NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 50 - CHAPTER 55 - Upd 17th Nov - Page 26

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

'Oh... my...' her lungs filled up harder and faster than ever 'M... my Sahib'

None of the emotions would whelm her as much as the one that came flooding in, when her fingertips trailed their nervous path down to his chest. 'Oh my God!' Yes, there it was! Faint, but audible. 'His heartbeat' His precious precious heart's beat. Gently nudging against its walls every other instant, reaching out to touch her, to tell her that it was still fighting - fighting a battle through every beat to stay alive. For her!

'My darling... the best of my wishes would always be for you... I pray that Ma Bhavani bestows her mercy and kindness upon you... that She protects you from the evils of the world in the days ahead... and fills your life with endless happiness thereon. Happy Birth Anniversary, Khan Sahib'

Originally posted by: lashy

Chennai yeffact this is! 😆

So, you're decked in three different attires I see... waiting for whom exactly? 😆

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

CHACHAJAAN KI BAATEIN SUNKAR STABDH AUR VYATHIT HUI HARKA BAI

SHITHIL ANG AUR BAND MASTISHK, KUCHH NA USKO DIYA SUJHAAYI

'SWASTHYA KHARAB HAI KYA TUMHARA HEERA?' GAURI NE POOCHHA HOKAR HAIRAAN

'AKELI YUUN BAITHI HO, KABKE YAHAN SE CHALE GAYE MIRZA SAHIB AUR CHACHAJAAN'

Awww

BAUKHLAAYI SI HARKA CHAUNK KE JAAGI, 'JAANA HAI MUJHKO SAHIB KE PAAS

ATYANT AAVASHYAK HAI UNSE MILNA,' HARKA BOLI LE GEHRI SAANS

This was very sweetly written

JHAT PHIR WAHAN SE HARKA BHAAGI, PAHUCHI SEEDHEY SAHIB KE DWAAR

MILE USE DO PRAHARI WAHAN PAR, KHADE THHE ROKNE KO USKI RAAH

😆

HAATH JOD AUR VINATI KARKE HARKA KAKSH KE BHEETAR GAYI

SAMAAN DEKH ANUMAAN LAGAYA KI SAHIB ABHI TAK HAIN NIKLE NAHI

👍🏼

SAHIB AUR AZEEZ THHE GUPT KAKSH MEIN, KARTE PATRON KA LEKHA JOKHA

TABHI SAHIB NE THAND KE KAARAN AZEEZ KO ZARA SA KAANPTE DEKHA

😆 cute interaction between the two!

KAARYA SAMAPT HUA TO SAHIB BOLE, 'THAND HAI NA AZEEZ MIYAAN?'

TURANT HI AZEEZ AKAD KAR BAITHA, 'NAHI SAHIB, THAND ABHI SE KAHAN?'

😆

'SAHIB AAP RAJDHANI SE AAJ HI LAUTE HAIN, EK DIN TO KAR LIJIYE VISHRAAM

SAYYID KO AAPKI JAGAH BHEJ DIJIYE, DEGA WO SAHI SE HAR KAAM KO ANJAAM'

Awww

'SAYYID TO GAYA HAI GUPT-GRAH MEIN, HARKARON KA MUDDA SAMBHALNE KO

YE KAM TAALNA SAHI NA HOGA, BAS NIKLOONGA ABHI MILNE GUPTCHAR KO'

Very nice, Lavanya👏

'MAIN SAATH CHALTA HOON AAPKE SAHIB. NEEND AA RAHI HAI AAPKO AZEEZ MIYAAN

PEHLE AAP JISM MEIN PHURTI LAAIYE, TABHI TO AAYENGE AAP KAAM YAHAAN'

😆 so adorable 😭 no wonder Azeez loves him so much!

JAANTE THHE SAHIB KI AZEEZ KO UNKI FIKR THHI, HARSHIT HUA BHI UNKA HRIDAY

PAR GUPTCHAR FAIZAN KI KHABAR LA RAHA THHA, AZEEZ KA HONA THHA NA VIVEKMAY

JHAT SE PHIR PATR SAHIB NE AZEEZ KI ORE PHENKE NAT KI TARAH USNE LIYE SAB SAMET

DONO KE MAN MAIN USS DIN KI CHHAVI THHI JAB SAHIB AUR AZEEZ KI HUI PEHLI BHET

What is nat ki tarah?😊

And the first day he lay eyes on Azeez's skills😉.. kahaan se kahaan pahunch gayaa ab Azeez miya

FAIZAN NE KISI KA BATUA THHA MAARA AUR UCHHAL KAR USE PHENKA ZOR SE, DOOR

BATUA SEEDHEY AA GIRA AZEEZ KE HATHON MEIN, KHA RAHA THHA WO NAN E TAINOOR

😎

POORA TAMASHA SAHIB NE DEKHA, BOLE NAHI KUCHH, BAS CHALE APNI RAAH

PAR DONO KI DAKSHATA SE THHE ITNE PRABHAAVIT, KI APNI SENA MEIN DE DI JAGAH

😎 Ufff

ACHANAK SAHIB NE AZEEZ SE POOCHHA, 'WO MANTRI KA PATR MUJHE NAHI DIKHA?'

