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Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Sach me pura Holi special episode best tha

Shashank ne Appu ke liye apne morals, sanskar chhodkar kisi par hat uthaya ye badi bat thi 😆

"muze jalane ke liye tumne ye sab kiya na" ye dialogue aur uske bad jo blush kiya shashank ne Hayee

Hayeee that blush of both of them had my whole heart!!!

How he came and sat besides apurva for the game!!! He is too adorable!!

In their bedroom while trying to apply colour mala nahi avdat he sagle....that was also so cute!!

Yes biggest was he forgetting his morals, sanskaar and hitting someone and more over coming out of his comfort zone and wearing that Krishna costume...hayyeee!!!🥰🥰

I am replying about the story posted, it was soo cute❤❤❤ just like our Shapu,

Please continue

Originally posted by: niakush

Hello friends,

First of all thank you for letting me know that you'll would read the FF, os etc!!

So as I mentioned earlier this is a two short story!! This was written keeping anubhav and gungun in mind but now they are not relatable, so it's converted to Shashank and apurva whom we can relate with!!!

This is my version of the slap incident!!! Netra slapping apurva!!!

Title:-" The turning point- The Slap!!"

Netra had slapped apurva for no reason...and after that all of them had returned to their respective homes!!!

Apurva in her room!!!

Apurva thinking:- "Why did Rani tai say i am snatching away all her happiness!! I toh always tried to bridge the gap between her and atti (bua)!!! How can I been the reason for all her sorrows????"

Atti comes to apurva's room:- "Are you fine my baccha???"

Wiping her tears:-" Yes atti, but are you fine???"

Atti:-" Yes my dear...I am fine!!"

Apurva:-" You don't worry about Rani tai's health, i will tell that khadus to keep a watch on her health!!"

Apurva to herself:-"Even if i won't say any which ways he will!!! He cares for her!!"

Atti:-" No no you don't tell anything to shashank, netra will get fine herself!!"

Here at Shashank's place!!! All were in his room!!

Kuki:-" How did she hit appu!!"

Nikhil:-" How dare she, and what was the need to hit appu, she was no where at fault!!"

Mansi:-" There is something more to this, Shashank bhauji do you have any idea???"

Shashank thinking to himself:-" I really don't understand, does she have any feelings for me???"

Kuki:-" Shashank, say na!!"

Shashank:-" kuki may be because of Sarika atya loving apurva, netra feels insecure, i guess!!"

Sumi:-" And that gives her the right to hit appu kya??"

Amey:-" How must be appu feeling??"

Shashank:-" Don't think much dada, apurva will royally ignore netra here on, and i feel that's good for both of them!!"

Sumi:-" Why good for both of them!!! But shashank dada you were a great disappointment today??"

Shashank being shocked:-" I was disappointment!!! Kindly elaborate!!"

Mansi:-" You dint say a word to netra?? Why bhauji???It was your assistant to insulted her!! And at first place why did she even call you??"

Shashank:-" I said netra to shutup and not speaking nonsense!!!"

Nikhil:-" Just that much!! In my presence i wudn't have let anyone touch sumi or slap her, and if by mistake also anyone be it from this family also would have slapped her, i would have stood for her!! I wouldn't have let anybody slap her!!!"

Shashank:-" nikhil Rao i did stand for her!!"

Nikhil:-" I am sorry may be i dint notice then!!"

Amey:-" I am with you nikhil rao bcz even i dint notice!!"

Shashank:-"Like seriously guyz?? What else could I have done?? Netra is my assistant at the end of the day!!! I have to work with her everyday"

Mansi:- "And the guy appu fought with in her party for you was her boyfriend!!"

Shashank:-" come on vahini we all know there is nothing serious between them!!"

Kuki:-" Yes, we know!! But the crowd there was appu's crowd, they dint knew this!! Yet she stood by you!!"

Shashank:-" So again like as usual I am at mistake right, and as usual that shisht is right!!"

Kuki:-" No Shashank, she isn't right may be, but even you aren't!! Nyways let's leave all this and sumi call appu, she might be feeling bad!! Having a call with us she might feel good!! Bcz comforting her is something we can't expect from anyone else!! Call her!!"

Shashank shouts:- No don't!!"

Amey teasing:-" Why will you call her to comfort her??"

Shashank:-" apurva must have slept by now!! The day definitely dint go the way she wanted!! So let's just not disturb her!!!"

Shashank somehow convenced everyone and they dint call appu!!! Everyone left to their respective rooms!!

Otherside having a word with apurva even atti left to her room!!!

