Dk scene ded- to kashish and autumn

i had to do these guys..you were making me go crazy😳....gosh.😳.every...moment, every frame.😳..is captured in my mind...and i haven t seen the dammn scene yet...the computer one was hazy😳...so im goin crazy😕..😕.but i had to do these dedication for the two dedicated souls - kashish and Autumn....for thos scintillating scene descriptions..if there was never such a passionate expression of love on TV then there hasnt been such a passionate description by any writer....and no writer even Karan Johar will have to take a back step this time...thos dialogues you have penned in your 3 scene FF....bas....dil par ab tak haath thaam ke baatien hai....

you have made DK immortal...with your writing...we may forget the show...someday as these actors come again in new avataars...par aaap ke lafz humare dilhoon par dhadkanon ki tarah rahenge....

the DK scene for Kashish and Autumn

Kaajjal in fact insists on having a wedding reception ( as adis mom, is told by the maha liar shaadi ho chukhi hai) but her heart is restless...the whole day she locks herself in the room scared that if she even glimpses Dev once she will lose it....for couple of nights she only tosses...her dreams filled with that hug...her heart goes crazy as she recall the moment....more than the guilt or the shame it was the way she responded...her heart felt it was so right....every pore of her being...immersed in it...if this was the man she hated why did her heart respond like that....

that evening she can hear the crowds...the mor sophisticate ones from Mumbai not bhadrapur....

Slowly she comes out of her room...almost in a trance....she is wearing red...not a sharara not a gown but SAri....deep red, just red..and a silvery red blouse...arms are bare...just a gold chain...around her nexk, hair left loose...her eyes dark...as the night....she can feel the hairs on her arms , back of her neck..stand up a pair of eyes boring into her..Adi..she looks up in antipation...it was Dev..she sucks in her breathe....her feet frozen on the top step.....her heart stops...she stops breathing...his eyes...were dark, burning with an intensity she had never seen before....as they move over her slowly...she is shocked..it felt as if it were a caress....her lips were tingling...her fingers involuntarily touch them and she gasps... he smiles as if aware of the effect he was having on her...her cheeks are aflame...she tries to look away but his eyes taunt....cmon look at me...he dares...her chin goes up a fraction...but her heart if pounding like a grand prix car.....his eyes beackon her to him...forget Adi...you are mine tonight....she is defiant...no...never...i belong to Adi...he smiles..there is a slight twist......it is cynical...Liar...the way you responded to my touch...and now the way your eyes, your lips, your heart is responding to me...liar...her eyes ....darken further...i thought it was Adi...his brows go up a fraction.....really....i am surprised...drop me with afeather....she turns her face away...trying to be angry but fails...instead the turmoil she was fighting for 2 days is back....she takes a deeper breathe her eyes resolutely start loking afor Adi....

she finds DEv waiting at the bottom of the stairs...his voice is a soft taunt...helo Mrs...Garewal...her throat is working hard at his proximity....dammn..you....get outta my way...her eyes...flare...his nostrils flare...throw me out...first....he is so close...she can smell his fragrance...his aftershave...she frowns...a flashback....b/w////is it familiar...it felt as it ot was...he grabs the moment...you .....he pauses, his eyes flicking over her again...look.. beautiful , i havent seen you in a sari before..his eyes gaze into hers deeply...she is lost momentarily....takes her a mammoth effort to look away.....dammn...let me move...she hisses under her breathe...his breathe is teasing her...i am not stopping you...Mrs...Garewal....she manages to brush him aside not before his arm brushes her own....she sucks in her breathe...it was like last nite....it was no dream...she had felt the same....way....troubled...she tries to move into the crowds///...every body is busy....Adi is nowehere to be found nor his mom...Soniya is on the mobile...she seeks out DEv...but he ignore her...his eyes on one person....who is desperately tryting to avoid her...someone turns the music on...by desgin or accident Kajjal finds herself in the middle as people choose their partner.s..and come to the floor...

Soniya pulls DEv in..cmon DEv PS...dont be a stick in the mud...dance...he looks at Kaajjal...then slowly turns to Soniya...gives a very...slow...seductive smile...soniya is lost in his gaze...Kaajjal is stunned as he puts his arms around Soniya...and pulls her close...kajjal takes a deep breathe....miilions of emotions racing through her like a xpress train...the hot,searing.....flame...of jealousy ripping her apart...she is frozen to the spot....helpless at the way she felt...she couldnt bear to see him...hold some other woman...like that....but why....she looks away...she is breathing hard.....her heart acting very funny...she couldnt undertsand the pain...that was storming through her....the rage...she felt like going there and clawing them apart.....her hands clench at her sides....she feel his eyes on her again.....she looks up...he is not smiling...his eyes dark...the song which is playing

(take that - back for good)

I guess now it's time for me to give up
I feel it's time
Got a picture of you beside me
Got your lipstick mark still on your coffee cup
Got a fist of pure emotion
Got a head of shattered dreams
Gotta leave it, gotta leave it all behind now

Whatever I said, whatever I did I didn't mean it
I just want you back for good
Whenever I'm wrong just tell me the song and I'll sing it
You'll be right and understood

she takesa deep breathe...his eyes...were....seeking deep into her soul....she could feel his breathe on her...god...what was happening....why was she behaving so strangely....angril she tried to tell herself...it was wrong....adi was her husbadn...yet she was compelled to look at Dev...as the song went on.....each wor.d..

seem to come from DEv....himself....he was telling her something...his eyes filled with pain...yet mocking...challenging.....

