Akdha Dark ff Game of Destiny chapter 43 on page 136 - Page 37

Loving the plot..the story is getting more interesting with each updates let's see how Jalal will show his mohobaat for jaan-e-jalal and make her fall in love

Chapter 5

but again when People can Question on Goddess Pious Sita and The great Devotee Mother Mira Bai .

"You have thing for history I guess anyway these two name made me search about them and I was very pleased to know he you mentioned about them here so true line people always find ways to judge other specially women

yaa leave us alone"! as your Prince don't want to let his fear show before you all"!...

oh my didn't see that coming she is playing the game of word as well way to rule up the men in anger she is really something I appreciate her gut to take risk of riling him up even knowing her situation she can be at big trouble

"we can slice your throat any second"! you are on my mercy and you dare to say I fear you"!...

"Well she know what you can do but more then that she is aware of the fact what you won't do thus she is bold with you moreover it cannot help that she is royal and fearless Rajput

"I dare you lay even single finger on me"! then I will let my action speak on behalf of me"... instead of word"!

Her threatened words sound similarly like his empty threat that's another case he need follow protocol and be in certain limit but she don't

"shall we let them go by admitting"! it was really our mistake to abduct them"!...as there is nothing greater danger then underestimating"! ..."your opponent and here we did a mistake to underestimate a women"!

"Well as much I appreciate your wisdom I must admit it's to late for confession"! you had done enough blunder by being mute Specter when those two were fighting made it worse so letting them go and admitting your mistake won't do any good but I love the Verbal spat and Jo kicking part I enjoyed that portion very much

we can't attack on them"! or else we had done it till now"!..."our one move and they will kill her"!...and get our entire state in the mouth of destructive path of war"!

"So damn helpless or I should say intentionally playing victim card"! I just think they want to avoid the war by any mean "! They don't have that in them to fight and win as much I find it wise it's cowardly as well anyway more then planning how to get her released from His captivity they're arguing nevertheless I understand the queen have her reason that's reasonable and very much apprciable

"Accept my Proposal and I will get your little sister back"!...without harm"!...

"She shouldn't accept it he is lion without teeth doing dance on chance if he was so concern about Amer and Jo he won't be talking here or telling her how they're instead he would hunt them down by getting her released

Oh Almighty My lord hear your child"!... "you were charioteer of Arjuna"! you guide him to find his path"!..."now be my guide as well "! "show me a way to get my sister the pride"! "of Amer back"!..."you protected the Virtue of Druapdi"! You protected Mira bai"! please be the protector of my sister"! "today I seek your help"! My lord hear your child"!...

It was heart touchy i didn't had will to let it slid you're the prayer actually gave insight of Queen Avantika, at how helpless she is how she is confused one part she want to hunt her enemies down by striking on them, but other part she want to prevent her men to be at war which invite destruction one part she want her sister back but other part she doesn't want to put thousands of lives on stake

"Jodha run run for your life"! because as soon I get my hand on you"! I will make sure you pay heavy price for this"!...

Well your anger unwanted on first place cause Every culprit try to prove himself innocent, every captor try to escape you cannot held them accountable for what they're ought to do but your anger for the trouble she caused for escaping sound reasonable so I don't find it wrong

"if you love your life then get out of our way"! ..."because I can give up on my life instead of pride "! It's known to everyone"! Be it's my Foe or friend"!

what a line better it's strange wise righteous people be it men or women they fight for Honor they try to live with dignity"! That's another case evil is to powerful anyway in this story it's seems danger and Jo are bet friend always cross each other path

"What a lovely action packed update with lot's plotting and conspiracy"! I am glad you hadn't made any update to emotional type there is always one or other thing intrigued you but sad no way and that's very good of you to do so over all praiseworthy update be it the part of Amer royal discussion be it part of Agra royal discussion or jo and ja part you had done splendid job

While writing about Update I forget to praise your work for intriguing Prologue words

And character sketch nevertheless that's pretty much awesome cast selection for your story they all pretty much suit for the character of royals nevertheless the prologue is short but very meaningful and doesn't reveal much of plot but make sure people know what they going to get in story by Prologue way to go splendid job I am glad to see your index being updated as well before only pages number were there now you shared link to thanks

Chapter 6

"She is really death server witch"! ...

"Not her fault if everyone are after her life"! and most prized possession her pride her virtue they're ought to get death at her hand as she is royal by birth warrior by blood but his line for her

"A wise ruler never seek for war, but ready for them always"!

That's true very wise advise I must say I admire their late father he seem to be men of word and Honor the way he raise them are so damn appreciable they say behind every successful men there is women but behind every successful women there is father who open mindly boost the confidence of daughter 😎

"she lost the chance to even go against such a proposal "! after getting abducted by Mughal"! ... think wisely by mind instead of heart"! it's the matter of her life and pride of Amer not heartily desire"!...

At first instance it's sound as if the Queen mother care about nothing expect pride and Honor of Amer and she held Jo responsible for whatever she is going through but if we read Thoughtfully then we can understand where she is coming from as in previous update you pointed out how even Jo herself was worried at first for left alone with Ja so I understand her helplessness and her fear for Jo just like Avantika is thinking every expect on current situation as queen as sister as daughter as girl the Queen herself thinking as mother as empress

"So getting all of us go through the fire of hell"! she is having comfortable time here"! huh...

Men you and your thoughts he is very comic or your way of writing his part I like this dude so full of humor

How can an Evil witch like you"! look so innocent as an Angel in sleeping form"! ...