Shashank to himself:-" Everyone is mad, what else could I do to take apurva's side, netra is my assistant and this is their sisters problem!! Why should I interfere??"

Shashank's heart speaks:-" Is it really the sisters prob???"

Shashank:-" What do you mean?? Ofcourse it is!!And who are you???"

Shashank's heart:-" I am your heart you can't lie to me!! You really thing netra slapped appu bcz of Sarika attya?? She is insecure for Sarika atya!!"

Shashank dint answer!!!

Shashank's heart:-" Even you know whatever appu faced today may be was bcz of you??? May be netra has feelings for you!!"

Shashank:-" Nothing like that!! But whatever it is but i dont have feelings for netra!!"

Shashank's heart:-" oh really, so you have feelings for appu??"

Shashank:-" I dint say that as well!!"

Shashank's heart:-" Netra is not into the picture, but is apurva there!!! Think about it shashank???"

Saying this heart disappears!!!

Apurva was holding her and atti's photo and crying!!! When she recieves a call!!

Apurva seeing the caller id:-" Wasn't today enough for everyone to insult me that now this Khadus also wants to do the same!!!"

She picks up the call!!

Apurva immediately after picking up the call:-" The deadline for insulting apurva vartak for today's day has ended!! Plz start afresh tom morning after 11 a.m!!"

Shashank:-" What rubbish are you talking!!"

Apurva:-" Simply telling you that i had a lot of insults today plz i request you i can't take any other insult today!! Plz you can call tom!!"

Shashank:- " When did i insult you???"

Apurva:-" Listen khadus, i am really not in a mood to fight plz can we continue tom!!!"

Shashank:-" For a change even i am not mood to fight!!"

Apurva:-" Then why have we called???"

Shashank:-" Do i just call you to always fight with you??"

Apurva:-" No not only to fight, but to insult as well!!! Your work for today is done By your assistant already!!!"

Shashank:-" Are you going to taunt me like whole time!!"

Apurav:-" Ya ofcourse!!"

Shashank:-" I was right, i shouldn't have called you!!"

Apurva:-" Any whichways you dint!!! Your family must have told you to call me, otherwise you wouldn't have!!"

Shashank:-" hello listen!! Nobody told me, i called myself!!"

Apurva:-" Really!!"

Shashank:-" Yes!!"

Apurva:-" Now that's the 8th wonder!! But wait let me confirm why have you called, if it's not for insulting me, nor fighting with me and yet you have called then that's 8th wonder!! So why have we called??"

Shashank going bit soft:-" Apurva!! How are you??"

Apurva checks her phone if it was really khadus calling:-" What has happened to me, i am absolutely fine!!"

Shashank:-" i know you have great acting skills, but no need to act in front of me!!! I know you are not fine!!"

Apurva:-" If you know that i am not fine, then you even know the reason right??"

Shashank:-" Netra!!"

Apurva:-" Why did she say I snatch away everything from her, i never snatched atti from her, she only doesn't want to meet atti!!" Apurva complains very cutely to Shashank!!!

Shashank smiling at her cute complaint:-" She wasn't in a good state of mind apurva!!"

Apurva:-" So she will slap me!!"

Shashank:-" Ofcourse she shouldn't have slapped you, but leave it na apurva don't let her bother you!!"

Apurva:-" How can I not bother!!! I don't want to be the reason for anyone's sadness!!"

Shashank:-" oh my god!! I dint knew this shisht can even cry!!"

Apurva:-" Why dint you see me crying in your office also that day!!! And that to for same reason your assistant!!"

Shashank:-" Comeon netra was not at fault that day!!"

Apurva:-" Oh ya actually right netra Tai dint make me cry that day, her boss did!!"

Shashank:-" Then blame the boss don't blame netra!!"

Shashank said these words just to tease her, just to divert her mind so that she will fight with him and can sleep with peace, but something clicked apurva!!!

Apurva:-" I want to meet you??"

Shashank:-" What??"

Apurva:-" I want to meet you!!! Isn't that simple English Mr. Scientist???"

Shashank:-" I did hear that, but i am into shock!! You want to meet me?? Like really you?? And may I know why are you giving me so much of happiness!!" He says sarcastically!!!

Apurva:-" I want to discuss with you something!!"

Shashank:-" Another heart attack for me...you want to discuss and that to with me??"

Apurva:-" Shall I send ambulance with doctor for you for your these heart attacks??"

Shashank:-" No let it be, they are sweet heart attacks!!"

Apurva:-" Listen khadus!!"

Shashank:-" Ok fine!! Tom near my office there is a great cafe, shall we meet there??"

