FF - Till death do us apart ,chapter 15(pg 42) - Page 28

Originally posted by: foram.

wow a nice update
yeah it was tooo long but read it in one go

awww its so romantic
☺️☺️☺️

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

WAT DO U MEAN BY REAL LONG?!!!!!!!😲
It ended so fast!😭
Nd I dnt hv any favourite part to quote too!😭I LOVE DA WHOLE CHAPTER 😃😛nd U hd to stop lyk dt?!!!😡😡😡

Nw I know wat u ppl feel,wn I do da same...😳Love u Saba!!!!!!!!!🤗M so glad dt dis Meera is fast realizing her feelings nd is getn aware of her femininity..!!!Nd I love dt aware Prithvi too!😈I wish he carries her into da house in his arms nw!😳Or rain starts faln nd dey both get drenched to da skin!☺️nd 🤬happens!😉Loved it to bits!😛Nd lyk I sd earlier,I cant quote any part,as da entire chapter was awesome!😛Nd time flew away..Update as soon as u cn?!😉

Originally posted by: Junoonian

Very nice Saba! It is great to see that Meera is thawing towards Prithvi 😃

And now that things have heated up - methinks she will stay thawed 😉

Originally posted by: awida

I like it very much Saba..

Love that Prithvi dares to touch Meera and make her feel the fire which wad burning inside him.

And love naughty Meera and her reaction to Prithvi's sensative actions.

Ah ..I am still dreaming..

Please update soon I want to see more of this charming situation.

Originally posted by: monalika

Awesome. Chapter, Saba!!! Kya very long??? Yeh dil maange more snd more!! I lovvved it. Meera is such a cutie and Prithvi absolutely irresistable and hawt! I loved how you described Meeras feelings and uncontrollable attraction towards Prithvi. Live weekend surprise :-)

Originally posted by: SahanaG

Saba mujhe a/c ki zarurat hai ☺️ ☺️ Mujhe bhi George Clooney se chipakna hai 😳 Prithvi se bhi 😳 😆

Originally posted by: phulwa

Loved these lines, very well written Saba👏 precisely describes a woman's first realizations of love. Prithvi ne pehle se hosh uda rakhe hai, aur tumne George Clooney ki yaad dila kar aur bhi pareshan kar diya

chapter 11
awesome update saba
loved whole chapter
description of prithvi's emotions are written supberb!
liked who how much he her pain affect him and he cares for her

and loved his sanity won though his body faced defeated.

Prithvi picked her up, took her inside and put her on the bed , covered her with sheet and went to find some place where he could gather all his scattered thoughts and rebuild the broken fences around his heart which now seemed ruined for eternity.

these lines were awesome written

Chapter 12
awesome part again
so miu blushing remembering prithvi caring for her
and how comfortable was she with him
loved the whole update
so prithvi brough her sandal n salwar kamiz too
but i would loved to see her in his kurta 😉as prithvi does😛
and not she get bored with khichadi ala da time
i think after getting bored she will own make some testy food for him😃
loved the entire part of three
u too added JL wow🤗to u
lakhan will enter ?
loved cute fights between prithvi n JL
and miu taking side n defending JL
and she won too cheating se hi sahi
but now she is best for JL
as prithvi in Tehsina's ff
loved u used prithvi n miu asking things by raising eyebrow
i can imagine adni doing tht😳
and last scene☺️

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

chapter 11
awesome update saba
loved whole chapter
description of prithvi's emotions are written supberb!
liked who how much he her pain affect him and he cares for her

As sanity always prevails in pure hearts no matter how much undesirable and heart wrenching they are ,Prithvi's was also forced by his mind to think about Meera's pain and rest of the things could be sorted later on if his body survived this brutal defeat.

and loved his sanity won though his body faced defeated.

Prithvi picked her up, took her inside and put her on the bed , covered her with sheet and went to find some place where he could gather all his scattered thoughts and rebuild the broken fences around his heart which now seemed ruined for eternity.

these lines were awesome written