NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 47-CHAPTER 52, TSR for 53 UPD

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binduprasad41

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Posted: 7 years ago

#251

Lana di 🤗

Big hug for you...

Finally I read your both heartfelt posts...😭

I totally understand your feelings di...I know it's strange to cry over to one character but I understand TOTALLY!

When I start reading NJAPA...I don't know anything about Lashy di and no idea about NJAPA also.

I was just curious you know...NJAPA thread was super active so I start reading it simply...only few last chapters were left.

It nearly complete novel.

I don't know when or how I attached to it so very very very much ...I cried for month ...I never cried like that before so much that I had to hide my face from My family members.

Despite knowing that all is well in the end my tears wouldn't stop.

I tried to read other stories to distract myself from it...but that also couldn't help...after reading funny scenes in other stories also I again started to cried lot.

I have no idea how many times I read NJAPA before joining forum.

It took me lot of time to stop my tears.

It not necessary how much time we spend ...when you emotionally attached to it...it starts affecting you...so I understand .

Everyone is affected by chapter 52...it difficult for everyone...but still we all are supporting each other here silently .

Please try to spend time here you will feel better! 🤗

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Shraddha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: amitaprasad
Those hands who write romance, humour ,banter and poem in most elegant way also can write such horrendous scene which leaves readers speechless, stunned and numb enough to react.A big round of applause author Sahiba..
Each and every scene shows your dedication and devotion towards this novel... the dungeon scene is gut wrenching..it is very very painful heart tugging to see once a proud,shrewd , intimidating, invincible ,revered Ustad reduced bit by bit to something beyond imagination..Had he not had enough scars,then these fresh?
Lashy HBAS has become a part of my life,and its leads an acquaint..it keeps me going on.thank u for this bliss...

These are such spectacular words, Amita! Thank you so so much for giving me this gift! 🤗 It is the first time that I am writing a scene so horrendous, I must admit.. because it is not my area of comfort.

But it definitely was the 'call' of times and the 'setting'.

Anything less wouldn't have made us sit up and realise how bad things can get, if anyone crosses with the Shehzaade. It sends home the jarring message that the Shehzaade is not an opponent to be messed with. Not even the Ustaad can get away with it!

(And even this is less than what Aurangazeb has done to those who opposed him - for those who are of strong stomach and heart can go on to read it in the world wide web!)

And the phrase in blue is so true and painful too - from chapter 48 to 52, we watch him tumble down a few more sharp steps at a time... even as he desperately tries to climb back up and is doing everything in his power to try hard... in fact, he's not being allowed any footing to get back and stand back up... so, the words 'reduced bit-by-bit' is so true and torturous at the same time!

Lashy HBAS has become a part of my life,and its leads an acquaint..it keeps me going on.thank u for this bliss...

Oh my God... thank you so so so much dear... thanks a lot! 🤗 Thanks for letting me know...

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roseraja1915

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Posted: 7 years ago

#253

Good evening/afternoon/morning lovely Sahibas.🤗

Periyamma, Lashy Sahiba, Chellam, Bindup, Shruthi, Manu, Selvi, Lana, Vathsy,Lavanya, Mitu, Sandy Begum, Bindu,Muskaan,Anindita, Aparna, Pallavi, Amita, Jiya, Harshu, Shagun, Jyothi, Adwi, Shivangi, Vrinda, Avika,Divi, Divya, Kanishka, Payal , Rekha, Rashmi, Namsika, Aishu , Kruthik and 6Bs.🤗

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Shraddha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#254

Lana, I am quiet.. because I truly don't know what to say... or at least, how to say what I have to... 😕

'When she's sad, she doesn't need long long sentences... she needs a quiet hug and time, that's all'

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Shraddha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: Unbeknown
Thank you for all your efforts you put in for us. No matter how many times i say, i always feel its not enough for the efforts you put in every chapter.

