NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 53 - CHAP 58 (Pt 1&2)- 4th - Page 96

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kuki715


Originally posted by lashy



Tch... is this what Azeez miyaan does, Cookie? Lesson leti hoon uski! 😡
😲 Noo...Don't compare him those 😡

Mere Azeez toh... jaise bhi hai Mere Prannath hai


Cookie Azeez ke waaste apni 'di' ko bhi red face dikhaa hi diyaa?

Dost dost na rahaa... pyaar sirf Azeez ka rahaa
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


And any sort of empathy I might've felt for the Shehzaade's state of mind at 58 vanished! 😡


That baddy prince😡
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Cookie Azeez ke waaste apni 'di' ko bhi red face dikhaa hi diyaa?

>>>Aiyyoo no😲that red face was for those who take advantage.. . Not for you🤗

Wait... DQ aa?

Dost dost na rahaa... pyaar sirf Azeez ka rahaa

>>> will this help...



Edited by Kuki715 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kuki715


Wait... DQ aa?

Dost dost na rahaa... pyaar sirf Azeez ka rahaa

>>> will this help...


Worked. Plan worked
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Bablookutty witnesses the duel fight between the bad boy Khalil and Akbar uncle

[ Grandma used her influence and got 'Special Invitee' Admission tickets for her and Bablookutty to watch the Duel fight at the Arena in Agra. Both of them got comfortable seats on the first row of the gallery. Since it was a 'macho- macho' event, Baby'kka refused to come]

😆 You could've told BABYkka that Heerakka would've liked some company!

Grandma: Okay darling.. Are you comfortable?
Babloo: Yes grandma.. But we have only Akbar uncle standing here.. Where is the bad guy?
G'ma: He will come..
>>> How is grandma feeling at this stage?
Babloo: How come Akbar uncle has wounds even before he starts fighting..Are they from the leventeen lashes he got when was in jail?
G'ma: No kutty.. He had a dishum dishum fight with the swine kunwar before we came, and he defeated him. He has the wounds from the fight..
Babloo: Did uncle fight with the Piggy boy? Why didn't we see him fight with piggy boy?
🤣
G'ma: That's because, the ticket was not available for that show..
Babloo: But how did you get it now?
G'ma: Because, many of the kunwar's supporters left the auditorium after he died..
🤣
Babloo: DID HE DIE? But you said he was only.. d'feated..
G'ma: That also means "dying" darling..
Yes... some hard-hitting words for you kanna!
Babloo: What is Akbar uncle having in his hand? Is it a sword?
G'ma; No.. it is an axe..
Babloo: Axe? But in the fairy tale, only the wood cutter uses the axe to cut wood.. What will uncle be doing with it?
🤣
( Khalil enters the arena.)

Babloo: Grandma, is he the bad boy?
G'ma: Yes kutty.. how evil he looks..
Babloo: He also has an axe in his hand..
Babloo you're allowed to use this mask! 🤢
( After observing Akbar for a while, Khalil puts forth a condition that Akbar should fight with him blindfolded. There is a lot of commotion among the spectators..Finally the guards come and cover his eyes with a cloth strongly)
Babloo: 😲 Grandma.. They cover his eyes with cloth.. Is he going to play "I spy" like us in school?

G'ma: (sadly) No kutty.. That guy wants to have an easy win over our Khansahib.. So he wants him to have him blindfolded..
Yes 😡
Babloo: 😒 But.. how will uncle see him grandma.. Is it not cheating?
G'ma: Yes dear.. It is definitely cheating..
Babloo: Is cheating 'llowed in the fight?
No da... only in baddy prince's fights cheating is allowed😡 that too.. only by baddy people!
G'ma: But Akbar agrees to fight blindfold..
Babloo: 😭G'ma.. I don't want to see this dishum dishum..I don't want Akbar uncle to lose..mmm..(cries)
Awww🤗
G'ma: Shh.. don't cry dear.. Lashy'kka said Akbar will win in this fight .. He will kill the bad boy Khalil..
Babloo: 😲😭
So cute!
G'ma: Look here kutty.. You watch the fight and then you can go home and tell Baby about it..
Babloo: Yes.. Baby'kka will like it if Akbar uncle wins..
G'ma: I am very sure he will win kutty. Watch it quietly..
( The game starts..)
Babloo: Grandma ..how will uncle see the 'nemy 's axe, through the cloth?
G'ma: Kutty.. don't you know ..? Akbar goes hunting wild animals in the forests during nights. He has the power of seeing things in the dark..
Babloo: Did the fairy godmother gave him the power?
G'ma: Yes.. now quietly watch it..
😆
( Khalil throws the axe in the direction of Akbar. It comes near his left ear)