AZEEZ NE SAARE HI PATR TATOLE, 'SHAYAD MAIN KAKSH MEIN HI USE CHHOD DIYA'

😲 and herein comes Harka

'ABHI BHAG KAR LATA HOON', AZEEZ BOLA, 'NAHI HAI ISKI ZAROORAT NAHI

KAKSH KI ORE HI JA RAHA HOON MAIN, DEKH LOONGA USE MAHIN WAHIN'

😆

GUPT KAKSH KO BAND KAR DONO HI NIKLE AUR BADH CHALE SAHIB KE KAKSH KI ORE

PRAHARI NE KAHA KI SAHIBA HAIN BAITHI, TO SAHIB KE MAN MEIN THHE PRASHN HAR ORE

😲

'UNKE AANE KA KAARAN KYA HO SAKTA HAI? AAJ PHIR WO YAHAAN KYON AAYI HAIN?'

AISA KYON HAI KI PRAHARI KE ROKNE KE BAWAJOOD, KAKSH KE ANDAR WO BAITHI HAIN?'

😲 Wait and watch Khan Sahib you have NO idea how the night shall end! 😆😉

Such a sweet bit this was, Lavanya! Mwah!

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

😲 😲 Only big ponnus keep single plait. 😲 😆 😆

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

'Oh... my...' her lungs filled up harder and faster than ever 'M... my Sahib'

None of the emotions would whelm her as much as the one that came flooding in, when her fingertips trailed their nervous path down to his chest. 'Oh my God!' Yes, there it was! Faint, but audible. 'His heartbeat' His precious precious heart's beat. Gently nudging against its walls every other instant, reaching out to touch her, to tell her that it was still fighting - fighting a battle through every beat to stay alive. For her!

'My darling... the best of my wishes would always be for you... I pray that Ma Bhavani bestows her mercy and kindness upon you... that She protects you from the evils of the world in the days ahead... and fills your life with endless happiness thereon. Happy Birth Anniversary, Khan Sahib'

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

HEY EVERYONE

READY WITH THE NEXT PART OF AJNABI. WE HAD LEFT LAST PART WITH CHACHAJAAN REVEALING ABOUT AKBAR'S PAST TO HEERA. THIS PART DEALS WITH THE SCENE AT THE HIDEOUT WITH SAHIB AND AZEEZ 😉

AJNABI PART 36

Originally posted by: lashy

And the haunting nightmares.. It's like the cherry on the cake.. Now only I get it why you're saying Mahendar and Shezaade are dark grey not out and out black like Khalil. Because they have small goodness and so the conscience. That's why he gets this nightmares.. Why didn't you give one such nightmare to Shezaade to haunt him every day?

Thank you for understanding the underlined...

as for Shehzaade's nightmares, I think you sorta got your answer in 55, didn't you?

And it is because of those nightmares, that unknowingly, Shehzaade has ended up giving AMK his second life!
>>>> OMG yes yes yes. I got the answer.

Wait.. what?? Khalil growing fat in prison??!!! Chellammm!!!!!!!! How dare??!!!

Think of it this way - a fatter sportsperson is generally NOT a better sportsperson unless his choice of sport was sumo wrestling! 😉

>>>> OMG Chellam you've no idea how much relief this reply gave me.. 😭

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

>>>> OMG yes yes yes. I got the answer.

>>>> OMG Chellam you've no idea how much relief this reply gave me.. 😭

Originally posted by: lashy

Here's a message from TT - 😳

Hi Lashy,

It took me 2 days to realize that you has posted the next chapter , well you may think i was preoccupied with my life ... Naaahh ... the real reason is that i came across one of your earlier write ups "NJAPA" . Of course the daily chores in life were attended too fairly if you are still wondering

Anyways It took me a while to see you in light on the modern era but i thoroughly enjoyed it & couldn't wait to see the end of it . Though i must admit that i am kind of smitten by the medieval period & the "Sahib " 😉 so ignore me if don't say much of the NJAPA here

So here is are my thoughts after reading C55 i actually was greedy in expecting some light moments but it was a heavy dose of reality and its very hard to bring in that element of substance/reality into fiction so Kudos 👏

Hmm... i really looked forward to Heera meeting her Love though didn't quite expect it , actually the truth is i wanted her to be able to see him & him her but the fact that you made her feel him was much better ,but when she does feel his back ...I am equally worried about the anguish she has to relive and would love to read how she overcomes the immense pain too

Please have the Sahib open his eyes & take one look at her before she leaves coz that would give him all the elixir he needs to stand up & fight , it may seem like a flimie scene but i don-no i felt like saying it out loud . And before i end this long message i hope to see the end to this epic with just not good overcoming evil it would great to see how "Parnagarh: get their Farman back & how the lovely couple build their home together as they barely started to build it

Thanks for reading my nonsensical request

Take care & Happy Writing !

Regards,

TT