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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 48
After reading this chapter i just couldn't able to concentrate on anything ...i am feeling desperate, hurt , scared and what not.
I like the way you started the chapter with Muslim prayer.
Shahzada was disturbed mentally . He trust his Ustaad's...he can't effort to lose him.
I know he is not a good person and he has his selfish motive also in his every action but he is different from Mahendra and Khalil.
Khan Sahib is really connected with him.
Farooq sahib ...trust me first i thought he is a good adviser and loyal person towards Shahzada and he respect his Shahzada decision but but but i was so wrong .
Believe me i felt really bad .
How can i forgot there is so many cruel people live in this world with noble face...if only we could differentiate them.
I feel disgusting towards him.
Like seriously he is just came back from holy mecca despite that he didn't knew the meaning of humanity and honesty .
He claim ustaad betrayed Shahzada and what does he did when his Huzoor clearly told him Ustaad's matter is very confidential .
He knows ustaad since 10 years and he also know Ustaad value Shahzada so much but ustaad one personal decision to protect someone destroyed 10 years of trusted relationship just because he married to Hindu girl and protecting Hindu people's lives ofcourse with the blessing of Shahzada .
Just like whole Hindu community dislike Heera's decision to marry Muslim businessman but they forget that's the best decision to protect her land.
But farooq sahib is happy to join hands with Khalil...khalil who took away girls modesty like it nothing for him.
That means he is right person for him to protect their religion .
On the other hand Mahendra who claim to protect Hindu community...happily joined hand with the same man who ruthlessly ruined modesty of the girl with whom he is going to marry.
Seriously what a sick mentality .
Ofcourse Mahendra wanted to gain so much because of the information but he is going to lose also...Shahzada already wanted to keep eyes on his every action now on and he broke Khalil trust and Khalil make him pay for that.
Khalil ...what a disgusting person he is...Ustaad's teach him good lesson when he touch heera for the first time but he didn't learned anything from that incident .
God they way he imagine heera ...seriously how can farooq sahib favour him in the name of religion .
Parnagarh...
How beautifully khan sahib dreaming about canal work.
Here he is wanted to build something which going to help two different communities and unite them forever like a big family.
God...how can destiny testing him but i know ma bhavani always support him.
Finally Azeez arrived at Parnagarh with Sayyid .
What a coincidence both Ibrahim sahib and khan sahib could feel that whatever news Azeez bring is not going to be pleasant .
I like it when Khan Sahib first asked about Sayyid .
Khan Sahib mourning for his 8 loyal men was so touching.
His lost his 8 members from his family . ...It must took him years to trained and teach them and most important they were loyal towards him and they proved that also with their life.
For women's is easy to cry and let go of their pain but for Men's is so hard to describe their pain .
Sayyid ...thank god he is alive and reached Parnagarh safely with the help of Azeez Ofcourse .
He is guilty because he didn't reached on time but khan sahib knew he did his best.
Khan sahib words assure him.
In one thing Khan Sahib is so fortunate to have men's who put their life's for him which Mahendra and Khalil never ever able to have .
God i felt like crying when Khan Sahib praying that all incidents is just coincidence but his intelligence knows there is nothing happened without the reason .
Heera never ever thought that her one message which ask justice bring so much destruction in her love ones life ...and put hundreds people in danger .
Ofcourse it's not her fault na destiny twisted everything .
For the first time Ustaad feels terrible because he is now suppose to justify his loyalty infront of Shahzada himself ...he have to gain his trust back...
Ustaad knew the reality thats why he didn't want to give false hopes to heera .
Poor Akeera ...Just now they started to live life after going through lot but now everything is change .
Worst thing is they didn't even know that they will going to meet again or not.
I can't imagine how painfull for them...
They didn't even able to comfort each other properly because they don't want their love weak their strength ...my my they way heera recall their precious movements into each other arms was so painful .
The lantern which witness their first night is broken and...at last...God Heera forgot to pray on time for Khan sahib .
I hope it didn't affect them more.




'Trust is like that glass, Heera - difficult to create... delicate to balance... and irreparable once broken...' into her pupils he finally glimpsed 'ten years it took me to create that delicate trust... now when I head to the capital, I'll know how many broken pieces I'll be left picking up...'

Painful True...just imagine how much khan Sahib is hurt.



Gone was the protective roof over Parnagarh, with the departure of the Mansabdar

Leaving her lands and people vulnerable and exposed to the elements bizarre.

Sadly, the lands and people knew not of the dark dismal cloud gathering elsewhere

Gaining momentum as it rippled closer, to bring true everyone's worst nightmare!

And along with that tempest would come the dangers of a predator,

Including the lowest of the lot that'd feast on the flesh of the weak, the vulture.



What a lines Lashy di . ...describing whole chapter .
And so painful too


I like the three edits also.
We can imagine Shahzada and Farooq sahib .
Ofcourse Last one is best.


Thank You for the update di...
Have a safe journey tomorrow ...have lots of fun in the Wedding .
Love you





Edited by binduprasad41 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
''Even Kings and emperors with heaps of wealth and vast dominion cannot compare with an ant filled with the love of God."

- Guru Nanak Dev Ji...

So sahibas & baisas be calm and enjoy story with the flow coz in the end our akheera will win the biggest battle of their life against all villains including powerful shezade coz not only our love n prayers are with them God's LOVE is also with them...