Every parents wonder the same about their kids even being bundle of naughtiness like devil how they can look so innocent like angelic while sleeping but here you're no parent but victim of her action so understandable on your part to wonder the same after finding how cool she look

To dream High"! first we need to achieve something high"! By filling Nasir and Jalal ear against Dowgar Queen"! You earn position in Harem and court"! I will do the same"! You took advantage of Their rough time"! I will take advantage of his mistake"!

Oh so evil minded people are on mission to fulfill their evil desire well the evil never win so I am sure here the people will be defeated as well

"I don't care Mirza "! after what they did "! I care a damn about them"!...

Liar liar Trouser on fire you care that's why you're hardening on them in your own way so that it can reduce the rest of people rage against them and they don't do anything to them nice way how he is unaware about his feelings but have a linking there something change in him but instead of acknowledging them and figuring out about them he is in denial mode

"Amer people are not interested "! to get troublesome little evil witch like her Alive."! ..or else till now we may faced trouble by them already"!..

My my his Endearment for her so hilarious troublesome little evil witch Anyway that's not true they're working on it but so far they seem to do nothing yet and I don't see them getting success Anyway near soon

"Maybe they know she is alone "! enough to cause trouble to us"! so they are taking there own time", in getting her back Brother"!...

Seem you like Mughal portion more author how you get to make it so intriguing and humor full that's so cool I like their part allot They do wrong they accept it and try to lighten the environment by their actions or words i like Mirza wording that can be case for sure for their delay

yes you are right mother"! I care about victory "! price can be anything"! I am fine with Jalal every action! as far he win war for me"!...

"But winning a war and ruling are two different thing "! he seem to lack wisdom of Understanding the difference between winning and ruling or even he have more reason not to get tough against Ja like Avantika have reason not to get on war with Ja both are leader they have to think lot before taking decision and acting on them

"Kill you well after all the trouble you caused us"! You really thought"? I will end your misery for once and all by killing you"!

he is when it's come to her he is always one step ahead in thoughts way to fool everyone by his words and action but fulfill his inner wish

"listen you evil monster "! "the only thing you can take away from me is my life"! ... nothing more and less then that"!..

"Evil monster"! evil witch"! good they do seem bold enough to use such a endearment for each other I wonder what they will call each other later on anyway nice she had not once twice but thrice made it clear he can get nothing from her but what if he doesn't want anything from her but he want her entire self what she would do then

"What a mind-blowing update"! it won't be wrong to admit I liked Jo Ja verbal spats they really are attention robber there scene always fill of humor and Tashan which make the update worth waiting you're to good in writing their dialogues there part and that's fun there are lot of lines to add which I enjoy but word limit make me make it short and ignore

Chapter 7

"Not a word "! out of your mouth now"! or i will slice your throat down"! Be quiet Jodha"!

"Men I am tired your empty threat so far "! you get to do nothing against her till now whereas she give you kick and now injured you by your own dagger"!

"Look you are so young to die"! and so beautiful to be treated harshly"! so better don't rile me up"! and answer me honestly"!..

"Oh boy you're so whipped by her beauty and action now after this no matter how hard you go she won't reveal anything

"Isn't the information enough for you to know"? that I am Rajput Royal Princess"!...stubbornness, Honesty, loyalty bravery , run in our blood"!...

"Her way of telling why she is so stubborn this line was really something altogether but I gave it to Jalal way of asking question repeatedly without losing his cool"!

"Top of it didn't you had enough beating at her hands"!

oh my Abdul words sound like best pal way"! Trying to prevent his buddy from suffering more but what can anyone do if he is so kneel to get slaughter

"We should never reveal anything before strangers"!... "even as commoner "! ...then how can you expect me"? to answer ...when I am commander of my Army"!...

"I was really looking forward to it thinking she may give every information to him in her drunk state, but thank heaven she didn't cause if she would done it then it would guilt-trip her for entire life"! But this show how far both can go for their own people for his own people it didn't take even minute from his part to seek information from her take advantage of her situation whereas she's so strong headed that no matter how he tried even in her drunk state she reveal nothing

"I can't believe it my two general "! are here with me just to fill my ear against my own brother"!

that's so like me to bored at moment when people are lying on my face and I know already yet for the sake of them go on listening but at end I do run out of patience poor Nasir had to endure these two dimwit people talk nevertheless here Nasir to is having his own battle between heart and mind one part he wish to hunt Ja down for his action. But other part he doesn't even imaging to have single scratch on him one side he is tired of enduring the humiliation of being weak type emperor who is not able to serve justice cause the one who is doing injustice is his dear one so other side he is tired of Trying to get his brother understand his plight and make him abide by his words. his own faith on His brother is getting weak but he is trying best not to let it broken

"warriors entire life is risky Ajit Singh"! no matter what they do "! attack till we got victory on our feet"! more ever I rather to die on my feet fighting", than live on my knees"! they have a power of large Army"! but we have out strategy as well isn't it"?...

"Why it's have to be about you not your people whom you're leading"! anyway I do got her point as warrior leader she is encouraging her people by taking lead as girl she is at front it's matter allot to men stand behind her i like the dialogues here

"What a weak Ruler Amer had got "! for themselves the ruler couldn't protect her own sister"! she is trying to protect her state"! from hungry wolf Like Afghan"!...

