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Posted: 9 years ago
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i simply luv reading ur ff...the show wud have been gr8 even if it was 5% near to what u write
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Originally posted by: kashika_29

i simply luv reading ur ff...the show wud have been gr8 even if it was 5% near to what u write


thanks a lot... 😊
I really feel on the ninth cloud when you compliment me...😳😳😳

I simply write what I feel.. But I guess it turns out to bright sometimes.. that's why hindi dramas are not using this formula... Maybe the writer think that the viewers like struggle, confusion, betrayal and all those stuff... I don't know...

Maybe they are afraid that if it is too bright then they may loose TRP... who knows.. but I can't say these because I rarely watch Hindi or any Indian drama... so I am not going to judge them...

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting😊
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Originally posted by: umawanderer


thanks a lot... 😊
I really feel on the ninth cloud when you compliment me...😳😳😳

I simply write what I feel.. But I guess it turns out to bright sometimes.. that's why hindi dramas are not using this formula... Maybe the writer think that the viewers like struggle, confusion, betrayal and all those stuff... I don't know...

Maybe they are afraid that if it is too bright then they may loose TRP... who knows.. but I can't say these because I rarely watch Hindi or any Indian drama... so I am not going to judge them...

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting😊


@brown: i feel on the 10th one when i read ur ff regarding the show ..n if u feel so i wud always do tht to get more awesome piece of art in every 2-3 days..
@bold: they just want their show to go on and on and on n happy shows according to them end soon n they have hardly tried making it bright so they dont know a bright track might help the shows to get a higher TRP..

btw, i believe this particular story has a silent part of romance n luv in it(so when u complete u r gonna be a pro! n do tell me when u start writing the next fiction)..n thankfully its between 4 unlike real yet reel one
n lastly,they r always bright!
now i have spoken alot..n this is bcuz ur first line made me happy tht i made some1 @cloud9
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Hey guys...😊
I know this was a really late update but trust me... I tried my best to update it fast...
The arc after this chapter is my favorite.. So I guess I'll update it more faster then...

Chapter 12

It was a scene of total confusion. Everyone kept talking and no one listened. Dadi kept on screaming. Vishwa, Kali and Raghu tried to change her decision.

"Choudrainji... Please don't cancel this wedding.. We'll find a way out.." said Vishwa

"Maa... what are doing... you can't just cancel this wedding just like that..."

"Kali.. can you stand?" yug asked kali.

Kali didn't hear that and said, "Choudrainji... The pooja can be held again without any obstructions.. We can do it again...please don't do it.." Dadi screamed "Aye ladki... doing the pooja again...What's the use... we can all see your sister is unlucky... No.. I'll not change my decision..."Gauri looked at Yug for support but he had eyes only for Kali. Kali said, "But choudrainji...("Kali..I'm asking you something.." said yug).. Nothing has really happened.. Yug is all right... Please think... Gauri's life will be destroyed... Please.." Raghu said, "No.. maa.. I've already told you...I am against this superstitions.. I cannot let you take this decision." But leela started to scream at kali. "Aye ladki... ("Kali.. yash is ready with the car... stand up" said Yug ).. you think what just happened now can be forgotten easily...arre.."

Kali interrupted, "But there are always counter pooja's for these things ... why don't we do that?.."

"yes..." said Vshwa "We can do another pooja... Please choudrainji..." leela didn't answer but Raghu did, "Don't worry Vishwaveerji... we'll do that..." "Kali.. can you stand up?" Yug asked again. Gauri felt hurt. Why was he not even listening to all this? Kali looked at Leela and said, "Please don't punish Gauri for something in which she had no hand... Please choud..."

