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Mera Maasoom Patidev

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PROLOGUE


A girl sitting on sofa with sad face..she thinking seriously..her face expression shown how much she feel bad for something.

20's age lady : what happened my princess ,why u sad

girl: bhabhi..i did mistake

bhabhi: what u did it, tell me clearly

girl: oh i slapped him but he was not his mistake..with guilty voice

bhabhi: but why u slapped him

girl: today i went to temple..outside of temple i am buying pooja item suddenly some one pinch my waist..i turned and slapped him

bhabhi: he pinched u,so u slapped ..why u r guilty ..with angry face.

girl: but he was not pinched me..

bhabhi: what he is not then who misbehaved to u..

girl: i dont know ...

bhabhi: dont confuse me

girl: i slapped him...after he run out the place..

some children come infront of me shout how dare u slap my friend..he didnt pinch u..that bad uncle only pinched ur waist not my friend..

bhabhi: stop ...friend, uncle...mean u slapped that man whose is younger than u..

girl: no bhabhi...he is not look like younger than me..but he look like prince charm,handsome body,sparkling eyes...with dreamy face..but he so innocent..he called me didi..with irritating face

bhabhi: kya...with shocked expression..he called u di..with burst her laughed

girl: bhabhi, dont laugh,i already feel sad he call me didi..

after i slapped,he carrying his own cheek...said dadi,di slapped me...with moist eyes.. and run out..

bhabhi:ur dulhan raja calling u di...

girl: bhabhi..he is not my dulhan raja with angry face..( in heart happy hearing my dulhan raja)

bhabhi: i understood u not sad for slapped him but u sad because he called u ,di...right once again laughed loudly...

girl went out inside murmuring: bhabhi teasing me so much...tomorrow first i asking sry and mainly tell him...iam not his sister...with irritating face..






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Character sketch

Jalal uddin Mohammed: he is 24 yrs old..he so innocent,nave like child.but not special child ( disabled person)..he is world around only his dadimaa.he is growing man but dont know anything about cruel world.in his small age his parents died in accident. After his parents died ,every property take care by dadi'sister son he scared his badi papa and badi maa.he love her sister( badipapa 's daughter) and his friend bubblu,chutki etc..(only children..)

( dont laugh guys..really Jalal innocent characterLOLLOLLOL )


Hamida Banu Mohammed: she is old lady..after her son and daughter in law died she handover every property to her sister 's son..now that decision only worried about Jalal future..he want Jalal marry with good and brave girl..

Gabir: badipapa of Jalal.he want rule Mohammed empire with full power unfortunately everything under Jalal name.

Noor : badimaa of Jalal .same character like his husband.she have one son and daughter.


Adham: he is bad guy..,flirty and worst person even he did not care about his own sister..

Samira: (jalal badipapa daughter )she is lovely girl.she love Jalal more than herself.she only save Jalal from her parents beating.she want Jalal marry with brave girl..

Jodha family

Jodha bharmal: she is 21 yrs old..abroad return.she is brave,good heart person.she love her family.now waiting for her dulhan raja


mohinder and rano bharmal: mohinder is business man.he handled some Mohammed business also.he is kindness person and rano is sweet mother.


sujamal and simar bharmal:sujamal is protective brother and helping his father business and simar is lovely daughter in law and friendly bhabhi of Jodha.


Harman: best friend of Jodha..

upcoming parts u all know about every character fully..i will add some more also...

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CHAPTER 1


...A room showing how much happiness in their life.room full of smiling couples photos..moon light hits girl face..A girl face glowing but not insake of moonlight because of her happiness..a girl sitting in sofa and starring at moon..

Girl: u know baby,I and mera maasoom patidev or ur innocent papa when we met first time..remembered that incident automatically broad smiled appeared in her face.

Flashback start

Jodha : Bhabhi teasing me so much.tomorrow first I will meet him and then asking sry to him..haha mainly said him that iam not his sister...with irritating face.

Next day

Jodha ready for going her adventure and come downstairs..already everyone in dinning table.