"At least she is still trying her best to fight her trouble instead of giving live commentary or wasting time in talking anyway so many villain with greed of power and position

"First kick then dagger attack "! now slap what's wrong with you women"?...

their verbal spat and action are way more hilarious entire update is about them it's seem so love their part it's so damn humor full and awesome and this line what's wrong she is just trying to show all her Weaponry skills on you to bad you don't appreciate

"Greeting's Prince Jalal"!...you may know for handling empire peacefully", Majority of Of us don't feel pleasure on sight of blood like you do"..

"That's so like KOD I just love this part in that novel but the way you wrote is very much different"! And suit the plot very appreciable

"It doesn't matter you like it or not"! you are going to meet his majesty"! as culprit whose action become threat to empire"!.. in-fact with the addition you defy his orders as well"!...

That's very much cool in the novel ML started to feel betrayed by FL even FL feel guilty but here it's very much inevitable and well expected no hard feeling for each other that's what make me like this story more well written plot and scenes anyway coming to this this scene make me miss HBAS the most one of the finest novel I ever read anyway the thing was how JA men are ready to fight but they didn't fight with these two General cause of JA as he didn't wanted to make a scene he silently surrendered even though he had option not to but that's wasn't an option either he cannot let his enemy win he didn't wanted them to be proven right that he can rebel when it's comes to his own selfish reasons and that's not safe for empire cause if done that then there was high chance even though unwillingly but Nasir had to set order for his death and it could end up creating havoc in empire which both brother cannot risk on no matter what may come and that's what make it pretty much more intriguing

"watch carefully General "! it's your death before you"!...

I just love the way her warrior mode activate and she get full fierce form to make her enemies pay with their life and cherry on cake her line she is best

Awesome well written update so humor full each update gets better then previous one even in this lots of dialogues and scenes were wrote which I really liked specially JO JA part their verbal spat and actions you end the war part sooner but that was worth reading as well

Chapter 8

Feeling are mutual Queen Mother"!..I am so glad to make it alive here"! Even knowing I am better as dead for people here"! ...

"Didn't see that coming she is changed towards her people specially her dear one "that's very hurtful thing to say before a concern mother I know she angry for not getting any help by them disappointed for not being their priority at first at how they just gave her hand to anyone they got at first made her life a sacrificial one still it was so out of her persona to do and say

"I got to make it back here"! alive from the clutches of devils"! i need none of you"! for my protection"! I am way better off on my own"!...

"Well it's seem like her faith broken ! The logical mind knew She's wrong she know they didn't had much choice but heart is hurt and it's not ready to acknowledge any concept of logic and reason yet hence cold feelings same way how we always pray but one failure and often our patience give up and our faith get crippled on the Creator of Universe so very relatable and reasonable way to go author

"She's ought to be change after suffering alone"! Our delay of getting her released didn't broke her spirit"! It's pushed her to think we Abandonment her"!

"Bang on that's what people think sometimes when they really get tired of their bad time as if God to Abandoned us whenever we're suffering nevertheless I am so glad to see how well the Queen understand her sister state of mind that's truly feel like we're family and we stick to each other no matter what may come

"Unknowingly or knowingly "! your life become threat to empire Jalal"!..

Uff that's touchy for Nasir Empire mean nothing before his brother however for Emperor Nasir nothing matter either then empire he cannot let every sacrifice go in drain for his brother but other side he is nothing without him as well how complicated

"Warn the one "! who himself is master of all the conspiracy and plotting"! "against Amer and Mughal Empire"!...

Great so two devil meet again this time with revelation of the real mastermind nevertheless even their part is intriguing always busy in planning plotting even though they failed miserably however this they did got success for time being so let them have fun for while

"um your highness"! we did got to retain our Freedom before of our enemy"! but I can't say the same about our pride"! ..which is badly hurt by their strike"!...

Men they always seems to have meaningful talk it's got us wondering what that's mean nevertheless intriguing so the villain started their job of spoiling the image of jo let's see how well she go to fail them in their move it will be worth

"Is this how she felt before me"? "Unarmed Helpless sick"!...

"One cannot understand other's plight unless he she really are sensitive to others emotion or they themselves go through by it here he is anything but sensitive to others emotion hence he is understanding her sufferings by enduring same fate no wonder time is indeed Powerful karma is bitch and life the biggest teacher the difference is she was at the mercy of her enemy and fate whereas he is at the mercy of his brother and fate

"Of course she did and curse me as hell"! "That's why I am paying for it in this way"!...

my the humor full ja back seriously even at his bad situation he made me laugh instead of having me pity him anyway even if she curse it's work then it's good you deserve it

"what she must be doing now"? I am Imprisoned by my brother"! did she imprisoned herself by her own heart"?

Ok that was touchy lines Imprisoned by own heart wow that's I really marvelous but it's kind of true people with Honor often end up isolating themselves behind the comfort of home walls when they suffer without their mistake they don't get strength to face accusation or mockery of their situation it's break them so here his question was really something altogether

"she cannot be princess "! she is thief a robber witch"! she stole my sleep my peace of mind"!..

Wow that's really something even not being professional thief she robbed you off from your sanity good going

"you know he is your brother"! he won't go against you"! unless you got to do worse against him"!...

Wow no wonder they say right nothing can escape from mother eye she did get to understand Nasir plight here poor men suffering as Emperor as Brother allot he did needed a wisdom strong shoulder to let his pain out here his mother provide him that I am so damn impressed I like how he is torn and feel so damn helpless but he need to pretend to be strong for the sake of honoring his position as strong Emperor it's give insight to the life of people who even having Power to do things as they wish yet they're bound to certain limit in simple word no one in the world are full of joy and peace everyone have their own suffering in life

"Loneliness grief tears endless suffering ", are now my only friend"!

