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Posted: 4 months ago
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Hum log sahi mein pitenge

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Waiting for commentssmiley42

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Originally posted by: Priyaadarshini

I love this chapter so much! There's something fairytale -ish about it. Very bollywood Rom com coded. And this phase of love story is my favourite but you truly do it so beautifully smiley27

>> Thank you Priyasmiley31 I luv the pre-confession and early phases of confession in any love story... it's such a tingling phase


It's so nice to see the dynamics of ahmad household and that jalal's parents get to see their son moving out from the shadows of the things that happened in his life before.

>> Yeah... things are settling down in the Ahmed household.

You have such astute insights in the human psyche!!

>> I attribute it to the epic texts - Mahabharat and Bhagavata Purana - where we get to see all kinds of shady characters and get to know their twisted thought processes.

because this shyam kumar is very convincing. But while he is bitter about the system being corrupt and people being apathetic, he is more bitter about not being able to be corrupt and enjoy those perks. If he were rich, he would still be the same since it's clearly the mentality that Makes him a villain and not his poverty.

>> yeah... choosing between right or wrong is the work of mentality not of circumstances as people claim.

Also in Rao we have an example of how a little streak of envy could take such hideous form. I'm not convinced that he is manipulated as much as he claims since he could have stopped at any point of time and he did not even after seeing the consequences first hand.

>> Which person would agree that he was innately bad... everyone thinks he has been manipulated by others otherwise he'd have been of pristine character smiley36

So I assume how Rao intends to inherit that estate is by forging the signature? Since even after jodha her bade papa will become a nominee?

>> Forgery yes! But he didn't plan to inherit himself.. I will explain what he intended to do in upcoming chapters..

Your parody rhymes have to die with you because they’ll make no sense to the children born into Ahmed household.

Hehe love how matter of fact her musings are. Madam is ready.smiley2

>> lol... yeah... dulhan, dulha both are ready... shehnai bhajana hi baki hain

Good bye hug?” One second she repeated in confusion, and in the next she squealed, springing up. “You’re here?”

As excited as jodha is! I didn't see this coming.smiley36smiley9

>> Aww... after that much persuasion how could banda not come?smiley37

He swore, making a mental note to never spring surprise visits on this crazy woman


Hopefully soon iski jarurat bhi nahi hogi. Mostly on rare occasions smiley9smiley41

>> haa... soonsmiley2

You little monkey.” Hugging her backside tightly against his throbbing chest, Jalal hissed. “You will never do that again.”

Sugar quota for this week is fulfilled smiley9smiley36smiley27

>> yep... Monkey bhi khush... hum bhi khushsmiley36

Badi aayi country chicken

Incapable of letting even a single slight gosmiley36😭

🤣🤣

>> Boss for a reasonsmiley36

You think I conjure all kinds of situations in advance and keep a stockpile of stories ready for dispatch?! I’ll think of it when the time comes.”

Going by your track record miss..🤣

>> Ladki has selective amnesia... she forgot her track recordsmiley37


Saradhi emerged from the shadows of the overhead tank, his forehead furrowed.


Lawyer sahab turning jasoos

I absolutely love both pair of jodha's parents but especially saradhi ji!! He is so steady and open minded as was her father in fact from what we know!

>> yeah... the brothers share similar mindset ... lawyer saab


Why are you playing so hard to get, you rogue! Makeup to the poor girl… now!”


Abdul and Chetan are on team jodha just like me 🤭smiley36

>> Good because all girls here are on Team Jalal. Team Jo was falling behind.smiley36

This update is so beautiful and dreamy. Thank you for your hard work and dedication to this story jahnu dismiley27smiley31

>> I too enjoyed writing this part Priya... I hope I don't lose the momentum to finish this story

I really hope you publish someday di. It doesn't matter whether it is this story or another brand new story. smiley27

I really hope you publish someday di. It doesn't matter whether it is this story or another brand new story. smiley27

>> I highly doubt it... the pace at which I write, I don't expect to finish a novel in this lifetimesmiley37

Thankyou for taking time and sharing your thoughts about the update.. c ya soonsmiley31

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Originally posted by: hemakeerti

I really hope you publish someday di. It doesn't matter whether it is this story or another brand new story. smiley27

>> I highly doubt it... the pace at which I write, I don't expect to finish a novel in this lifetimesmiley37

Thankyou for taking time and sharing your thoughts about the update.. c ya soonsmiley31

In your defence, novels are rarely that long especially in the genre of romance. And like anushka said we would like it if you published this one!!

