FF - Till death do us apart ,chapter 15(pg 42)

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Marathi_Mulgi

@Marathi_Mulgi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

awesome update
sorry for late comment
so mouni seeing rambo singh might!
lolz her think aloud are very funny
and he answer to tht mindblowing
he everytime able to read her mind

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Junoonian

@Junoonian

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi
awesome update
sorry for late comment
so mouni seeing rambo singh might!
lolz her think aloud are very funny
and he answer to tht mindblowing
he everytime able to read her mind

That is the coolest thing about them isn't it :) Glad you put that in Saba.

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Marathi_Mulgi

@Marathi_Mulgi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: Junoonian

That is the coolest thing about them isn't it :) Glad you put that in Saba.

she know tht so she showed it in same in her ff😃
actually we all know tht😳

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi
awesome update
sorry for late comment
so mouni seeing rambo singh might!
lolz her think aloud are very funny
and he answer to tht mindblowing
he everytime able to read her mind

Thanks vidya 🤗

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Meera still as any body could be and holding on the blanket so tight that her knuckles went white was still not able to get out from the shock that

he knew that she was pretending to sleep.

Meera(should have chosen the first option)

Meera (when will i start learning from mistakes.. seems never)

Meera(he can read my thoughts)

Meera(definitely time traveled where People can read minds)

Prithvi saw rainbow of emotions spreading on Meera's expressive face.

He couldn't make out if she was considering running as fast as possible or did she want to hit him with those angry eyes or was she scared of him or was she just in plain shock after finding herself in this strange place with even more strange man right in front of her.

Meera subsonscioulsy bit her lower lip with her teeth while weighing her options which was her habit,she always bit her lower lip which now had become muscle memory,

and made Prithvi's heart do somersault.He couldn't think beyond how amazingly innocent she looked while biting her lower lip and chewing it.

Prithvi was so lost that it took him some time to realize that her lips were moving and she was saying some thing.

He made an extra humongous effort to hear what she was saying and not to concentrate on those luscious lips which were driving him madder every second.

If things were in his control he would have continued looking at her all day and he hated himself for feeling vulnerable like that.

Earlier the thought that some one else had control on him would have given him sleepless nights but this time it didn't make him want to kill that person

who was responsible for making him loose everything just by simple movement of the most beautiful lips he had ever seen.

That seemingly scary thought wasn't that scary and was more of disturbing nature now.

Finally he heard Meera saying ..

Meera: I am Meera Sudha thakur.

Meera: Where am I?How did i reach here?

Prithvi(because I was a god damn idiot and couldn't let you go..)

Meera looked at Prithvi who definitely looked liked he would eat her up if she did anything against his wishes.

His face didn't gave away anything, he was staring at her with those big black intimidating eyes of his.

With all the concentration which she could build under these totally off the imagination situation ,she could make out that he didn't seemed bothered much about his looks.

Long, uncut and dis-leveled hair yelling at the top of their voice to get them cut made it obvious that he did not believe in following the good boys rule book.

That rough and not at all pleasing two day stubble which was hiding the firm jawline and wide cheeks did very little in establishing him as peace loving human being.

and his sideburns were totally different story , if any one was dumb enough not to realize the very obvious threat oozing out from those eyes, hair and untrimmed stubble then

the long and way past the ears sideburns made the message mess-with-me-and-you-are-done-for-life very very obvious.

To top it , he had that very very annoying mustache which was sailing from one part of his face to another part and had twirls at the end adding one more enhancement to his already not pleasing features.

Eyes, hair, stubble , mustache and stubble all made sure that every one got the message loud and clear that messing with him was the worst thing they could do if they loved their lives.

All his features managed to destroy all hopes of hospitality which were any way getting bleak by every second.

To summarize he was making her uncomfortable with those highly disgusting animalistic features.

But on thing was sure, his presence filled the entire room and the seemingly regular room shrinked to half its size.

She suddenly felt the need to get out in open so that her air deprived lungs could start functioning normally.

After few seconds which seemed like ages for both of them for totally different and opposite reasons ...

Prithvi: Didnt have much of an option when you barged right in front of my jeep in the middle of night and fainted on the road.

Meera(freaking arrogant b****** )

Chapter 7

Allright folks , that's it for chapter 6.

Hope you guys like it.

Love all of you for those awesome comments.

Keep them coming, they are the only source of inspiration as we are getting nothing from the show

Edited by sabaSpeaks - 12 years ago

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TehsinaJFJ

@TehsinaJFJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Freaking Awesome Saba!!!!!😃👏👏👏👏👏👍🏼Loved it!Loved it!Loved it to bits!!!!!😃Who needs da crappy serial track of present when we have u nd May to giv us drool worthy Mithvi scenes!!!😃Da expressions were expressed sooo beautifully!!!!!I m dreaming agn...Thank u so much Saba!Plz kip more coming fast?!😉Oh nd i ws also laughing myslf to bits wid ur descriptions of Prithvi according to Meera..🤣Nd Prithvi's description ws like...☺️☺️☺️So loved it!Relished it!U jst made my day!Thank u Saba for writing dis wonderful FF!!!🤗Plz kip mre coming?Ur nd May's FFs r like oxygen to me in dis present stifling stench🤢 of DB track...😉So plz update fast?!!😃😃😃

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awida

@awida

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Saba I want to hug you..

Your discreption of Prithvi's looks is unbeleivable.

You showed us Our Prithvi.

You have a lot of love to this caracter and succeeded to make us feel the same.

The powerful rustic arrogant yet sensitive Prithvi ..

I like Meera also . But Prithvi is already more than liking her .

This is charming ..

Can't wait till the next chapter.

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Junoonian

@Junoonian

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Did very little in establishing him as a peace loving guy - very nice Saba. If looks could speak for a person you character description just did.
Very good job Saba n Meera's self talk is so funny. I like that. 😊

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ
Freaking Awesome Saba!!!!!👍🏼Loved it!Loved it!Loved it to bits!!!!!😃Who needs da crappy serial track of present when we have u nd May to giv us drool worthy Mithvi scenes!!!😃Da expressions were expressed sooo beautifully!!!!!I m dreaming agn...Thank u so much Saba!Plz kip more coming fast?!😉Oh nd i ws also laughing myslf to bits wid ur descriptions of Prithvi according to Meera..🤣Nd Prithvi's description ws like...☺️☺️☺️So loved it!Relished it!U jst made my day!Thank u Saba for writing dis wonderful FF!!!🤗Plz kip mre coming?Ur nd May's FFs r like oxygen to me in dis present stifling stench🤢 of DB track...😉So plz update fast?!!😃😃😃

Thanks Tehsina 🤗

I am so so happy that you liked the update so much , you comments are to die for , thanks again 🤗 and you are spoiling me too much with such wonderful comments..😳

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: awida
Saba I want to hug you..

Your discreption of Prithvi's looks is unbeleivable.

You showed us Our Prithvi.

You have a lot of love to this caracter and succeeded to make us feel the same.

The powerful rustic arrogant yet sensitive Prithvi ..

I like Meera also . But Prithvi is already more than liking her .

This is charming ..

Can't wait till the next chapter.

🤗🤗🤗

Thanks awida for the wonderful comments, I am so glad that I was successful in describing Prithvi features the way we loved him 😃