"I am paying the price of being", born as Girl what wrong I done"?

"if it's a lifetime commitment", to bear the pain to born as girl"?

"Then don't make me born as girl "! in my next birth My God don't do this again ever"!...

"That's touchy subjected to humiliation"! For things she had no hand in"! Subjected to suffer pain for being victim"! Life full of suffering endless possibilities of worse future"! It's not anyone wish to live with ever be it men or women ironically women are bound to live like this unless they fight for themselves but not everyone get to fight but not everyone get to give up as well only thing is if we cannot make things better for other we have no right to make it worse for others as well nevertheless here her own people isn't get to help her in her suffering but they're increasingly worsening the situation for her so damn unfair Ja is paying for what he done but what she done to deserve this that's unfair

"Overall awesome update it was so touchy yet kinda added spice of humor which make it worth reading I am glad how you doesn't end up making entire update full of sadness as it's kind of end distressing for readers so hats off to you the dream of JO JA steal the update for me it was best well written but must say you wrote every character in dignified manner no OTT and that's more appreciable

Chapter 9

"I never change my decision"! in the fear of enemies move"!

Wow so the strong Emperor mode activated finally anyway I don't think it's wise on his part to go against his every adviser words but he is emperor he is ought to take risk for the welfare of his people so I do appreciate his move to stay firm on his decision more ever he know Rajput doesn't Backstab at all he know how they're so much bound by their principles and ethics they won't let any harm befall on him if he went there with good intention

"Communication is key of success in every field Khalid"!. Right now both Empires Situation "! are critical in the terms of Reputation"!, it won't be surprised if they ended up on War-field"!. But by the acceptance of meeting make it clear"!. both wish to avoid the war as much they can"!

"well said they both are wise ruler aware about the consequence of being on destructive path of war"! Hence they're trying everything in their power to prevent it from happening "! even if it's means to meet the very person who dare to harm them on first place"! both are very much firm and open minded in the term of working for the well fare of people they rule on so it was ought to expect by them that they would agree to meet this is the only villain I find smart till now

"I don't It's Her highness who agree to meet the Emperor"!, what the Princess who is disgrace to his people"! Would do at the Meeting? which held between to dignified high powerful' people"!.

Oh boy why she is thinking about herself so low darn she's princess for minute I expected her to be cruel against those who are badmouthing her or judging her for the action of their enemies but I don't want her to be bad as well I bet Ja is going to pay gravely for all this

"But he isn't worthy enough "! we can't make him emperor"! Just cause of him being royal blood"!

This made me laugh so hard that I end up choking on the water I was having seriously men first candidate got rejected cause of him not having royal blood second is being rejected for not having ability cross questions is it fair to make him one cause he share royal blood seriously how hypocrite type and hilarious it is

"Cowards run from trouble"! while brave face it"!

Well true this is what always keep me continue fighting cause running away from situation isn't a solution at all today you may escape from it but tomorrow you will end up facing it with more troublesome situation so it's pointless to run

"Wise people wait to strike while foolish people mess everything"! and get themselves kill"! come on it's not the right time to face anything"!

"Lucky brat he have such loyal people by his side"! that they're ready to make him run even if it's mean their reputation of being fearless fighter go down anyway it's one of my pals line they would often stop me saying the same not every-time facing the situation is right sometime time is more important then so called Bravery nevertheless here his men advised are right they Cannot face the situation yet when it's so out of control from every way possible

Anyway this update was pretty much fast and gripping but a short one nevertheless it was still awesome I understand you didn't wanted to go on murder part or mourning part at all so I like it more anyway Nasir is dead the fight going to happen for throne even Bairam khan is dead a very powerful conspiracy against royals pretty shocking and intriguing well written

Chapter 10

"what a luck our princess born with"! first the abduction then the broken engagement"!. Now the death of her fiance"!. As if the shame she brought for our state wasn't enough"! that she is ought to become bad omen"!

"Wait what did you just said how dare them how can they blame the princess for the happening cause of fate so mean and ungrateful undignified of them to do so no wonder Jo was thinking herself do bad and isolating herself from everyone

"It's not her fault that the beast like them have no respect for women's"!, it's not her fault that few kings choose to believe on rumors"! then virtue of women. It's not her fault"! that the death of conspiracy brought the end of mughal emperor"!.

"Wo wow so good well said men that's true"! well written author it was so damn appreciable I was really getting bitter against Amer people but by this you prove it how much dignified and wise they're I know these type of things are happening cause of her enemies still thinking the Amer people believe it I didn't like it but now I know they're failing in their task of demanding her the Amer people love her respect and trust her as much she does

"you know what you both have to do"? lit the fire of emotion in such a way"! that forced them to aim at Amer for revenge"!

"That's so dirty ploy for having his say to throne he is going to target Amer Ja what I think of him and what he do huh nevertheless his move is still pretty much peaceful for him to have his way to throne but dragging Amer in the war of Throne mess in Mughal Empire not fair maybe for people like them had said the quote everything is fair in love and war just to defend the wrong before right

"I agree with them even though the empire can be in chaos"! without leader for long"! but for present finding out the culprit is more important"! in-fact I think it's right way to even choose a new emperor"! who ever find the real culprit and punished them"! will be chosen as our emperor"!.

