Akdha Dark ff Game of Destiny chapter 43 on page 136 - Page 39

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Fabulous update Rashmi😉

Thank you Divya di 🤗i am so glad to see you enjoyed the update

Jo was restless and also not able to sleep (Ofcourse bcz of her devil husband🤣)

Yes what to do if people have devil husband like JA then they will be sleep deprived for sure 🤣

Jalal too was not able to sleep (bcz of his own action 🤣) even when he was spending his ni8 with hukka 😡

Yeah he's already terrified by the so called fear of Jo leaving for Amer now his own action made him restless😆 God people cannot See Ja with Rukaiya even in implied mode😲 I am sure if I wrote about their scene in detail I may get welcome by tomato and eggs😆 anyway she's his wife I cannot let her be in isolation but for my readers I didn't give her much scene to

Yippiieee finally jo get freedom (Good one devil husband)🥳

Yup he did it😉 Jo is happy you're happy I am happy 😃

Its good that they both wanted to give a chance to their relation. Jalal trust her😳😃 thats soo nice & Positive. Jo was unsure about their relation but Mainavati's advice works as a positive for their relation. 😊

"Yes he does the only issue is the idiot don't know it's not only trust but he love her to 😆 nevertheless I am glad you're enjoying their slow progress in relation 👍🏼 here by her advise working in the favour of their relation I wanted to show we may not like what our parents do for us somtime but that's for our best 😎 and I am glad you like that to

The game of dice part was so amazing (because they started to share their secrets & opinions). Jalal is smart ha hukka ko ullu bna k jo k pass aa gya🤣

Yes I wasn't sure how you guys will take it like in previous night to I made them stay awake and play game while chatting I made them play game of pawn😆 now this time game of dice 😆 but yes you're right this is going to be step of start of their closeness in relation 😳 I am glad you enjoy this well he just took advantage of her heavy sleep didn't fooled her 🤣

Maham 😡 Such an evil person, she try to kill mainavati, but our maan saves her😎. Hahaha the way maan was talking with Adhgha & Munim is so brave even he has not fear of jalal.

She's indeed evil 😈some people do favour and work like they owned you for life or you're in debt with them till you breath last 🤓 but she don't know JA won't become puppet at her hands if he got to know she will be in deep trouble 😆 and Maan he's what every young hot blood people are like brave fierce and fearless😎 why he will fear Ja when he know he's not wrong 😆 somewhere a part of him even he know Ja like him so he take advantage a bit 😆

Uff the sword fight (My fav part of jodha akbar serial)❤️ Awesome😉

Same here ☺️it's one of mine favourite scene as well I don't they fight later as well but their first sword fight had unique charm which still make me get lost

Maan - jo part was hilarious🤣 jealous jalal (I was laughing so hard by reading this), Jalal is actually a love sick puppyand I love to read maan's part, he is cutieee😉❤️

Yeah till now I didn't show another little Cupid so using Maan 😆 and I know the way I shown him everyone like him so I take liberty of it more 😉 Jealous Ja is always fun 😆 I love when he get Jealous 😎

Wrong time pe ending diya😆 He kissed her 😳 "You're mine Jodha I won't let you go away from me"! Get that in your head"! Jaan' e' Jalal"! I love this possessive jalal.👏

Um I stopped there😳 cause I was to shy to wrote further ☺️ I just want some guidance in writing romantic part I realized that's not my standard at all 😆 so next time I will like to take help in writing that I will be glad if I earn offer of help by you and rest of my readers 😳 possessive ,Jealous, Angry, loving and caring . All shades of Ja are awesome😎 everyone love it 😳but I am glad I get to pull few shades of him enough to have you all impressed

Again an awesome update, enjoyed alot.

Thanks Divya di 🤗you always made my day😳 by your lovely Sweet beautiful comment thank you so much 🤗

Thanks for the update.😃

Welcome Divya di 🤗

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Jalal can be jealous of jodhas nephew too, but can also sleep around within a blink of an eye. Those times🤢

Well when men do it's fair but women do the same it's not that's what happened back at that era right now he isn't even aware He love Jo even if he does then to he have his responsibility towards others 🤔 I know no one will like it hence I made that in implied mode 😒

Thanks for comment Divya di 🤗 I hope you enjoyed the update 😳

Originally posted by: natashathakur

Awesome chapter jalal n jodha both are not able to sleep both are thinking about each other even jalal is with his other begum but kept thinking about geet n they thought to give a chance to their relationship n mainavati advice work in their relation n maham is really evil n try to kill mainavati but maan Singh save her n jalal is possessive for jodha n thnxx for pm me

Glad you like it 😳 yes both are lost in each other thoughts😳 yes they want to work on their relation at least Ja do 😆 well parents advise always work coolly 😎 yeah the real vamp of story ought to be evil but worry not our little hero is here to protect 😎 yeah like every men he's possessive of his love one it's another fact he's isn't aware of it yet 😆 thank you so much for your lovely comment🤗

Originally posted by: Jjlove

Loving the plot..the story is getting more interesting with each updates let's see how Jalal will show his mohobaat for jaan-e-jalal and make her fall in love

Thank you so much 🤗i am glad you're enjoying the plot whole heartily 😳 well that's going to be interesting as well hopefully I do get to pull it nicely thank you so much for your sweet comment🤗

Originally posted by: Jjlove

Update plzzz

Will update soon 😊

Thank you so much James 🤗for your individual comment on each update 😳 and as you requested till you get to give comment on every update I shouldn't reply to it 😆 so I am letting it be without replying yet 😳

But you overhelmed me by your views the way you understand the depth of character 😳their intentions behind action and got so impressed by dilouges 👍🏼 mean so much to me thank you 🤗

Hey where r u...plzz update

Hi Rashmi,
Merry Christmas 😊

Waiting for your updates😃

Originally posted by: Jjlove

Hey where r u...plzz update

I am sorry for delaying in update"!😒

Net service were off in my area 😵

And I had my exam😊 so I didn't get to update it 😒

top of it the day I try to do so my post got deleted thrice

Sorry I will update now 😳

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Hi Rashmi,
Merry Christmas 😊

Waiting for your updates😃

Hi Divya di 🤗

Marry Christmas 🥳to you to 🤗

I will be updating today and now 😊

Because of exam and net banned I fail to update 😊but I will do now 😳