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Posted: 18 years ago
#81
This DK FF is permanently dedicated to my IF friends Jyo and autumn for their constant encouragement and support…as this was for them, aand will continue tobe…and also for all DK family members who are groaning at the present turn of events in the DK drama…I hope to cheer them up each weekend…

> part 19 – NT moms bombshell
>
> Dev stops the car at the gate…he turns to Kaju…his > eyes soft, windows to the depths of his soul…she is drowning in them…that special world…where nothing matters, nothing > exists except for their heartbeats…

song is -

Teri aankhon ke siva duniya me rakha kya hai-2
Ye uthe subaha chaley, ye jhukhe shaam dhale,
Mera jeena mera marna inhi palkonke thaley,
Teri aankhon ke siva duniya me rakha kya hai

Palkonke galiyon me chehre bahaaron ke hasthe hue
Hai mere khabonke kya kya nagar in mein basthey hue
ooo
Palkonke galiyon me chehre bahaaron ke hasthe hue
Ye uthe subaha chaley, ye jhukhe shaam dhale,
Mera jeena mera marna inhi palkonke thaley,
Teri aankhon ke siva duniya me rakha kya hai

she hears her own
> heart pound or is it his…such a magicl evening > beyond all her dreams…they danced and danced….and > everything had faded in the distance…he slowly> reaches out and is hand pauses at her cheek….she > takes a deep breathe, when he looks at her like
> that…her knees go weak…." Kaajjal…"…he whispers….he> trails a finger long her cheek oh so gently like a > feather…." how can a princess like you fall for someone like me" instantly her own fingers touch his > lips lightly…softly…her eyes brimming with> love….pride…that he is a man of such high > principles….moral integrity…" shhh…mein apne…Rajkuma r ke khilaaf ek> shabd nahin soonoongi…" unconsciously her fingers > trail his lips and he groans …."kaajjal….i wont be
> able to sleep in my room alone…tonite…thinking of> you…to feel your heartbeat next to mine…" she > feels the same in her heart…her eyes speak…> > with a deep sigh he gets out of the car and takes > her hand as she follows suit…they smile at each> other…he looks up in the sky and sighs," Kaajjal….. ek doosre ke dhadkanon ko> soonenge…there…chaand..ke saath baatein karenge…"…they stay there a while then finally he turns, > nods…yes…so here we separate…their eyes meet, speak…
>
> song is :
> achchha to ham chalate hain
phir kab miloge
jab tum kahoge
jumme raat ko
haan haan aadhi raat ko
kahaan?
vaheen jahaan koi aata jaata nahi
achchha to ham chalate hain ...
>
> Dev…cant hold himself and gives her a quick > hug…whispers I love You Kaajjal…she whispers back…I> love you…Dev…then with another long sigh they
> separate and enter the house….> > NT mom is waitng for them…Devs smile fades he
> knows that look, Kaju looks a bit concerned as NT > mom isn't smiling..... …Kaajjal…I want to talk to > you ….Come along….DK exchange glances…..Dev starts > to follow Kaju when his mom stops him," tum > nahin…just Kaajjal…" Dev frowns Mom…she gives him a> stern look…I will talk to you later….it is important> that I talk to Kaajjal first….>
> he nods at Kaju who gives him a worried look….dont > worry mein hoon na…NT mom closes the door behind > her…NT mom...she looks very worried……she goes to……> Kaju and holds her hands…Please forgive me…a tear > slips from NT moms eyes…Kaju is concerned…Momji…what > is it…tell me…please…NT mom looks away unabale to> meet Kajus eyes…she turns her back…Kaajjal you cant> marry Dev….there is a stunned silence…the colour
> drains from Kaajjals face…she sits down on the bed> heavily…..instantly> NT mom comes over….she takes Kajus hands> again…please forgive me..i have gone over this again
> and again…i havnet slept three nights....aur ek hi> baat mujhe khaayi jaa rahi hai..that girl who saved> Devs life…she is his legal wife…and she is> pregnant….i went thru this nightmare once…Devs> father and this other woman in his life….i cant let> you go thru this my child…i cant go thru it myself> again.....it is the family honour at stake…kal ko ye> baat agar press me jaati hai…all of us will be in> disrepute…sab kuch khatam ho jayegaa> > i know you and Dev love each other very much….and> have been thru so much....i cant even ...put words> to your grief..adn sufferings...but….I am sorry> beta…i really am…tears were flowing down NT moms
> face…Kajus was too shocked to speak….what could she> say…she couldn't reveal the truth about KA yet and> call chamelis bluff….for NT moms life was still at> stake…finally she stands up slowly….and goes to the> older lady who is weeping> uncontrollably…"aunty…please look at me…" Kaju tells> her sofly…she hugs Nt mom…you are like my own> mother….Aap Ka Haq hai….ki aap meri zindagi ka> faisla karo...