Jodha joined them and simar serve breakfast to everyone

Jodha: Good morning with smiling face

Mohinder : Good morning Princess

Sujamal: Good morning sweetheart

Simar: Good morning di..with teasing tone.

Jodha : Bhabhi with grinned teeth..

Sujamal: Simar why u calling my sweetheart to dii...with same teasing tone.

Jodha: Bhai..with angry face..

Rano: Why everyone teasing my Princess..

Jodha: Love u maa

Rano: I love u too baby, her dulhan Raja only calling to di..

Everyone burst their laughing and Jodha irritating her family teasing.

Jodha: He is not my dulhan Raja..everyone got it.. and went out immediately

Jodha cursing her dulhan Raja in her mind..

Jodha come to temple and searching her chota bhai...sry sry..dulhan Raja..LOLLOLLOL

Man sitting in corner of temple pond throwing stone to water with sad face.

Man thinking something..

Man: How could i do...it is wrong but shona said do it..with puppy face

Last night

Man sitting in his room with sad face..

A girl touched his shoulder and his head raised up looking girl with sad face..

Girl: Jalal bhai..why u sad if anyone said anything to u..

Jalal nods his head innocently : Oh...shona

Girl:iam ur baby sister right..

Jalal nods his head forcefully: Ha shona ..

Samira: Then tell me why u sad.

Jalal: Di slapped me...with sobbing and innocent face...he narrated morning temple incident to his sis.( prologue)

Samira: How dare she..she slapped u but u ran out from that place without doing anything with angry voice

Jalal: Yes...with innocent face.

Samira: Bhai, why u not slap her..atleast shout her.

Jalal: shona cool down..it is wrong, slap anyone mainly girls..with pout face

Samira: But u didn't any mistake but she slapped u. so she deserves punishment..

Jalal: No shona..she look like doll with sheepish smile

Samira : bhai ,She slapped u but u saying she look like doll..tomorrow u will slap her otherwise I am not talk with u..with angry face

Jalal half heartly accept her wish.

Jalal come back to original..

Jalal throw stones to water continuously.

Jodha standing next to Jalal

Jodha: What r u thinking

Jalal head raised looked at Jodha : Hmm.thinking how to slap u ..flowly said..

Jodha eyes popped: what..with shout voice.

Jalal stand up : Di...with stammering voice

Jodha shout: What u said now.

Jalal placed his both hand to both cheeks and nods his head negatively

Jodha: Tell me

Jalal: Oh...di...thinking how to slap u..with stammering voice

Jodha more irritating hears di word from his cute lips

Jodha: Chup bikul chup.First iam not ur di..don't call me didi..u understand with angry voice

Jalal nods his head both positive and negative randomly.

Jodha: Open ur mouth and said i am not ur sister.

Jalal: U only said don't talk with pout face..

Jodha : Now u can speak and say iam not ur sister with irritate face

Jalal: Iam not ur sister with..stammering voice.

Jodha slaps her head:hey babaji...plz save me from this kid

Jalal : iam not kid with cute angry face

Jodha: haha.. ur not kid ,Call me Jodha not di.

Jalal: Tika Jodhaji...with slow voice

Jodha ( mind): he thought iam older than him..now Jodhaji..hey Kannaji...ok leave it Jodha atleast he called Jodhaji not di...that horrible word..

Jodha: hmm why u want slap me..

Jalal: my shona want slap u..so I want to slap u..otherwise she don't want talk to me..

Jodha: who's shona...with angry voice...( jealous)

Jalal: my baby sister..yesterday u slapped me but I did nt any mistake..with pout face

Jodha : oh ur sister. ( her face become calm and relived ).but u don't beat ur friend right.

Jalal: ha I am not beat my friends..but ...with scratching his hair..

Jodha: I thought ur my friend..iam sry yesterday I slapped u..friends..give her right hand to shake..

Jalal lower eyes seeing Jodha face: ha I accept ur friendship but before I slap u otherwise my shona not talk with me ...cute face

Jodha rolled her eyes: ok don't slap hardly ..

