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Posted: 6 years ago
Good Evening 🤗 Grandma, Lashy sis, Lav sis,
Rekha sis , Mitu, Selvi, Bindup, Sandy, Kawsi ,Vathsy,
Kuki, Rose, Manasi and everyone 🤗🤗 🤗


Originally posted by: lashy


yup it is as it's James Smith strategy 😉
Lashy sis it's Bound to be nice 😆

Yes.. yes shall bear that in mind! 😎

>>>

James busy filling in for Rosejaan!😉

yup yup😎 because now she may going
to have lot of HW 😳
So thought to help My sis 😉


Originally posted by: selvi1275


James...why are you awake now?...isn't it an unusual hour?...

To kill my sleepless boring night i was here 😉
by the way I never had usual hour to be on bed and
off from their😆

Originally posted by: Testmytest


James congrats on becoming a senior member
on the forum 👏

Thank you Rekha sis 😳

As I wrote my response on Aunty's quote, I was thinking
about you.

really 😃 good thought about me and eventually
it's make you right about my crush 😉 so good thing 😆

Beautiful review on C57, loved reading it!

Thanks allot 😃glad you enjoy my reviews 😳

Enjoy your time until next month, get pampered,
have parties when you are home alone!!

I stay at home alone or stay with everyone I have party daily 😆
with my friends by going out either on bike races club football matches 😉

And BTW my response to C57 was not a review, it
was an instant response to our dearest Author Sahiba!!
I need to give it a few more reads before I can write mine 😊

I know 😆 after getting such bomb blasting update your review
can't be this small so I knew it's just an instant reply 😉

Aren't you smart logging off at 199 posts 👏 but your
strategy worked. 200th post with the review on C57!!

Of course I am 😎 that's why my plan always work best way 😉
Yup that's what my intention was


Originally posted by: Sandhya.A



So is Heera. Unusual for a heroine but for her breathtaking beauty.
Can look deep into a person/issue in-spite of limited vision.
Very cautious willed and strong from within.
Yet gentle and calm on the exterior.
A young girl with the charms of youth and wisdom of the old.
I am so glad to read this para 😃
each line is worth to get praise for oh Sandy you are truly
marvelous on writing such a thing 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
I so love this para i did got praise everyone for their remarkable
reviews and you as well previously but now only i got to come
up with to praise this individually 😉as if it was written solely for me 😆

Heart robber by beauty
Peace server by mind 😳
Love spreader by action ⭐️
A slight gaze enough to increase paced of heart beat 😳
A simple smile got to be worth to all suffering
how we praise can the creature who made you
with so much intensity





Originally posted by: Testmytest

Dearies,

Worked on this recently!
Hope you all like it!! 🤗




Saw this on google images the other day and I had to try it. There are different versions of this on the web 😕

To good Rekha sis👏👏 I always get to say you do splendid job on
this Art 😉but the more i get to watch your work the more I got
sealed at my words😳 at how shall we praise such a talent in best
way simple yet elegant in true words fantastic work 👏

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


An interesting convo between grandma, Baby and Bablookutty.
Image result for pic of two cute little kids

(Grandma is busy in the Kitchen.. Baby'kka and Bablookutty are playing.. )

Babloo: 'kka, what is grandma doing in the kichen?
Baby: She said that she is making sweet..
Babloo: Sweet? Is it her birthday?
Simple maybe she is craving to eat something sweet after getting update 😆
Baby: No..
Babloo: Then whose birthday it is? Is it Jalal uncle's birthday?
Baby: Hey Babloo..Don't you remember we made a huge cake for Jalal uncle's birthday some months back.. ? It is not any uncle's or akka's birthday..
Babloo: Then why is grandma making sweets..?
Baby: She said that she is happy and that's why she is making sweet..
Babloo: Why suddenly happy? She was sad even yesterday.?😲
Prince of Questions 😆
really grandma why were you sad yesterday 🤔

( Grandma finishes her chores in the kitchen and comes..)

G'ma: Here kutties.. Taste some of these..
( gives them sweets)
Baby: Grandma, Babloo wants to know why you are making sweets..
Babloo: But Baby'kka also doesn't know why you are making sweets now..

