Written Update: May 3, 2010

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😲The episode starts with the entire family coming back home. All of them are happy.😛 Dadi tells KK that he shud have come there. It's been a long time since she saw such a wonderful dance program n ur wife n daughter Padma n jyoti were gr8 in the show😛 Padma agrees that they got 2 have such a wonderful time all bcoz of kabir😆 Sushma who was trying to tell jyoti abt her child once again tries n tells jyoti that she has 2 tell her sumthing, so both of them start going towards the room when kabir stops them telling that he has a surprise😕 ( well, i think it's gud that sushi didn't get 2 tell jyoti otherwise jyoti will never allow sushi 2 give her child away n wud give her sum lectures on motherhood🥱 n say that sushi can independently handle her kid n main hoon na dialogue wud also b heard from jyoti's mouth 😕) Dadi asks him that he's done a lot already now what's the need 4 the surprise. kabir then tells them that this surprise is especially 4 sushma n her child😉 (kabhi khushi😆 kabhi gum😭... u all were happy uptil now that's why kabir is going 2 make u all angry n sad n wash away ur happiness😉 )

kabir walks out n brings in brij. All of them get shocked😲 (kabir ur surprise was really a surprise, nobody expected it) Poor sushma starts getting flashbacks of how brij tortured her n ruined her life😭, she starts shivering due 2 fear n calls out 4 help from her mom. padma, dadi n jyoti all rush towards sushma. sushma hides herself in padma's arms 🤗n asks 4 help saying that this guy won't spare me,...he'll kill me😭 On the other hand, sandeep loses his anger n catches brij by his collar👏 while kabir struggles 2 stop sandeep👎🏼😡 Sandeep gets angry n tells kabir 2 take him away. brij tells kabir - i told u they won't forgive me sushma is still shivering with fear. jyoti keeps on requesting kabir 2 take brij away explaining that birj is acting, can't u see sushma is shivering with fear, nobody is happy with him coming, so take him away. But kabir insists that they shud listen 2 him👎🏼😡 he also says that he's jyoti's fren so he won't do anything wrong 4 the sharma family that's why he brought brij 👎🏼( well, kabir this time u r crossing ur limits of frenship, what do u know abt brij n sharma family's past👎🏼 ) but kabir keeps on repeating the same thing👎🏼 while jyoti keeps on requesting him 2 take brij away. finally sandeep takes the step n bashes up brij 👏n says he'll finish this story right now. kabir requests KK to stop sandeep👎🏼 but KK stays out of this. sandeep brings a knife n struggles 2 stab brij🥳 jyoti tries 2 stop him n poonam tells him why do u want 2 kill him n get urself hanged... tumhe meri kasam. brij tries 2 leave but kabir stops him n says don't go like that👎🏼 at least tell them what u wanted 2 say👎🏼😡🤢 ( kabir u r really irritating me now. if i were in the place of jyoti or anybody in that house, i wud have slapped u very hard, can't u see the situation ) jyoti then once again requests kabir 2 take brij away... but this kabir!!!😡 he's so stubborn😡 then jyoti finally speaks up n tells kabir - can't u see what's going on in the house, take him away. what rights do u have 2 interfere in my family matters👍🏼 i've listened 2 u many times but not this time. take him away!!!👏👏👏 n then finally kabir takes brij away (phew!! jyoti if u had said this earlier then probably u cud have saved some time😆)

poor sushma is completely terrified n keeps on saying that brij will kill her n take her child away💔 dadi n jyoti try their best 2 comfort her in the hall, padma is walking here to there while KK is sitting on the wheel chair. padma is angry n is saying that kabir shud not have brought brij there. jyoti arrives there n is upset abt the whole thing. padma stares at her angrily😡 jyoti says she didn't like what happened. then she says maybe brij acted b4 kabir n fooled him after all, he has fooled all of us many times b4. padma looks at her angrily ( as always she blames jyoti what else can padma do?) KK tells padma 2 calm down but she asks jyoti isn't kabir her fren, then he must have told her abt bringing brij. jyoti looks shocked😲 n cofused😕 so nods slowly then padma bursts out why didn't he ask u b4 doing this?😕😡