Unaware but underlined I figured out this story
It wasn't good
But in the corner of my mind I celebrated glory
But that was not to be
In the twist of separation you excelled at being free
Can't you find a little room inside for me

Whatever I said, whatever I did I didn't mean it
I just want you back for good
Whenever I'm wrong just tell me the song and I'll sing it
You'll be right and understood

she groans inwardly...he said she had loved him once...could it be true...he wasnt lying to her ..was he...then why should he...would he claim another mans wife as his own...she was confused..her eyes....seeking...the truth in his......his sincere....imploring.....she felt his arms around her...his breathe...fanning her face...evry words...wrenched from his heart......

And we'll be together, this time is forever
We'll be fighting and forever we will be
So complete in our love
We will never be uncovered again

Whatever I said, whatever I did I didn't mean it
I just want you back for good
Whenever I'm wrong just tell me the song and I'll sing it
You'll be right and understood

her feet begin to move...towards them...he pauses...so does Soniya...who was swimming in her own goat world...(😆

Kaajjal...evry step...is like...a heartbeat stopped in time....DEv..is socmpletely still as a statue...not daring to breathe.....his eyes....imploring...yet positive....challenging...yet gentle...come kaajjal come to me...you are mine always will be.....

I guess now it's time, that you came back for good

she stands bewteen soniya and Dev..staring at DEv...feeling a prt of her wasnt there....his eyes....melting every resistence, evry argument, every confusion....without realising it she moves closer...till their faces are a breathe apart.....she is breathing hard...like she was running he is completely still ......

slowly her hands reach out....she touches him...he sucks in his breathe...Kaajjal....her hands...crawl around his neck.....adnce with me...DEv...people stop dancing ....everybody is shocked....the music continues to play...Dk move....DEv closes his arms around her...his face...caressing her neck...Kaajjal...he whispers....softly...she doenst speak...silently they move.....Oh god Kaajjal....she closes her eyes....her arms tightening....she doesnt want to listen to anyone...she doesnt care.....

the music changes to this song......

Each day I live
I want to be a day to give the best of me
I'm only one, but not alone
My finest day is yet unknown
I broke my heart for every gain
To taste the sweet, I faced the pain
I rise and fall,
Yet through it all this much remains

I want one moment in time
When I'm more than I thought I could be
When all of my dreams
Are a heart beat away
And the answers are all up to me
Give me one moment in time
When I'm racing with destiny
Then in that one moment of time
I will feel, I will feel eternity

I've lived to be the very best
I want it all, no time for less
I've laid the plans
Now lay the chance here in my hands

Give me one moment in time
When I'm more than I thought I could be
When all of my dreams
Are a heart beat away
And the answers are all up to me
Give me one moment in time
When I'm racing with destiny
Then in that one moment of time
I will feel, I will feel eternity

You're a winner for a lifetime
If you seize that one moment in time
Make it shine

Give me one moment in time
When I'm more than I thought I could be
When all of my dreams
Are a heart beat away
And the answers are all up to me
Give me one moment in time
When I'm racing with destiny
Then in that one moment of time
I will be, I will be, I will be free, I will be,
I will be free

sammy😛

..Wow sammy thst was beautiful.. Kaajjal has followed her heart and gone to Dev...!!!! 👏 👏 👏 U've described it so well...

Originally posted by: dudleysam

i had to do these guys..you were making me go crazy😳....gosh.😳.every...moment, every frame.😳..is captured in my mind...and i haven t seen the dammn scene yet...the computer one was hazy😳...so im goin crazy😕..😕.but i had to do these dedication for the two dedicated souls - kashish and Autumn....for thos scintillating scene descriptions..if there was never such a passionate expression of love on TV then there hasnt been such a passionate description by any writer....and no writer even Karan Johar will have to take a back step this time...those dialogues you have penned in your 3 scene FF (kaj/adi marriage in progress FF)....bas....dil par ab tak haath thaam ke baatien hai....

you have made DK immortal...with your writing...we may forget the show...someday as these actors come again in new avataars...par aaap ke lafz humare dilhoon par dhadkanon ki tarah rahenge....