Jalal slapped her like feather touched her cheek..Jodha fake sad look to Jalal

Jalal: sry.Jodhaji .i slapped u hardly right...iam bad guy..i slapped girl continuously cursing himself..

Jodha smiled: no yaar..but u did not slap me..u touch my cheek..

Jalal : u teasing me..dont talk and iam not ur friend..with childish angry face.

Jodha pulled his both cheeks : sry baba..ok I will give treat ..u forgive me..

Jalal smiled broadly: panipuri with icecream

Jodha: done..but till now u not say ur name..

Jalal hit his forehead: oh I forgot..iam Jalal uddin Mohammed..with proudly said.

Jodha: Ok Mr Mohammed..lets go icecream parlour..

Icecream parlour..

Jalal eating more than..10 icecream..and Jodha surprised his behavior..he is grow man..but itna maasoom..how is it possible..

Jalal: Jodhaji , why u starring my icecream ..iam not give u..hided icecream to his back.

Jodha chuckled face: I have my own icecream..i don't want urs continue eat her icecream

Jalal laughed seeing Jodha face because some icecream stick in her nose..

Jodha: hey Jalal why u laughing..and mesmerized seeing his innocent laugh

Jalal laughing voice: u look like joker.. pointed icecream stick on her nose

Jodha glare to Jalal : wipe it yaar..

Jalal close to Jodha and Jodha heart beat rapid fastly...Jalal cleaned icecream through his tongue..

Jodha stunned : Jalal what u did..with shocked expression.

Jalal: cleaned ur nose said with calmly.

Jodha: u use tissue paper not ur tongue..with little harsh tone

Jalal: but juilee wiped this way only..with confused look.

Jodha: juilee..

Jalal: oh Jodhaji I forgot..i need go..dadi waiting for me..

Jalal kiss her cheeks : thanks for treat..see u later..went out immediately.

Jodha eyes popped remembering he kissed her cheek...and also blushing..

Jodha mind: who's juileee..my dulhan Raja ka girlfriend...with angry face even he kissed me.with blushing face .hey Jodha what r u thinking.ur dulhan Raja...hey ladka mujhe pagal kar degi..

Part end



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Part 2

Jodha come back to bharmal mansion with angry face.

Mohi: Princess, what happened why u angry ..u dulhan Raja said anything with teasing tone

Jodha: dad don't call him to my dulhan Raja..he's name is Jalal Mohammed..call him Jalal and he just my friend went inside to her room with angry face

Rano: she saying about our Jalal i means Naasira and Bahsir bhai sahib ka beta Jalal..

Mohi: i think so..because Jalal is very nave and innocent.every time i meet him and hamida maaji she worried about Jalal future..she scared if Jalal badipaa family do anything with Jalal.

Rano: haan ji last weeks also i met hamida maaji she said about they torturing Jalal beta..i hope god will give bring them happiness soon

Mohi: they fate rano.every properties under Jalal name but his badepapa family enjoyed his money even though they torturing him.

Rano: time god every properties Jalal name otherwise they throw out them outside..

Mohi: u r right..rano hmmm time will be give solution for them ...i don't know why Jodha upset..u go to check her.if she is alright or not

Rano: Haaji ur princess only know how to angry..I don't know whose one today she slapped

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Jodha room

Jodha rolling her bed one side to Other side thinking deeply about juilee..

Jodha: Whose juilee..if she is Jalal girlfriend..nahi...no she is not my Jalal gf.why u confusing ur self straightly ask to him..Jodha called Jalal house landline number..

Jodha: Hello..can i speak to Jalal

Man: Really u want Jalal baba..with doubting voice

Jodha: Why u have doubt , I want to speak Jalal..with harsh tone

Man:nahi madamji..Jalal baba with juilee..wait a few minutes I will call him

Jodha eyes popped: In night time why juilee with him..

Jalal: Hello whose ..is this ..heavy breathing voice..

Jodha : What happened Jalal why u breathing fastly...u alright with worried tone

Jalal: Oh Jodhaji..juilee running behind me..i tried to stop her but she not leave me..she make me wet...with innocent voice

Jodha: Kya wet...with eyes popped out..

