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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: binduprasad41


There is so many things related to NJAPA di...I couldn't express...most important NJAPA help me in so many ways .

>>>🤗ok ok.. and underlined - so glad to hear that!

It is not just a story for me...
And same goes to HBAS. 😳

>>>Awww 🤗

I know times, era, torture, suffering etc etc are different in both novels but pain and hurt are similar.

👍🏼

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

🤣
What did you do Lashy?


>>>🥺

Originally posted by: roseraja1915


Chellam, it is because our author is in England that she can get away with murder ... I mean... 40 lashes!😊

🥺 Rosejaan delivered the death blow too...

with a smiling face!

I know how Abhimanyu felt now... surrounded from all sides.. 😭

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Posted: 7 years ago

A literary criticism.. Bindu dear!👏 👏
I love your simple way of expressing your thoughts and feelings, which goes a long way to enhance the beauty of your comments..
@ Blue:
In five simple sentences, at the outset, you have briefed your reaction about the chapter..
@ Red:
You reveal your sympathy and empathy towards Khan Sahib and Heera..just as an elderly member in the family would act in such a situation..
@ Green:
A psychological analysis of the action of the villain characters.

@ Purple:
Your challenge and curses..

@ Bold:
Your Observation..

@ Italics:
Your Inference..

@ underlined:
Your wish..

@ pink:

Your appreciation ..

Superb!!


Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Chapter 52. 😭
I hate Khalil for his cruel act which he did only to satisfy himself.
I hate Farooq sahib for doing everything dirty in the name of religion.
I hate Mahendra for his betrayal to his community and most important for putting someone in danger only to satisfy himself that he is right.
I hate shehzaade for giving everyone opportunity to manipulate himself and rule his mind and only to prove himself that he is not weak he harm someone in barbaric way.
I hate everyone who took pleasure in hurting someone.

What crime Heera and Khan sahib did that they have to suffer like that...Heera just like any other sister or baisa asking justice for her sister only and Khan sahib just trying to save one partially blind girl by harming none.

Big mistake of Khan sahib is that he never done anything wrong to shehzaade...his career is like white sheet...but he did one tiny mistake which created small dot in his white sheets which is visible to everyone infront of huge mistakes of Khalil and Farooq sahib in their almost black sheets.
In this selfish world you have to play grey...not totally white or black.

Starting of the chapter shows shehzaade inner battle... he understand everything and everyone ...why Khan sahib did everything but his big ego couldn't let him do right thing.
He is also suffering in his own way...he never be in peace...Ofcourse how can he when he knows he is wrong.
Power and money bring so much but it also turn someone helpless infront of power...hunger of power...shehzaade know what is wrong and what is right but because he wanted to show everyone his power and most important he wanted to show himself that he is not weak that's why when his subconscious telling him what he is doing is wrong...he is stubborn enough to ignore it.
Even he knows Farooq sahib is wrong...his motive is not good but because of religion power he couldn't punished him.
Wow Farooq sahib just wow...you are brilliant in your job...very cleverly you manipulated shehzaade...your God never will forget your sin... one day you realise how far you went to prove your point is right.
God...how much I hate this old man.

Heera...how truly she thought her situation is far more better than Khan sahib ...but nothing less than also...pain is similar.
God...never thought day was come when Heera treated like that...mere darogah mocking on her...taking pleasure in her helplessness...just to see her helpless he destroyed years of Hard work...her herbs...medicines which would save so many life...knowledgeable book which written by year's of research...so many feelings related on it but all thrown in dust.
But thank God she managed to save Khan sahib's precious gift...binocular and magnifying lens .
Thank God she managed to remind shehzaade his promise to treat her like a noblewoman...i like the way she carefully selected her words infront of shehzaade ...she used diplomacy...best she is in.
But unfortunately this little incident added more fire in shehzaade anger...yet again he felt helpless or weak infront of her.
Inbetween all this I am glad atleast Gauri is there for her...silently supporting her...unlike Khan sahib.
God...his suffering is unimaginable...that stupid guards forgot to unshackle him or they did deliberately ...poor Khan sahib couldn't even walk properly.
Phew but he managed to get few guards in his favour because of his talent...in exchange of favour he promised to teach him his famous aim...but what an irony...he didn't know after flogging he couldn't able to breath properly also.
Finally some good news...
Tejraj met Ustaad after taking huge risk.
Khan sahib tried his best to convince him...but as usual Tejraj is not sure.
I can't blame him for that...why he take huge risk to support him...whom he doesn't know properly...unless he wanted to do something for his Rajput community...if only he has patriotic feeling .
Let's hope Heera's words do magic to change his mind and make him brave enough to go against his own brother.
Shehzaade struggling with his own self...ready to prove everyone he is powerful ...only to satisfy his ego he punished two mere guards.
Khan Sahib case managed to take his peace and sleep ...this case not only effect Khan sahib and heera but him too.


