Kaajjal after ML - Part 8 - Oct 05, 07

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Michelle

@mich09

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

Kashish,

Simply Mind Blowing ! Fabulous 👏 👏 👏 You know when I was reading the lines, I was like ooooohhhhhhhhhhhh 😃 and I was like waiting when that "Damn it" would come. Wow ! Imagine Dev a stranger to Kaju and yet not a stranger. 😛 Too Mesmerising. Loved it Darling ! Keep it up

BTW Kaju lost in the jungles with this Familar Stranger oooooooooooooohhhhhhh. I wouldn't want to leave his arms ! 😃
Michelle

Edited by mich09 - 18 years ago

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Kashish

@thesaint148

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: mich09

Kashish,

Simply Mind Blowing ! Fabulous 👏 👏 👏 You know when I was reading the lines, I was like ooooohhhhhhhhhhhh 😃 and I was like waiting when that "Damn it" would come. Wow ! Imagine Dev a stranger to Kaju and yet not a stranger. 😛 Too Mesmerising. Loved it Darling ! Keep it up

BTW Kaju lost in the jungles with this Familar Stranger oooooooooooooohhhhhhh. I wouldn't want to leave his arms ! 😃
Michelle

aha michelle, we are sooo find of dev's damn and damn it that we just cant go on with it hehehhehehe.

hmmmm thats a perfect term honey - familiar stranger ... i am sooo loving this ... kaajjal falling in love with dev all over again. 😉 how good does that sound 😳

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Roopa

@roopa_s

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Posted: 18 years ago

#13

Oh Kashish .. it was a superb post .. Apu-Sur falling in love again is the best part and the way their arms are moving on each other is sending electricity thru me ! very well narrated . Hope it starts raining in the jungle soon ! By the way is Kajjal wearing a sari ? then it would be real tempting for Dev if Kajjal gets wet & then carry her ! 😳 Apu-Sur is driving us crazy ! so pls make your FF really romantic . Kashish you are one romantic script writer here who can describe AS passion & hunger for each other so beautifully ! thanks a million sweetie for this brilliant & fantabulous post 👏

With lots of love , Roopa

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neelam

@neelamSDlover

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Posted: 18 years ago

#14

KASHISH..............dearest.........vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vv
vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv well done 👏 and yaaraa........m waiting for the videos .........plz..................these r the bestestest.............videos..........DK'S relived magic 😳

kitty ..........love u 😳

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Patjhar

@Patjhar

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Posted: 18 years ago

#15

so sorry kashish. Read it ....running for time....sorry for such a short reply. Gosh...you are re;living their past so nicely.... 👏

Gave me the goosebumps. Update soon. My compliments shall always be there, even if my reply doesn't show up. sorry gotcha go, keep it up though....

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komal

@kiokyo

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#16

Kashish, Beautiful! Beautiful, Beautiful! Passion at its best! No wonder Kaajjal can't resist that guy! Her rajkumar! Love your ff please do continue this one as well very soon! 👏 Though I know you are busy!

Great narration, passion at its best, very very beautiful and it sends shivers down my spine and gives me goosebumps! 😳

thank you for that! I was missing DK sooooooooo much!

Plzzzzz do continue soon!!!

😳 Komal

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Kashish

@thesaint148

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Posted: 18 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: autumnleaf
so sorry kashish. Read it ....running for time....sorry for such a short reply. Gosh...you are re;living their past so nicely.... 👏

Gave me the goosebumps. Update soon. My compliments shall always be there, even if my reply doesn't show up. sorry gotcha go, keep it up though....

i know auts, u have been pretty busy lately ... i really miss you and ur great posts honey ....

but i am glad u do come back from time to time 😊

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Kashish

@thesaint148

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Posted: 18 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ploye
Kashish, Beautiful! Beautiful, Beautiful! Passion at its best! No wonder Kaajjal can't resist that guy! Her rajkumar! Love your ff please do continue this one as well very soon! 👏 Though I know you are busy!

Great narration, passion at its best, very very beautiful and it sends shivers down my spine and gives me goosebumps! 😳

thank you for that! I was missing DK sooooooooo much!

Plzzzzz do continue soon!!!

😳 Komal

ahhh Komal, it is this passion that we all die for, haina? how i wish i could have seen this scene picturized on Apu and sur ... how beuatiful would that have been ... just the thought of it drives me crazy ...

how i wish the makers had had more common sense ... i miss DK/AS .😭

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gambi

@gambi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#19

Kashuu once again with this masterpiece you've made my dil go mmm....mmm......mmm...You are truly a fabulous writer!!! Luuuuved these lines:

Though his arms were not around her anymore, but she could smell his beautiful aroma on her skin, feel his warmth on her body, and feel the softness of his shirt against her lips, where she had rested her head a few moments ago.

Verrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyy verrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyy exxxxxcellenttttttt!!!!!!!! 👏

Zareen.

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neelam

@neelamSDlover

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#20

KASHISH..............dearest.........vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vv
vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv well done and yaaraa........m waiting for the videos .........plz..................these r the bestestest.............videos..........DK'S relived magic

kitty ..........love u .............sorry for posting doule 😊

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