"Ok this make me recall one of historical fictional movie "! which I watch with friend in India but didn't liked it but just cause it was action packed I did watch entire movie nevertheless there to the royal decide to put such a condition who ever kill the head of enemy will be king even though later on the one who saved the subject and shown more valor in war got chosen to become king anyway here to the council member seems to putting same condition impressive indeed it's actually right to do even though we know it's happening cause ja want this to happen still it's very much dignified move in the term of giving equal to chance to other to prove their ability

"Nothing much we will provide them proof"! which will be fabricated by us against Amer"! hence they will aim for Amer to avenge"!

"Ok so Afghan are the one who created all this chaos in Mughal Empire and they're going to make Amer the culprit in the eyes Mughal people so bad everyone are behind Amer only be it Ja Sh AK Or Af nevertheless they're paying the price of being Rajput who happens to have a peace treaty with them anyway the next para on Af is very much defined but it's suit mostly all of the cowards who dream High and to fulfill their dream happen to go for wrong path coward but wicked entirely black and heartless nothing and no one matter before their aim that's how selfish self-center they're

"If they think we kill him they seems to have proof"! then it's definitely you Shah Abbas Ali"! if we are going to be destroy"! then you won't be left out either"! I will drag you to pit of hell with me"!

Wow so the empress know it's Afghan behind all this conspiracy what a line drag you in the pit of hell with me seriously it's so damn sound hilarious but know the person who said it I believe it to be scary nevertheless if the empress know about it then why it doesn't occur to Mughal that instead of Amer someone else can be behind this or they're so dimwitted to know or think about it

"Years back our father done the same"! I am following same path as him"!, never help two people in war "! who fought and share enmity with you"! At end of war it will be easy for you to win over both"!.

But even dragging Amer in mess to have his way he know they're not the one so of course he will hunt the real culprit down strike on them when they least expected from him so in all way win win situation for him the fate cannot favor him more then this I guess Kind of divide and rule policy understandable point but seriously he is really being smart in plan here even though inwardly he don't want to drag Amer in the mess but he do want to have his way with his all enemies he know very well he need to get SH and AK out of capital to get the advisers and council member at his side their absence will provide him space to work on this but what he want from Amer he can get by SH and AK moves the Amer already suffer at war with AF hence another war on way won't let them stand strongly hence after becoming Emperor he will forward hand to them which they would having no option shake for sure so master plan must admit but I am glad to know he is the only smart person to know Amer isn't behind any of this even though he himself making them target of it

"You're mine only mine and to make sure of it"! soon I will make you mine in all sense"! It's just matter of time first the throne then you"!.

"Knew it he won't forget her all to get her he can go to any extent in life making Amer pay fie they did all it's just for others to know and think inwardly he is cornering his enemies by all sides to have his way with them poor jo have no idea what's coming for her

"When a warrior failed in war the warrior face death, but apart from death"! I faced everything your majesty"!. Which left me with nothing just to admire the nature that to alone"!

It's really something so powerful and touchy i must admit in simple words calmly she voiced out her situation which is so painful poor jo what she isn't going through it's hard to see Fierce bold daring princess like this

"Is that really a shame of your brother's action"! it's pity for me cause you're human at the end"! or its one of your political move"! to manipulate your opponent your majesty '!

Wow well said so here the witty princess mode activated well said and pointed out she did caught him of guard tit for tat before he caught her off guard now she nevertheless it's show how well one understands the other both are royal and known to such a move of course they're aware of the fact no one do anything for other without any personal gain so it was ought to expect from them that they may see others help in such a way

"Is that compliment", or way to butter me up"? into giving in your demands "? without creating fuss"!.

after so long she get to say thing so hilarious as such I love it it was so humor full but seriously her way of saying all this to Nasir is really something appreciable even though she know how powerful he is what he can do yet she isn't being one to get dominated by him and I had to give it to Nasir for being so patience full for her till now or imaging someone else acting this way before him he would have their head down by sword but love this flashback part of Jo and Nasir conversation it was meaningful and very much intriguing

"Indeed but that's can't change the fact"! you did same mistake as father "! trusting over coward manipulative brutes for peace of Amer"!

"Wo that's so powerful word to say before empress who held power to have your head down but that's right as well not once twice but thrice they're betrayed yet they're committing the mistake of trusting them again her anger is justified after all it's her life which is put on stake for the welfare of others nevertheless it's so pitiful to watch how her life is traded by her own family without care about her

"It's not big thing "! you're born to win '!

"Yes yes she is victor of her life after all I like the conversation part between two sister it was powerful and touchy well written

Awesome intriguing well written update each chapter of this story getting interesting further and further making me hook to it the scene the plot the conspiracy specially the emotion all are well written splendid job author

Chapter 11

"They already March for Amer Jalal "! and like you ask we brought few men on our side"! by money few are kind of sent to sleep for good"!

oh my Jesus they're such a the two dimwit left capital to make Ja rule even they don't know but like seriously buying loyalty of people by money and position eliminating people from Earth who isn't ready to be on their side oh as much I find it hard to digest it's bitter truth of today's world as well the politicians do the same anyway I find it hilarious the way they said this sent to sleep for good

"We got informed by our source"! The Emperor send messenger to Agra"! who got seized by Afghan king"! he is in his custody that to alive"!.