I will stap out of the way…don't> worry…I will handle Dev…I am with you all the way"> even as sh was saying this her heart was breaking,> NT mom hugs her graetfully...thank you beta...thank
> you...she sobs…kaju silently she prayed to gannu> bhaiyya please….give me strangth o go thru> this...Gannu bhaiyya may the truth prevail soon….> > Kajjal wipes the tears and goes out…Dev grabs her> arms…urgently what did mom say…he demands…she looks> at him…she wants to speak to you…

Dev…will you> promise me…not to tell her anything> now….please…listen to her….he stares at her…but> before he could say anything…NT mom comes> out…Dev…she was composed now…he looks at Kaju…and> goes in….Kaju silently goes to her own room…closing
> the door behind her she sits before Gannu> Bhaiyya…her heart felt like it was being torn
> apart…ye kasisi parikshaa hai…gannu bhaiyya…in this> fight for justice just what price will have to pay….> DEv. comes to her room...he knocks...firmly...she goes and open it slowly...he comes in closes the door behind him...Kaajjal...a knife twists in his heart when he sees the tears...she instantly wipes the tears...taking a composing breathe she smiles tremulously...."dont worry Dev...ye parikshaa ki gadi hai..." he takes her into his arms....with a soft
oath..."how could you have agreed..Kaajjal...hum judaa nahin honge...never...I told mum...I cant accept Chameli...i didn't tell her why...she is very upset...but i am not budging"....Kaajjal closes her eyes in despair...for a moment wanting to forget everything and just surrender to his bittersweet moment...in Devs arms...

the song is :

lag ja gale ki phir
ye hasin raat ho na ho
shayad phir is janam mein
mulakat ho na ho
lag jaa gale se ...

hum ko mili hai aaj
ye ghadiya naseeb se
je bhar ke dekh leejiye
hamako kareeb se
phir apke naseeb mein
ye raat ho na ho
phir is janaam mein
mulakaat ho na ho

With an effort that is torn the depths of her soul...she pulls away but holds his hand...softly, her voicetrembles,"...D..Devv...listen to me...You cant weaken now...All our Sacrifices cant come to nought....we both are strong enough to see this through.....listen to me...please…dev.." he looked away adamantly... apulse beating at his jaw..she lifts his chin and foces him to meeet her
eyes...he is crying...DEvvv....my heart is feeling the pain too...do you think I can see you with another woman...but it is only for short time...till we can prove...the truth...until then promise me...
"tum he meri kasam DEv." he shudders and takes a step back..no..no ...no...cries...softly///..she takes his hand and puts it on her head...please Dev..tum he aaj meri kasam khana hoga..jab thak hum Karan Ameesha ko sazaa nahin dilaathe...hum momji..se kuch nain kahenge...aur chameli ke saath jo bhi rishta woh jodhne ke liye keh rahi hai, tum usse inkaar nahin karoge...

Dev closes his eyes agonisingly...tears flow down his cheeks as Kaajjals...his voice is unsteady......Dammit Dammit Kaajjal...but he agrees....he hugs her tight....she consoles him...Dev...whatever happens happens...hum kamzor nahin honge...he slowly leaves the room cant even bear to look at her...she takes a deep breathe....I love you Dev...no matter waht hum saath hain....that nite no one can sleep...Dev is miserable...he stands at the window...staring at the moon...it silently watches back..he stress back angrily…….what are you seeing....why are you putting us thru this again.....am I destined to foreever....yearn for my love...to give tests after another....he agonises

Kaajal is looking at the moon which is shinning bright but suddenly some large floating dark clouds make it disappear....just like her heart was dancing with joy earlier and now a fresh gloom had spread over it...she knew it was for a short period

"is zaher ke kadve gut ko peena hoga"..but shudders at the thought....what if...they dont succeed and Dev ends up marrying chameli...she cant even bear think of it...nahin nahin gannu bhaiyya aisa anarth hua toh mein mar jaaoongi...mein mar jaaoongi...she breaks down ....as sobs rack her body......her feet crumble as she sits down….her grief…witnessed by a silent moon…

NT mom is looking at the moon, all her past was replaying before her ...the old nightmares were back....Oh god, not my children....not these 2 sweet children of mine who have seen so much pain...but what can i do...Abhimanyu ki tarah kuch bhi nahin sooj raha hai....kya karoon mein....

the song is....