"KALI!!" Yug shouted shocking kali and everyone. "I DON'T CARE WHAT HAPPENS TO THIS WEDDING... LET ME TAKE YOU TO HOSPITAL.." Then everyone became quiet. Everyone including Kali has forgotten that she was hurt."Can you walk till the car.." He asked controlling his volume. Kali looked into Yug's eyes. He looked worried, alarmed, hurt and scared. She didn't want to hurt him anymore. She nodded. It was hard as she even sprained her leg during the fall. Both Neel and Yug supported her and took her to the car. Yug tried to sit in car but both Kali and Neel stopped him. "Yug.. stay here.. If you go away then who will do the pooja.." said Kali. "I also think you need to stay here, Yug" Sharmila came behind them. "Sharmila will come with us" said Neel. Yug tried to argue, "No.. How can I just stay here..." Neel raised his voice. "Just try to understand.. Yug.. I know what you are feeling right now.. But trust me.. You are not the only one who is worried about her...She is my sister.. Of course I'll be worried for her.." Yug calmed down a bit after hearing Neel. He nodded. "Good..." said Neel. "Now, stay here and control the situation...I'll take care of kaali.. Sharmila... Get in.." Sharmila nodded and got into car and sat beside Kaali in back seat. Yug saw as the car drove away. He really felt restless. He went back and saw as everyone started arguing against each other. He didn't care. He just wanted to make sure Kali was all right. Gauri saw Yug. She felt anger. Yug didn't even support her.

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"Sharmila.. Wrap this cloth around her arm..." Neel told Sharmila as he passed the clean cloth. She nodded and wrapped it carefully around kali's arm. Meanwhile Neel called doctor, "Hello, Dr. Kumar... There was an accident during the pooja.. Kaali's really hurt...Yes.. We are coming right now... You'll be there in the hospital... right? O.K then..." He cut the call. "Neel... Pass me the bottle.. She needs to drink plenty of water right now..." Sharmila said after some time. Neel nodded and passed the bottle. Just then Yash's phone rang. "It's Mukta maa.." he said as he saw the phone."I think Dad has told her about the accident.." Neel said, "Don't worry I'll talk... You just drive.."

"Mukta Maa.. But why?" Sharmila asked. "We'll explain you later.." told Neel and started talking on phone "Hello Badi Chachi... I'm Neel... We are taking Kaali to hospital...I'm telling you.. no need to come.. I understand... O.K... Yash would come.. please wait.."

Sharmila made Kaali drink as much water as possible. She had many questions but she decided to wait for some other time. They reached hospital. Neel and Sharmila supported Kaali while Yash went to pick up Manjiri. Dr. Kumar checked Kaali. He recommended her to get admitted in the hospital. "You and your father, Vishwa... You both act as if you hate your body.. Let him come now.. I'm gonna give him a big lecture.." He muttered angrily. Kaali smiled weakly. The nurse led them to their room and gave the uniform. "Sharmila... I'll go and get the medicines which is prescribed.. You help Kaali change clothes. Well... Actually..This was the reason I wanted you to come along.." Neel said as he passed the uniform to Sharmila. Sharmila nodded. "I understand.." Kaali looked them and wondered if they were acting different.

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"Please.. Raghunath ji... Don't cancel this wedding... I'll do anything.. Main aapke pair padta hoon.." Vishwaveer said as he fell and touched Raghu's feet. "Vishwaveer ji... Yeh aap kya kar rahe hai?" Rahu made Vishwa stand up. "Vishwaveer ji.. Don't worry.. I'll not let mother cancel this wedding.." Leela shouted. "What do you mean to say?.. Raghu I am your mother.. You are going against me? How dare you... It is all because of that girl..That apshaguni girl..." She said looking at Gauri. "Maa. . stop it.." Raghu shouted. "If you say anything again then I'll forget all about this pooja and decide everything by myself..." "Raghu?.." Leela asked shocked. "No.. Maa.. I don't want your superstitions to ruin anyone else life anymore..." He looked at Vishwa and said, "Vishwaveer ji... even without the pooja, I am ready to accept your daughter.." Leela shouted, "No.. " Raghu stopped her. Leela started to cry and then immediately left the temple. Vishwa looked worried. Raghu Said, "Don't worry.. I convince maa... Please.. You can go.." and everyone left the temple.

