NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 52 - CHAPTER 57 - UPD 28th Jan - Page 9

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Posted: 6 years ago
#81
Hey dear author I may not comment on your chapters but always eagely wait for your updates please do send me pm cause I dont wanna miss your updates
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Posted: 6 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: lashy


Omg after so long...

'Chhheeelll aaammm' Running towards Chellam in slo-mo


This is both '' and '🤣'

Originally posted by: lashy


Because we feel for the Kunwarisa... and Tejraj and a family that could've been... 🤗

>>>Yes! Also the villains realize their mistakes only when they are about to die😡


Really? ☺️


>>>of course



Edited by Kuki715 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#83
😆
Unres ho gaya.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: lashy

I haven't checked Chellam's & Rekha's entries...



🥺
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Posted: 6 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: James12

oh my am I reading correct 😲he refused food 😒

his love for Khan should never be questioned

So so so sweet😊


'Make peace? How?' How would anyone in her place
ever make peace? It wasn't humanly possible, and she
was no saint.
I wish you were😒 so that you could be in peace for a while 😊
but even if you are no saint 😳then to you possess the most
pure soul which have big heart uff heart filled with worry
for it's owner And mind filled with lot of dreadful queries how
can a person be in peace either 😒 but don't think Your chief maid won't
understand😊 she understand you better then any of your people 😊
but she is just trying to make you feel good admit success is far
from her reach as it's impossible to be in peace in such a situation 😒
Easy to say Gauri hard to work on 🤓when the two sharp
edge sword is after your love how can a person be not afraid 😒
after suffering this much how can a person faith won't get shake on
Him 😒
James your love for her pours out from every word in these paras! 😆

'Only time would tell'

This line held such a power to make me always thoughtful

about my own action 😊even when I mount on my bike and

waited for signal to go on with the race 😉even when I get in

exam hall and held my pen to wrote my answer 😉 Jesus Christ

time will tell why always time why not our action but again

it's the hidden massage fate can't be discovered by

anyone as it's only in his hands what future store for

us most importantly time 😉

>>>👍🏼


After whatever
happen back it was always Khan spirit and physical strength
that made him what he is today isn't is the very reason why
Mughal prince used worse weapon to whip him mercilessly 40
times 😡

Yes😭


Such a well wisher his people are

worried about his condition 😒 but again this how people are who love

you and wish for the best for you 😳 I so feel for them 😊

I know they must be so stressed

'Have you seen how a wounded lion defends himself

from other predators?'

I did 😆 he let his opponent attack on him and be in defensive mode

till they get tired and when they did he strike on them and get to make

Victory it's slave 😉but I watch it on TV 😒 I don't think they had TV

at that era but again they need no TV when they themselves

got a pleasure of going on hunting

exactly👏

anyway leaving this Tv aside I know

who he is 😉it's must be not so spiteful Guard 😆 Lashy sis if you

didn't reveal his name in this then 🤓 But i like the way how Azeez brain

got in active Curiosity mode of who the Youth can be 😉 I bet he must be

thinking is he my long lost twin or something😆

>>>😆

'Surrender?''I was only warming up!'

😎of course you were warming up😆 by giving everyone panic attack 😡

>>>🤣

'After how you let your woman suffer a million deaths

worse than what you are about to?'

not his😡 I hate this😡 she was never his not when she
was alive nor when she died she never ever can be refer as his 😡
and angel of light⭐️ can't belong to evil one 😡

Oh wow!👏 Whistle podu, James kanna! 😎
Next he's gonna ask us ---> ' Whistle podu? What's that Lashy sis😕?'
😆

Somewhere out there was his father watching.
oh damn just die😡 already don't think about your Father😡
it's make me feel bad for your end when you mention about him 😒
he may get another son I mean in the form of Tejraj to fill your place 😉

>>> I agree

'This one is for you, my Heera!' With a sure single thrust, he cracked the armour - before its tip drilled its definite way down, into the skin of the prince's chest.
yesterday I had a party for no reason 😆today
it's really call celebration🥳 to good bravo 😃
what a writing skills 👏 Lashy sis you ruled it 👏

the first sentiment he felt was 'relief' from it all.

😡 i am not happy with this relief😡 because at the end he got free

from everything call me Sadist or whatever but he deserve more then

this death 😡

>>>😔

'You kept your word, Khan Sahib... you stood... you
fought with pride... and you remained my prop against
life's battles'

yup he did 😃and it's all for you😉 it's all for to get justice😳
it's entirely solely for Durga Sahiba ⭐️sacrificed and
your peoples 😊 and of course he is being Victorious warrior😎

he'll surely defeat the one-armed Khalil too... he did it

once... he'll do it again... he will!'

1) He will for sure😃 but Satan🤢 being one armed

then to he shouldn't be underestimated he is weak

Coward but wicked 😡 I can bet as soon he will know khan

won and he have to face him he will pull some trick

for getting out of the grave of death that evil jerk can go to

any extend 😡 he play to win fair unfair never bother him 😡


2) 'I despise the Kunwar of Manswar with vehemence...

which is why I enjoyed the game and its outcome!'

