cheek trying to look as innocent as she could

Rohit looked at her astounded.

'Sona do baatein. Ek to ki tum aisa sochna bhi mat ki ham hamari first night pe zara sa bhi sone wale hain. Aur doosri ye ki hamari SUHAAGRAAT pe Rohit Sippy ki fire ko fire brigade nai bujha sakti. To ye mehendi kya hai. Chodhne wala nai hoon main tumhe haan' He said smiling naughtily, stuffing her face with the last big morsel of roti and sabzi, keeping the plate aside

'Rohit' She exclaimed, her cheeks turning red. 'Kaisi baatein kar rhe ho tum. sharam nai aati tumhe'

'Ab ham dono k hisse ka to tum hi sharma leti ho to main kya karu' He said, coming closer to her with every word. 'Ham dono sharmate rahe, to hogyi fir hamari first night puri' He said kissing her on the nose

'Aur jis tarah se tum ye hamari first night ka soch soch k laal ho rhi ho na, mujhse zyada excited to tum lag rhi ho mujhe'

'Haan to maine kab mana kia' She said being all shy

('Ek din ye ladki mujhe heart attack deke hi rahegi' he thought)

'Kya kaha tumne Sona?'

'Yehi ki Maine kab kaha ki main excited nai hoon. After all itna hot would be husband hai mera' She said coming close to him

'Sona, what has gotten into you today' he said going back, startled with sudden change of her behavior, 'mehendi dimag me chadh gyi hai kya tumhare'

'Main Sonakshi hoon Rohit, Parvati nai jo sirf roti sharmati rahu. Par ab tum me zarur parvati ki atma aagyi hai jo aise peeche hath rhe ho' She said looking at him seductively

'umm haan. hmm wo. Arey haan main kyu sharma raha hoon itna, meri hone wali biwi ho tum afterall' He said coming back closer to her wrapping his hands around her waist. 'wo bhi itni beautiful, itni hot' He said while pressing his lips on her neck

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He comes out of the room after a while, with Sona's scarf wrapped around him, trying to sneak out of the house without having anyone notice the mehendi smudged all over his shirt.

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Pri 💛

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: girl94

As I've said before, you can take the Ronakshian out of the forum but you cannot take the Ronakshi out of them. So m back. Couldn't stay away from Ronakshi or you all

Came up with a tiny little kidish one-shot on Mehendi Function

________________________________________________________

I've no clue what I've done with this OS🤣. This is my second ever writing on Ronakshi. Enjoy Reading

Sandz this one's for you ;) please don't kill me if you hate it😛

________________________________________________________

Lying lazily on her bed. A couple of soft pillow under her stomach for support, hands stretched in the front. No not doing the superman exercise, just trying to stay comfortable while the mehendi is being applied to the back of her hands.

The guests had left, the mehendi function was over but this bridal mehendi was taking forever.

'Should've gone the Meera Rajput way, just two gewars on the back of your hands and your done with the mehendi. Par nai. Mujhe hi shauk chadh rha tha itni mehendi lagwane ka. Ab bhukto ' She thought

knock knock

'Haha ye kya kar rhi ho. aise kaun mehendi lagwata hai' Walked in Rohit, casually placing a kiss on her cheek, sitting next to her (How cute she looked, he thought)

'Tumhe pata hai Bridal mehendi me kitna time lagta hai. Teen ghante se baithe baithe thak gyi thi. To ab aise lagwa rahi hoon.'

Amused, he looked at the ladies applying mehendi on her hands and smiled at them. And then looked at the untouched plate of fruits kept near her

'Sona kuch khaya tumne ya sube se ye drawing me hi lagi hui ho' He asked pointing towards her mehendi

'Haan bas ye complete hojae fir khati hoon'

'Ye to abhi yaha tak banegi na' He asked looking at her still almost blank hands and pointing towards her elbow. 'Abhi to bohot time lagega'

'Tum seedhi baith jao, I'll get you something to eat, Aap log bhi jaiye kuch kha lijie fir resume karlena' He said getting up

(The ladies went outside, Rohit too went to get her something) (Rohit has no mehendi on his hands in my version of the scene)

She got up with utmost difficulty trying to save her mehendi and the bed cover. She sat upright and he entered with a plate full of food in his hand.

'Yelo ji ma'am banda hazir hai apki sewa me' He said sitting next to her

He picked up some rice and daal in a spoon to feed her.