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Sharmila helped Kaali change her clothes. Neel came with the medicines. "Sharmila, these are the medicines.. Dr. Kumar asked me to give her these after she eat something... Because Maharani didn't eat anything today.." He said glaring at kali. Kaali suddenly became interested in the white sheet and looked down to avoid his eyes. "Anyway.. I'll go and bring some chapatti or something from the canteen..Meanwhile.. there's an ointment.. you can apply that.. it will give her relief" Sharmila nodded. "Not chapathi... bring some soup and bread that will be more good.." She said.Neel nodded and went out. Sharmila remembered something and went out to call him, "Neel... bring some juice too.. she should keep herself hydrated.. mosambi juice.. most preferably.." Neel nodded and went. As she saw Neel's back, a strange thought attacked her mind. Neelkanth Jha feels somewhat different...somewhat reliable... somewhat mature.. But she didn't give it any more thought than that and went immediately to nurse her friend.

"Kali.. humari bachi.." Mukta maa came while Sharmila was applying ointment. Kaali had already explained everything to Sharmila. Sharmila was first surprised and shocked but soon accepted. Meny things have happened because of coincidence that by now it feels that there is a strange conspiracy of nature to connect these both families. "aap theek to hain na..." she asked Kali. Yash was reminded of Kali's action in the temple after she got burnt. He said, "Bhabhi... when you got burnt... you didn't care about your self...You kept on asking Bhai if he was alright... You did not stop until he replied you.. You asked for proof this evening.. right.. this is my proof.. you love Bhai.. you love him more than you think...I know that.." Kaali tried to argue, "Yash..." But then Neel came in with the dinner, "Sharmila.. i got tomato soup.. but.. I think..." He saw Manjiri. "Badi chachi..." Sharmila thought it was the best way to take Yash away from Kaali. "Neel, Yash... Mukta maa will give Kaali the food.. Let's go to canteen and eat something..." and she pulled Yash out of the room. Neel followed them. Sharmila told Yash, "I understand.. you wanted to make a point.. but can't you see you can't force her now.. she is in a delicate situation.. Give her some time.." The three went to canteen. They talked about the incident. "But still.. I think it's high time to tell everyone about your mothe.. i mean.. Step-mother's truth.." Sharmila was about to say mother but immediately changed it in mid sentence when Neel looked at her. "I know.. It's the stupid promise between kali and her mother... we can't do anything until one month finish..." Neel said. Just then, Yash got a call from his friend. As he went out to answer, Neel and Sharmila talked for some time discussing a new way out of this situation. Neel got a call from Vishwa "Chachaji.. you are in the hospital..." Neel looked at Sharmila, signalling her to go to Kaali's room. Sharmila nodded and left.

Manjiri was in middle of feeding her daughter. Kaali had tears in her eyes. "What happened?... Is it still paining..." Kaali shook her her. "No.. Manji maa.. I was just thinking that it's been a long time since you fed me... It feels so good." Manji smiled and kissed her on her forehead. Sharmila entered the room. She was panting. "Gauri's father is in hospital.. He is coming here." Manji and Kali looked shocked. Just then there was a nod. Vishwa was outside the room.

Manji hid behind the curtain and saw her husband enter. It's been such a long time since she saw him. She felt she would cry at any moment. She saw Vishwa's concern for Kali."Kaali.. Are you fine.. What did the doctor say?" Kaali told him that she was fine. Vishwa noticed the half finished soup and started feeding her. "You should eat.. or else you wouldn't be able to heal fast..." Kaali had tears in her eyes. She felt touched. "how is Gauri.. " she asked. Vishwa explained her about Raghu's decision. Kaali sighed with relief. Neel came in the room and informed Vishwa that the Dr. Kumar wanted to meet him. As soon as Vishwa left the room, Neel took Sharmila and Manji outside. "You both go... Yash is waiting in the car.." Sharmila argued. "How can I go? My friend needs me... I am staying here.." Neel sighed and said, "Sharmila.. I know you are worried about Kaali.. but you need to be there for your brother now... He would really want to be with Kaali right now... But he can't.. he must be feeling miserable.. So you better go and console him.." Whatever Neel said made much more sense to her and she agreed. Before she get into the car Neel called her, "Sharmila..." she turned back. "Thank you.. Thank you for everything.." and he smiled. At that moment, Sharmila's heart skipped a beat. It was then she became aware of the fact that she was behaving normally with the person whom she had vowed to hate... Why? Why did she do that? Did she forgive him unconsciously?... No.. Never...

