FF - Till death do us apart ,chapter 15(pg 42) - Page 26

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awida thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh .. Very sweet.

I love Prithvi si much. You described his feelings beautifully Saba. He is caring ..loving, and very responsible person . A kind of man which any girl would debend on him completely .

My head was moving in surcles while I was reading his emotions. And kept asking my self .. Will Meera be able to understand what is her affect on him?

I am very thankful to you Saba .. This FF is moving brilliantely . And you are a wonderful writer 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Uff Thank God Saba!😲He could take out da glass!!!😲I ws worried...😲Dis erased dt similar ugly scene,4m my mind..Thank u!!!😃U know wich 1 m tokn bout,right?

Anyawys good job 1ce agn!👏Bt Saba,Prithvi is off to smwhere..Bt shudnt he clean dose glass pieces first..?😲Wat if Meera wakes up nd starts running looking for him agn?😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very very sorry guys for taking so much of time for doing updates, first i didnt feel like and when i felt like i didnt get the time Please forgive me and I promise i will try even harder to do a fast update next time.so with out much ado here goes the next update , hope you guys like it.

CHALO MAUF KAR DIYA :) - VERY INTERESTING UPDATE SABA SO U R FORGIVEN HEHEHE


Meera:Please prthvi dont go , stay with me

He would be more than happy to hear those words and oblige but today was unfortunately not that day.
I REALLY LIKED THE WAY YOU BROUGHT THAT KASH-MA-KASH OUT.


Meera's pain and Meera's closeness, he begged to any supreme powers listening never ever to put him in circumstances that were
challenging him to choose between despised sanity and tempting and preferred insanity.

As sanity always prevails in pure hearts no matter how much undesirable and heart wrenching they are ,Prithvi's was also forced by his mind to think about Meera's pain and rest of the things could be sorted later on if his body survived this brutal defeat.

VERY NICE! I LOVE THE PLAY AND POETRY OF WORDS - DESPISED SANITY AND TEMPTING INSANITY...


His words, his touch were acting like a balm on Meera's bruised body and heart.
She just wanted to be wrapped in the cocoon of Prithvi's arms and his warmth which made her feel safe, protected and treasured.

Meera didnt even remember for how long she was in Prithvi's arms, by the time he had cleaned the wound, applied haldi and wrapped the cloth around her feet she was fast asleep.
HOW SWEET AND TOUCHING

Prithvi picked her up, took her inside and put her on the bed , covered her with sheet and went to find some place where he could gather all his scattered thoughts and rebuild the broken fences around his heart which now seemed ruined for eternity.
ANOTHER POETIC TOUCH THERE SABA 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: awida

Oh .. Very sweet.

I love Prithvi si much. You described his feelings beautifully Saba. He is caring ..loving, and very responsible person . A kind of man which any girl would debend on him completely .

What to do ? Hero hai na , he has to be liked be all the gals 😉


My head was moving in surcles while I was reading his emotions. And kept asking my self .. Will Meera be able to understand what is her affect on him?

wait 😉😆
I am very thankful to you Saba .. This FF is moving brilliantely . And you are a wonderful writer 👍🏼
😕 you know I am writing for first time , right???
Thanks itidal for such kind words ... every time .. Love you 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

Uff Thank God Saba!😲He could take out da glass!!!😲I ws worried...😲Dis erased dt similar ugly scene,4m my mind..Thank u!!!😃U know wich 1 m tokn bout,right?

Anyawys good job 1ce agn!👏Bt Saba,Prithvi is off to smwhere..Bt shudnt he clean dose glass pieces first..?😲Wat if Meera wakes up nd starts running looking for him agn?😲

arey baba, wait na..
let him first get hold of things, he needs time 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Junoonian



CHALO MAUF KAR DIYA :) - VERY INTERESTING UPDATE SABA SO U R FORGIVEN HEHEHE

Thanks for understanding 🤗


Meera:Please prthvi dont go , stay with me

He would be more than happy to hear those words and oblige but today was unfortunately not that day.
I REALLY LIKED THE WAY YOU BROUGHT THAT KASH-MA-KASH OUT.

Thanks again



VERY NICE! I LOVE THE PLAY AND POETRY OF WORDS - DESPISED SANITY AND TEMPTING INSANITY...

That is my favorite too 😃

His words, his touch were acting like a balm on Meera's bruised body and heart.
She just wanted to be wrapped in the cocoon of Prithvi's arms and his warmth which made her feel safe, protected and treasured.

Meera didnt even remember for how long she was in Prithvi's arms, by the time he had cleaned the wound, applied haldi and wrapped the cloth around her feet she was fast asleep.
HOW SWEET AND TOUCHING

Prithvi picked her up, took her inside and put her on the bed , covered her with sheet and went to find some place where he could gather all his scattered thoughts and rebuild the broken fences around his heart which now seemed ruined for eternity.
ANOTHER POETIC TOUCH THERE SABA 😊
Thanks for wonderful comments 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank those glass pieces for pushing MITHVI together, now Meera will atleast stop hating him. Loved the update, waiting for more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dude, where were you? Was waiting for an update for so long. It was worth the wait :-) I lowed this chapter. Meera clinging on to shoorveer Prithvi- ilike!! Great chapter and awesome writing!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: phulwa

Thank those glass pieces for pushing MITHVI together, now Meera will atleast stop hating him. Loved the update, waiting for more.

Thanks Phulwa 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: monalika

Dude, where were you? Was waiting for an update for so long. It was worth the wait :-) I lowed this chapter. Meera clinging on to shoorveer Prithvi- ilike!! Great chapter and awesome writing!

Don't ask
somewhere between banging my head and devising ways to kill Junoon CVs 😡

Sorry for keeping you waiting 😳
and thanks for liking the update , will try to do the next update faster 😃

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