Woh bhooli dastaan lo phir yaad aa gayi -2
Nazar ke saamne ghata si chhaa gayi -2
Woh bhooli dastaan lo phir yaad aa gayi

Kahan se phir chale aaye, yeh kuchh bhatke hue saaye
Yeh kuchh bhoole hue nagme, jo mere pyaar ne gaye
Yeh kuchh bhichhdi hui yaadein, yeh kuchh toote hue
sapne

Paraaye ho gaye to kya, kabhi yeh bhi to the apne
Na jaane inse kyun milkar, nazar sharma gayi
Woh bhooli dastaan lo phir yaad aa gayi

Ummeedon ke haseen mele, tamannaaon ke woh rele
Nigaahon ne nigaahon se, ajab kuchh khel the khele
Hawa mein zulf lehrayi, nazar pe bekhudi chhaai
Khule the dil ke darwaaze, mohabbat bhi chali aayi
Tamannaaon ki duniya par, jawaani chhaa gayi
Woh bhooli dastaan lo phir yaad aa gayihe song is

preview -part 20 : Dev returns as Bhoot

NT mom announces her decision...chameli is delighted...Dev is silent...kaju supports NT mom to KA shock...evrybody is shocked......Dev and Veer leave on abusiness meeting...Ameesha has a surprise visitor....that nite

sammy 😊
i was going to post it on fri, but seeing all your sad faces i had to do it today...enjoy...be back later
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82

SAMMY!!!!!!!! 🤗 Thank you SO much for the update!!! I was looking forward to this!!!

WOW! 👏

Wonderful update - it was so heartwrenching...you've written it beautifully - the way Dev refuses to accept the decision the two woman in his life have made - the tears that flow down his face...the desperation in which he is forced to finally agree...it was all absolutely beautiful! I love the way you've portrayed Kaajjal's strength in all of this as well...love how she's staying strong to support Dev and keep his family safe. Its absolutely beautiful! 😳👏

Love the songs you've used as well - they suit the situations very well!

Devu as a ghost?!?! 😕
Can't wait for the next update! 😛

Love,
Dev Ki Deewani,
~Payal
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83

o beautiful sammy .. simply beautiful.

hmmm loved the nt and kaj sene, so touching, loved nt's pain and kaj's understanding, loved dev's breakdown and tears ... o you tore my heart aprt yar ....

simply loved it ... i hate the chameli now .... arrrgggghhhh 😡

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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
thanks guys...wait for devs bhoot....ooooooooooo....ameesha mein aa raha hoon....oooooooooo 😆
sammy 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
Hey once again just fabulous narration Sammy 👏 ..i really loved your selection of songs along with the situations 😳 ...and Dev and kajal's understanding between each other is narrated by u in a briliant manner 😳 👏 ..why can the makers do this 😡 rather than keeping on separating DK every now and then ...
between your priviews r damn funny Sammy 😆 👏 ...i m sure dev will meet as a bhooth to ameesha now 😉 😛 ...eagerly waiting for your next part sammy 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
hailaaa sammy!!! i just loved your continuation yaar!! 👏
3 cheers for u... HIP HIP HURRAY... HIP HIP HURRAY.... HIP HIP HURRAY!!!!
mindblowing yaar.. really... lovely songs u selected!!!
i cant wait for your next part...

see... why didnt the writers follow this track... instead of bringing something totally bizarre!!!! 🤢
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
hey sammy you are doing a great plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
This DK FF is permanently dedicated to my closest IF friends Jyo and autumn for their constant encouragement…as this was for them…and also for all DK family members who are groaning at the present turn of events in the DK drama…I hope to cheer them up each weekend…

Part 20 – Devs Bhoot part 1

Everybody was downstairs…next morning…NT mom, was looking tense..Kaajjal eyes were slightly puffy from crying but she managed to camouflage it well. NT mom had requested Chameli to come in and join them for breakfast..Dev and Veer came down togther. Dev looked distant, he didn't look at anybody and told Ram Singh to get his car ready as he and Veer were going to the Airport. NT mom and Kaajjal exchange glances. Nt mom stops Dev…"Dev…Veer where are you going." Veer replies..he smiles at his mother ," Bangalore – We are meeting the German delegates for this new project. Dev wants to take it over now that he is back." Karan looks at the Duo expressionlessly. Ameesha glances at him puzzled.