Apurva:-" Done!! Sharp 10 a.m!!"

Shashank:-" Cool!!"

Apurva:-" Chalo then good night!!! I am sleepy!!"

Shashank:-" Acha listen shisht!!! Don't think much about what happened today!!! Just sleep well!! Good night!!!"

Apurva:-" Ok!!"

Shashank to himself:-" Why does she want to meet me??? Good knows what all goes in her head!! But chalo let's see!!"

So guyz how was it???

I shall post the second part in sometime as well!!!

OMG ...!!! beautiful ...write up ... brought goose bumps to my arms.. .

kitne laalchi hogayi hu mein ..Ye dil mange more ....

Pease do continue ... very Talanted people are here ... 🥂

To my friends here....❤️

Originally posted by: niakush

Hayeee that blush of both of them had my whole heart!!!

How he came and sat besides apurva for the game!!! He is too adorable!!

In their bedroom while trying to apply colour mala nahi avdat he sagle....that was also so cute!!

Yes biggest was he forgetting his morals, sanskaar and hitting someone and more over coming out of his comfort zone and wearing that Krishna costume...hayyeee!!!🥰🥰

I couldnt understand the dialogues but enjoyed most of the beautiful scenes between Shapu ....

Appu was looking innocently beautiful .. and climax was Shas decked up with the costume to much shocking to everyone else's eye to see this nazara ...and him applying the colour to Appu.... my only concern was the colour I wish if it was red could have been more appealing .. would have been cherry on top ......

The way he refused others to apply colours on him after Appu did was too much fun ... wifey ke pyaar ka rang dhul jaye ga samajh the nahi ye log ... 😉

Friend tumne kya perfect writing ki hai 👍🏼seriously muze aisa feel hua jaise ye sach much ka koi shappu scene hai jo serial me hai

Bahut jyada achha hai

Maine bahut enjoy kiya waiting for second part 🤗And thanks for beautiful post❤️

Originally posted by: shridharg

OMG ...!!! beautiful ...write up ... brought goose bumps to my arms.. .

kitne laalchi hogayi hu mein ..Ye dil mange more ....

Pease do continue ... very Talanted people are here ... 🥂

To my friends here....❤️

Thank you!!! Second part soon coming up!!!

Originally posted by: aaniya305

I am replying about the story posted, it was soo cute❤❤❤ just like our Shapu,

Please continue

Thank you second part soon coming up!!

Originally posted by: niakush

Hayeee that blush of both of them had my whole heart!!!

How he came and sat besides apurva for the game!!! He is too adorable!!

In their bedroom while trying to apply colour mala nahi avdat he sagle....that was also so cute!!

Yes biggest was he forgetting his morals, sanskaar and hitting someone and more over coming out of his comfort zone and wearing that Krishna costume...hayyeee!!!🥰🥰

Us game me itni smartly cheating ki thi khadus ne kukki gang to aise hi badnam ho gayi hai asli chant chalbaz to shashank hai 😂 kukki gang ka next leader khadus hi banega dekh lena

Same feeling " mala nahi aavdat asla porkhat pana" Kitne cutely bola shashank ne innocent boy😳

Appu ka after marriage first festival tha is liye uski happiness ke liye sab kuch kiya khadus ne wo bhi out of the comfort zone jakar 🤗

Best husband for a reason

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Friend tumne kya perfect writing ki hai 👍🏼seriously muze aisa feel hua jaise ye sach much ka koi shappu scene hai jo serial me hai

Bahut jyada achha hai

Maine bahut enjoy kiya waiting for second part 🤗And thanks for beautiful post❤️

Thank you dost!!! Second part just uploading...voh full of shappu hai❣️

Hello friends,

First of all thank you for such wonderful response to part 1!!!

Here is part 2... continuation!!! This is full of shappu and those who like netra being jealous...we have a glimpse of jelaous netra as well😂😂

Part 2:- " The turning point- The slap!!"

Next day at the cafe, for a change apurva reaches before time!!!

Shashank:-" You can't stop giving me heart attacks na??"

Apurav:-" Now what??"

Shahank:-" You and before time, that to early morning!!! Strange!!"

Apurva:-" Woh i couldn't sleep well yesterday night so got up early thats it!!"

Shashank:-" I told you not to think about what happened!!"

Apurva:-" Ya ya ok!! Now sit !!"

Shashank:-" So shisht!! Good morning!!"

Apurva slowly to herself:-" My good morning would depend upon your answer!!"

Apurva:-" Leave all that, i want to discuss something important with you!!"