Jalal: Juilee..leave me...u twinkling me..i cannot control..

Jodha: He cannot control...hey babaji..chi chi...Jodha put down phone harshly

Jalal: Jodhajj...I think line is disconnected..

Jodha sleep away from her and she crushing Jalal in all languages.

Next day

Same place Jodha meet Jalal yesterday..

Jodha angry mood sitting in temple pond and Jalal sit next to her

Jodha angry glare to Jalal: Why u sit next with Me with angry tone

Jalal: What happened Jodhaji, u talk rudely with me..

Jodha: yesterday what happened

Jalal: Jodhaji u have memory loss problem..yesterday we meet ..we solved our fight and we become friends..suddenly u forgot everything..u need consult doctor Jodhaji...with innocent face

Jodha irritating more: I did not ask yesterday morning incident and yesterday night what happened with juliee and u

Jalal: oh u ask about juilee..she so cute..in night time she not leave me single minutes..she always roaming behind me.

Jodha: chi chi..kannaji..i thought u r innocent but u r shameless.

Jalal with checked his dress himself : iam shamelesss..Jodhaji .. I wore proper dress why u saying iam shamless.with confused face

Jodha hit her forehead: leave Jalal u not understand anything..iam going...Jodha get up..

Jalal pulled Jodha hand..and Jodha sit in his lap insake of Jalal pull..

Jodha :starring Jalal ...Jalal mesmerised her almond eyes..

Jalal: Jodha ji u more heavy..plz standup from my lap..

Jodha glare to Jalal and get up in his lap: ha iam heavy but ur juilee is not heavy right with taunting tone

Jalal: ha..she is light weight..sometime she sleep above me..but I never sensed her weight.

Jodha eyes popped : enough..i hate u..Jalal with left the place.

Jalal: what happen to Jodhaji..why she angry with me..

Jalal run behind Jodha and Jodha not stopped..finally Jalal come infront of her.

Jalal: Jodhaji, iam going to icecream parlour..u come with me with puppy face

Jodha: iam not..u go with ur juilee

Jalal: parlour owner not allow juilee inside. He scaring look at juilee

Jodha: why she is any ghost with angry face.

Jalal: nahi..because juilee licking in his foot..he not liked it..even iam aslo not liked her behaviour..

Jodha: kya licking..she is a dog..she licking to everyone foot..with chuckled face

Jalal: ha..she is my pet dog, juilee..

Jodha: what u said juilee is ur pet dog..with shocking face..

Jalal: why u shocked with innocent face

Jodha: then yesterday night..u have heavy breathe and said not control

Jalal: juilee and mine playing ..she running behind me..so i take heavy breathe because of running and licking my foot..it make me twinkle..i cannot control my laughter..why u asking more question ..

Jodha smiled brightly (mind): Jodha u r stupid..juilee is only dog..u imagined more about juilee and Jalal..iam sry Jalal..

Jodha phoned ringed..and pickup call

Jodha: hello bhai

Sujamal: Jodha where r u..iam in hospital , u forgot today we need go to hospital

Jodha: iam sry..few minutes iam coming..wait for me and cut the call

Jodha: Jalal u come with me..

Jalal: where Jodhaji

Jodha: hospital Jalal

Jalal nods his head negatively: no iam not coming hospital..iam scaring seeing injection..no iam not...with scaring face

Jodha chuckled: u come with me..today..my bhabhi ka first sonar scan..i am exciting seeing my bhai baby first time PLz..

Jalal: baby,I love baby..ok I will come but no injection ok..

Hospital

Akdha enter hospital entrance..already sujamal and simar waiting for Jodha

Jodha: sry bhabhi..iam late..

Sujamal: no problem..sweetheart..

Simar whispher Jodha hairs: oh he is ur dulhan Raja ...with teasing tone

Jodha blushed : bhabhi..bhai..he is maaan and Jalal he is my bhai and pyaari bhabhi..

Jalal shakes his hand with sujamal and smiled to simar..