NT mom looks sternly at Dev," I have an announcement to make. Due to the circumstances we are in, there is a change in plan. Dev and Kaajjal wont be getting married anymore. " there was a stunned silence around the table. KA exchange shocked glances. Nandini and Panna Chacha are speehless. Kaajjal looks down at her plate. Chameli has a strange expression on her face.. Pahua stares at Dev.

Veer looks at Dev and Kaajal but his face is shocked too. Dev doesn't react, he still has the back to them. NT mom continues," I have decided to accept Chameli as my daughter in law. And towards that, we shall be having a formal Gruh Pravesh on Sunday, followed by a Puja conducted by our Kulguru. Dev are you listening?" Dev turned slowly. His eyes were unreadable, a pulse beat at his jaw. But he said nothing. Mother and son stare at each other wordlessly for a few seconds, each one unwilling to look away first. NT mom continues in her same tough tone," And Dev – on Saturday is Karva Chaud….Please be here by evening, because it will be Chamelis first Karva Chaud." Dev and Kaajjal went slightly pale at that. Kaajjal looked up shocked at NT mom…whose eyes were slightly moist. Kaajjal looked away to blink her own tears away.

Kaajjal excused herself and mumbled about getting some thing from the kitchen. Chameli still hadn't reacted, a slight smile on her lips….then she sprang up from her chair and immediately ran to touch NT moms feet, " Hum aapke bahut aabhari hain, maazi…aapne is dukhiyaari, ki sooni…Aap Dhanya ho…Aapke…" she went on gushing with obvious joy. She looked at Dev, pleased. Dev looked away, he momentarily glanced towards the kitchen and turned his back," I will be there on time mom. Is there anything else." Nt mom said," yes, plese bring a sari for Chameli. It will be her first gift for Karva Chaud from you".

When Veer and Dev had left, Ameesha smiled at Karan who didn't acknowledge that he kept staring at NT mom as shes gone mad. Nt mom excused herself and went to look for Kaajjal…Panna Chachi was still shocked. Nandini put her hand on hers…She couldn't understand either.

NT mom, saw Kaajjal was crying softly, and goes to her. She puts her hand on Kaajjals shoulder gently, turns her around and hugs her," I know what you are feeling Kaajjal beta… I am really really very sorry for all this. I feel your pain and anguish, but believe me I have no choice. "NT mom stroked her hair lovingly, tears flowing down her own eyes non-stop. Kaju calms down after a while, " Don't worry Aunty – I will get Chameli ready for all the rasams, but can I ask of just one thing from you. "," yes beta"…"aunty – I want to keep KarvaChaud for Dev too…Please inkaar mat kijeeye, ab mera haq nahin banta hai…but please let me." There is a catch in her voice threatening to break down again.

NT mom closes her eyes to the pain and says,"yes – Kaajjal , yeh kabhi na kehna ki tum hara haq nahin banta hai. Never say that again. Tum se badkar aur kiska haq banta hai. Kabhi Kabhi insaan aise mukhaam par hota hai, ki waqt usse ajeeb faisle lene par majboor karta hai….thirty years ago when I took Devs father back, I was faced with a similar dilema. Looks like my life has come full circle."

Samaaj ke aage jhukna padta hai, kabhi kabhi, sabke bale ke liye balidaan dena padta hai…….lekin mein ishwar ko kyas jawab doongi, agar ye haq bhi meine tum se cheena…nahin bete…ye haq sirf tum hara hai…to me you will always be Devs wife…."…Kaju thanx her tremulously for that. Then Nt mom says quietly," Kaajjal am aware that you and Dev…have been togther…if you do get pregnant….I will take full responsibility for that child…you and the child will have full honours of being part of this family. "

Kaajjal was silent. She didn't know what to say. Tears flowed from her eyes. I wish you knew the truth momji…..silently.

Ameesha and Karan meet up later in their usual spot by the bar. Karan is pacing the room like an angry tiger. He was still furious about being chucked out from Radiocity and now this….Ameesha we will have to sort out this Raju sooner. Nahin toh ye poore Jaaydaad par kabzaa kar, hum hare haathon aayee baazi cheen lega. We must end his game soon but how. Dammit mom, what a stupid decision. It has backfired on us. Agar Chameli is ghar ki bahu ban gayee, we will be in deep shit.