At brij's place, brij n kabir r sitting on the bed. kabir says sorry n he shud have told jyoti during the godh bharai ceremony. if he had explained it earlier 2 jyoti then this situation wud not have come. brij tells him that it's not his fault. this is what he's got in return 4 spoiling sushma's life ( brij, u've lost ur memory power, haven't u, tell me who ruined jyoti's life then ) kabir tells brij that he's heard of dacoits becoming saints😆 brij says that these things look gud only in books not in real life😕 brij then walks up n reaches the cupboard, opens it n takes out a bundle of money n says that he sold all his relations 4 this money thinking that money is his fren, relative n everything but now he has realized that he was wrong. kabir tries 2 console him👎🏼 but he tells kabir 2 leave. kabir is abt 2 leave that brij starts coughing very badly. kabir returns n then sees stains of blood on brij's hankey😲

Kabir n brij r in the hospital where the doctor after seeing brij's reports says that he shud have come earlier. kabir asks why then doc. says that brij has TV. kabir says that there is cure 4 TV then the doc. says that yes there is but brij is in the advance stage of TV. kabir says there might b a way not 2 worry abt the expenses, then the doc. says that money can't buy life👏 but as he is a doc. he'll try until the last minute n now brij shud do sum more tests.

Kabir at home calls jyoti. jyoti sees kabir's no. in her mobile gets angry n cuts the phone n switches off her mobile👍🏼 kabir gets irritated n talks 2 himself that she's switched off her phone, i'm jyoti's fren wud i do anything wrong 4 her family👎🏼 (kabir without knowing the truth, how can u say that )

Sushma sees a nightmare where brij is walking on the road with her child n sushi is shouting at him 2 stop. Sushma wakes up n is still shouting. jyoti n dadi also get startled n sushi tells them that brij is taking her child away. jyoti says that nobody is here, nobody will take ur child away, this is ur child n dadi says that it was just a nightmare. ( strange, sushma is giving her child away not 2 brij but she is giving it away so why is she scared that sum1 will take her child away 👎🏼)

Brij is back in the flashback where he tortured sushma n also sees jyoti slapping him hard👍🏼 then his face gets brightened up😲 jyoti's dialoge sounds in the backgroung where she's saying that b4 judging whether it's true or a lie, one shud always b given a chance 2 speak no matter how big sin he/she has done. then brij tells himself that if there's any1 who can talk 2 sushma then it's jyoti. He want's 2 asks forgiveness from sushma n her child😲😡
PRECAP for May 4th, 2010

Jyoti is getting on her scooty while brij comes there n tells her that he has 2 talk 2 her. jyoti tells him 2 leave but then brij tries 2 stop her from going then she slaps him very hard👏👍🏼

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Well, kabir was really irritating in today's episode😡 I don't blame him completely coz he doesn't know the entire truth. But this is why I got irritated🤢 He doesn't know anything n is just trying 2 interefere in sum1's life😕 He shud first try 2 know why the sharma family hates him so much 2 this extent rather than just jumping 2 conclusions that they shud listen 2 brij n forgive him😡

Now that brij knows that he's dying why does he want 2 create problems in sushi's life😡 Now if he dies, I don't think it will b difficult 4 sushi but if he asks her forgiveness then wudn't if b difficult 4 sushma 2 forget him! & what abt jyoti, didn't brij trouble her enough that now he wants jyoti 2 talk 2 sushma on his behalf😡

If brij is really repenting then the most imp. thing he shud do b4 dieing is confronting the entire truth 2 the vashisth family abt jyoti's innocene n bhairavi's plans. He shud tell pankaj nothing but the truth. Bhairavi will get kicked out while pankaj will also repent on his decision of kicking jyoti out of the house🥳 He'll never b able 2 forgive himself, neither will he b able 2 forget jyoti nor wud he b able 2 live a normal married life with neelam. He'll live his entire life like a pendulum, 🥺neither here (jyoti) nor there (neelam). this will b the best punishment 4 pankaj & bcoz he's married 2 neelam there's no question of jyoti going back 2 pankaj. I'm sure jyoti won't go back as she won't want neelam's life 2 get spoilt.😳

This is the first update that i've ever written in my life😳 I've never done sumthing like this b4 so if there r any mistakes i'm really sorry! i just hope my update is ok😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Your update was quite good except for one blunder its TB not TV , TB for tuberculosis which brij is suffering.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks for the Great update - had already posted my reaction here before I saw your update.