Seized by him that's fine still alive that's not the matter to ignore at allhe definitely have something very important to convey and even if the message may not be to important it's your right to know about it and duty as to be emperor to get the messenger back alive"! but right now the most important thing is to get hold on throne but lot's of things are happening so many questions yet to answered his half of plans are based on hope and well implied ways let's see he succeeded in it or not

"Animals we will use animals as shield"! cows buffaloes camels "! I heard they take them on high regard '! Either they will come out open to fight"! Or we will be successful in creating whole in wall to step in"!

"That's cruel monstrous how the hell they get such a cruel ideas huh I know the purpose as it's already mentioned still is it necessary cannot they find another ways to do so they know Rajput have advantage of height and we'll skilled archers and weapon's but they're not penniless either they're here with various types of advanced Artillery and well armed men who can outnumber the Rajput's on hand to hand combat in battlefield still they're going to stoop so low in to use mute animals who have no hand leg in their desire of war and political actions that's shows his failure as warrior and leader of army he command

"Till when I need to suffer like this dammit '? I ain't even sure that even if I win the war "! then I may get the Throne or not"! Jalal won't let me take the throne without fight "! right now he might be in prisoner but he will definitely fight me as soon he get chance'!

Well I don't he think he needs to fight with you anymore"! when he already going to achieve the throne at your absence but again fighting with you going to matter when you're going to escape alive from this war even if the times comes and he get to fight with you I don't think you stand a chance before him with your one leg nevertheless I enjoying these two dimwits misery cause they're paying for whatever wrong they done in own ways

Specially Sharif he is very much involved in every wrong happening in two empire he deserve to suffer this way hunger ego hurt lose of leg bitter truth how far he is getting from his goal what can be better suffering than this

"But stay alert they will defiantly"! Going to play dirty when they're unable to defeat us by playing fair"! For them winning the war matter right or wrong doesn't"!

Indeed by they would they're enemy a coward and wicked one they would definitely try to use various ways to win the war be it cruel and wrong or right and fair and it's going to be foolish if you expect them to play fair just cause you're being fair so far with enemies always stay alert to expect worse move by them you never know when they can outfoxed you

"It's not always fair rule that you were loyal to king"! then you have to be loyal to there kin's as well"! But by every way if they're really deserving "! then it's the right thing to be loyal to them as well isn't it '?

"Well deserved the loyalty by earning it sound fair but here you hadn't done anything to earn that so playing I am real rightful owner of throne just cause I am royal and deserve it won't work still it's wise plot to have at least those by your side who really think you as capable one for throne and just wished to serve the royal blood

"I will like to let you all take your time"! to decide on own who to side with'! But one thing I will make it clear "! I don't let go what's mine '! No matter what may come"! with blessing of Almighty I make sure to get what I want "! and keep it with me till the end '!

"Well he have his way with words I must admit first try to side them by his side evoking the sense of dying loyalty of vows they had given to former Emperor then installing deep fear in those who disagree with idea of having him as Emperor not bad point but I must admit it can get wrong as well people with Honor may find it hard to take they even end up rebelling and he need to be bit considerate to the people a bit kind cause the adviser Scholar have upper hand in instigating the common folk to revolt and already he know the distraction that cause by these revolts against empire or Emperor

"Your highness what we should do now '? Fire at them and commit sin of killing animals'! being immune to fact if they reach more close "! then how gravely it can cost us '!

That's tricky and complicated situation I must admit animals are equally important for world as human being are choosing one side and letting other ruined is highly unfair and wrong on many level to protect themselves if fire and let those animals die it will be worse decision if they don't strike and let their enemy move it will be inevitable doom for them in simple word Adham had them where he wanted them to be either they strike and let them back out by proving their assumption wrong of having them emotionally give in to their trap or face them in battlefield by coming out of their fortress and gave in to their wish both option seem risky as hell for them they can get outnumber by their enemy if they move out they can end up doing injustice to the one fine creation of God even though being royal and warrior they sworn to protect them

"What a timing"! get our troops out and my horse "! it's time we end it for once and all'!

"Wow fate did seem to favor them not only they end up saving the animals and destroying the Artillery of enemies but they got to use the animals to cause distraction in enemies troop as well and they got to get aid by some troop coming from forest hill areas so final war going to happen let's see who win who lose

"It was pretty much awesome update but short one still so many planning and plotting going on in Agra and Amer with one motto only to win be it throne or war you had wrote it so well more then actions you clear the insight of everyone in para as well if dialogues aren't enough to do that job well done you're making every update worth reading

Chapter 12

"Patience Ajit "! we can't take action against our enemy "! without knowing what's going on with them at the moment'!

Well said cause if you know your enemy and know yourself you will win every war with them but not knowing may inevitable doom for you so when the matter if of thousands of lives on stake patience is must even though it's hard to stay patience with enemy before you helpless and very much worn out the idea of attacking on them that very movement is to tempting to resist

"It's not how we're trained for war'! We rather die on our feet than lived on knee '! Our entire life is risky"! for our mother land Sacrifice is our only policy'! Don't let your blood get cold "! don't forget who is before us"! what's Their intention against us "! "Our every strike on them should be deadly"! kill the enemy"! "Make victory your slave"!

That's bold and so much daring what a bone chilling powerful dialogue she have ways with word as well when it's come to evoke courage and strength in hearts of warriors who are losing the guts to fight anymore courage is everything in war cause ever war start from mind and end with heart seriously it was steal part of update she see her sister outnumber by her enemy she know her entire army is losing the war the enemies are stepping forward with more courage and strength to crush them yet her not losing the will to fight courage to face them even if it's death before her is most appreciable

"I trust you people with my life"! I want your trust as well"! I wont let anyone here "! Till I am breathing alive out there before them fighting with my head on'!

