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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali






My love, how much I want to be there with you,
To feel your touch and see your smile.
To hear you say, I love you so,
For all the ways you'll show me how.

O my love, I long to be with you,
O my love, words will never express,
The feelings I have for you inside,
I'll give my all, just to be with you,

Being in your arms, safe and sound,
To see your tender smile again.
Holding me softly, with your tender touch,
Being ever so close and never apart.

O my Love I need You so,
My soul is on fire.
My passion and emotion is here for you,
With much desire, I just can't explain.

Come to me, I'm ready for love,
I want it to be, that special time!

I love you more than anyone ever
And it scares me as we've not long been together





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Wow 👏
Amazing find...apt for Akeera 😳
Especially the last line 😭
Expressive pictures ...i really like it.
Thank you Patti 🤗
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HOLA AUNTY AND ALL MY BAISAS 🤗


WHAT A LOVELY POEM AND PIC AUNTY!!! 👏👏


LOVELY GM MESSAGE BINDUP 👏👏


LASHY DEAR HOPE YOURE HAVING A BLAST...⭐️⭐️


MANU HOPE YOU ARE BETTER NOW DEAR 🤗 KUKU WHAT ARE YOU BUSY WITH??? NOT SEEING YOU MUCH...


VATHSY HOPE YOUR MIL IS FINE...


REKHA APARNA ROSE 🤗

LETS ALL HAVE A WONDERFUL WEEKEND
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: binduprasad41



Good Morning sachu patti and all my lovely Baisas . 😳
Happy Saturday! 🤗


Good evening lana di, Pallavi di , Vasthy di , Aparna di and Rekha di 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

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Good morning Periamma, Bindu, Lavanya and all my Baisas! 🤗

Good evening Lana, Rekha, Vathsy, Aparna and Pallu! 🤗

Have a wonderful weekend!🥳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali






My love, how much I want to be there with you,
To feel your touch and see your smile.
To hear you say, I love you so,
For all the ways you'll show me how.

O my love, I long to be with you,
O my love, words will never express,
The feelings I have for you inside,
I'll give my all, just to be with you,

Being in your arms, safe and sound,
To see your tender smile again.
Holding me softly, with your tender touch,
Being ever so close and never apart.

O my Love I need You so,
My soul is on fire.
My passion and emotion is here for you,
With much desire, I just can't explain.

Come to me, I'm ready for love,
I want it to be, that special time!

I love you more than anyone ever
And it scares me as we've not long been together





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KK.


The longing to be together the painful separation, the uncertainties... everything currently our lead going through very well portrayed here by the poem and the paintings, Periamma! Thank you for this morning treat..🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago
Hola Baisas!
Finished reading all reviews 😊 Sandhya, Selvi, Rose, Kalgi, Bindu, Lana, Lavanya, Kuki, Jiya, Mitu, Sweti 👍🏼 Amazing reviews by everyone!

Lana - amazing review pointing the contrasts 👍🏼
All of them had the same feeling, vulnerability of AMK. It just shows he is also a human who goes through highs and lows in life and one has to go through acidic tests to attain bliss at the end 😊

Vathsy - Hope your MIL is recovering and doing better now

Manu - take care and get well soon 🤗

Kalgi - beautiful vesak laterns 😊 Seeing them for the first time

Selvi & Lana - wonderful picture depicting the current mood here and amazing lines

Periyamma, Rose, Lashy, Lana, Lavanya, Bindu, Kalgi, Rekha, Vathsy, Kuki 🤗

Have a great weekend everyone 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali






My love, how much I want to be there with you,
To feel your touch and see your smile.
To hear you say, I love you so,
For all the ways you'll show me how.

O my love, I long to be with you,
O my love, words will never express,
The feelings I have for you inside,
I'll give my all, just to be with you,

Being in your arms, safe and sound,
To see your tender smile again.
Holding me softly, with your tender touch,
Being ever so close and never apart.

O my Love I need You so,
My soul is on fire.
My passion and emotion is here for you,
With much desire, I just can't explain.

Come to me, I'm ready for love,
I want it to be, that special time!

