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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali




Chapter 57.

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The Story thus reaches the heights ..

>>>👏🥳

The author presents the update like unveiling the canvas
With the artist's impression revealed with all the charm endless
I do not know how many days or months the author took
To portray the scene in the arena every corner and nook
Starting from the grief stricken father Chachajaan
To the loyal man of the protagonist Chota Zayaan..
It was like watching a suspense filled Hollywood thriller
Sitting biting our nails to know who is the ultimate winner..

In the arena the noble father is concerned about his only son
On whom he had till now bestowed all his love and affection
His heart is torn with the cruel spectacle he may have to face
" Please Khudha..do not make me see my son die with disgrace.."
There in the cell, she bore a pathetic sight to witness
Sitting curled up in a corner like a girl in distress..
Chanting the words," Pray.. he endures the assault..and get the pardon"
Hoping that the hardened heart of the Shehzaade becomes molten.

The Royal family is present in the arena with high expectation
Curious to know about the fate of the Ustaad in conclusion..
Among them seated is a noticeable woman in blue veil
With the heart pounding and praying for his victory in full scale
There the Kunwar gets ready to fight with the Ustaad the battle
The scores with him for a long time , he had waited to settle
And..what a dramatic entry of the Ustaad on the field!
The Shehzaade wonders, " How ?How did he get healed?"

"How could he fight the two warriors?" worried are his men
A voice comes as a prophecy, "Haven't you heard of a wounded lion?"
The duel starts- taking her position, our commentator Sahiba
Gives a lucid account of the fight, stroke by stroke, without a flaw
Like a commentator in the test match who doesn't miss anything
She describes every step of the fight that takes place in the ring
Whereas the Kunwar uses his poisonous brain to defeat Ustaad
He in turn uses his tactful brain to outwit the prince, the fraud.

👏👏👏

Allowing his opponent to waste 40 strokes, he makes him weak
Bounces on him like a wounded lion, with vengeance to wreak
"Khan sahib, my character was maligned..I was dragged to the sabha.."
" The Prince will regret..This one is for you my Heera"
The evil man whose evil mind planned to use a poisoned dagger
Turned out fatal on himself , he fell with his dreams going shattered
Hearing the news, she sits like a noble woman, in her cell
Feeling happy that he has acted as a prop against her life's battles.

The frenzied crowd celebrate the victory of the moghul warrior
Whether the Parnagarhis or the locals, each having their own reason whatsoever
Eagerly wait for the next duel with the second opponent to ensue
Sitting with fingers crossed hoping he would get through
The story stops here bringing back the readers to the ground
Who , along with the spectators, were watching the events spellbound
We thank the author who has artistically painted the canvas
Let us cheer her by clapping our hands, for her magnum opus!

🥳🥳🥳


Karkuzhali.


OMG !! How much I missed reading it suda suda super O super, Patti 👏⭐️👏


Selvi di... Thoroughly enjoyed your review...very engrossing 👏👏

Rosejaan 🤗
James 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
Rose 🤗
Kuki 🤗
Lav 🤗
Selvi 🤗

you guys seems to be busy and active here at the same time 🤔
how are you all doing guys health wise😊

Originally posted by: lashy


James🤗

Poem praise and whatnot for the hazel-eyed beauty! 2019
has put you in a romantic mood!😉

😳credit goes to you😉

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: James12

I don't get how getting tea gonna get you in trouble 🤔

and why you need lone time to have it 🤔instead if sharing it with IM 🤔

James,
Where do I begin
To tell the story of how great a love can be
The sweet love story that is older than the sea
The simple truth about the love he brings to me
Where do I start? 😉 😳 😆

Share Akbar tea with IM?😲 🤓

Originally posted by: James12

Don't underestimate women
Specially Harka Sahiba 😉
They know more then we do 😳
Think more then speak 😆
Notice more then we realize 😉
Care more then we can 😳
as they are most expressive in
action then any of us 😊

👏 👏 👏 Awww! The love you have for Harka Sahiba is so inspiring!
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

James,
Where do I begin
To tell the story of how great a love can be
The sweet love story that is older than the sea
The simple truth about the love he brings to me
Where do I start? 😉 😳 😆

Share Akbar tea with IM?😲 🤓


Who is this 'He'?
Puzzle for today 🤣
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Rose you've taken a long time to resurface 😒

🤗

15 pages of backlog,Lashy Sahiba. 🤔 By the time I reached the end of it , another 2 pages were added. And it is entirely the fault of your incredible C57 that has drawn so many glowing reviews / comments/ creative posts that I had to go through thoroughly. Then had to stop for dinner . One of those rare occasions where I didn't post any replies before dinner.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: James12

Rose 🤗
Kuki 🤗
Lav 🤗
Selvi 🤗


>>>>🥺



😳credit goes to you😉
>>>☺️

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Who is this 'He'?
Puzzle for today 🤣

🤣
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

James,
Where do I begin
To tell the story of how great a love can be
The sweet love story that is older than the sea
The simple truth about the love he brings to me
Where do I start? 😉 😳 😆

wow what a lines Rose 👏

Let me think first from where you should start
oh no i am 🤔


But one question is this he you refer to khan or IM 🤔
as you are into both😆 I better hope both together
don't run after me with Sword 😒

Share Akbar tea with IM?😲 🤓

ya he won't be jealous after all khan is his friend 😆

👏 👏 👏 Awww! The love you have for Harka Sahiba is so inspiring!

😳 um thanks 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
Will Zayaan feature in TIP to add to the confusion, Sandy? 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Who is this 'He'?
Puzzle for today 🤣


🤣 😆 An open secret among the Baisas but a secret to our Banna and IM.😉

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