Sammy, my dear you have left me completely speechless. i really have no words to tell you how grateful i am for such lovely words that u have written in appreciation of my 3 scene FF (Kaj/Adi marriage in progress). i am at a complete loss of words - if my writing my words, my dialougues of that FF can stay in ur heart for ever, i think i got my reward. i never knew those words were soo powerful. thankyou sooo much sammy, you have really left me speechless and i am truly and genuinely humbled. i thankyou you for every word, every appreciation, every praise, ever gesture, and above all, i thnkyou whol heartedly for dedicating this beautiful piece of writting to me and autumn. this was really great, what we all had been waiting for. kaajjal listening to her heart and letting her self loose in dev's arms. for that is her true destination, that is her manzil and dev is her sole claimer.

awww the poem/song was awesome, i actually felt dev was saying thoses words for kaajjal and vice versa. and the last scene, she stepping in his arms, awwww, my heart stopped.

loved it honey, and once again, my heartiest thanks for all ur beautiful words and this wonderful romantic scene.

it is true...kashish...every word...every ..dialogue...if they could actually....film it...would make kaajjal immortal in TV history...for such heart wrnchingly hautingly beautiful words havent been written yet...and iwth their powerful chemistry and performance, your words would keep them in peoples hearts forever...

it is us DKians should thnak you and autumn...for giving us this joy, for shring those deepest feelings....and making us love Dk even more...

thank you
sammy 😊

Sammy U really deserve a standing ovation for this masterpiece 👏 the effect of the hug wasss soo strong that its still affecting our heart and soul and we r not able to come out from that mesmerising DK dream world 😍 ...

Between I m sure kajal must b wondering that why she gets a 500 volts current in her body when some stranger named dev touches her 😉 and why she gets -500 volts current when her so-called husband Adi-dadu touches her 😆 😛

And during that DK hugg,it looked like there were many unspoken emotions that dev wanted to convey kajal through that hug like mayb dev wanted to tell her that If he could have just one wish,then he would wish to wake up everyday to the sound of her breath on his neck,the warmth of her lips on his cheek,the touch of her fingers on his skin,and the feel of her heart beating along with his heartbeat...Knowing that he could never find that feeling with anyone other than her. 😳 and I m sure kajal was hyperventillating just because she got some passionate vibes from dev which she couldn't resist and thats why went and hugged Adi-dadu later out of sheer guilt

jyo - ahh...wondered wher you were...these days see not many posts from you...but no worrys whenever you do come out, you pull the carpet outta our feet. 😳 😳 😳
i felt compelled to write this for these two ladies...

i was crying between each of kashish scenes...kitna rulaya mujhe usne. 😭 😭 😭

i dont feel like replying...to any of her posts..for i get too emotional...and when i cry...i slink away... 😕 so i decided...bas abhi...i have to express my feelings once and for all...and wrote this scne...perfect mauka bhi tha.... 😆 😆 bas mera drama khtam...back to kashish and autumn...dont stop writing...we may not see you after the show ends..but we will always remember you...

..and then...itna aahsaan nahin mujhe rulana...i have afolder now where i keep your FF...copywrites taken care of...😆 😆 dont worry....wont be impeached..

honestly jyo -
i havent read such beautiful verses...since some immorial movies i have seen...mughal e azam being one...all of guru dutts films...your both FFs autumn and you - go into that immortal league...and to me Guru dutt used to be god of emotion, passion, verse...

now i add 2 more names to that...take a bow ladies 😳 ...again 👏

sammy 😛

Dam goood sam!! I think u should be a director ,you 'll surelly rock this show>>
God it was really really romantic, you expressed each and every emotion so detail..
Thanks allot!!!
Keep writing nice DK stories..

So who wants to come with me TO Shreyas studios???

Sammy...where do you live?Actually hiwever far yoy do...we all sponser yours autumn ji..kashish di...bhrahmi's...and you all should si6t on the writers table and write storys . 😳 😆


I mean seriosuly....Talent is here and shreyas is I guess sleeping!! 😡

My God, sammy, you are lovely!! Thank you so much. 😳

BTW I am crying at the moment! Girl I can sue you, do you know! I am sensitive and you are making me cry!!!😭

Jokes apart, really sammy, thanks feels like an understatement ooopppps I mean "underword" 😕 to express my gratitude. But, Thanks for the dedication. Loved every alphabet!!! 😳

Originally posted by: Sharmii

So who wants to come with me TO Shreyas studios???

Sammy...where do you live?Actually hiwever far yoy do...we all sponser yours autumn ji..kashish di...bhrahmi's...and you all should si6t on the writers table and write storys . 😳 😆


I mean seriosuly....Talent is here and shreyas is I guess sleeping!! 😡

😆😆😆haila sharmii.....i am happily employed...but shreya people will be soon unemployed with some sony...staff..if they go on like this..😃

i live in the UK...bahut door hai...lekin...dande...courier karoongi..if you drop in at shreyas...and give them two thumps from my side

sammy😛