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Gauri was pacing up and down of her room. She was insulted before everyone. She would never forgive the Old hag... and Yug?.. what the heck does he think of himself...He doesn't care about the wedding... She was the one sacrificing her dreams to be his life partner.. Why was he acting as if he is the one who is being tortured... She used to like him.. but now.. he never said anything in front of his dadi.. Not even on the day of Agnipareeksha.. She thought he would be different from everyone...But no.. she didn't like him anymore.. Should she really marry him? Did she really want that?

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Yug came to Kaali's room at midnight. Neel decided to stay behind with Kaali. Vishwa wanted to stay in hospital too but Kaali convinced him to go home and rest. Yug and Yash came around 1 o clock. Neel knew what yug was going through so when Yug asked some private time with Kaali, he reluctantly gave him 10 minutes. Yug saw his Kali. She was feeling peacefully. She was sedated so as to not feel the pain. He remembered what Di had told him, "Yug... Kaali asked me to pass this message... She said that she would still write the exam no matter what the situation is... she would never break her promise to you.. so you also don't break your promise to her..."

Technically he was not breaking his promise.. if she is sleeping.. she cannot see that he is near her and hence he was not disturbing her in any way. He sat on her left side. He really couldn't bear to see her burnt hand."Seriously... why do you do this? How come only you have the power to make me feel this helpless..." He wanted to do something. He wanted her to get better soon. "Yug..." her voice shocked him. Did she get up. He looked at her. Her eyes were half open. She was talking in her sleep. He smiled. She also smiled. "Yug.. you here?" the words were coming out of her mouth with great difficulty. She must be still suffering from pain. "Isn't this your dream..." he asked. Kaali smiled again and said. "yes...it's my dream otherwise you will not be here" "Do I come in your dreams often?" He asked. She replied, "yes... everynight..." He didn't believe it. "Everynight?" He asked. "Yes.. you come..Holi...colours.. Manji maa.. " Her voice was getting lower. The words were not comprehendible any more. Yug smiled. He wanted to hold her in his arms. He wanted to kiss her. "So in your drams I just come and play holi with you and everyone..." "Hmmm..." She was sleepling deeply now. "Really... only holi... You mean I never come close to you. Then it's definitely a dream..." Yug said. "Hmmm.." He wanted to apply the ointment but he cannot touch her because of the promise but he wanted to do something to lessen her pain."Yug.. aap theek hain naa...chot toh nahi.." she asked in her sleep. "Even in dreams you think of my health only... why do you do that?" He asked. She didn't reply as she started sleeping again. He bent down and blew some air on her right hand. Her facial expression changed. It looked more relaxed."Do you like it?" he asked. "Hmmm..." He then blew slowly and carefully. Without touching he was providing her a relief. He blew on her fingers, then her palm and her wrist. Slowly he blew till her elbow. He noticed that right side of her neck was also burnt slightly. His heart raced as he shifted the collar down a bit.. then a little bit more... he bent down and blew some air there. His adrenal began to pump. He started blowing into her neck. He was becoming more excited.

"Yug..." Kali whispered in her sleep. He now bent over her face. "Do you love me Kali.." he whispered. "Yes..." She answered. He blew softly on her left eye then on her right eye. He started blowing down until he reached her lips. His heart beat fast as he saw the soft, slightly wet lips. He bent even more closer and blew air. . As he blew, her lips parted. "Yug..."The word escaped from the gap in her lips. He lost all the ability to think straight. He wanted to make her his. Only his. He bent closer.