I love you more than anyone ever
And it scares me as we've not long been together





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KK.


So apt for the story and beautiful picture, periyamma!
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Posted: 7 years ago


Chapter 48 retold by Karkuzhali..

The Chapter in a nutshell..

Scene I.

* The Shehzaadi is upset about the information Mahendar had given him about Akbarkhan..

* He summons Farooq Sahib, the Royal advisor to him..

* He asks him to investigate into the allegation against Akbarkhan..

Scene II.

* Farooq goes and meets Khalil.

* Instigates him against Akbarkhan.

* Khalil decides to take revenge on AMK and his Begum.

Scene III.

* In Parnagarh, Akbarkhan works out the blue print for the proposed building of the canals with the Muqannis..

* Azeez hurries towards Akbar and Ibrahim and coneys the bad news that Syeed was critically wounded and that the guard of the safe house was killed along with his other trusted men..

* AMK in the safe house..

* He sees his spy from the Capital returning with bad news..

Scene IV.

* Heera watches the sudden turmoil around her and feels helpless cursing herself for being the reason for the whole mess..

Scene V.

* Heera goes to Akbarkhan's chamber and finds him perturbed ..

* She gets to know from him the treacherous deed of Mahendar.

* She regrets for her inadvertent action that had caused such a situation and apologises for her guilt..

* He decides to play his cards wisely, and tells her that he will inform his Huzoor about Kunwar's covert deals with Khalil..

* He leaves her for the Capital with a heavy heart..

Karkuzhali writes the scenes..and interpolates the dialogues with the titles of the novels by the famous thriller writer, James Hadley Chase.. shown in BOLD letters.

Scene I. the Capital:

Participants: Shehzaade and the Advisor Farooq.

Farooq: Wa alaikum as-aalaam Huzoor

Shehzaade:Welcome back to the capital... so, how was your grand pilgrimage to Mecca?

Farooq: Just the way it is..Barely a day after my return from Mecca, I have been summoned to your personal chambers, at the crack of dawn... and on my arrival here, I notice even your personal guards have been dismissed... so, I'm forced to wonder what troubling incidents in my absence, could've stolen my Huzoor's peace! Why pick on me?

(The Mughal prince walked up to his private quarters and picked up a scroll from a small box sitting in a personal chest. Returning to the advisor, he handed the scroll over.)

Farooq: There is no title, no emblem, no seal... is this even genuine?


Shehzaade: Get a load of this!..THIS scroll is not the original... but the man who brought it to me claims that its contents are! Dictated by a dying man on his deathbed, no less...So, I'm not sure... The dead stay dumb..Well... the information I received... is that Akbar not only KNOWS about all of this... but that he seized every single scroll... had them burnt... bribed the common messengers... imprisoned her personal messengers in a safe-house at Aidabad... basically, buried everything underground, so nothing would come out in the open...It is..A Can of Worms..

Farooq: WHAT? No... no... no... this cannot be true...

Shehzaade: This is for real..

Farooq: Who brought you such bizarre information, my Huzoor?

Shehzaade: Just another sucker...A Hindu prince..

Farooq:Huzoor... You must be kidding..10 years we've known Akbar... nothing has ever mattered to him other than YOUR well-being! The loyalty that runs in his veins is deeper than the colour of blood...he wouldn't commit treason to protect a mere woman, would he?

Shehzaade: You can say that again..Of course, I understand I don't doubt my intelligence officer

But I would be a fool, if I didn't look into allegations brought in by a prince himself - HOWEVER absurd the allegations may sound! You never know with women!

Farooq: Which is why you want ME to investigate Akbar Mahmoud Khan?

Shehzaade: Yes... look into this scroll... AND into the events that happened at the safe-house at Aidabad...And..please ensure that even the walls of your private chamber don't hear your thoughts..You'll find him..I'll fix Him!

Farooq: Yes Huzoor..

( Leaves)

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Scene II.. The Outskirts of Capital:

Participants: Farooq and Khalil.

(Having just returned from a journey of several thousand miles Farooq had decided to trek all the way here, because the matter was urgent not only because the Huzoor had ordered him to look into it, but because it was a matter of personal interest too.)


