Kalyug - TS - Part 3 on Pg 5

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LiveLoveLaugh96

@LiveLoveLaugh96

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Woah Katori!

What is ur name btw?

Honestly, im not a huge fan of such stories but this made me speechless 😆

I loved it.. I think ur writing has that magic 😳

Cant wait for the next part if there is more 😆
Pls do write more of it isnt

Though i think TS is two-shot right lol?

But i loved it alot!!
I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I was all like WOW

Keep it up 👏

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Karaali

@Karaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: LiveLoveLaugh96
Woah Katori!
What is ur name btw?

Honestly, im not a huge fan of such stories but this made me speechless 😆

I loved it.. I think ur writing has that magic 😳

Cant wait for the next part if there is more 😆
Pls do write more of it isnt
Though i think TS is two-shot right lol?

But i loved it alot!!
I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I was all like WOW

Keep it up 👏

Thanks for reading. I am glad you enjoyed it.

This seems to be the tragedy of my writing. I start out writing a simple love story and somewhere along the way it takes a dramatic turn before I know it. 😆😆

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Garima

@Luving_Gari

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Katori ji...
Can I get ur name???
Or else am ohkyy with this katori only...😆

Waah kya likhti hai aap...
It was really amzing...
But i was shocked by Yug's words...
How did he changed suddenly???
Sochne ki baat hai...
N where was Manji when Vishva came to Yug's mansion???
can uh make it an Three Shot???
N please make it in Yug's POV...
So that atleast i can know how did he changed suddenly...
N get to know his emotions...
ohkyyy...
Babyeee...
Tata...
Cya...
Take care...
Stay slessed...

Luv uh,
Garima

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Karaali

@Karaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

@Mahira and Garima

My name is Shaili. Katori works fine too as my email address uses Katori too. 😆😆

Everyone has a little darkness in them. Yug has a volatile temper that only Kaali has been able to control so far. Plus he has been pushed to his limits - he lost his love only to find that she is back in his life on a permanent basis. Imagine what a combination of despair and anger can do to a person. What such a person can do or say!

Yug means Kaal (time) which is another name for Lord Shiva. Gauri and Kaali are 2 forms of Devi Parvati. Lord Shiva's temper is well known. He runs to destroy the world when he gets angry. Yug is just destroying himself, his wife and his love. 😆😆

I am planning to write the third part from Gauri's perspective but who knows what will happen when I start writing. 😃

Thanks for reading!

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Beenish Akmal

@benishchaudhary

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Hello Shaili,

That was awesome OS

I like part 2 more then the 1st part, Yug's anger is understandable, waiting for part 3 😛

Keep writing it's awesome 👏

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Karaali

@Karaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: benishchaudhary
Hello Shaili,
That was awesome OS
I like part 2 more then the 1st part, Yug's anger is understandable, waiting for part 3 😛

Keep writing it's awesome 👏

Thanks for reading! I appreciate the encouragement.