NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 50 - CHAPTER 55 - Upd 17th Nov - Page 32

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Yes bad situation we faced in HBAS so far ended up in something positive. Durga brutal murder led to our couple meeting, AMK let go of Heera in Aidabad led to their permanent reunion, Khalil attacked to Heera and clan led to their marriage and now Akeera's downfall brought along downfall of all other villains too and most importantly United their people forever. 😃

Good morning Periamma, Bindu, Lavanya and all my Baisas! 😳

Good evening Lana, Rekha, Vathsy, Appus and Pallu! 😳

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Any edit? 🤪

Originally posted by: lashy

Awww I know you've said this in your review too... really touched me, it did! Thanks a ton, Selvi... took me nearly three hours to get the 'tone' of it right🤗

Because it's words needed to satisfy three things -

It had to sound like she was praising her baisa (though of course it was in Marwari and the Shehzaadi & her paltan wouldn't have understood anything - but had someone else in that place understood Marwari and reported it, there could've been a problem!)

Second, it had to have all the ingredients plus mention of the parcel - that somehow tied to the admiration of her baisa❤️

Third, it had to have the sound of a fitting farewell too!😭

😊

Originally posted by: selvi1275

Goodmorning Periyamma, Bindu, Kal, Lavanya, and all Baisas... 🤗

Goodevening Aparna, Lana, Rekha, and Vathsy...🤗

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

The woods that bordered Parnagarh had witnessed

Ustaad ride away on his handsome black horse

To meet his dear mentor like a man possessed

He had sped like wind through this very course

The tall trees that seem to touch the skies

Had not evidenced a more impressive sight

The dashing warrior with sharp arrow like eyes

And his magnificent stallion carrying the knight

A few days later a huge soldiers team

Led a retinue of our Sahiba a lady of grace

A lady who looks like a fairy of dream

Yet, a thunderstruck look clouded her face

She seemed to move on in a woeful trance

Enveloped in never ending gloom

The lush canopy and the wide wild expanse

Could sense her feeling of approaching doom

Ever since these trees have longed to see

The return of their knight and his damsel sweet

Through their own paths happy and free

The loving couple, they wished to greet

They prayed for the return of the bride and the groom

Free from the worries they carried along

They would spread green carpets and happily bloom

And their birds would sing a welcome song

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

LOVELY MORNING MESSAGE DEAR BINDUP 👏

>>> Thank you! 😳


I TOO READ A QUOTE TODAY THAT I ABSOLUTELY LOVED


PARADISE ISNT A PLACE, ITS A FEELING

>>> So true !

Our Akheera experiencing this only ! ❤️

Beautiful quote ! 👍🏼



BINDUP I ABSOLUTELY LOVED YOUR DETAILED REVIEW. LOVELY THOUGHTS AND EMOTIONS YOU HAVE USED. AND AS USUAL IT IS THOROUGH AND FLOWING

>>> Thank you so much for reading it and liking it ! 🤗

It's quite long na that's why! 😆

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Beautiful views, kal di! 👏 🤗

Rekha di 🤗 Selvi di 🤗

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

The woods that bordered Parnagarh had witnessed

Ustaad ride away on his handsome black horse

To meet his dear mentor like a man possessed

He had sped like wind through this very course

The tall trees that seem to touch the skies

Had not evidenced a more impressive sight

The dashing warrior with sharp arrow like eyes

And his magnificent stallion carrying the knight

A few days later a huge soldiers team

Led a retinue of our Sahiba a lady of grace

A lady who looks like a fairy of dream

Yet, a thunderstruck look clouded her face

She seemed to move on in a woeful trance

Enveloped in never ending gloom

The lush canopy and the wide wild expanse

Could sense her feeling of approaching doom

Ever since these trees have longed to see

The return of their knight and his damsel sweet

Through their own paths happy and free

The loving couple, they wished to greet

They prayed for the return of the bride and the groom

Free from the worries they carried along

They would spread green carpets and happily bloom

And their birds would sing a welcome song

Originally posted by: selvi1275