Khalil: Well well Farooq Sahib...Its Just a Matter of Time.. that you would have to meet me urgently, so soon after your return from Mecca... that you would trust no messenger to convey the contents of your message... and that you asked for me to come out here, to ensure we weren't watched... I take it that the news you have to share is very valuable indeed'

Farooq: You guess right... more valuable than any news you might've heard, since you joined our Huzoor's army, Khalil! You have yourself a deal!

Khalil: What sort of news?

Farooq: Figure it out for yourself..Temptation. Even the greatest of leaders have succumbed to this vice... our poor man, is but a mere commoner.. Ustaad Akbar Mahmoud Khan...


Khalil: WHAT do you mean?'

Farooq: Just the way it is..I hear the impeccable Ustaad has yielded to temptation like other simple mortals - understandably, a very compelling temptation to protect his Begum... so, I have been called to look into an alleged cover up that he's been involved in! It's true... if the allegations are not phony, it would mean he has been deceiving our Shehzaade... a betrayal of the highest order - seeing how, he is in fact, the Head of our Huzoor's Spies..

Khalil: 'DARN!..I cannot believe this... after all those condescending lectures he gives me, it turns out, that he's been the bigger betrayer throughout...finally... how long have I waited for this... finally... FINALLY!..The world in my pocket!

Farooq: Hush hush... remember... the crimes have not been proven yet...

Khalil: So, WHAT evidence do you have then?

Farooq: You have yourself a deal..Read this... and prepare to be shocked..The scroll is an imitation... but... its contents... its words... are supposed to be what were in the original messages..

Khalil: So...Harka Sahiba dared to write all this, did she then?

Farooq: This... and many messages similar to this..Thankfully... ONE of those messengers escaped and blurted out the truth.He had.. but a short time to live.... which is how, we now know of all this..

Khalil: To WHOM?

Farooq: To a Hindu prince that the message was originally meant for... I'm not sure... but, I think he belongs to the kingdom of Manswar...anyway, this Kunwar in turn, brought the news directly to the Shehzaade - in return for favours, of course...It is a mess... no doubt...Channel your anger appropriately... and this might work in your favour!

Khalil:Well... I INTEND to make it work in my favour! It IS a mess... but a good mess..'Lady.! Here's your wreath..!

Farooq: Beware, Khalil... you have a long list of crimes to your name already... don't make it so bad that you wouldn't find place in Jannat if you tried repenting for life! Figure it out for yourself!

Khalil: By the way, Farooq Sahib... what do YOU gain in seeing the Ustaad's downfall? As far as I can recall...you've always been quite vocal in your support for him...Why this Shock treatment?

Farooq: Yes I have been... when I believed he was a true loyalist to our Huzoor... a true loyalist to our dreams for an all-Islamic empire... but lately... he's become much too soft on the Hindus...and what do I hear on my return? That he's currently the Mansabdar of a Hindu community? Married to a Hindu Begum? I am an advisor to the Shehzaade... I have been an advisor to the Shehenshah too... my peers and I have had to try hard to undo these silly ideas of tolerance and unity that their forefathers believed in... we certainly do not need men like Akbar Mahmoud Khan ruining our efforts...makes sense? Not safe to be free..


Khalil: .Give me a few days' time... I will dig out evidence against Akbar Mahmoud Khan... dig right down to Hell, if needs be...Will Have a change of scene..

Farooq: And if you find nothing?

Khalil: Then... I will fabricate evidence, against him. But take it from me... this will be his end..I'll get you for this..


( Farooq goes.)


Scenes III, IV and V will continue in a separate post.



Edited by karkuzhali - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
It has not been too long since you left,
Without You, of Love I am left bereft!
Where are your moonlit whispers in my ear?
Missing your embraces and presence in here!


The day you rode far away right in front of my eyes,
My life feels all void waiting again for the Sun to rise!
Concerns about Your health and safety are now primary,
My mind is disturbed and worries have left me all wary!


Waiting for your safe return with baited breath,
My prayers and hopes are for your good health!
May all the tempests that are brewing find peace,
May Huzoor believe our plight and put us all to ease!