Jalal: simar di..where is ur baby..Jodhaji said first time time ur baby..where is ur baby..with innocent face

Simar: really he so nave and innocent..i like him so much..

Jodha: Jalal shut up..

Nurse said ..u go inside..everyone went inside..

Doctor checked simar and scanning simar stomach through sonar scan equipment..simar and sujamal looking baby with moist eyes..Jodha exciting seeing baby dot.

Jalal confused : why everyone so emotional

Jodha: first time we seeing our baby Jalal

Jalal: but I cannot see any baby..

Jodha pointed to tv screen : this dot is baby Jalal

Jalal: u lieing Jodhaji..how dot become baby ..even baby also live in door room like in my childhood I live in dark room with sad face

Jodha shocked hearing word and mind thought: what he live in dark room..i need talk with Jalal

Doctor: nahi beta..baby not in dark room..baby live in mother stomach..it is safest place more than outside..

Jalal: oh..then ok but it is so dark..baby not scaring like iam scaring with innocent face

Doctor smiled: baby is brave so baby not scaring anyone..

Jalal: ok..but..baby how to eat..

Jodha: Jalal plz stop ur question bank..baby eat through simar bhabhi..so stop ur question today..

Doctor: Mr sujamal plz stay away from simar...it is good for baby and simar..u understand what iam saying..

Sujamal: yes doctor..with little embrass face..

Sujamal hold simar hand protectively and walking corridor..

Jalal: Jodhaji, u bhai is not good man

Jodha: why u saying my bhai is not good with confused face

Jalal: docor said..sujamal bhai stay away from simar di..but see sujamal bhai not leave simar di single minute alone..it is not good for baby and simar di..

Jodha hits her forehead: hey babaji he make me pagal soon..Jalal doctor not said this closeness...

Jalal: iam not understand..

Jodha: hey babaji plz bachooo mujhe..how explain to him about passionate..i don't know who married u..that girl really poor one...god only help her..

Obviously that girl ur only Jodha..hehehe...

Jodha: Jalal don't think more..lets go outside..

****

Jalal enter km..with jolly face

Jalal stop that place...with heavy voice

Jalal legs shivering seeing that person..

Part end

Precap: Jodha meet someone.. Jalal jealous...Jalal crying ..jalal beat by someoneCryCryCry



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Part 3

Jalal enter Mohammed mansion entrance and remembering outing with Jodha.and his face glowing and grinning like child..his happy vanish after heared roaring voice.

Jalal..stop here with heavy and dominating harsh voice from inside the mansion.

Jalal face change to pale and his body shivering hearing man voice.A 50 + old man and early 20's young man stood next that oldman.

Jalal: ji...bad...e papa..with stammering..his tongue rolling even he cannot complete single word from his own mouth.

Yeah old man none other is Jalal's badepapa and young man is Jalal's cousin ( badipapa son)

Note: guys .i clear one think ..Jalal parents already died in his childhood.( Gabir and Noor Jalal badipapa and badi maa ..hamida sister s son and daughter in law..they r not Mohammed..but Mohammed 's and every property managed by Jalal's badi papa..yeah everything under by Jalal name only..they made Jalal to puppet for them.)

Badipapa shout voice: in whole day ,where r u went.i already said don't go anywhere.without my permission,where u went with angry face

Jalal eyes bow down to ground: ji badipapa ..i went to met my friend with shivering tone

Thud thud sound..

Opps Gabir ( jalal badipapa) slapped Jalal cheek..not one time ..he slapping continuously..

Jalal corner lips cut insake of cruel slap by his badipapa..Jalal felt down to ground not tolerate his hard slap..his tears flowing in his cheeks..his whole body shivering .

.in crying voice..iam not going anywhere ...badipapa..plz don't beat me..with stammering and shivering said Jalal.

Adham: dad why hurt ur hand to slap that stupid.(Adham.give his belt to his dad)..Gabir start beating Jalal through belt. Jalal held badipapa leg begging stop beating him..

Jalal: plz..badipapa forgive me don't beat me .with sobbing voice..