Woo wow that's so much like brave-heart well skilled courage's warrior and leader words she's really something when it's comes to protecting her people must say author what a way to write about war she knows at this point faith of her soldier is really important for her and state hence she said this but not just to have them on her side but she really meant it with all heart I am really loving the way how she herself step forward to protect them unlike others who push them forward to protect themselves

"To much just to win over us "? to bad I cant let you succeed '! Nevertheless like Lord Buddha said "! There is no hiding place in sky earth or sea from the sin you committed'! Here I am going to make you pay for them"!

Wow as far I know dying on battlefield known to be very honoured death nevertheless it's true word we pay for everything we do be it wrong or right must say the character gets best lines to speak I am loving this war part and dialogues of Her her fighting positive spirit is really something to admire she say all this with such a confidence and courage as if she would really win

"Are you by chance suggesting me"! to run away with my grandchild"! like coward and make him coward in everyone eye"! who run away to save his own neck '!

"My my such a pride as if the death mean nothing to themi know they don't value the life any less but when it's come to Honor of their clan and their own pride they always seem to take a life nothing gosh here the adviser are suggesting them what's best for the prince but the grand Empress seem to be more fearless here no wonder Jo and Avantika are ready to sacrifice their own life for them

"There is no chance of good and bad"! it's time demand for us"! To gave them here it's our duty"! that for security purpose none of our subject left out"! to become prey at the hand of hungry wolves marching to us"!

"Way to go Grand Empress she's truly a royal blood fearless by heart courage's by mind and Rajput by every mean they all aren't only relaying on their queen fighting out on West part or princess assisting her but they seem to well prepared to defend themselves on their own that's true royal way and to know it's women this way ready to risk their life i know it's fictional but I know the strength of women shouldn't be underestimated at all so it's so good to read

"That's news then do one thing send our troop for Adham aid '!

"Again coward Enemies they have no sense of responsibility towards their own people for personal gain or assuming they can win they're ready to risk their life anyway already Adham had outnumber Jo and Avantika if he sent his own troop to help him I bet he will end up winning as the Amer people doesn't seems to have any backup yet however nothing can be predicted in the battlefield beforehand he is going to be the third one between two people fight who will gain the most profit by the loss of two he will end up weakening both sides

"Stop running you cowards"! face us '! Face your death die in shame like you deserve'!

"So finally they won it was really thrilling part but they got to make victory their slave and nothing can outdone the look on face which had won the losing battle here Avantika action to end all of them by provoking the running army of enemy spoke how angered she's how she so wish to teach them a lesson to never mess with her

"We will be alert just do as I say"! they thought we can fight by standing behind walls"! now they should know we can fight on any place in anyway and win the war's to "!

Ok that's doesn't seem to wise why to risk left over people life just to teach another lesson to enemy ok I got the point the west part gate broke but it's high time they move back to fortress to get aid for their injured solders and work on the loss they face but again the enemies just run away they didn't surrender there are chances they may come back hence this even though risky but fine decision to

"Today we face two foe's at same time"! Even though they come individually "! yet seem to work together today '!

"That's not new their enemies desire only one thing your loss and when two people seem to have one interest then shaking hands together to work isn't bad idea as they say Enemy's enemy is friend so it's not to surprising at all

"You wish to conquer the city strengthen your force is one way to go about it "! the other is to weaken the city from inside "! if you create grain shortage it will lead to Hunger. And hunger take no time to turn into anger "! the Angry subject turn on the ruler"! Which leads to riot "! A conquer need only help the rebellion the city collapse on itself"!

"Well said in the game of earning power no one can be trusted at all not even your allies or foes as they can outsmart you any time in-fact not even the one who stayed loyal to you from long here to Marwar is their ally yet the state is playing the game in his own way uff what a conspiracy no one would ever get to know and they will win without getting blamed for it the politics is really something thank heaven Amer seem to taking effort in investigating about matter as such and trying best to prevent it from happening

"There are high chance everything is happening well planned by Prince Jalal'! It's can't be coincidence that he come before all of us"! when Sharif and Adham are out from here '!

"It took you people to king to understand"! Even yet you're confused no wonder Ja got to outfoxed you you're bunch of idiots thinking yourself to be smart asses it's all planned by him it was all his way from start to never let anyone know about it yet have you all where he wanted you all to be he possess strength of lion mind of fox

"Rajput's are known to keep there promise '! All we need to do is remind them again '! But what does the peace treaty say '!

"That's not fair you betray them again and again you taken them for granted and even after all the hell situation you made them face you expect them to carry out the promise they made I don't know you're being idiotic or to hopeful anyway author in this part you seem to either intentionally ignore it or you forget to write but I think it was really important for this story to know who killed Bairam khan and how Jalal killed Afghan king Shah Abbas Ali I mean if no offense but I would really love to read about the war happen between Afghan king and Jalal nevertheless he's dead it's shocking but good as well one went down after all for Jalal everything come out as he planned the fate seems to much favorable to him

"She had no idea what coming for her "!

"Indeed she doesn't but I know the author won't make her get miserable before the devil like you even you won't have idea what you may get in form of her be aware of kicks and attack or else what will happen to your image as Emperor

"Awesome update marvelous job you done writing this one the description of court detail and wars were very good I really enjoy reading this one every updated get better than previous one which is really good

Chapter 13

"Just kill me aaah already"! it's unbearable please kill me'!.