I knew your eyes were brimming all ready to flow,
You kept your head high and weakness didn't show!
You blamed yourself for this mishap, I know my love,
But you are the only light of my life glowing high above!


I dream of those moments spent in your arms, of us together,
Your passionate sighs and shivers, and your warm breather!
I have to make things right for our lives, our people, my dear!
I have to sort the issues out with Huzoor and make things clear!


But now I have to leave you behind hoping you will be fine,
Looking after our people and after yourself, Love of mine!
I have spoken about your safety, in my safehouse you will be,
If by chance I do not return...take care of yourself for me! 😒
Edited by lghosh - 7 years ago
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Chapter 48. ( Contd)

Scene III.

* In Parnagarh, Akbarkhan works out the blue print for the proposed building of the canals with the Muqannis..

* Azeez hurries towards Akbar and Ibrahim and coneys the bad news that Syeed was critically wounded and that the guard of the safe house was killed along with his other trusted men..

* AMK in the safe house..

* He sees his spy from the Capital returning with bad news..

Scene IV.

* Heera watches the sudden turmoil around her and feels helpless cursing herself for being the reason for the whole mess..

Scene V.

* Heera goes to Akbarkhan's chamber and finds him perturbed ..

* She gets to know from him the treacherous deed of Mahendar.

* She regrets for her inadvertent action that had caused such a situation and apologises for her guilt..

* He decides to play his cards wisely, and tells her that he will inform his Huzoor about Kunwar's covert deals with Khalil..

* He leaves her for the Capital with a heavy heart..

Karkuzhali writes the scenes..and interpolates the dialogues with the titles of the novels by the famous thriller writer, James Hadley Chase.. shown in BOLD letters.



Scene III. Parnagarh.

Participants: Akbarkhan, Ibrahim , Azeez.

( Akbarkhan discusses with Muqannis)

AMK: This could be the beginning Will have a change of scene..I plan to leave for the capital tomorrow .. Before I leave... I would like to sign the papers and give you my stamp of approval

Muq: Khuda Hafiz..Mansabdar Sahib..

( Goes near Ibrahim.. Both of them see Azeez hurrying towards them)

Azeez: Khan Sahib... Khan Sahib.!.Khan Sahib... please come with me...To Sayyid's quarters...

( They go to Sayyid's quarters.)

( Akbarkhan is heartbroken after seeing the old guard of the Safehouse killed along with eight of his men)

AMK: Thank you for everything my man...Ai Khuda, please give his soul peace and let him find rest in your Heavenly abode...Ibrahim make sure that the families are compensated well...How are you feeling Sayyid?..

Sayyid: I... I should have come sooner, Khan Sahib...it would have saved you precious hours... I should have dodged those arrows... Want to stay alive.. now... when you need me most... I lie here, a wounded man...But a short time to live..disappointing...

AMK: Sayyid! There is nothing you could have done better than what you've done so far... proving precisely why I wanted YOU on the mission ...So, thank you!

Sayyid: Thank you, Khan Sahib..thank you for believing in me..

AMK: Alright... we have to get going... the rest of you - wait here for instructions... Ibrahim... Azeez... come with me... I have to...

( The feverish calls of one of his men brought his instructions to a screeching halt.)


AMK's Man: Sahib... our friend from the capital is on his way here... with an urgent message for you..


AMK: Our friend from the capital? No... no... no... Khuda... please... please... I plead with you... let this all be an eerie coincidence...'No... no... no...NOOO! God save us!!!!' Why do you Have this on me?


Scene IV.Haveli.

(Heera is standing in Akbar's waiting room. She slowly turns around, catching sight of the young chap on her left.)

Heera: Azeez... I didn't notice you here..What is it, Azeez ?

Azeez: Forgive me for saying so, bhabhijaan... the Sahib is much too busy... but, I think you must go in at once - don't wait here... he is about to leave...

Heera: So what happens to me?..

(A series of loud clangs from inside the Mansabdar's quarters, managed to drown the commotion everywhere outside of it, in one swift echo. Heera enters his chambers..)