Agree fully w/ your analysis above. Only disagreement - I liked Padma reading Jyoti the riot act. Only, she should have flipped it - she should have asked Jyoti why she didn't tell Kabir everything about Brij, as opposed to demand to know why Kabir didn't tell Jyoti - something that Jyoti has no control over. Had Jyoti told Kabir the reason she was initially behaving strangely towards him - maybe that night in the temple - he'd have known the fear and hatred they have of Brij, and treated it accordingly.

The only good thing about Kabir bringing him in - Brij is forced to face the complete & very hostile Sharma family, & almost get killed in the process. 👏👏👏

But hey, Brij, congratulations!!! This time, you have a real illness - not a fake one that your friend has to contrive from a movie, and that too from a real doctor. 👍🏼 Plus, you seem to have the money to cover those expenses - I don't want Kabir to bail him out w/ his cash. I absolutely loved the doc telling Kabir that one cannot buy someone's life w/ money 👏 And this time, Sushma would have been no use to you - since she's pregnant, Thakkar would have had no use for her.

Actually, if this track is a way to just kill off Brij and free off Samir Sharma for his next project, then it's not that bad - as long as it doesn't have any long term bearing on the relationship b/w Brij & Sushma. Also, this confrontation w/ Brij will probably encourage Sushma even more to give up her baby to Sarika, rather than live w/ the fear that someday, Brij will take that baby away. Incidentally, in the nightmare that Sushma was having, the baby in Brij's arms looked adorable ☺️👎🏼 They should have picked an ugly baby for this purpose

Speaking of Sarika, I was first disappointed that Sushma didn't get to confide in Jyoti, but you are right - it's just as well. I hope that after seeing how happy this makes both Sushma & Sarika, Jyoti too takes the same decision.

Oh, and I agree w/ your last point - if Brij is dying, he'll only leave Sushma & Jyoti w/ more pain if he leaves them w/ a last impression of him being contrite. Instead, he should do what you said - go to Pankaj, and tell him that he did everything he did @ Bhairavi's behest, and kept blackmailing Bhairavi, but now that he's dying, he's decided to come clean. Bhairavi's power & prestige will be instantly gone, and although Pankaj & Jyoti won't be united, life will definitely be better for Sudha. One thing that Pankaj can do, even if he decides not to hurt Neelam, would be to accept Sudha's demand that Jyoti's baby be recognzed by the Vashisth family as theirs, even if Jyoti goes on to marry Kabir. That way, Sudha can also be satisfied that that kid won't have an identity crisis, and she and Uday can focus on starting their family as well.
Edited by Vrisha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It's TB not TV.

Anyway, how come Brij got TB so quickly....? A few days back he was completely alright, no coughing, etc...and how come he realised his mistakes so fast. Sudden change in his character..... It's really unbelievable!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh, he had TB for a while, it's just now that it's been detected & diagnosed. In fact, it's @ a pretty advanced stage. This part is the least problematic part of the storyline, and is also poetic justice.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Now brij is trying to convince jyoti because he knows that once jyoti will get convinced she will try to convince sushma and brij will get her back in his life because jyoti is a statue of greatness.😆
Jyoti is more in interested in social service so why dont she run a mahila samiti ??????????so that poor women will get help out of that .


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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanx 4 the update.........
now brij is really sick.....he should suffer in same way as he made sushi suffer wid his fake illness.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Update has been posted: May 3, 2010 Written Update
Next time pls let me know if ur updating so I know whether to update or not.😊

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