"Those who didn't beg for anything even watching worse scenario who are known to be brave-heart and fear less end up begging for death a warrior may endure everything but a human at end always end up getting tired of fighting and enduring pain how ironic and brutal Is it

"War demand sacrifice of people"! It's give suffering in return '! That's why wise leader never seek out for war"! but they stay ready for it "!

"One of the main reason of avoiding the war's but greed of power position and vengeance does seem to over power all the logical reasoning and war happen making others pay gravely

"They they say cause of one person we all are facing this '! I had heard a story when a saint was walking a throne got stuck in his feet he get it out. Then the saint walked towards sweet stall and brought a glass of champagne and pour over throne plant '! With intention to not only get rid of throne but the root cause of Throne as well so that it doesn't bother anyone later on !

"I heard this story to so here Amer people think war is thorn pricking them to bleed by heart and Jo is the root cause of Thorn not fair not at all fair she have no hand in this why everyone are after her didn't she bleed with them as well by fighting with her life to protect them how they can forget all the good thing of her that's so ungrateful and mean of them to held her responsible for all the bad happening worse I feel for Jo poor Princess had to endure this as well that to from her own people it's worse than death for such a dignified girl like her

"killing me will fix everything"? that's what you and all of them think isn't it"? then listen I won't even breath another for second"! If I am being the cause of my people suffering '! Here take this dagger and kill me '! End my suffering with everyone suffering here '! Kill me cause royal by birth rajputani by blood fearless by heart I rather die than live with Shame '!

"Exactly would it end everyone suffering"? what's the guarantee they won't have another enemy to face cause of some other reason don't they know the life of royals the so called danger the entire nation is facing how they can come under some dimwit head's words and take their own well wisher as enemy I know they love her respect her trust her but I think it's all conditional as far she do food for them they face no trouble they will sang her praise shower her with Honor and as soon they get in trouble they will lash out on her if you trust someone you won't find under the influence of anyone no one can instigate you but here the base of trust pillar of love is weak poor Jo and worse is how her own army to doesn't display any emotion of protest against such action of common folk

"Deccan is really becoming headache for us "! Our every troop suffer death there "! We failed to form any alliance with them"! forget about having any business there "!

"No offense but Deccan place seem to be state full of terrorist that we cannot negotiate with them no matter what the more we try the further and more powerfully they strike nevertheless here Mughal doesn't seem any different either they're here to hunt the kings of state down so that they can take their place and rule no one will like to let it happen no matter what may come top of it they seen your way of working to have your way in every mean hence they're careful and smart enough not to gave you a single chance to caught them of guard

"He was fearless and so I am "!and even you know I know "! Amer isn't behind his death"! And he might be unprepared but I ain't'! For empire peace it's required"! On emperor part to go there"!

"What a liar he's they may not know but we know why he's so eager to pay visit at Amer after all he admit to himself in previous updates first Throne then you and we know the you here very well I must admit it won't be easy for him but must say the way he's so damn determine make the plot more intriguing let's see what happens at Amer when he go there will they welcome him like they welcome the Emperor or they will face him on battlefield as well

"As always in every every war"! the massive massacre of humanity happen"! at the hand of human only "! What a shame "!

"Indeed what a brutal truth one of the most beautiful creations of God are known to be human alas our actions are worse prove us to be worse creation nevertheless war's are always come out to be destructive but here the lines of grand Empress are so

"Then stop that "! And March our soldier there to get hold on traitors", who are our ally but working as snake under sleeves"! Trying to weaken the city from inside "!

That's so cool I am very impressed how you're making the royals of Amer working on every issue be it was economic development or stock it's indeed very much appreciable not only this it's gave insight that the spy group and intelligence group in state is recruited very well that's why they do end up caught people soon who are working against them it's impressive even they seem to having traitor in states for various reason but they're working on it matter the most but this lines was to good as well working like snake under sleeve

"I know what Honor, freedom relation mean to us"! but just like with time"! according to situation law changes for the welfare of people"! even priorities and meaning of such things change as well "!

"Indeed it does "! but wronging one for the sake of others"! Doesn't seem reasonable at all"! Top of it when life's comes secondary to people when it's comes to their Honor how they can accept the change of sacrificing the Honor for the sake of living that to for others"! it's sound like instead of being apologize she's trying to defend her point of whatever she done to Jo she should say what she wish to hear it already know that she took decision as generous ruler who values the life of her subject her soldiers instead of playing the so called cards of circumstances and all

"At least you know not striking deal "! led to quick death and striking deal led to slow death "! both way it's led to inevitable death"!

Oh and sometimes back the very person talked about changing priorities with time nevertheless well said they fight with them they die today they make a deal with them and die tomorrow no matter what they do they gonna die anyway nevertheless it's always complicated to strike a deal with those who isn't going to side with you at your worse time nevertheless Nasir always seem to have his way but he don't know Avantika is expert in this however I know she priorities the life and welfare of her people to much to give into his wish

"It's important for our enemies and allies"! to be aware of fact we don't fear death"! in case our both option led us to death "! I prefer former way at least it dignified one '!

"Yeah live with Honor or die with Honor the Honor matter the most everything come secondary before Honor to bad people strike on the very Honor of others be it women or men and then kill them to have no Shane no regret whatsoever nothing matter before their greed their own desire

"Awesome update the flashback part of Nasir and Avantika conversation was very intriguing it was touchy update but didn't distressed us at least you have your way writing the dignified part of everyone be it royal common or anyone way to go author well done