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Posted: 4 months ago
#91

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Omg what a update.....too many things unfolding in single chapter..What to say.... jealousy, envy, anger blinded humans to forget thirty years of friendship..... True.... money has power which make people dance in it's tune.

These days money destroyed many family, relationship whatever.

Starting is beautiful.... I really like usmanji point of view about Jalal and Aliya.....so true na why to blame only Aliya..... Jalal always knew Aliya and her views despite that he married her...not judging one but it's true.... marriage is not a business na ..... But yes Jalal is the one who suffered most.

Glad to know usmanji has an idea why his son behaving normal not pretending.... because of certain someone.

About the Rao..... How can somebody manipulate 30th years long relationship until and unless your own ego and jealousy doesn't make you blind....trust me Rao your own guilt eat you up oneday....not a single peaceful night you will spend..... gosh you destroyed one beautiful and happy family to satisfy your ego.

God... Seriously love change people so much ....our jodha acting weird and all.... and our Jalal what's his plans?

Another good news in the chapter....saradhi got to know about them ...and he is happy for his daughter.

Families are happy for them.... what else they want.

Thank you so much for the update....it means lot you know....worth waiting.

Please don't be disappoint because of less likes and comments.

Hope and pray you are doing well and your family!

Waiting eagerly for the next one !

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Posted: 4 months ago
#92

Sorry for the second post ....i want to edit something but it quoted again!

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Posted: 4 months ago
#93

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

>> It needs lot of rework even to put up on Kindle. I'm not sure if its worth the effort or spend it on a new story.


You are underestimating yourself and this story

You are underestimating the standards needed to go public smiley36

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Posted: 4 months ago
#94

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

YOU are saying this?

Who came up with such a unique plot ?? (Interview with vampire)

Agar plots nahi soojh rahe toh pls expand Vampire wala ...that is my really really favorite one!

Interview with Vampire was written for Kalgi22's birthday. Her pen name inspired the plot. And I have no expansion idea for it.. but will keep your request in mind... when something inspires will definitely pen it... but I don't want it to be just Jodha and Jalal FF or OS which is why in some I avoided taking names. I need to figure out a platform where I can write and post. Blogs used to be there but I don't know if people still use blogspots

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Posted: 4 months ago
#95

nah.. was just fooling around with Priya's retort that I'm the one who's delaying Jalal and Jodha's marriage

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Posted: 4 months ago
#96

Originally posted by: Priyaadarshini

>> yeah.. true...I too need to practice how to keep it short and simple. PBD has grown itself out of proportion... much more than I originally conceived.

I don't think any of us are ever going to complain about the length. And to be fair, this story also counts as a murder mystery? So the length is not unjustified.

>> you simply love me too much... that's all


>> It needs lot of rework even to put up on Kindle. I'm not sure if its worth the effort or spend it on a new story

I guess lot of work must go before publishing a story which you must know and I don't so can't say anything about that.

And the temptation of a new story is far too great smiley9smiley42

And the temptation of a new story is far too great

>> hopefully somedaysmiley31

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Posted: 4 months ago
#97

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Omg what a update.....too many things unfolding in single chapter..What to say.... jealousy, envy, angry blinded humans to forget thirty years of friendship..... True.... money has power which make people dance in it's tune.

>> Yeah.. tidbits of everyone and everything came together in this updatesmiley31

These days money destroyed many family, relationship whatever.

Starting is beautiful.... I really like usmanji point of view about Jalal and Aliya.....so true na why to blame only Aliya..... Jalal always knew Aliya and her views despite that he married her...not judging one but it's true.... marriage is not a business na ..... But yes Jalal is the one who suffered most.

>> Right... just one person can't be blamed for a failed relationship.

Glad to know usmanji has an idea why his son behaving normal not pretending.... because of certain someone.

>> Parents...I tell ya! There is no hiding from them!smiley36

About the Rao..... How can somebody manipulate 30th years long relationship until and unless your own ego and jealousy doesn't make you blind....trust me Rao your own guilt eat you up oneday....not a single peaceful night you will spend..... gosh you destroyed one beautiful and happy family to satisfy your ego.

>> Envy has its way of making people irrational... history is evidence to it... but like you said every one is answerable to their conscience if not to others... guilt is the greatest punishment they've to suffer through even if they're uncaught legally

God... Seriously love change people so much ....our jodha acting weird and all.... and our Jalal what's his plans?

Another good news in the chapter....saradhi got to know about them ...and he is happy for his daughter.

Families are happy for them.... what else they want.

>> Families are happy because of the past circumstances of their children. Had it been a normal situation all types of variables like caste, religion, status, would have risen. Human psychology is funny. When there is a bigger problem, other things which mattered most at one point seems to be negligible. smiley36

Thank you so much for the update....it means lot you know....worth waiting.

Please don't be disappoint because of less likes and comments.

Hope and pray you are doing well and your family!

Waiting eagerly for the next one !

I'm doing well and hope everything is fine with you too. Thanks for taking time and dropping bysmiley31

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Posted: 4 months ago
#98

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

You are underestimating the standards needed to go public smiley36

Naah

I have read Colleen Hoover

I have read many novels which are top 10 blah blah

And I highly recommend Pale Blue Dot smiley42

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Posted: 4 months ago
#99

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Interview with Vampire was written for Kalgi22's birthday. Her pen name inspired the plot. And I have no expansion idea for it.. but will keep your request in mind... when something inspires will definitely pen it... but I don't want it to be just Jodha and Jalal FF or OS which is why in some I avoided taking names. I need to figure out a platform where I can write and post. Blogs used to be there but I don't know if people still use blogspots

PBD ne aise jagah banayi hai dil mein...ki aap kuch bhi likho... we will imagine jodha akkineni and jalal ahmed only

but if u do write then let us know

and yes pls if possible agar vampire ka epilogue types mil jaaye kuch toh smiley43

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Posted: 4 months ago

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

PBD ne aise jagah banayi hai dil mein...ki aap kuch bhi likho... we will imagine jodha akkineni and jalal ahmed only

but if u do write then let us know

and yes pls if possible agar vampire ka epilogue types mil jaaye kuch toh smiley43

smiley37smiley37 naughty girl..

btw, your PBD IG posts are simplysmiley27

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