Scene V. Mansabdar's Chamber.


Heera: That bad... is it?

AMK: Trust is like that glass, Heera Just the way it is.. - difficult to create... delicate to balance... and irreparable once broken...ten years it took me to create that delicate trust... now when I head to the capital, I'll know how many broken pieces I'll be left picking up...My spy from the capital, With an ear to the Ground, informed me that Kunwar Mahendar has divulged everything about the scrolls and the safe house to our Huzoor...to think that one messenger could cause such damage..

Heera: Khan Sahib... I am truly very sorry. I hope you can find it in your heart to forgive my actions..

AMK: Sorry?..I accept your apology..... but please don't wallow in grief.. Heera, you are not at fault for this... you never intended for any of this to happen...

Heera: Thank you... So...What will you do? What do WE do?

AMK: Firstly...I'll dash to my Huzoor... as it is, the facts have come out in a very unfavourable light... I HAVE to avoid any further damage, before Khalil decides to parade on my ruins too..The Vulture is a Patient Bird..To continue deceiving him... would be a very dangerous choice... my Huzoor might pardon one lapse... but caught with a second offence... a second lie... and the consequences would be disastrous...Consider yourself Dead!

Heera: Ma Bhavani!' Her fingers faltered up to the chilly nooks of her neck 'So... so... do you intend to admit to everything?..

AMK: Oh Lord, NO.. Not my thing..I will speak to my Huzoor..I hold the four Aces.... show him how devious Kunwar Mahendar is... tell him about the Kunwar's covert deals with Khalil... of course, since I'd only sent a message to Kunwar Tejraj a few days ago, I don't have any tangible proof of any of this... darn! At this point, my fate hinges on how far my Huzoor is prepared to believe me..But..There is always a Price Tag..

Heera: Your Huzoor knows you well... he will trust your words over those of the horrible Kunwar Mahendar... so... you are confident, aren't you Khan Sahib? In your plan? That it would work?

AMK: Heera...My love...I will do everything in my power to make it work..Only The Guilty are afraid... but... if...if I can't... if I am unable to return...Ibrahim is here, for your protection... I've left instructions with him... about emergency funds I've stashed away... please go through those with him... if there is any fear of threat, he'll take you to our hideouts that no one in the capital is aware of... Sayyid and a few other men are here too... they will take care of the rest..It is Just a matter of Time..

Heera:I... I... I will pray... day and night... that it goes to plan, Khan Sahib...Khan Sahib... I... will discuss the protocols with Mirza bhaijaan... I will follow your instructions to the best of my ab... ab... ability. And I... I am upholding my promise to stay strong... b... but there is a promise you've made to me too... a promise that you'd CONTINUE making your life's journey with your companion, your bride... creating and collecting new memories along the way... as you travel with her...

AMK: Well now my Pretty..Don't... don't look at me that way, my love... don't tame my anger...for I need it to keep me going... to protect you and I...

( He leaves)

Karkuzhali.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Brilliant verses Lana!
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Originally posted by: lghosh


It has not been too long since you left,
Without You, of Love I am left bereft!
Where are your moonlit whispers in my ear?
Missing your embraces and presence in here!


The day you rode far away right in front of my eyes,
My life feels all void waiting again for the Sun to rise!
Worry about Your health and safety are now primary,
My mind is disturbed and worries have left me wary!


Waiting for your safe return with baited breath,
My prayers and hopes are for your good health!
May all the tempests that are brewing find peace,
May Huzoor believe our plight and put us all to ease!


I knew your eyes were brimming all ready to flow,
You kept your head high and weakness didn't show!
You blamed yourself for this mishap, I know my love,
But you are the only light of my life glowing high above!


I dream of those moments spent in your arms, of us together,
Your passionate sighs and shivers, and your warm breather!
I have to make things right for our lives, our people, my dear!
I have to sort the issues out with Huzoor and make things clear!


But now I have to leave you behind hoping you will be fine,
Looking after our people and after yourself, Love of mine!
I have spoken about your safety, in my safehouse you will be,
If by chance I do not return...take care of yourself for me! 😒

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