Shashank:-" Sisht these are small manners, when someone greats you, you need to greet back!!"

Apurva:-" I am a mannerless girl that's what you and your assistant think na, then let it be why these formalities!!"

Shashank:-" Apurva!!! What's wrong!!"

Apurva:-" Answer me, you were forced to marry me right??"

Shashank:-" ya ofcourse I was, as if you were not???"

Apurva:-" You never wanted to marry me right??"

Shashank:-" Why are we discussing all this now??? We already have a deal right??"

Apurva:-" Answer me khadus??"

Shashank:-" Ok, I (hesitantly) dint want to marry you!!! But now we are getting married na, so why all these??"

Apurva:-" You wanted to marry Rani tai na??? She is your girlfriend isn't she??"

Shashank was shocked:- "Wait where is all this coming from??"

Apurva:- "From yesterday's slap!!! Ofcourse!! Who made you scientist, can't even understand simple things!!"

Shashank:-" If it was that simple you would have never understood in first place!!"

Apurva:-" You mean to say i am brainless??"

Shashank:-" I never said that!!"

Apurva:-" But you meant that!! After all your girlfriend also keeps saying the same thing to me na, bindok (brainless)!!!"

Shashank:-" First of all stop this girlfriend thing!! What made you think she is my girlfriend!! Ok i understand yesterday's slap!! But how did this thought even come to your head??"

Apurva:-" Why not?? She has every qualities to be your girlfriend!!"

Shashank:-" And exactly what are they??

Apurva:-" She is as khadus as you are, she is as well educated as you are, she is heartless, she is full of herself that's an exception you guyz have, you'll full day work together and above all....she hates me exactly the same way you hate me!!"

Shashank:-" Hey that's not true i dont hate you!!"

Apurva being shocked:-"What??"

Shashank relaised what he spoke:-" I meant!!! Forget it!!! Listen apurva you are thinking in a worng way!!! She is not my girlfriend!!"

Apurva slightly crying:-" But you like her!!! You always support her in front of me!!! You never support me!!"

Shashank:-" Why.... dint i support you Yesterday!!"

Apurva::-" No!!"

Shashank:-" Come again!!! Dint I??"

Apurva:-" Yet in front of you she slapped me three times!!"

Shashank:-" first stop crying!!!" He gives her water and tissue!!!

Apurva:- "See khadus!! I know you don't like me!!! And if you like rani tai (taking a pause) thats ok!! I will talk to dad!! He will agree for your and (hesitantly) Rani tai's marriage as well!!"

Shashank:-" Acha you can convence your dad kya about our marriage??"

Apurva:- "Yes I will!!"

Shashank:-" And what about my family!! They toh already don't like netra!!"

Apurva:-" They love me a lot!! I will convence them as well!!"

Shashank:-" And there you go!!They love you!!! Listen to me carefully apurva!!! I don't like netra!! I never did!!! Currently for me what matters is my families happiness!! And their happiness lies in you!!! I may be forced for this marriage, but when I see them this happy with you I feel may be i took a right decision!!" He speaks in a flow whatever is in his heart!!!

Apurva:-" Sorry to interrupt, but took right decision means??"

Shashank realising what he spoke:-" Nothing, it's just that i dont like your Rani tai!!! Infact i never liked her that way!!! She is not even a friend, just my assistant!!! Is that much fine for you??"

Apurva:-" But then why did she say i snatched away her everything???"

Shashank:-" May be for sarika atya she told this!!"

Apurva:-" No she also said, i get all what i dont even deserve!!! Somewhere i feel by her happiness she meant you!!"

Shashank to himself:-" Apurva also feels the same what I feel!! Was i the actual reason for which she slapped apurva???"

Apurva:-" Khadus where are you lost??"

Shashank:-" You are thinking anything!! See apurva i dont know what's in her mind!! But ya i can tell you one thing, she is not in my mind!! And i know we have a contract of one year!! But be it one year why not i will be loyal to you!!"

Apurva:-" Na na nothing like that, you can date anyone you want!! I won't stop you!!"

Shashank:-" Ok then I shall think about netra then, what say??"

Apurva immediately hold his :-" Listen you!!!"

Shashank:-" You just now said i can date anyone!!"

Apurva:-" Except her!!"

Shashank smiling teasingly asks her:-" Why except her??? Anyone means anyone!!"

Apurva shouts:-" I said na anyone except her!! I don't like her she insults me!! No one has ever slapped me, and she slapped me three times Yesterday!!!"

Apurva was yet holding shahank's hand!!