🤣ya can't take all the blame of being curious entirely on his tiny shoulder so Baby should be included as well 😆

G'ma: Do you want to know why?..I am really happy..that's why..
Baby: Why suddenly happy?
G'ma: Ah.. I got good news..
Babloo: Oh.. you got the 'pdate!!😃

Genius buddy😎 aren't you little to smart for your age
with strong memory 😆

Baby: What good news in that..?
Babloo: 'kka.. that must be the good news.. the 'pdate!
G'ma: Yes.. you know what? Akbar uncle fought with the Swine!
Babloo: WHAT? You saw them fighting?
Baby: Babloo...grandma says she read the update of the story..how can she see it..?
G'ma: ( starry-eyed) No kutties..I actually saw them fighting.. I watched every stroke of their swords..?

oh my this so true even we all can say this 😊Lashy sis see what wonder you do on us by you fabulous job of update always 😉

Babloo: 😕 Grandma.. You saw them fighting in the TV?
Baby: Did they fight with swords?
Babloo: Real swords? Or fake swords?
G'ma: Real swords.. But it was not in the TV.. Lashy akka wrote the story so nicely that it was like watching it in person..

Agree 👍🏼

Babloo: So it was dishum, dishum fight..👏

yup yup😃 entirely action packed update 😉
Baby: Who won grandma?
G'ma: Of course Khansahib won !
Babloo: What happened to the handnothing prince?
G'ma: Oh.. he ..he lost to Khansahib and was killed..
Babloo: Did Akbar uncle kill him? Was it a war?
G'ma: Sort of kutties..But it is supposed to be game..Akbar uncle wanted to have sword fight with Mahendar and Khali..So the Shehzaade arranged for it..
Baby: Has the Shezaade become friends with uncle?
Babloo: You said he put uncle in jail and gave him leventeen lashes..
Baby: He had wounds and bleeding..
G'ma: Yes.. But Heera cleverly and cunningly prepared medicine for his wounds and gave it to him..
Baby: Is he fully cured?
Babloo: Baby'kka, I told you that Lashy'kka put a picher of uncle with sword.. He must be cured..
G'ma: No kutties.. He is not fully alright.. But he has that determination and anger to ..to..destroy the evil persons..Like a wounded lion..
Babloo: 😲 G'ma.. I don't understand what you say.. You speak big words like Shyamala aunty..

yaa poor little thing can't get to understand such a strong words Grandma just like I don't understand when you guys use Pure Hindi Or Urdu words without translation 😆

G'ma: Okay..okay..It is enough if you know that Akbar fought with sword and in the process he won killing Mahendar..
Baby: Did he also fight with Khalil.?
G'ma: He will..But after 15-20 days..
Baby: Why so late?
G'ma: Because.. only then Akbar will get fully cured..and will be fit to fight..
Babloo: Grandma..I want to watch Akbar uncle and the ugly bad guy fighting dishum..dishum..
Baby: Me too grandma.. will you take us..?
G'ma: Oh sure.. kutties.. 😆

I will join you as well 😳

Image result for caricature pic of an old lady with a sweet plate


Grandma you always come up with best post of B&B adventures
I always say I enjoy them and wait for more 😃
but it's not enough it's was short for me I want more 😳

it was to good grandma 👏👏I liked it allot 😃
by the way who is Aparna and Shyamla 🤔are they your neighbor
in previous one you used Aparna name and in this Shyamala 🤔
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Errmmm.. Will Mirza sahib punish for triggering a bout of coughing? 😲 😲

Rose, save me I'll give you Akbar tea..😳 😉 😆

Originally posted by: lashy

You'are asking her to save you and then getting her into more trouble? 😆


Originally posted by: Kalgi22


Naah.. Rosejaan has many tricks in the sleeve. Don't worry. 😉

😆 😆 😆

Chellam, very , very tempting offer.😉

Lashy Sahiba, I can have the tea during those long, lonely evenings when IM is away! 😆

Selvi, you have waved off our dear author to another well-deserved seaside vacation!

Aparna, wonderful to see you back in the house, dear.🤗

Lavanya, Selvi , what insightful reviews, Baisas. 👏 ⭐️ Had me totally engrossed. 👍🏼

Welcome Wishu!🤗

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Originally posted by: roseraja1915


😆 😆 😆

Chellam, very , very tempting offer.😉

Lashy Sahiba, I can have the tea during those long, lonely evenings when IM is away! 😆

I don't get how getting tea gonna get you in trouble 🤔

and why you need lone time to have it 🤔instead if sharing it with IM 🤔

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Originally posted by Kuki715
Aww... 🤗 Of course first thought about AMK but then he was all because of his coujjin😆


am confujjed! 🤔

I meant you too, beside AMK of course😆
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


James busy filling in for Rosejaan!😉


@ Rekha
Looks like it, he is assisting Rosejaan!!
>>>Good job, James buddy! 😉 👏

Originally posted by: Testmytest

Rose dear I meant to post this for you a while ago, but forgot.