"Umm.. I thought 10 minutes were up so.. " Neel said as he opened the door. Neel heard a crash. Yug was on the ground. "What happened?" Neel asked. "That.. air.. I mean.. umm.. that.. this...This wire..." Yug stammered. "Wire?" Neel asked. "I'm telling you it's only 7 minutes...What happened.. Bhai?" Yash said as he came in. Yug stood up. "the wire.. I stumbled upon it and and I fell down..." Yash and Neel were not convinced. Neel was too afraid to ask the truth and Yash was too smart to know it. He winked at his brother. Yug blushed slightly and changed the topic. "So.. what have you decided, when are we starting?" "Next Sunday.." Yash informed him. And they left the room. They decided upon their plan.

While they were driving home back, Yash teased his brother. "Bhai.. I've found two more new things.. Neel has sister complex and you are an opportunist..." "Shut up!!" Yug said.

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Kalyani was furious. Again the wedding was saved. No.. she will not allow it.. She have no other option other than to kill Gauri. The Sunday after this week. That day would be perfect to kill Gauri.. That day when that Kaale teeka will be writing her exam... Vishwa will also go to haridwar that day.. There will be no one to save Gauri that day... She will kill Gauri that day using her stupid mother, Madhuri, that day.. Vishwa has to know the pain of losing a child...


Thank you for reading...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohhh I like this..❤️
Awesome update! 👍🏼
Hope to see more soon 👏
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i m a fan of ur writing...please do update the nest episode soon...this part was quite different..only yug n sleeping kali-tht was quite intense!? n the first para was funny...the last para made me to say i wanna read more of it...gauri's killing suspense..
its too good frankly...ur fanfiction makes me want to read more though its long enough..bt keep writing..n do tell me when u make the next ff..leaving this romance genre
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Awesome update! 👍🏼
KaYu☺️
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oooh love it
superb
seriously i would actually,if i have the ability, bonk cvs heads..stupid people...
plz update soon
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Hey guys...😊
I am sure you guys would be surprised to see such a fast update... The reason is simple my dears...My Bro is coming and I have a feeling that he would surely make fun of my work.. So I had to at least write something before he come..I think my other updates would may be comparatively slow... I have to fight with him to get the computer...

This chapter marks the beginning of my favorite arc... So I felt comfortable writing this..

Please do comment.. or else I'll not understand if I am going in right direction..

Chapter 13

Some people say, the longer you wait for something... the greater it feels when you finally get it. They were true.. After a long week, Sunday finally arrived. It was the day when everyone would take their first step to change their lives. Yug, Yash and Neel started early in the morning. Stage 1 of the plan was about to begin and to execute it they were hiding behind the temple. "Bhai.." Yash said. "Let's think the steps clearly.. I put this kerchief on her... she sniffs chloroform.. falls unconscious.. and you push her into car..." Yug and Neel felt awkward when he told it but Yash continued. "Kerchief..sniff.. fall.. push.. Don't forget.. Kerchief..sniff.. fall.. push..Did you get it... Kerchief..sniff.. fall.. push.." Neel couldn't handle anymore. "Yash.. Stop saying it that way... It feels as if you are actually enjoying it.." Yug also supported "Yeah.. Yash... My stomach is doing somersaults and you are joking... Neel, you better stand near the car..She may come here any time now.."

"Bhai.." Said Yash as Neel left them. "We would the first ever brothers in the entire UNIVERSE to kidnap our own sister... Oooh!! I feel so excited..." Seeing his younger brother's attitude, Yug was starting to doubt their success. They both saw Sharmila come near the temple. When she reached the car, her brothers came behind her and Yash put the kerchief on her face. "Sorry di.." She fell unconscious and Yug held her. They both managed to make her sit in the car.