Ameesha is smiling unconcerned…"Did you see Kaajjals face. Becahri Kaajjal. Dev toh nahin raha, abhi Raju bhi haath se nikal gaya. Mom is taking pity on her. That was the last straw." Karan snaps at her – Ameesha, Kaajjal is no longer an issue with me. start thinking about Raju. "Hi smobile rings…Karan goes pale when he answers. He looks at Ameesha, slightly ashen," un logon ka phone ta…our time has run out. If we don't pay them by Saturday, they will do something drastic." Ameesha smiles " call them back, I have a plan". She tells Karan and his face clears. He almost hugs Ameesha then makes a face in distaste. He smiles evilly" Sometimes you do surprise me Ameesha, this is an excellent plan. Saap bhi marega aur laathi bhi nahin tootegi"

At nite, the house is silent. N T mom has taken valium and is in deep sleep. No one sees the 2 figures silently crouch in the shadows…there is a soft whisper," you go in first. All the best" Ameesha is sleeping alone in her room as Veer was gone…She is still reflecting on her own brilliance…you are too good Ameesha….even Karan had to eat humble crow today…there is a noise…she frowns and sits up. "Kaun hai"…it was silent…she makes a face and turns on her stomach …smiling….maybe I should forgive Veer and give him a call. Bahut din hue usse jagda kiye…as she is dialing a voice says chillingly" aammmeeeesshhhhaa…" all the hairs on her back stand….it was a weird whisper…she ignores it…it was windy outside…just a breeze,…it came again…"Aaammmmeeessshhaaa…" this she really jumps and sits up, her heart pounding she couldn't see anybody…."ka…kaun hai…who is it"…she tries the bedside lamp…but it wont work…she tries other switches next to her bed…they all wont work…that spooks her…a song starts playing somewhere…her blood goes cold….w..w..w..who…ooo…s..that..th.."

gumanaam hain koee, badanaam hain koee
kis ko khabar kaun hain wo, anjaan hain koee

kisako samaze hum apanaa, kal kaa naam hain yek sapanaa
aaj agar tum jindaa ho, to kal ke liye maalaa japanaa

pal do pal kee mastee hain, bas do din kee bastee hain
chain yahaan par mahangaa hain, aaur maut yahaan par sastee hain

then a voice comes from the bathroom. She gulps…and croaks…whos there…the voice repeats…" aammmeeeshhhaa…aammmeessshhhaaa,….aaammmmeeeshhha…."…" h..huh..hu..huh…she edges back on her bed…really scared now…" calm down ameesha…it is just the wind….just a trick of the mind…of late shes been stressed…so….the bathroom door opened with a creaky sound…and an eerie light shone out of it…her hands flew to her mouth…..her eyes widened….a silent scream in them…then the door closed and she jumped…" h..h…huh…h…" W…W…whos ther…e..e..re.." her words were wobbly….out of fear…the door opened a crack again…maybe the hinges were bad…taking a deep breathe…she tried to look for her llighter which normally was in the drawer next to the bed…..her hands shook badly and she cursed, but after a long search she found it….then slowly she got out of the bed…cmon Ameesha you are not scared..it is jus the bathroom window which is open and doing this…all you have to do is close it and all will be well….counting to 10, she slowly made her way towards it……she grips the door handle hard and prays….but it opens for her and almost stumbles in…the door locks behind her…she screams…the voice is closer …Aaammmmeeeeessshhhhaaa,,,sshhhhhh…..she backs agains the door…and fumbles with the lighter….when she looks up it was a face…there was dired blood caked on his smashed face….she screams again….De…Devvv…..he is not smiling….then she straightens…Aahhh…Raju…I know it is you…she tries to laugh but it comes out as a croak…I can call ,…your bluff….she loses the smile as the figure is not breathing standing still….she starts to go and touch him….when there is another whisper behind her …..Aaaammmeesshhaa…she whirls and sees the face again….she goes ashen…when she whirls back the face is gone…she grbas the door handle and tries to open it….it does and she runs out closing the door behind her….Dev is standing in the middle of the room….she drops the lighter as it gets hot…Ouch…but there is an eerie light in the room…a weird voice….cold….dead….whispery…..I have come back…My blood cries for revenge….he moves towards her zombie like……his hands outstretched….she backs against the wall….no….no…tears flowing down he cheeks…no..no..dev…meine kuch kuch nahin kiya….woh….w….w…w.k…k.aran….it was…all his idea…the zombie moves awkwardly…he is limping…his head tilted to a side……the dead…expression around his eerirely lit face……Ameessha…manages to escape and runs towards the bathroom and locks herself in….there is a whisper behind her…..Aammmeeeshhhaa…she turns,…..h..h…h…huh…no…n..no…n..n..no….Dev was standing there….she runs out screaming…this time out of the room…and doesn't stop till she reaches Karans room…banging on it….continously….Karan comes out so does Nandini…she hugs Karan…blabbering incoherently…he hears..devs name….Karan…hisses in her ear…calm down ameesha…you will ruin everything…loudly for nandinis benefit…Ameesha…I am going to take you back to your room…Ok…Nandini will you get some water for her…