You are one heck of record keeper dear!! Amazing! You got every bit of information stored at your finger tips and produces instantly. Never seen anyone like that before. I have a lot to learn from you, regarding record/book keeping. 😕

Whether it's a quiz or a poem or review or pictures or awards or certain discussion...you have recorded them all.

Absolutely amazing, Thank you for doing this for all of us!

Love you! 😊

>>> 😳 ☺️ 🤗

>>>Awww! Haven't seen the Sahib looking this elated in a long time!😉 😳 😆

Originally posted by: Testmytest

Dearies,

Worked on this recently!
Hope you all like it!! 🤗




Saw this on google images the other day and I had to try it. There are different versions of this on the web 😕

👏 👏 👏Exquisite sketch, Rekha!

Hari's project-all's well that ends with a 97! 👍🏼 Congrats Hari and Rekha- a formidable mother-son team you make!👏

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Good morning individually to all HBAS-ians!

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How true !
Don't underestimate women
Specially Harka Sahiba 😉
They know more then we do 😳
Think more then speak 😆
Notice more then we realize 😉
Care more then we can 😳
as they are most expressive in
action then any of us 😊

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


An interesting convo between grandma, Baby and Bablookutty.
Image result for pic of two cute little kids

(Grandma is busy in the Kitchen.. Baby'kka and Bablookutty are playing.. )

Babloo: 'kka, what is grandma doing in the kichen?
Baby: She said that she is making sweet..
Babloo: Sweet? Is it her birthday?
Baby: No..
Babloo: Then whose birthday it is? Is it Jalal uncle's birthday?
Baby: Hey Babloo..Don't you remember we made a huge cake for Jalal uncle's birthday some months back.. ? It is not any uncle's or akka's birthday..
Babloo: Then why is grandma making sweets..?
Baby: She said that she is happy and that's why she is making sweet..
Babloo: Why suddenly happy? She was sad even yesterday.?😲

( Grandma finishes her chores in the kitchen and comes..)

G'ma: Here kutties.. Taste some of these..
( gives them sweets)
Baby: Grandma, Babloo wants to know why you are making sweets..
Babloo: But Baby'kka also doesn't know why you are making sweets now..
G'ma: Do you want to know why?..I am really happy..that's why..
Baby: Why suddenly happy?
G'ma: Ah.. I got good news..
Babloo: Oh.. you got the 'pdate!!😃
Baby: What good news in that..?
Babloo: 'kka.. that must be the good news.. the 'pdate!
G'ma: Yes.. you know what? Akbar uncle fought with the Swine!
Babloo: WHAT? You saw them fighting?
Baby: Babloo...grandma says she read the update of the story..how can she see it..?
G'ma: ( starry-eyed) No kutties..I actually saw them fighting.. I watched every stroke of their swords..?
Babloo: 😕 Grandma.. You saw them fighting in the TV?
Baby: Did they fight with swords?
Babloo: Real swords? Or fake swords?
G'ma: Real swords.. But it was not in the TV.. Lashy akka wrote the story so nicely that it was like watching it in person..
Babloo: So it was dishum, dishum fight..👏
Baby: Who won grandma?
G'ma: Of course Khansahib won !
Babloo: What happened to the handnothing prince?
G'ma: Oh.. he ..he lost to Khansahib and was killed..
Babloo: Did Akbar uncle kill him? Was it a war?
G'ma: Sort of kutties..But it is supposed to be game..Akbar uncle wanted to have sword fight with Mahendar and Khali..So the Shehzaade arranged for it..
Baby: Has the Shezaade become friends with uncle?
Babloo: You said he put uncle in jail and gave him leventeen lashes..
Baby: He had wounds and bleeding..
G'ma: Yes.. But Heera cleverly and cunningly prepared medicine for his wounds and gave it to him..
Baby: Is he fully cured?
Babloo: Baby'kka, I told you that Lashy'kka put a picher of uncle with sword.. He must be cured..
G'ma: No kutties.. He is not fully alright.. But he has that determination and anger to ..to..destroy the evil persons..Like a wounded lion..
Babloo: 😲 G'ma.. I don't understand what you say.. You speak big words like Shyamala aunty..
G'ma: Okay..okay..It is enough if you know that Akbar fought with sword and in the process he won killing Mahendar..
Baby: Did he also fight with Khalil.?
G'ma: He will..But after 15-20 days..
Baby: Why so late?
G'ma: Because.. only then Akbar will get fully cured..and will be fit to fight..
Babloo: Grandma..I want to watch Akbar uncle and the ugly bad guy fighting dishum..dishum..
Baby: Me too grandma.. will you take us..?
G'ma: Oh sure.. kutties.. 😆