"Hey.. What are you guys doing?" Neel , Yug and Yash turned around. Gauri came running behind them. Her eyes were full of shock. "What are you doing with your sist..." Yash forced the kerchief on her face. And she fell unconscious and fell into his arms.

"YASH!!" Neel and Yug shouted. "It was an accident" Yash squeaked. "well.. What should we do now?" Yug looked at Gauri and asked. Neel thought for a while and said, "Well... Keep her in car.. it will be suspicious if we hang out here anymore."

"Great start of the plan.." Yug said sarcastically as he drove. "Not one minute in.. and we already have an extra unconscious person."

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Kali was doing her last minute preparation. Badke Papa already left for haridwar.But he gave her his blessings before he go. Raghu Maama had said that he would take her to BSU. She was waiting for him. She saw Madhuri come down. "Aye.. Kaali.. Where is Guchipie?" Kaali said that Gauri has gone to meet Yash. "Yash.. Yash.. Arre If she talks Yash all the time.. where time give Yug.. all time.. only Yash.. no Yug." And saying that she went out. Manji Maa called and informed her that Raghu cannot come as he had an urgent meeting "But he will ask Yug or Yash to drop you.. don't worry.. All the best Shona..."

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Neel was feeling awkward. Gauri was leaning on Sharmila and Sharmila was leaning on his chest. He tried to move her away but still she leaned on him. He smiled as he saw her peacefully sleeping. At last.. Everything will be alright... You would no longer have to suffer... I'll set you free...' He thought. Sharmila kept her hand on his thigh. He was feeling more uncomfortable.

Sharmila felt as if her head was resting on something warm. She heard something. "Yash.. Can we switch places...It feels really awkward.." It was Neel's voice. Was she dreaming about him? Sharmila felt something heavy on her body. Slowly she opened her eyes. She was in a car, Yug was driving. Yash was sitting in the next seat. She then looked up to see whom she was leaning on. "Neel?.." She got up. She saw Gauri leaning on her. "Yug, Yash... You better have a nice explanation for all these.." She said. "Di... simple..we are kidnapping you.." said Yash. "What?" Sharmila asked. Yug explained, "Di.. Neel wants to atone for what he did.. he wants to do that by returning you the thing which you have lost because of his mistake...We are helping him..." Sharmila looked confused. "Di.. we are taking you to Mumbai to reunite you with Shekhar.." Yug said. "Stop it! Stop the car right now..." She said angrily. Yug replied calmly "No.. Di..we knew you would not agree to it that's why.."

"Yes, I would not agree to it.. Who do you think I am? I am not a woman without integrity... I don't want to go behind a man who didn't even think about me..." Sharmila shouted. Neel tried to say somthing. "Sharmila... I know you are angry at him but just meet him.." "Don't you dare talk, Neelkanth Jha.. I haven't forgiven you yet... and I'll never forgive even that Shekhar..What do you men think of woman.. You do anything to us.. we should forgive you.. you walk over us.. we should forgive you.. you crumble us.. we should forgive you.. you throw us away like some old shoe.. we should still forgive you? Is that what you think? No... I do not want to go after him." Neel looked confident. "No.. You have the full right to not to forgive him..but did he really do something that he should be punished for?" Sharmila laughed acidly. "Oh! Really? You think he is not guilty? He broke up..." Neel said with a high voice, "Yes! I know that he broke the engagement.. but do we know that he did it by himself or was he under the pressure of his family.." Sharmila looked surprised. She had never thought of it. Neel continued. "Look.. Sharmila.. You agreed to marry me under your family's order. Shekhar could also be forced.. We don't know if it is true or not.. But there is still a possibility for that.. right? You both loved each other... I know that you cannot give me another chance, but what about Shekhar? He can still have another chance.. just think about it.. please..."

Sharmila became quiet. She started thinking about it. She saw Gauri. "O.K.. I understand why you kidnapped me.. But what is Gauri doing here?" She asked. "Oh!! That was an accident.." replied Yash.