Come on come with some better excuse men I expected better

from you on this result of battle 😆 admit you liked how your men

won admit you are proud of him even after getting whipped by you

admire him at how skillfully he fulfill your unasked wish with his own 😉

oh men 😆 I can bet it's just start at the end you will admit

you had no grudges in Heart against khan anymore 😉

I have this feeling from start of update but now i am

having expectation on this matter 😳 like Khan is having

a battle with villains this men is fighting with his own

Inner' Demons and like khan winning the battle he will

over power on his demons to and the outcome can be expected

best way in positive light 😊


I must say these two points struck me most... you've understood the psyche of these villains well!👏


YES, he did it! I told you he would, didn't I?'

really 😲when you did as far as I know you just said about

watching lion way of defending himself and defeating his

predators 😉never said he will win liar liar pant on fire

taking credit of some other fortune teller huh 😆

>>>🤣


Brace yourself men's he will be the best new men in your

group soon😉 he now my favorite one after Azeez 😆

and he is worth of being in my like list 😉

Awww😃

Chota Zayan my😲 it's so similar name to Chota Faizan 😃

Azeez Brother whom they lost I can see someone fainting
in disbelief now 😆 Oh Lashy sis what a name you got for him 👏
Alright not fainting but stutter in disbelief for sure 😆

Thanks...😆 glad you liked his entry, James😳

she let go of the Taveez from her clutches.

who are you 🤔and for what sign you are looking for 🤔

>>> Wait and watch🤓

Update wise you had a blast😉 truly worth waiting 👏👏
But seize of update 🤔
we are disappoint badly 😒
we want more and more as the heart beg for more 😒
next update should be before i get back in India 😉
and i will be back on 20 Feb so be a good Sis to us and
start working on update 😉

Awww wishing you a safe journey back home.. take care of yourself and enjoy the rest of your vacation at Aussie Land🤗

Edited by lashy - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#86
Good that teacher didnt. I think your answers were same to same as mine and i fared poorly. (5/8)...😭
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Posted: 6 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

I haven't checked Chellam's & Rekha's entries...
🥺


Irru Chellam... DQ giri panaadhe😆... I am having a tough time managing which page I left off at... which page I haven't responded to yet!
So till Mirza bhaijaan has finished his well-resting, and decided to let go of Rosejaan, you'll have to wait.. ok?😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#88
Lashy, did you split 57 into 57 and 58 and 58 into 59 and 60? 😃
It was such a chotu chapter.😕
Edited by Sandhya.A - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#89
Ok this weird multiquoting is quoting all sorts of nonsense.. girls as long as you can recognise your words and know that the rest of the blue blue words are mine, I think we should be fine!

Originally posted by: Kuki715


This is both '' and '🤣'


Err ... woh... we both are a lil emotional types like that!
This is how we met at the station too... ☺️

Yes! Also the villains realize their mistakes only when they are about to die
😡

I know, right? 😕
Really? ☺️

of course

Time for 'Isssh' then☺️
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Posted: 6 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: selvi1275

Fantastic buildup to the Duel... culminating in the end of One Evil...

Awesome... Lashy 👏👏
The overall Fear... of everyone related to Akbar...
Chachajaan's pain for his son, 😭worries of their people (combined ), Heera's panic and fear for her Husband.😭... All dissipated slowly just like how the fight played out...😳

I'm overjoyed ... right from when the Ustaad first defended with that CLANG...🥳
And more curious about the blue veiled lady...


.whatever I say is less... so have gotten a bunch of cute fellows to join me... in singing your praises...😉



Will join your cute fellows



Originally posted by: roseraja1915

No, no Lashy Sahiba,you took these many days to give us such a short update! Not fair, not fair at all! 😭

Took an hour to finish it. How long was it by the way? It was really too short! Can you please make a note of the length of an update at the end- would make an interesting titbit info.😊

The blue-veiled lady is AMK's mother ! 😲And what manoeuvre did she carry out to aid her son?😲

What a duel, Lashy Sahiba!👏 👏 👏

Yes, our hearts couldn't have borne it had both duels been fought in this update, Sahiba.😊

This one alone had us hyperventilating and our blood levels hitting the roof!👏

The excellent cat and mouse game the wounded lion played to slaughter his prey!👏

Every whoosh and clang- such sweet music to our ears and the final thrust into the core of Mahendar's heart- God!👍🏼

RIP, Mahendar! For now, we are at peace ,too, knowing the great Ustaad has vanquished one villain. Another has just stepped in to be dealt a similar fate.

You named the NSS!

LASHY SAHIBA! LASHY SAHIBA! LASHY SAHIBA! LASHY SAHIBA! 👏 👏 👏 👏

The same honour has to be bestowed on you, darling author, for this action-packed , nail-biting chapter! 👏 👏 👏 👏

Next, 8 pages of HW here and some on the previous thread-all after dinner!


Rightly said 👏👏👏



James... That was a high on emotion review...fantastic read 👏👏👏

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