Shashank:-"Acha shisht coffee here was very boring!!!"

Apurva:-" So what shall I do!!"

Shashank:-" First toh leave my hand i need to pay the bill!!"

Apurva realises she was holding his hand she immediately takes it off!!! Shashank pays the bill!!

Shashank:-" And now let's go!!"

Apurva:-" Where??"

Shashank:-" I dint like the coffee at all i want to have an ice cream!! And there is a great ice cream parlor near by!!"

They both reach the ice cream parlor!!!

Shashank:-" Chocolate flavour right??"

Apurva :- "Hey how do you know?"

Shashank:-" May be i guessed it!!"

Apurva:-" i am impressed!!"

Shashank:-" My pleasure!!"

Shashank gets choclate for her and vanilla for himself!!!! While they were enjoying since it was near shahank's office netra sees them and burns in jealousy!!! She comes near them!!!

Netra:-" Shashank sir, you are not coming to office today??"

Shashank:-" Our office timing are 11 a.m to 7 p.m, and i guess it's not yet 11 a.m, so i shall reach office on time!!!"

Netra:-" Ohh so before office you are having an ice cream date with this brainless and mannerless girl!!! I am sure she must have only forced you!!"

Apurva getting angry:-" Listen!!who are you to call me mannerless, what are your manners to slap someone!! If that is manners i am much better being mannerless"

Shashank holds her hand and tells her to remain silent!!!

Shashank:-"Netra what I do outside office hours is none of your concern!!"

Apurva angrily:-" During office hours is also not her concern!!! She is your assistant not your p.a!!"

Shashank sensing her jealousy feels happy, he smiles a bit!!

Apurva:-" What are you smiling at??"

Netra also sees that and feels jealous!!!

Shashank:-" Nothing appu!!! ( He says lovingly)And netra i am on an ice cream date with my finacee and you see i have office at 11 a.m, i like to be punctual!!! Before that i need to see off my finacee nicely, so will you please allow us!!!"

Netra feels insulted:-" ohh so till yesterday the girl you wanted to get rid off, is your fiancee today!!!"

Shashank:-" I never said i wanted to get rid off her!!"

Netra :-" You said you were forced!!"

Shashank:-" Yes i was forced, but i never said i wanted to get rid off her, whatever it is she is my wife and it will remain that way!!!"

Netra:-" But.....!!"

Shashank:-" Can you please excuse us now!! I need to see her off as well!!"

Netra leaves angrily!!!

All the while apurva was smiling!!!!

Shashank:-" What??"

Apurva:-" Thank you!!!"

Shashank:-" Listen i took your side, because I was already very guilty for letting her slap you three times yesterday and i couldn't do anything!!"

Apurva:-" I never thanked you for what you said to Rani tai!!"

Shashank:-" What!! So yesterday when i dint take your side you were complaing and now when i took your side you not even appreciating!! Wow great!!"

Apurva:-" Thank you for getting me to this ice cream date!!"

Shashank:-"Nothing like that It's just i wanted to have ice cream!!!"

Apurva:-" Because the best coffee for which that cafe is famous for was boring right!!!"

Shashank tried to hide his smile at her words!!!

Apurva:-" I know you got me here, so that I could change my mood!! And it did wonders i am in a very great mood now!! From here i will go to your house and have fun with my gang!!!"

Shashank:-" Now your mood is definitely fine!! I got my assurance!! But listen, don't tell your gang about our this meet, plz!!"

Apurva:-" Why??

Shashank:-" They will tease me for like whole week on this one thing!!"

Apurva:-" Ok!!"

Shashank:-" You agreed so easily not possible!!"

Apurva:-" Chalo i shall go otherwise you will get late!!"

Shashank:-" Chalo I shall drop you off till your car!!"

Near apurva's car!!

Apurva:-" Khadus 1. I dint thank you for today's Rani tai's incident because as you said i am your fiancee, that was your responsibility!! But i never said i dint like that, infact i liked the most!! And 2. I am going to tell kuki gang about this, i like it when they tease you!! And 3. Last and the most important thing...appu sounds great fromyour mouth!!!! Bye see you in the evening!!"

Saying this she immediately sits in the car and leaves before Shashank could say anything!!

Shashank to himself:-" This girl is definitely going to be my death someday!!! Mad she is !! But she is pure and whatever i may say Sisht is intelligent!! She may not understand studies but she does understand people well, except me ofcourse 😂😂!!Bye Appu!! See you soon in the Evening!!"

Saying this to himself he leaves for his office!!!

This was a two short story and this is the last one!!!

So tell me how was it???