The car was quiet for some time. Then Yug's mobile rang. It was his father. "Yash.. Pick it and be careful. Don't you dare spill the beans.." Yash picked up and started talking, "Hello dad..Bhai? Yeah.. he is here.. We were just... Huh?..." He looked at Yug with a naughty eye. "O.K.. I'll tell Bhai..Ok then..Bye"

"Bhai.. Stop the car.." He said. Yug stopped the car. "Why? What happened?" Yash said, "Bhai.. Dad wants you to take Bhabhi to B.S.U... He is stuck with a meeting..Well if you don't want it.. then I can take Bhabhi..." Yug smiled, "No need... I'll go.." Neel drove the car away. Yug could not contain his happiness. He was meeting Kali after staying away from her for more than a week. Yash was right... He was an opportunist.

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Kaali welcomed Jogi cheerfully as soon as he came inside his house. "Tauji... Where were you all this week? Everyone were really worried..You should have at least informed us and gone.. Khair.. Come in.. I'll bring some water for you.." As she went inside the kitchen Jogi eyes watered. After the pooja incident, Jogi had left the house to find information on Kalyani's past. After much searching and asking around he found out about her child's death. Apparently if Vishwa had not bought the medicine at that day then her son would have not lost his life. Kalyani wanted to take revenge against Vishwa. He then went to different old servants houses.. Everyone told him that Kalyani always found a chance to torture the Kids.

"Sahab... We couldn't say anything in front of you...When Hariya tried to fight against the injustice, he was accused of stealing and was sent to jail... When kaali bitiya saw that she blamed herself for it.. After that, she always tried to stop anyone who wanted to help her... "No matter what happens to me.. I'll not let anyone else to get punished for my sake".. She used to say... Sahab... That girl has a heart of gold... Even after suffering that much she would smile.. because she didn't want Gauri bitiya and Neel baba to feel bad... I couldn't bear to see anymore.. so I left that little girl alone in that madhouse... all alone... "

Kaali gave him water. "Actually I am so happy that you came now, Tauji.. I was afraid.. I would not get your blessings for the exam.." She bent down and touched his feet. Tears fell from his eyes. "Kaali... You are a special girl.. You are Shri Ram's favourite child. His blessings are always with you...compared to that..Blessings from a sinner like me would have no effect.." Kaali looked confused, "Sinner?" Jogi nodded. "Yes, Beta.. a human who does not fulfil his duties is nothing but a sinner... I have always been escaping from my responsibilities.." Just then Kaali's phone rang. It was Yug, asking her to come to bus stop. "You should go fast... Write your exam properly.." Kaali really didn't want to leave Tauji alone at this delicate situation. She hugged him. ""Tauji... I don't know what happened.. but let me assure you that I have never felt that you are a sinner...nor have I ever felt that you have done something wrong... I have always loved and respected you.." Jogi held her tightly, "Meri bachi...How can I ever thank you for not cursing me... for not hating me..Vishwa is lucky that you call him papa...Everyone should have a daughter like you..."

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Gauri woke up. "What happened?" she asked. Sharmila and Neel explained her about the whole situation. She listened to everything. "O.K.. I understand why you kidnapped Sharmila.. But what am I doing here?" She asked. "Oh!! That was an accident.." replied Yash who was busy playing in his mobile. "But now Bhai had gone to B.S.U.. So you can have his ticket and come with us to Mumbai..or we can drop you in Patna and you can go home...so.. what do you want to do?"

Gauri didn't know what to do.. She actually wanted to meet Yash to ask his favour. She wanted to break her engagement. Last week when she told this to her family then Papa and kaali convinced her to give Yug one more chance. She gave Yug one week time. During that one week she realised that she did not love Yug. Not because he was bad.. but because he was not her type. They couldn't talk for more than 5 minutes. Heck... Those minutes felt like years... She didn't want to live with a person with whom she doesn't have any compatibility. Another reason for her decision, was that she wanted to become a model.. a super model.. She wanted to be the fashion queen of the world.. She had already sent few of her pictures to some model agencies secretly.. and she was expecting a positive reply... But she knew her family would not agree to her. She would have only Kaali's support because Kaali knows how much she loves modelling. That's why she wanted Yash to help her. Yash could figure a way out of her situation.