Karan makes Ameesha sit on the bed…..She is shaking a like a leaf….her eyes wide iwith terror….Karan…who Dev..tha…his face was smashed…..Karan was about to say something…when Nandini comes in with a glass…of water…she looks concerened and a bit shocked at Ameeshas words…Karan tells nandini…a bad dream….Nandini….there is some medication in my drawer…can you get it please…its called codium, I take it for stress…meanwhile…I will sit here with Ameesha….It ws just a ruse to send Nandini away. Closing the door behind him…she shakes Ameesha who was still blabbering incoherently…Get a grip of yourself…tell me what happened…haltingly between gasps,…sobs…and blabbering she tells him..he is silent…taking her arm he drags her to the bathroom…she resists…but he doesn't let go…of her arm…he opens the door…she shudders and tries to step back……he looks in and turns on the light….it was empty…he says…where is he….look ….there is no blood….she stares at the lights…lights…jal rahe hai…it wouldn't work…when I tried the switches she whispers…..

He turns on her angrily….look ameesha…then he sees her shrink and sighs…Ameesha…it was a bad dream…I have been stressed too…you have some of that medication and it will help….wait a minute …as realization dawns…his lips tighten…he asks her …where is your mobile….he goes into her room and picks it up…w..w..who are you calling…Veer…I hope it is not Raju doing this…let me check…Oh…hi…veer…am sorry….Can I talk to Dev…in his room…will you please….call him it is urgent…I tries his mobile but it was switched off…huh…yes everything is fine at home….He was with you drinking till late…you saw him to his room…Ok…but still can I talk to him…Ok…Dev…there was rude grunt…and some swearing…it was Dev alirte or Raju….in this case…he looked at Ameesha…apologized saying he wanted to ask about some work issue as he was making a presentation next morning….Dev swore back at him and switched the phone off drunkenly…Veer called back instantly…sorry Karan…Dev is still quite drunk…tell me if I can help…Karan sighed…no Veer…I will call him in the morning….he cant help me now in any case….

He tells ameesha, Look there is nothing…sirf tum hara wahem hai…get a grip on yourself…OK….Ameesha says nothing…she is staring dully ahead…Nanadini comes in…Karan looks at her…she has the codium…he says give it to her…it will calm her down…
And he leaves….Nandini leaves the codium with Ameesha…Zaroor lena….and leaves….Ameesha is still sitting there

Preview – part 21- Devs Bhoot part 2.

more of devs bhoot and kajjals challenge - karva chaud...the lawfully wedded wife of DPS...having tohide in the shadows of a fake...tell me what you think of the scenes

sammy 😊
leave you with the bhoot now...ooooooooohoooooohaaaaaoooo
😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
Awwwwww Sammy!!!! I am touched really. I find your FF very soothing at such times. Ufffff you do have a way with words. Thanks for the dedication, really I am touched. 👏

Great part. And now the roller coaster rides of emotion and the romance that shall soon follow 😳

And last but not the least hilarious. I was like laughing when Dev appears in front of Ameeeeesssssshhhhhhaaaaaa as a bhoot. Hilarious. 😆 Hey please coninue soon!!!!!! Can't wait for the butterflies in the stomach ride!!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sammy! 👏 I wasn't expecting you to update this part so soon! Thank you for that!!

I love the initial part of this update at the table - DK having to remain silent out of sheer desperation - I can imagine it now, their remaining silent, but eyes speaking volumes to one another 😳 - and then Kaajjal's silent tears later. 😭 I also love the understanding that NT and Kaj have - both women have tremendous love and respect for one another...Its wonderful!

Dev's Ghost coming to haunt Ameesha was HILLARIOUS! I feel bad for Nandini - poor thing - having to be married to that evil Karan! And furthermore, she sits there and watches her husband comfort her devar's wife! YIKES! Aaaw, I think Nandini bhabhi needs a hug!

Can't wait for the next update - looking forward to Karva Chauth - I'm sure it will be overflowing with heartwrenching emotions. 😳

👏

Love,
~Payal

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