It's take years of hard work to create someone like Ustaad ...he is irreplaceable shehzaade knows that but refused to accept...that make him more angry.
He is unhappy because he is lost someone like Ustaad...he is helpless infront of power.
After so much happened with Ustaad but still he is stands strong unlike anyone which shehzaade doesn't like...Ustaad testing his patience...which made shehzaade turned into devil.
I feel terrible after reading Khan sahib fear...fear for his love,fear for his men and fear for so many people who depend on him.
God...when he tried to explain himself...that was so hurtful enough to break stone also but it didn't affect shehzaade who is blind by his ego.
Khan sahib is example of great human being ...in that terrible condition also he found out something positive to console himself...he is happy his men are not there in his place ...Heera is not there to witness that horrible act.
But when his men and his heera see him... they all are going to understand how much shehzaade tortured him...enough to send Heera guilty for life time.
I know by God grace he is going to heal but marks of barbaric act never going to erase.
After all this I know shehzaade never able in peace...after hurting someone who once dear to him ...he will also going to suffer in emotional way.
What a beautiful relationship shehzaade and Khan sahib once shared na...more than mentor...much more than Ustaad...and most important much more than brother.
Year's taken to gain trust that had Ustaad on shehzaade but everything destroyed by dirty politics.
I always feel proud of Khan sahib because he never double crossed shehzaade for his love Heera...so beautifully he handled both relationship but now everything shattered.
I feel pity for shehzaade who lost gem of human being.
We all are human there is nothing shameful to admit that we feel weak infront of our emotions but ironically shehzaade couldn't effort to be like human once.
Lines in that end...brilliantly written.
It brings tear in my eyes...we could feel Khan sahib and heera pain through it.
How much both are suffering.
I know in the end Khan sahib will win but this incident ...No one is going to forget .
Lashy di...please after epilogue write one chapter... Heera and Khan sahib surrounded by full of love, Khan sahib' s men and Heera maids enjoying and teasing them.
I wanted to feel their happiness .
All in all...superb chapter...well thought and presented brilliantly.
It's your magic of pen which silenced everyone.

After reading that barbaric act I feel horrible So I understand how much difficult for you to write that part .
Now waiting eagerly for next chapter . ..which brings hope for Akheera and for us.



Edited by karkuzhali - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Apaaa... reverse gear fini...
Now from page 25 onwards!

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


A literary criticism.. Bindu dear!👏 👏
I love your simple way of expressing your thoughts and feelings, which goes a long way to enhance the beauty of your comments..
@ Blue:
In five simple sentences, at the outset, you have briefed your reaction about the chapter..
@ Red:
You reveal your sympathy and empathy towards Khan Sahib and Heera..just as an elderly member in the family would act in such a situation..
@ Green:
A psychological analysis of the action of the villain characters.

@ Purple:
Your challenge and curses..

@ Bold:
Your Observation..

@ Italics:
Your Inference..

@ underlined:
Your wish..

@ pink:

Your appreciation ..

Superb!!


Periyamma has broken it down into the 'Ashtarasam' 👏 Wonderful, Bindup!

@ Lavanya... did you check... I responded to your post on page 31.. and posted your lovely poem on page 1 along with Periyamma's story so far! 🤗
Edited by lashy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


A literary criticism.. Bindu dear! 👏 👏
I love your simple way of expressing your thoughts and feelings, which goes a long way to enhance the beauty of your comments..
@ Blue:
In five simple sentences, at the outset, you have briefed your reaction about the chapter..
@ Red:
You reveal your sympathy and empathy towards Khan Sahib and Heera..just as an elderly member in the family would act in such a situation..
@ Green:
A psychological analysis of the action of the villain characters.

@ Purple:
Your challenge and curses..

@ Bold:
Your Observation..

@ Italics:
Your Inference..