Adham and Gabir smiled seeing Jalal begging to save his life..

Adham: dad,he did not obey my words.iam right Jalal bhai..with smirked face.

Jalal: Promise badi papa,i doing everything what chotu bhai said..with placed his hand to crown head

Gabir neglect Jalal innocent promise and once again tired to beat Jalal but some one held his hand behind him.

Gabir turn look at person : Noor,leave my hand.today if I forgive him, he roaming everywhere without our knowledge with hard voice.

Noor: Gabir ji ..he is kid..dont slap like animal with motherly love voice.

Gabir: but Noor..Noor gestured stop showing her hand to Gabir

Gabir throw belt to corner of room with disgusting face.

Noor shout : Ram Singh..Ram Singh

(Ram singh.is mohammed mansion old servant)

Ram Singh running from kitchen ..ji malkin .and Ram Singh seeing Jalal state and his body bleeding .

Noor: Ram Singh, help Jalal settle to his room. With heavy hearted Ram Singh helped Jalal to escort to his room..

Jalal room

Jalal room is small room and single cot and ceiling fan only there is no ac any luxuries things.

Ram Singh helped Jalal to sit in his bed and sit next to Jalal and carrying his hairs smoothly

Ram Singh: Jalal baba..if ur parents alive , u live in ur mansion like prince..but today they beat daily like ur slave for them with tears rolling in his eyes..

Jalal hand wiped Ram Singh tears and placed his head to Ram Singh lap: why kaka..my parents leave me alone. Because iam not good child ..my parents not love me .they hate me then only they went to god place with crying voice.

Ram Singh: no Jalal baba. Malkins ( Jalal parents) love u so much.in ur childhood they died in car accident.that day u want stay in mansion with maaji ( dadi) u don't want go with ur parents..otherwise u also die in that car accident..time god u escaped .

Jalal: if iam going to them..i am also die na, Ram Singh kaka..i am happily live with my parents..even god also hate me then only god separate my parents from me .

Jalal beta ...voice came from Jalal door steps

Jalal raised his head : dadi...with sad face.

Jalal tried to sit in bed and his body pain shout: ahhaa...

Dadi running to held Jalal and Jalal lips crept little smile..

Dadi helped lay down to bed and dadi sit near Jalal head and her hand carring his hairs with teary eyes.

Jalal: dadi, plz don't cry..i am alright with little smile.

Dadi: everything my mistake , if I am not gave power of attorney to Gabir ..this is not happen in ur life.u enjoyed ur life .

Jalal: dadi , u never did mistake. U r best dadi in the world.even I enjoyed my life with dadi, Ram Singh kaka, choti, chutiki, bubblu , and Jodha ji with little blushing face.

Dadi : Jodha ,u did not before mention her name with confused face.

Jalal: oh , Jodhaji my new friend..look at Ram Singh signed him bring haldi paste for Jalal. Ram Singh left

Dadi selfthought: Jodha is school kid..Jalal mingled with kids easily. His friend everyone kids only.

Jalal: dadi, what u thinking..

Dadi: nothing beta, if she have leave time bring her to our mansion.

Jalal: who dadi

Dadi: Jodha

Jalal: ok dadi .but leave time with confused face.

Dadi: she have school time. study is important na, beta.

Jalal mindvoice: haan, she look like doll but she studying school with confusing face, why she did not tell me.how dadi know she is studying school..i angry with her..why she hide big thing from me with pout face.

Ram Singh come inside with haldi paste bowl : maaji

Jalal come back from his thought: Ram Singh kaka , what in ur hand ..

Dadi: haldi paste for ur wound , beta

Jalal: no dadi, I don't want haldi paste for my wounds with puppy face.

Dadi: no Jalal beta ,ur wounds cure soon na..u need apply haldi paste.

Jalal nods his head negatively and hide his face inside blanket : no dadi , I don't want ..plz. it more burning my wound .

Dadi: ok .baba..u slept now..Jalal placed his head to dadi lap..Jalal dose off with dadi lap..his tears seeing in his face clearly

Dadi carring his head and Samira enter in Jalal room with teary eyes.