"Hello miss...We don't have the whole day.. What are you thinking this much?..Are you afraid because your Kaala teeka is not with you?" Yash teased. "Are you making fun of me? Let me tell you, Mr. Yash Choudary... I am Gauri Jha.. I don't need anyone's support.. I am coming to Mumbai with you guys..."

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Yug met Kali at bus stop. Happiness was visible in both their eyes. They didn't see each other for so many days that when they finally meet, both of them couldn't speak up their emotions. It was expressed only through their smiles. At that moment they were connected by their hearts.. no words were required for them to explain themselves... no action was required to show the intensity of love they felt for each other at that moment... every movement of eyes.. every breath they took... everything even their smile told the other person what was going in their heart. They looked at each other losing themselves in other.

The bus honked and both of them came out of their blissful trance. "Let's get in fast.. We need to reach B.S.U at least half an hour early before the exam..." Yug said. Kaali nodded and they both got into the bus. Kaali was preparing even in the bus. Yug just looked at her with a smile on his face. He was longing to see her, he wanted to hear her voice so desperately that sometimes he asked either Pishimaa or Di to talk to her with speaker on. "I missed you so much.." he said smiling. He saw Kaali blush. He chuckled when she hid her face behind the book and said, "Yug!! Please..." "I know.. I know.. You didn't want me to come with you.. You think I'll be nothing but a disturbance..." Yug said.

Kaali closed her book to face him, "No.. Yug.. On contrary.. I wanted you to come with me... It is because of you that I am taking a new step in my life..If you hadn't supported me.. then maybe I would not have found my courage to remove this darkness like ignorance from my life and fill it with knowledge... If you hadn't come in my life then..." She stopped in mid sentence and blushed. "Why did you stop in middle?" He asked. Kaali hid herself in the book and said, "I need to study..." Yug knew what it was but he decided not to tease her.. not when she is going to write her exam. Yug looked at her right hand. It had some marks of the burn but it was mostly healed. It was not exactly a surprise as everyone took care of her, Di..Neel.. Gauri..Chachi...Dad..Pishimaa..her father.. everyone tried their best to heal her hand. He remembered that night in the hospital. If it was not for Neel's sister complex then that day he would have stolen her lips..If only Neel had come some minutes late then... instead.. his lips just only touched her lips.

Yug wanted to pull kaali closer to him. Hug her. But he couldn't do it as he didn't want to distract her. So he just controlled his emotions by holding her dupatta in his hand. Kali as usual didn't notice it.

They reached the university. Yug came with Kali till her hall. She was starting to feel tensed. "Yug.. what if they ask something from Yujur ved... I didn't have time to prepare that.. what if I forget some sloka... What if I forget the meaning.. What if.." Yug held her by her shoulder. He bent down so that they were on same eye level. "You should not worry about fail or pass.. Just do what you should do.. write what you know perfectly.. That's it... Don't get into the hall with this stupid face..now... Smile.." kali gave him a weak smile. "Hey... not this smile... give me that smile which makes my heart race every time I see it..." she blushed. She tried to get away but his grip was strong. She looked at his face. He was smiling "Kali..." he whispered her name. She smiled. He didn't want to remove his hands after seeing this wonderful magic of her smile. But she should go and write her exam. "All the best.." he said and left her. Kaali reached near the door and she came back. "What happened now?" Yug asked. Kaali didn't answer. She smiled at him. She bent down and touched his feet. "Kali... what are you doing?" Yug said as he jerked off from her. She stood up and smiled at him. She then went to write her exam.

Thank you for reading😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Again a nice piece of work..just liked it..:)

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