ff DK’s New Life part 20 pg39 5th Jan - Page 21

oh anu so so sweet our devu baby fasting for kajjal as well and such lovely description.between u r good about baby part thats what they tell u in hospital to do if baby is crying and u r angry ....u used it beautifully.....and i loved the part where dev held her stopping her fall amazing too many karvachoth treats for me without the vrat.....lucky me........between where did u learn hindi u seem good in it..... 👏

Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Hai Nimmo... the pains and pleasures of parenthood... sigh but loved the way DPS ne Naina ko chup karaaya... Very good father he is in the making. Knows it all.....

Great update Nimmo.... 👏

Glad you enjoyed it Autumnleaf. 😳😃 Dev is my idea of a model father and I hope you like seeing him with his son and daughter in future episodes. 😳

Anu

Originally posted by: buddythind

oh annu so wonderfull again ur master at detail orientation and i was amazed how wonderfully u described all scenes and i loved the name naina and arjun

Hey Sameera, very happy that you enjoyed this part and that you liked the names Arjun and Naina! 😳😃 Thank you so much for leaving a comment, it has really touched me and I am thrilled to know you liked reading it. 😳

Anu

Originally posted by: buddythind

oh anu so so sweet our devu baby fasting for kajjal as well and such lovely description.between u r good about baby part thats what they tell u in hospital to do if baby is crying and u r angry ....u used it beautifully.....and i loved the part where dev held her stopping her fall amazing too many karvachoth treats for me without the vrat.....lucky me........between where did u learn hindi u seem good in it..... 👏

Gosh Sameera you beat me to it tonight!!! 😆 I was just away to pm you about it and here you have already read it! I am so touched that you liked my Karva Chauth special and that you were touched by Dev keeping a fast for his princess. 😳 I remember hearing Mum talking about the baby technique, but I don't know how it came back to me today! 😆 I was so stunned to read your last comment...I feel I am awful at Hindi!!! I am still learning and I usually ask Mona to correct it for me (thank you Mona! 😳). Thank you, you have made my day. 😳

Anu

Gosh Anu this was a fantastic piece of Karva Chauth narration 😳 ...Aww so nice to see that even Dev fasted for Kaajjal 😳 and also bought a Red and gold kangana for her 😳 ...now this is what u call a loving,caring and a responsible husband 😳 😳

Anu I could actually visualize the entire DK Karva Chauth scenario while reading your narration 😳 ..It was just outstandingly and beautifully written yaar 👏 👏 ...I wish something like this was shown in the serial too 😭 😳 ...

Aww thanks a lot dear for this wonderful mesmerising Karva chauth treat 😳

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Gosh Anu this was a fantastic piece of Karva Chauth narration 😳 ...Aww so nice to see that even Dev fasted for Kaajjal 😳 and also bought a Red and gold kangana for her 😳 ...now this is what u call a loving,caring and a responsible husband 😳 😳

Anu I could actually visualize the entire DK Karva Chauth scenario while reading your narration 😳 ..It was just outstandingly and beautifully written yaar 👏 👏 ...I wish something like this was shown in the serial too 😭 😳 ...

Aww thanks a lot dear for this wonderful mesmerising Karva chauth treat 😳

Awww Jyoti thanks for such a beautiful comment!! 😳 I am touched that you liked my vision of DK's Karva Chauth, and of the fact that Dev kept vrat for his biwi. 😳 I always thought he would do that because he loved her more than his whole life and I could always imagine how emotional Kaajjal would be when she found out. 😳 I am honoured that you have praised it so highly and I am really and truly grateful to you for not only reading it but appreciating it so much. 😳 If only the creatives had shared our vision...😭

Anu

ANU..........i have no words to decribe yaar..........
really EXCELLENT work.............anu......sweetestest...
U R BEST.........ITS really very very very very very NICE!!
both DK.......aik dosaray kay liya karva chauth,,,,,,,,
AMAZING,TREMENDOUS////////WELL DONE 👏

kitty...........LOVE U 😳 ALOT!!!!!

Woww Anu tht was so sweet yaar!!it was realli nyce of u to write da FF while u wer fastin 😊 aww devu fasted for kajjal 😳 soo sweet yaar..it was very well narrated..jus loved da whole part..it seems lyke everythin was happenin in front of me..we neva got a chance to c kajjal's n dev karwa chaut..so it was a gr8 treat from u Anu plus da cute lil babies..i always wanted to c how kaju n devu wud be as parents..n ur FF showed everything 😃 😃 N it was soo nyce of devu to bring kajjal kangna.😳 😳 as a gift for karwa chaut..srslii kajjal n dev r like da best husband n wife in dis whole world rii 😊 😊 i realli enjoyed it Anu..keep up da gr8 wrk hun..n do continue soon!!hope ur karwa chaut went great as well 😛

lotsssa luv:Hira 🤗 🤗