@ underlined:
Your wish..

@ pink:

Your appreciation ..

Superb!!



God...I don't know what to say...😲

Feelings which I can't express...like Feeling extremely happy...our multitalened Patti likes my review...guilty that you put so much effort for highlighting my points so beautifully...emotional by your unconditional love for me.
Mere thank you is not enough but still...

Thank you so much for this beautiful surprise! 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Dr. Bablookutty in action..
Image result for pic of B&B hospital

( The B&B Multi Specialty Hospital is extraordinarily busy today..All the Medical staff and the others have promptly reported for duty. The Chief Medical Officer Dr. Babloookutty, along with the Chief Psychiatrist Dr. Baby'kka, looks very busy moving around here and there, checking everything..)

Dr. Babloo: Chief Nurse, Is the 'peration theatre kept ready?
C.N.: Yes doctor.. All the assisting staff have been called for duty immediately..
Dr. Babloo: That's fine..
C.N.: ahem.. Doctor...may I know why this hubbub all of a sudden? Is any VIP getting admitted here today..? In which case we have to take care of security arrangements..
Dr. Baby: All these things have already been taken care of doctor.. A police team is escorting the patient..
C.N.: Police team? Why Doctor Baby'kka..? The patients are not allowed to bring police force inside the hospital premises..
Dr. Babloo: I know.. But it is a 'feshal' request from the relatives of the patient..
C.N.: Who is the...
( Suddenly the siren of the ambulance pierces the ears..A strong, sturdy, young man drenched in a pool of blood is brought in an unconscious stage..)

Awww 😭

Dr. Babloo: Oh my God! ..Nurse..! take him to my 'feshal' room..and clean his wounds..
Dr. Baby: Doctor.. he is a VIP..Can I oversee his treatment personally..?

Such lovely care from the two kiddo docs...

Dr. Babloo: No.. Doctor'kka.. 'ccording to the 'griment' I should see boys..
( A lovely teenage girl comes running after the stretcher..)
C.N.: Hey girl.. Who are you..You are not supposed to go after the patient..
Dr. Babloo: Yes..only close relatives are 'llowed..that's the rule of the 'spital..
Girl: Oh my God.. He is my husband..

>>😲

Dr. Babloo: Do you also have wounds..? I don't see anything..
Girl: No.. my husband has wounds..I don't have..
Dr. Baby: Then you need psychological treatment..a counselling..
Dr. Babloo: Yes.. Dr. Baby'kka will take care of you.. She is an 'xpert..
Girl: Ma Bhavani.. please help me..

>>> Heera! 😭

Dr. Babloo: Who is that? have you brought your own doctor? You are not 'llowed that.. Nurse.. ask her to go and wait outside..
Girl: No doctor.( cries). I have the proper medicine to cure his wounds.. I prepared it myself with the help of Vaid kaka..
C.N.: Look here girl.. As per hospital rules, the patients are treated only by the doctors.. No unqualified persons are allowed here ..

>>> 😲
Girl: Oh no.. I am not unqualified.. I am a herbalist.. I know about wounds and how to treat them..I have treated him once for his wounds..
Dr. Baby: ( soothingly).. My dear girl.. leave all your worries.. Your husband is in the safe hands..
Dr. Babloo: Yes..
Girl: Ma Bhavani..Give me patience..😭

>>>> 😆 Ramachandra!
Dr. Babloo: What.. do you want patients for your herb medicine?😲

>>> Hayooo! 😆
Dr. Baby: I think Dr. Babloo.. She needs immediate counselling.. She is upset by her husband's condition..
Dr. Babloo: Yes Doctor'kka.. Take her to your room.. I will go to the 'peration theatre..( Goes)
😲
Dr. Baby: Come on Girl.. What's your name?
( A nurse comes.. )
Nurse: Doctor.. There are more than half a dozen girls waiting outside and shouting incoherently about something.. But they are repeatedly cursing a person.
I thought they need immediate attention of a psychiatrist...
Dr. Baby: Did they mention the name of the person?😕
Nurse: Yes doctor.. They are cursing someone called 'Advisor'..

>>> Oh I have a strong guess I know who the girls might be... and whom they are all cursing!😲
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[ Wait for the details of the treatment procedure by Dr. Bablookutty]


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A


😲...why eeess Lashy fainting?🤔
(After making us all faint with those lashes...)