'Arey Rohit mujhe dedo main kha lungi . Aage ki mehendi sookh gyi hai' Said Sona trying to take the spoon from him

'Arey ye mehendi wale haath door rakho mujhse. This mehendi thing stinks'

'Aur Sona maine itti Bollywood movies to dekhi hai ki main samajh saku ki tumhe abhi khana khilane ka, tumhare mu pe girti hui sulf hatane ka, tumhari mehendi me apna naam dhundhne ka kaam sab mera hai' He said while feeding her

'Rohit! Jitni Bollywood movies ka tum reference dete rehte hona, mujhe pura doubt hai ab tumhari us I watch only Hollywood movies wali baat pe'

'Waise Rohit, ye mehendi aur iski smell to abhi aramse 6-7 din tak rahegi. To agar tumhe isse itni problem hai to matlab tum hamari first night pe bhi alag room me soge. Kyunki iski smell me tumhe neend kaise aegi na.' Sonakshi said with her tongue in her cheek trying to look as innocent as she could

Rohit looked at her astounded.

'Sona do baatein. Ek to ki tum aisa sochna bhi mat ki ham hamari first night pe zara sa bhi sone wale hain. Aur doosri ye ki hamari SUHAAGRAAT pe Rohit Sippy ki fire ko fire brigade nai bujha sakti. To ye mehendi kya hai. Chodhne wala nai hoon main tumhe haan' He said smiling naughtily, stuffing her face with the last big morsel of roti and sabzi, keeping the plate aside

'Rohit' She exclaimed, her cheeks turning red. 'Kaisi baatein kar rhe ho tum. sharam nai aati tumhe'

'Ab ham dono k hisse ka to tum hi sharma leti ho to main kya karu' He said, coming closer to her with every word. 'Ham dono sharmate rahe, to hogyi fir hamari first night puri' He said kissing her on the nose

'Aur jis tarah se tum ye hamari first night ka soch soch k laal ho rhi ho na, mujhse zyada excited to tum lag rhi ho mujhe'

'Haan to maine kab mana kia' She said being all shy

('Ek din ye ladki mujhe heart attack deke hi rahegi' he thought)

'Kya kaha tumne Sona?'

'Yehi ki Maine kab kaha ki main excited nai hoon. After all itna hot would be husband hai mera' She said coming close to him

'Sona, what has gotten into you today' he said going back, startled with sudden change of her behavior, 'mehendi dimag me chadh gyi hai kya tumhare'

'Main Sonakshi hoon Rohit, Parvati nai jo sirf roti sharmati rahu. Par ab tum me zarur parvati ki atma aagyi hai jo aise peeche hath rhe ho' She said looking at him seductively

'umm haan. hmm wo. Arey haan main kyu sharma raha hoon itna, meri hone wali biwi ho tum afterall' He said coming back closer to her wrapping his hands around her waist. 'wo bhi itni beautiful, itni hot' He said while pressing his lips on her neck

.

.

.

.

.

He comes out of the room after a while, with Sona's scarf wrapped around him, trying to sneak out of the house without having anyone notice the mehendi smudged all over his shirt.

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amazingly written

enjoyed reading it

the sharmana game between them was very sweet

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hey Pri😃😃😃

Thankyou for coming back 🤗🤗🤗

This was an absolute beauty with the RoNakshi romance,nok-jhok embraced all over! How cute they are! Very well done😍

Loads of love

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Glad you are back and very beautiful OS

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nimaaa

amazingly written

enjoyed reading it

the sharmana game between them was very sweet

Thnx Nima :)

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Glad you liked it

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ara-Grapher

Hey Pri😃😃😃

Thankyou for coming back 🤗🤗🤗

This was an absolute beauty with the RoNakshi romance,nok-jhok embraced all over! How cute they are! Very well done😍

Loads of love

Hey Ara. Couldn't leave my Happy place and go ya. M glad you're back too😃🤗

Thnkyou. They are the cutest aren't they

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: atikna

Glad you are back and very beautiful OS

Heyy Atiii. Glad to be back and thnku😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This was absolutely cuttiiieee one pri 😍 Do write more.. It was fun

And welcome back🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wow...this is beautiful Pri!!

I would have loved to see something like this on screen rather than all the taam jhaam n media in the mehendi function. Sona ne jo dress pehni thi...mujhe toh waisi dress me mehendi Ka cone haath me Lene ki bhi himmat nai hogi😆 itna Saj dhaj k kaun baithta hai mehendi banane!!

This was really so real life!! Shorts pehenke baitho haat pair failake mehnedi banane😆

And thanks for saving us from Rohit's mehendi wale haat🤣

Ahem,. U should have also written what happened in the room!☺️😉 I hope Sona's mehendi gets a dark colour now that it's wiped out so early 😂

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