Babloo: ( Shouts) AKBAR UNCLE!..move..move.. the axe is coming near you..
( Akbar moves towards his right and escapes the strike.)
Babloo: 👏👏 Well done Akbar uncle!
Awww
(Now Khalil silently throws his axe on his right side..)
Babloo: NO.NO.NOOO.. YOU BAD BOY...
G'ma: Shhh Bablookutty ...Akbar has sharp ears.. he will listen to the noise of his boots and will escape his blow.. See how he has done!
Whistle podu, kanna
( The spectators cheer Akbarkhan)
Babloo: C'mon Akbar uncle..C'mon Akbar uncle!!
(Suddenly Akbar falls on the ground to escape the weapon, and Khalil raises his axe to bring it down on his head)
G'ma:Oh my God! What is he doing? How will Akbar escape this attack..?
Babloo: Grandma..look at uncle.. He is crawling and moving ..No..No..No..😲
G'ma: No Bablookutty.. Khalil can't strike Akbar if he is moving like this.. Akbar knows the trick..
Babloo: Grandma..! The bad guy is throwing the axe uncle.. Wait..wait.. but uncle catches it with one hand!..👏👏
G'ma: Yes.. Akbar is ustaad..Don't you know? No one can beat him!

( And finally...It was the end of the bad guy's immoral life)

Babloo: 👏👏👏 Akbar uncle won! Akbar uncle won!
G'ma: Yes Kutty.. It is a historical event for him..

Babloo: Where is Heera'kka grandma? I didn't see her..
G'ma: She will come later and treat Akbar's wounds.. Come..Let us go home..
( They return home. Baby'kka is waiting for them)
Babloo: 'kka.. Akbar uncle fought well. But it was scary..
Baby: That's why I didn't want to go..
Babloo: But.. I am going to write a c'mentry like a cricket match..and send it to Lashy'kka. She will put it in her page with fotos..
Waiting for your commentary da! Watching the duel was one thing... watching it through your eyes is another thing altogether... loved it kanna! 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
Quote: Lashy

The most hard-hitting chapters of HBAS... you've depicted it beautifully...


Thank you Lashy. I drastically cut certain portions from ch 52- particularly the whip-lashing sequence. That was too much for all of us to bear. And the poem at the end of the chapter, complemented everything.
Plus I want to conclude this abridged version at the same time as your last chapter of the novel.

P.


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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Quote: Lashy

The most hard-hitting chapters of HBAS... you've depicted it beautifully...


Thank you Lashy. I drastically cut certain portions from ch 52- particularly the whip-lashing sequence. That was too much for all of us to bear. And the poem at the end of the chapter, complemented everything.
Plus I want to conclude this abridged version at the same time as your last chapter of the novel.P.

I know... I understand... 👍🏼
ETA: I like the way you've signed off here... 😉

🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago

Good afternoon/evening/morning lovely Sahibas and James Banna.🤗

Periyamma, Lashy Sahiba, Shyamala Periyamma, Chellam, Bindup, Shruthi, Manu, Selvi, Lana, Vathsy,Lavanya, Mitu, Sandy Begum, Bond, Shagun, Rekha, Rashmi, Kruthik,Rupinder, Tanya, Jiya, Muskan, Wishu, Anindita, Aparna and 6Bs.🤗

Page 112 (10 pages)<<<😊

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Worked. Plan worked


Wha...the things you do to maintain your right over DQ crown
😆


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Edited by Kuki715 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Though your lips are pretty, it is the feel of them that sends my mind into a sensual state of intoxication. That's why I reach toward your face and touch them lightly before the urge to kiss you takes over.


Edited by lashy - 6 years ago

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