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😆 😆 😆
Grandma is flying high with the death of one villain. 😆 Sweets this time around, when the next villain meets his end, Grandma is going to throw a party for the entire neighbourhood. Hain na,Grandma? 😉 😆

Yes, kutties, reading Lashy'kka's sword fight is the same as watching it live!

Baby and Babloo look so , so adorable and Grandma is looking sweet sixteen!😳

Periyamma's GM post--never ever underestimate the Ustaad!👏

Rekha, yes, Akheera and Lashy Sahiba fit the bill!👏

Chellam , the Ustaad is there , Heera engay?😉

Originally posted by: Vmanoh



I know more than I say - A quiet thinker - It's his nature
Think more than I speak - He is an introvert - man of few words.
Notice more than you realize - His Keen observation is what makes him a great spy master - the Ustaad

👏 Remarkable personality analysis!

Selvi, the frozen and the blue blooms-

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali




Chapter 57.

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The Story thus reaches the heights ..

The author presents the update like unveiling the canvas
With the artist's impression revealed with all the charm endless
I do not know how many days or months the author took
To portray the scene in the arena every corner and nook
Starting from the grief stricken father Chachajaan
To the loyal man of the protagonist Chota Zayaan..
It was like watching a suspense filled Hollywood thriller
Sitting biting our nails to know who is the ultimate winner..

In the arena the noble father is concerned about his only son
On whom he had till now bestowed all his love and affection
His heart is torn with the cruel spectacle he may have to face
" Please Khudha..do not make me see my son die with disgrace.."
There in the cell, she bore a pathetic sight to witness
Sitting curled up in a corner like a girl in distress..
Chanting the words," Pray.. he endures the assault..and get the pardon"
Hoping that the hardened heart of the Shehzaade becomes molten.

The Royal family is present in the arena with high expectation
Curious to know about the fate of the Ustaad in conclusion..
Among them seated is a noticeable woman in blue veil
With the heart pounding and praying for his victory in full scale
There the Kunwar gets ready to fight with the Ustaad the battle
The scores with him for a long time , he had waited to settle
And..what a dramatic entry of the Ustaad on the field!
The Shehzaade wonders, " How ?How did he get healed?"

"How could he fight the two warriors?" worried are his men
A voice comes as a prophecy, "Haven't you heard of a wounded lion?"
The duel starts- taking her position, our commentator Sahiba
Gives a lucid account of the fight, stroke by stroke, without a flaw
Like a commentator in the test match who doesn't miss anything
She describes every step of the fight that takes place in the ring
Whereas the Kunwar uses his poisonous brain to defeat Ustaad
He in turn uses his tactful brain to outwit the prince, the fraud.

Allowing his opponent to waste 40 strokes, he makes him weak
Bounces on him like a wounded lion, with vengeance to wreak
"Khan sahib, my character was maligned..I was dragged to the sabha.."
" The Prince will regret..This one is for you my Heera"
The evil man whose evil mind planned to use a poisoned dagger
Turned out fatal on himself , he fell with his dreams going shattered
Hearing the news, she sits like a noble woman, in her cell
Feeling happy that he has acted as a prop against her life's battles.

The frenzied crowd celebrate the victory of the moghul warrior
Whether the Parnagarhis or the locals, each having their own reason whatsoever
Eagerly wait for the next duel with the second opponent to ensue
Sitting with fingers crossed hoping he would get through
The story stops here bringing back the readers to the ground
Who , along with the spectators, were watching the events spellbound
We thank the author who has artistically painted the canvas
Let us cheer her by clapping our hands, for her magnum opus!

Karkuzhali.

👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️

What a mouth-watering fare from our Periyamma! 👏

Excellent as always! 👏

The scene- just wow! 👍🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago
Rose you've taken a long time to resurface 😒
James🤗

Poem praise and whatnot for the hazel-eyed beauty! 2019 has put you in a romantic mood!😉

Lavanya enge?🤔
Edited by lashy - 6 years ago

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