You words were just as impactful... 😊

Originally posted by: Vmanoh

Good Morning / Afternoon / Evening to all B&B's. . 🤗 . MD was Superrr! Kawsi was a pleasant surprise. Will share details later.

Writing while travelling. Going to Kathirgamam - Another popular Lord Murugan / Karthikeya temple in the south of SL & return tomorrow. Not able to read all the posts on the C52 update. 😔 as I'd like. Saw Sandy's MD pic! 😃 . Rest later. 🤪


have a great trip, Vathsy... when you get a few minutes before sleep, you can always catch up on your HW 🤗
Edited by lashy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Dr. Bablookutty in action.( Contd)


( In the operation theatre..Dr. Bablookutty is busy performing the operation on the patient with multiple wounds that had resulted in the loss of blood. He is assisted by his best staff..)

Dr. Babloo: Okay.. did any of you count the number of wounds?
Staff no. 1.: Yes doctor.. There are more than 40 fresh ones and a few scars from old ones..
>>>😭

Dr. Babloo: The fresh ones look like someone cut him with blade..
Staff no.2: I asked his wife doctor.. She said his boss whiplashed him..
Dr. Babloo: Ah.. strange that he has all the wounds in his back..
S.No 1.: She said they will give lashes only on the back..
Dr. Babloo: But some of the scars are in on his breast..
S. No.2.: She said he got those wounds in the war..
Dr. Babloo: ( Smiles) Oh.. he went to war like Jalal uncle..Is he a king?
S.No.2: Don't know doctor..
( A nurse enters..)
Nurse: Sorry for the interference doctor..His wife wants to see you..I told her you won't see anyone in the middle of your operation..But she is adamant..
Dr. Babloo: mmm..Yes.. I think it would be better if she is 'llowed in here. But ask Dr. Baby'kka also to come with her..
Baby and Babloo being quite kind!
( Nurse goes.)
Dr. Babloo: Nurse.did you check his fever with fevermeter ?
S.No 1: Yes doctor.. it is 105 degrees.. We also took blood for testing..
Dr. Babloo: WHAT? You took blood.. Did he have any blood in his body..?
😭
( Dr. Baby'kka enters with the girl, who came with the patient..)
Dr. Babloo: Now doctor'kka.. what does the girl want to do here?
Dr. Baby: She says she will tell you about how to do the operation..
Dr. Babloo: WHAT?
😆
Girl: Yes doctor.. I had done operations on many injured people..Mohan Banna.. Dhaya Banna..Bahadur..
😆
Dr. Babloo: doctor'kka.. can we ask her to 'ssist us?
Babloo didn't get distracted by the name Bahadur!😲😆
Dr. Baby: Yes you can Doctor.. We sometimes depute doctors from outside..
Dr. Babloo: Hey girl.. this uncle seems to have so many wounds and scars.. How did he happen to get them? Did he go to war like Jalal uncle? Or did he fight Mohan with the knife?
Girl: Doctor.. He didn't fight with Mohan.. Mohan banna is a nice person.. He won't fight with anyone..
Dr. Baby: Person? Mohan? But Jalal uncle once said Mohan was a tiger he met him in the forest..
😆
Girl: ( confused) Forest?..He used to go to the forests in the nights.. but tigers won't come during the nights..
😆
Dr. Baby: Okay.. Just sit and watch quietly..Dr. Bablookutty is an expert doctor ..
Girl: But .. but who will sing during the operation?
Dr. Baby& Dr Babloo: SING?😕
Girl: Yes.. If anyone sings, the patient won't feel the pain..I know about it..
Hayoo Rama! 🤣
Dr. Baby: So.. when you were doing operation, will someone sing?
Girl: Yes when I was operating on Bahadur, I asked his master to sing..
Dr. Babloo: Who is Bahadur?
Dr.Baby: Was he a small boy? How old was he? Only small children listen to songs..
Girl: I don't know how old is he.. but he is my husband's lovely horse..
Dr. Babloo: Oh..God.. are you an animal doctor also?
Athaane paarthein!😆
Girl: No.. but I did the operation without giving him pain killers. That's why I asked his master to sing..
Dr. Baby: Now.. in what way you can help Dr. Bablookutty to perform the operation?
Dr. Babloo: ( Smilingly)😉😊 I have already finished the 'peration'kka.. Just the patient has to wake up that's all..It may take 4 or 5 hours..
Girl: No doctor.. If I sing, he will wake up immediately..
( She sings a melodious song..The patient opens his eyes.)
Patient..: H..e.e...ra...
Girl: Khan Sahib..!

