NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 46-CHAPTER 51 Upd 19th July - Page 13

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

i hope this will do...

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Okay!!! Then don't ask for details 😆

Let me do a happy dance here!

Originally posted by: lghosh

Do you dare to intimidate 'The Ustaad' in me?

The burning infernos within me, don't you see?

My eyes are the two burning embers of fury,

Now I will be the executioner, judge and jury!

I am determined, I have a promise to keep,

I will save my Begum from all danger deep!

She has suffered too much and I have too,

Hyenas that you all are, laughing at my rue?

I now pledge to myself to see you all in hell,

Even if I have to combat all of you in a duel!

All Your ends are in my hands, I promise so -

This way my word to Heera will remain aglow!

I will fight for Her, my loyal Men, and myself,

Huzoor, now meet the real 'Ustaad' yourself!

You gave me rebirth, you showed me the way,

I take another birth, free from bondage, today!

I looked up to you as my 'Huzoor' with loyalty,

But in return what did I get from such royalty?

Imprisonment in dungeon and death sentence?

You coldly ordered so without any repentance?

My loyal men of valor were of no value to you?

Valued worthy soldiers they are, even you knew!

But for revenge, your blind ego refused to see this,

You forgot everything I did for you in your malice!

Does not my loyalty of ten years mean anything?

You're satisfied to see me grovel in my downswing!

I knelt before you giving up my honor and pride,

I, who, never bow to anyone, but to You, I abide!

But you solemnly rejected both my Begum and I,

I can die but disgrace to her, I can't let that go by!

I will see to it all the vultures are shown their end,

The scheming liars will not get a chance to defend!

Huzoor, this is my confession and promise to you,

I will be victorious in my efforts to be freed anew!

I will overcome and outshine you all for 'Her' sake,

No matter what, my determination will not break!

With a fire burning in my soul and her love in my heart,

My loyal men and I will deftly break these shackles apart!

Lashy, I have to say, so far out of all the edits this is your personal BEST! 👏 Brilliant! That fire burning in his eyes, that fury reflecting, the determination showing, the revolt showcasing...simply splendid! 👍🏼 I looovvveee eeet! I LOVE HIM! Sigh!

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

What a chapter! What a chapter!👏 👏 👏One and a half hours!😳

>>> Omg I was blushing at the start of Rose's review... and blushed till the very end! ☺️

How does one live through an incredibly painful update such as this and yet at the end of it, rise to one's feet to applaud enthusiastically the genius of the writer?⭐️

>>> ☺️

Tearful all the way from the moment Heera was declared his mistress and just when I thought that their fate could not get any worse than what they had been dragged through, I saw the fiery stance of the Ustaad and the immense relief that washed over me was indescribable.

>>>Omg thank you so much! 🤗 Reading it in your words is just something else!

For I knew, things were going to turn around, the Ustaad would make them turn around with the powerful arsenal that he has- his own valour and mind power as well as the power of love of those close to him.😃

😎Undoubtedly!

The presence of mind of Akbar and Heera during the entire proceedings, how ably each stepped in at the right junctures to keep the momentum going until the cracks showed up in the Shehzaade's resolve.👍🏼

Exactly... yin and yang...

Lashy Sahiba, you are the sweetest Baisa around but you are one mean writer, I tell you!👏 🤗

>>> ☺️ Isssh

Posting this right after reading the update and taking my dinner break!😊

Yup go go and appease your famished self! 😳

OMG! 13 pages of HW but it was only at Page 6 when I came online two hours ago. And another 5 in the previous thread!😲

Have to have some food to get through all of this backlog!😆

You must be ravenous! 😉

😆🤗 love you da!

Originally posted by: lashy

Course it will!

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Okay!!! Then don't ask for details 😆

Originally posted by: lghosh

Apne knight se share nahi karoge? 😛

Manu is this FR shake??

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

'Don't worry, my love... I am trying... and I will keep you safe!'

Haikus:

1.

The court hall is full

Charges on them were read out

The trial started..

2.

Shaky eye witness

Kunwar and the Courier

Will their words sustain?

3.

His satchel is brought

Akbar uses his option

Shehzaade's farmaan!

4.

Snakey Farooq says

"Sharat not applicable

She's not his Begum!"

5.

His men are tortured

Shehzaade's ego had won

His attitude changed..

6.

He asks for a wish

To avenge those who shamed his wife

In direct combat.

7.

His wish was granted

"You'll fight each other till death!"

Ordered the Prince..

8.

What will happen then?

Given extended life term

He plans strategy

9.

Given the answer

It's an algebraic equation

To prove the result..

Karkuzhali.

Originally posted by: lashy

Gladly will share! 🤗

Actually my favourite kind of desserts are the ones with fresh fruits, nuts & jelly in them! 😳 Tabhi I love Falooda so much!

Now THIS ONE BELOW and I might have to think very hard about sharing...

Except a special someone of course! 😉

Yes, yes I know, with Mr. Lashy! 😉🤣

Originally posted by: lghosh