Samira:dadi, why u did not stop papa .everyday he beated Jalal bhai. see dadi, his arms bleeding with crying voice.

Dadi: our fate samira beta.i did not know when my Jalal get peaceful life..tears rolled in her eyes..God, plz save my child..

Noor and Gabir room

The room so big, luxuries, refrigretar, ac, everything in their room

Noor :Adham give this drink to Jalal..he injured more by ur papa beating with concerned voice

Adham: mom, today what happened with u ,first u saved that stupid from dad beating now u want I give haldi drink to Jalal . today u talk like my stupid sister with irritating face.

Noor: hmmm , u proved everytime, u have no brain..this is not ordinary milk..i mixed slow poison .if reguarly Jalal drink this slow poison..he become abnormal state..he behave like mad person.even he will attempt suicide soon with evily face..

Adham: why u take slow way to kill that stupid with disgusting face.

Noor: I never do anything without reason, go give this milk to Jalal..

Adham went to Jalal room with milk glass.

Jalal sleeping in his small bed cot..

Adham shaking Jalal arms forcibly and Jalal jerked up bed quickly..

Adham: Jalal bhai, drink this milk with sugar coated voice.

Jalal: oh ..chotu bhai..with fear face..

Adham love to see Jalal fear face with smirking face: if u did not drink this milk , I say to dad , u do not obey my word..

Jalal :nahi chotu bhai, I drink..he snatched milk from Adham hand, he drank one gulp..dont say anything to badipapa..he beat me.

Adham: why I complaint about u,u r my big bro .i did everything for ur good only..u r nave bhai..if u roaming outside alone , its not safe for u with fake concern voice.

Jalal nods his head innocently and his eyes image so bluring..

Adham: good night bhai..went out with evily smile.

Jalal slept.

( guys slow poison so ,it take more days to react in his body..)

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Bharmal mansion

Jodha rolling her bed one side to another side..

Jodha: it almost midnight ,till now I did not got sleep. My eyes not get sleep if i watch any movies..but it so boring. What I will do..her head blub glow ..

Jodha : night outing with friends but no one come with me in night time..hmm Jalal with showing her whole tooth .

Jodha dialed Jalal mansion number and Ram Singh attend call with yawning face.

Ram Singh: hello

Jodha: ji, can I speak to Jalal

Ram Singh:ji , who r u

Jodha : oh ..ha, he is my friend.

Ram Singh: ji, he is sleeping, he is health not good.u will call morning..beta.

Jodha: what happen to him with worried voice..tell me na

Ram Singh mindvoice: how I tell her, he beated by badi papa. Even I don't know what she related to Jalal baba..

Ram Singh: nothing beta,he have fever. With slow voice

Jodha: fever with whispering voice, kaka, plz tell his home address with concern face

Ram Singh sensed her concern voice and thought she is good friend of Jalal ..he told mansion address..

Jodha: thanks kaka and cut the call.

Jodha : Jalal have fever because of u ,Jodha.u only give icecream treat for him..what I did it ..he ate more icecream. But he so cute with dreamy face...I want know , if he alright or not..

Jodha jumped in window door without knowing anyone went out to see her Dulhan Raja.

******

Jodha stand infront of Mohammed mansion..

Jodha : Jalal , ur mansion really big one. Hmm..how I get inside.look at guards sleeping in sitting position.thank u kannaji..she enter mansion sliently without wake up guards.

Jodha look at sky : Kannaji, help me..find my Jalal in big mansion..if iam searching whole room na, I cannot findout him tonight..what I will do Kannaji..

Jodha decided toss coin to choose left or right .

Jodha: if head means right side or tail means left side and then.i search him

Jodha tossed : she got head face..thanks Kannaji, I search in right side of room..

She searching every room slightly..finally her legs stucked in window side. Jodha drooling his face while moon light shine..

Jodha: why he so handsome in his sleeping state also.

Jodha seeing his face only because of moon light..his bare body covered with blanket..he sleeping with cuddling in his stomach.