Ramachandra! 🤣
Karkuzhali.
And with such fantasy dreams Grandma's fevermeter showed normal temperatures and she was able to go back to sleep too! 😆


A nice sweet touch Periyamma to lighten the ominousness of it all ! 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Dr. Bablookutty in action..
Image result for pic of B&B hospital

( The B&B Multi Specialty Hospital is extraordinarily busy today..All the Medical staff and the others have promptly reported for duty. The Chief Medical Officer Dr. Babloookutty, along with the Chief Psychiatrist Dr. Baby'kka, looks very busy moving around here and there, checking everything..)

Dr. Babloo: Chief Nurse, Is the 'peration theatre kept ready?
C.N.: Yes doctor.. All the assisting staff have been called for duty immediately..
Dr. Babloo: That's fine..
C.N.: ahem.. Doctor...may I know why this hubbub all of a sudden? Is any VIP getting admitted here today..? In which case we have to take care of security arrangements..
Dr. Baby: All these things have already been taken care of doctor.. A police team is escorting the patient..
C.N.: Police team? Why Doctor Baby'kka..? The patients are not allowed to bring police force inside the hospital premises..
Dr. Babloo: I know.. But it is a 'feshal' request from the relatives of the patient..
C.N.: Who is the...
( Suddenly the siren of the ambulance pierces the ears..A strong, sturdy, young man drenched in a pool of blood is brought in an unconscious stage..)

😭😭....beaten so badly.

Dr. Babloo: Oh my God! ..Nurse..! take him to my 'feshal' room..and clean his wounds..
Dr. Baby: Doctor.. he is a VIP..Can I oversee his treatment personally..?
Dr. Babloo: No.. Doctor'kka.. 'ccording to the 'griment' I should see boys..

Dr.Babloo particular about the 'griment even during emergency.😆

( A lovely teenage girl comes running after the stretcher..)
C.N.: Hey girl.. Who are you..You are not supposed to go after the patient..
Dr. Babloo: Yes..only close relatives are 'llowed..that's the rule of the 'spital..
Girl: Oh my God.. He is my husband..
Dr. Babloo: Do you also have wounds..? I don't see anything..
Girl: No.. my husband has wounds..I don't have..
Dr. Baby: Then you need psychological treatment..a counselling..
Dr. Babloo: Yes.. Dr. Baby'kka will take care of you.. She is an 'xpert..
Girl: Ma Bhavani.. please help me..
Dr. Babloo: Who is that? have you brought your own doctor? You are not 'llowed that..

😲🤣

Nurse.. ask her to go and wait outside..
Girl: No doctor.( cries). I have the proper medicine to cure his wounds.. I prepared it myself with the help of Vaid kaka..
C.N.: Look here girl.. As per hospital rules, the patients are treated only by the doctors.. No unqualified persons are allowed here ..
Girl: Oh no.. I am not unqualified.. I am a herbalist.. I know about wounds and how to treat them..I have treated him once for his wounds..
Dr. Baby: ( soothingly).. My dear girl.. leave all your worries.. Your husband is in the safe hands..
Dr. Babloo: Yes..
Girl: Ma Bhavani..Give me patience..😭
Dr. Babloo: What.. do you want patients for your herb medicine?😲

😲🤣

Dr. Baby: I think Dr. Babloo.. She needs immediate counselling.. She is upset by her husband's condition..
Dr. Babloo: Yes Doctor'kka.. Take her to your room.. I will go to the 'peration theatre..( Goes)

Dr. Baby: Come on Girl.. What's your name?
( A nurse comes.. )
Nurse: Doctor.. There are more than half a dozen girls waiting outside and shouting incoherently about something.. But they are repeatedly cursing a person.
I thought they need immediate attention of a psychiatrist...
Dr. Baby: Did they mention the name of the person?😕
Nurse: Yes doctor.. They are cursing someone called 'Advisor'..

Yes.😡
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[ Wait for the details of the treatment procedure by Dr. Bablookutty]



Much needed light moments after the shock of the chapter. Babloo kutty is at his best.👏
Edited by Sandhya.A - 7 years ago

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