Indian romance stories are sometimes too cliche and stereotypical or at least some of them are. You are so good and such a natural at this. Like in this era where people have low attention span, your story continues to hold it effortlessly. I hope you will consider itsmiley9

Lot of people these days have written on website first and then after the response, published the story latersmiley42smiley27

Thank you Priya I luv the pre-confession and early phases of confession in any love story... it's such a tingling phase

Oh yeah that too!! The will they won't they phasesmiley42

>> I attribute it to the epic texts - Mahabharat and Bhagavata Purana - where we get to see all kinds of shady characters and get to know their twisted thought processes

I haven't read bhagwat purana but I really love mahabharata too. Like this one story has it all!! You get everything that you want and of course there's kanhasmiley27

>> Which person would agree that he was innately bad... everyone thinks he has been manipulated by others otherwise he'd have been of pristine character

It's possible that I'm biased then and there's lot of information that is missing as of yet

>> lol... yeah... dulhan, dulha both are ready... shehnai bhajana hi baki hain

Dulha Dulhan taiyaar hai but pandit ji ki kami hai ab jab woh aayengi tab kuch hosmiley37

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Posted: 4 months ago
#65

Originally posted by: Priyaadarshini

In your defence, novels are rarely that long especially in the genre of romance. And like anushka said we would like it if you published this one!!

sanga sanga tumhi ch kaytari

Te aikat nahi ami mhatlo tar smiley36 PBD lokpriyatela patra aahe .. mhanun mi insta account pan banavla .. 🤪

I would love to read PBD as a novel ..

That is ofcourse if she updates soon smiley7

Inpe chodha toh she will never update smiley37

Alright Jahnu dii, from now on we..the readers.. will be giving you the deadlines. You’ll need to post updates on or before those dates. And if you can’t make it..the reason better be a solid one. Got it?smiley15

Imagine us as ur boss in office smiley15

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Originally posted by: nushhkiee

sanga sanga tumhi ch kaytari

Te aikat nahi ami mhatlo tar smiley36 PBD lokpriyatela patra aahe .. mhanun mi insta account pan banavla .. 🤪

I would love to read PBD as a novel ..

That is ofcourse if she updates soon smiley7

Inpe chodha toh she will never update smiley37

Alright Jahnu dii, from now on we..the readers.. will be giving you the deadlines. You’ll need to post updates on or before those dates. And if you can’t make it..the reason better be a solid one. Got it?smiley15

Imagine us as ur boss in office smiley15

Apan ekach team madhye aahesmiley16

Also on the team for more one shots please smiley42smiley2

On that note though I checked the insta account and it made me want to read PBD again. Waiting for scenes from this chapter smiley27

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Posted: 4 months ago
#67

Originally posted by: Priyaadarshini

Apan ekach team madhye aahesmiley16

Also on the team for more one shots please smiley42smiley2

On that note though I checked the insta account and it made me want to read PBD again. Waiting for scenes from this chapter smiley27

Just checked?

Follow karo smiley36

Yes yes ... till the time u update treat us with oneshots pls

I loved "Interview with the Vampire" wala

Was re reading yesterday itself

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Originally posted by: nushhkiee

Just checked?

Follow karo smiley36

Yes yes ... till the time u update treat us with oneshots pls

I loved "Interview with the Vampire" wala

Was re reading yesterday itself

Follow already kelech aahe. Aata me navin post check kelya fakt

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Waiting for commentssmiley42

Waiting for Part 2 smiley14smiley15

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Originally posted by: nushhkiee

Hum log sahi mein pitenge

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