Jodha : he so cute ..why Kannaji, u create him like cute , handsome , innocent..i don't know whose lucky girl got him with irritate face.

Jodha hit her forehead : oh I forgot he have fever..i want check him first...he s ok or not..she jumped inside room through window.room already dark ..Jodha legs hit flower vase..vase fell down to ground.Jalal hearing noise and sit up in bed post with closed eyes..

Jalal: hey Allah, what sound with fear voice.

Jodha hide behind curtain and hearing Jalal voice and Jodha tried move to Jalal side..her payal make sound . in silent room it make more eco.

Jalal with closed eyes: payal sound, in midnight time..hey Allah surely it is booth only..with shivering face..Allah plz save me from ghost. He saying mantra continuously ..

Jodha eyes open widely : iam ghost for u with murmuring voice.

Jodha : oyie stop ur pray..i am not going anywhere with changed heavy voice.

Jalal gulped his saliva and open his eyes : plz save ur favourite child, I will give u everything..hmm what I will give u , god with scratching his own hairs.

Jodha giggled hearing his prayer : omg Jalal , u r impossible.u r original piece . there is no substitute for u with slow voice..Jodha giggling heared by Jalal

Jalal looking there and here : ghost ji, plz don't hurt me.my dadi maa said that iam good child. Bhoothji not hurt with good child na ? with slow and scary voice

Jodha chuckled face and change her voice : are u kid,Jalal ? with murmuring voice ..u answer my question then I decide about I will hurt u or not but u only said true only not any lie

Jalal hold his throat with his three fingers : promise ghostji ..i never saying lie in my life time with proud voice

Jodha: tika , mister cutie with little smile face.

Jalal: ghostji.my name is Jalal Mohammed not mister cutie..with innocent face.

Jodha rolled her eyes: I know , mister cutie, I call u only this name..Jalal nods his head

Whom u love u most in the world.

Jalal : ghostji, dadi maa with tooth smiling face.

Jodha: then

Jalal: my shona , my baby sister.

Jodha: then

Jalal: my friends.

Jodha : friends not have names with eagerly voice.

Jalal folding one after one finger said : bubblu, chutiki, raju finished everyone name except Jodha.

Jodha: let think ,mister cutie, u forgot anyone..

Jalal: ha , my juilee

Jodha hearing juile name , even she don't know why she got irritating hearing his pet name .her face fell down .he mention everyone name except me even he mentioned his pet dog, juile..with angry face.

Jodha: then what about Jodha..she is not ur friend with little angry voice

Jalal: no, she is not my friend . she said lie to me..she is going to school but she did not told me with cute angry face.

Jodha shout : why , iam not going to school with confusing face.

Jalal: nahi, ghostji, iam not saying u..iam saying about my Jodhaji.

Jodha : what u said , my Jodhaji .with little blushing face.

Jalal: oh...she is not my friend so she is not mine with child sturborn.

Jalal: ok I said everything correctly na..u did not hurt me na ..with innocent face.

Jodha chucking face and mindvoice: I want eat ur cute cheeks , Jalal.. u r really my mister cutie. anyone fallen for ur innocent face with murmuring face.

Jodha: but u say , Jodha

Jalal: Jodha nahi Jodhaji with cute angry face

Jodha give impossible look to Jalal: ok say Jodhaji is ur friend.

Jalal: Jodhaji is ur friend with smiling face

Jodha glare to Jalal: oyie mister cutie, u r not parrot, what iam saying to repeat once again with angry tone

Jalal hits his forehead: oh sorry..with sheepish smile..

Jalal get down to bed and his legs slipped through because of water spread in floor and Jodha running tried to held but Akdha both fallen to bed .Jodha top him and Jalal under her. Akdha staring each other..

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Edited by Fantasy-ka-Love - 4 years ago
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Didu plzz update soon

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Didi update

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Ek week hogaya hai

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Awesome chappies akkašŸ˜

Poor ja

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Hey di. When you are going to update your stories. Please update marriage at first sight. I am really missing it.

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Didi plzz update 😭😭

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