Thanks a ton, Appu... I am grateful for this!🤗

Third of, what have you done 😡 wasnt leather whiplash sufficient thst u had to upgrade the whip 😭 and u left him bleed to death 😭 Though we know He will not die, still its hard to read, so much pain, so much blood. And poor Heera, lamenting, and the last few lines
I know re... I understand.. things will slowly start looking up!
I didn't think you'd be able to read this chapter and comment too, so soon.. what with everything going on at home... yet, you did... big squishy hug for that!
Hope the routine is slightly better this week than last 2 🤗
And this FS😡, so much for a religious head. Make sure he gets punished for his deeds 😡
The very God Allah, in whose name he commits such crimes, will make sure he does so!

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Shraddha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

Meant to respond to this three times and all three times something else cropped up... 🤗sorry about that

You are the truth and the dream

You are the river, and thirst

You are the restlessness of my heart, also the comfort

Whether you are with me or not, you are always in front of me

In retrospect, how perceptive these lines are for, 52... aren't they?

You're my soulmate

You're my companion

You're my friend

Come, by taking you in my arms, I will make you more closer to me

When you are apart, I feel every moment strange

There can be no one in this world luckier than me

Because you gave me your heart, I am the closest to you

>>>😭

I am in your heart

I am in your breath

Its me and only me in your hearbeats

I don't feel the time pass by

Since I met you, I am not aware of anything else

The shadow of your rich eyelashes is beautiful

As that shadow is on me, I'm not afraid of sun

I won't breath without you

I won't live without you

I can't bear even a single moment without you

God! 😭

And Rose's words -->
These are the very thoughts that must have made him bear that inhumane whipping- anything for her!😭
Beautiful presentation, Manu! 🤗

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Shraddha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: selvi1275

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

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Posted: 7 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: lashy

There is so many things related to NJAPA di...I couldn't express...most important NJAPA help me in so many ways .

It is not just a story for me...

And same goes to HBAS. 😳

I know times, era, torture, suffering etc etc are different in both novels but pain and hurt are similar.

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Sandhya.A

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Posted: 7 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: lashy

😲

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What did you do Lashy?

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Shraddha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: kruthik
OMG, you are heartless Lashy, I should say.

>>>

After the end of barbed whipping, I couldn't read further. I closed the iPad and went for a walk. Read it after consoling myself.

>>> I am sorry Kruthi chitti

It's not fair, putting AMK in such torture. It is his fate what to say.

>>> It is all for a reason...

Farooq was so. Cunning and manipulative that shehzaade was carried way to such an extend.
Couldn't believe, future emperor would go such an act of beating AMK by himself. He became insane.

>>>It's not the first time it's happened... it has... history has proven time and again what can happen when a 'head' loses his head!

Farooq, Mahendar and Khalil would get their dues in due course. What about shehzaade? Would he realize his mistakes.

>>> wait and watch you'll slowly get your answers 🤗

Lashy Sahiba, you made us dumbstruck.
In the last two chapters you made us cry by humiliating AMK and Heera. But after this chapter, my mind became blank.
You are a wonderful writer, Lashy. God bless you.

Thank you chitti... your scoldings of love are a testament to the fact that you love them so much... thank you for being here 🤗

Originally posted by: Testmytest

Author Sahiba please don't mind the silence, we are in a shock, still trying to come to terms with it all, so many unpleasant words are dancing in my head for FS and the Shezaade, want to cool down a bit. 😡😡

I understand da! 🤗

Your writing is so powerful, it hits us right to the heart, I had to stop reading the last part (flogging part) three times before I finished because I kept visualizing the scene with Heera in the background, just couldn't digest it.

>>> As in, imagining what would happen when Heera comes to know? Or, her face when she just learnt of it...
Didn't want to describe it.
Couldn't get myself to describe it.
So penned that part as a poem.

Give us some time to recover. This shows how good a writer you are!!
It's good B&B 'pital is open 24hrs, we are going to need it, especially the mental/psychiatric ward 😭

>>> Hayooo! 😭