🤗🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago

Chellam, Kuki, Lashy Sahiba, Bindup,Periyamma,Lavanya 🤗

You have concluded Part 3 in the best possible way imaginable, dear author. Reading it, one could feel the devastating impact of the news that has reached AMK, the dismay and dread of AMK of all that has befallen his camp and all that is going to befall him , Heera and her people .😭

Lashy Sahiba, you are not one to tackle issues in half-measures , are you? Whether it is the ultimate thrill or the spine-tingling chills- you can be trusted to go the whole hog!👏

The closing lines sound so ominous - am already shaking in my boots, Baisa. It is indeed going to be the darkest hour before dawn- I know you will guarantee us that much.

If you had intended to cast a pall of sorrow and terror with this update, you have pulled it off handsomely-hats off to you, darling author!⭐️ 👏

Part 4- if you only knew how desperately we are awaiting your arrival!

The edits are super- the Prince at his menacing best and the scheming Farooq Sahib but they can never overpower our Akheera in pink and blue so glorious!👍🏼




Yes, Chellam, the music and dancing have been brought to a halt for the moment and am despondent as the rest of Sahibas . Periyamma , you took a shot of us grieving over C48!
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Manu 🤗

Hi, Rupinder welcome to the HBAS house!🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Chapter 48.

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Haikus..

1.
Chapter forty eight
Brought waterfalls in the eyes
Oh God! Poor Baisas!😭😭

2.
We were relishing
Sweets served by Lashy before
We've bit chilli now..😡

3.
Karkuzhali thinks
To consult astrologer
What'll happen next?😕

4.
Mercury enters Taurus
'Expect the unexpected'
The prediction says!😲

5.
It's Good versus Bad
Is Shehzaade good or bad?
Next chapter will say!😕

KK.


Conveys our emotions perfectly 👏



Lavanya di

ANOTHER SUPERB ASPECT OF YOUR WRITING SKILLS, AND I HAVE MENTIONED THIS POINT SEVERAL TIMES, IS HOW WELL YOUR STORY FLOWS THROUGH THE CHAPTERS...MUCH LIKE THE JOURNEY OF THE CANAL THAT SAHIB IS ENVISAGING...

👏⭐️👍🏼

Your review was a masterstroke too👏


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Posted: 7 years ago
Lashy O Lashy I cried while reading the farewells at the end of the chapter!!--What an effective writer you are!!Was feeling crestfallen and now thanks to your comments am feeling reassured that divine intervention is there for the pious leads through your thought process.Thank you Lashy Rupinder
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lavanya and pyaari bindu..
Your reviews 👏👏...

Edited by jiya.k - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Our baisas after reading chapter 48.


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>>>> True 😭


Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Chapter 48.
The Shehzaade..

'Well... the information I received... is that Akbar not only KNOWS about all of this... but that he seized every single scroll... had them burnt... bribed the common messengers... imprisoned her personal messengers in a safe-house at Aidabad... basically, buried everything underground, so nothing would come out in the open...'
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Shehzaade in convo with Farooq, the Advisor..

'THIS scroll is not the original... but the man who brought it to me claims that its contents are! Dictated by a dying man on his deathbed, no less!' his head shook slowly 'So, I'm not sure...'

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The Angry Khalil..

'WHAT?' His chapped fists rolled up into a ball again 'That slimy rascal! Gets information from me... and then goes behind my back... to carry out his own vendetta! DAMN!' Down his fist came upon the rosewood table, unable to hold back any longer. BAAANG!
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Farooq sahib..

'Beware, Khalil... you have a long list of crimes to your name already... don't make it so bad that you wouldn't find place in Jannat if you tried repenting for life!'


Khan Sahib and Heera..

'And I... I am upholding my promise to stay strong... b... but there is a promise you've made to me too...' she peeked around, realising that where they were now, was where he'd stood as he made that promise to her 'a promise that you'd CONTINUE making your life's journey with your companion, your bride... creating and collecting new memories along the way... as you travel with her...'
'And I do intend to keep that promise...'
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Karkuzhali.



>>> Brilliant Patti ! 👏👏
I Like the concept ! 😳





Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Chapter 48.

Image result for good versus bad image

Haikus..

1.
Chapter forty eight
Brought waterfalls in the eyes
Oh God! Poor Baisas!😭😭

2.
We were relishing
Sweets served by Lashy before
We've bit chilli now..😡

3.
Karkuzhali thinks
To consult astrologer
What'll happen next?😕

4.
Mercury enters Taurus
'Expect the unexpected'
The prediction says!😲

5.
It's Good versus Bad
Is Shehzaade good or bad?
Next chapter will say!😕

KK.


>>> Wonderful patti !👏
Perfect picture 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: binduprasad41



>>>> True 😭




>>> Brilliant Patti ! 👏👏
I Like the concept ! 😳






>>> Wonderful patti !👏
Perfect picture 👍🏼


Brilliant Aunty..👏👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
OMG! Bindup... What a review 👏...can feel every word, every emotion ..😭.. Your thoughts about so called 'protectors of faith/religion' .. Spot on 👏 That Farooq 😡 Khalil 😡


Rose di's suda suda review is here too🤗
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Originally posted by: Kalgi22

I'm always making you laugh.. but why you're making me cry... 😭 😭 😭 We didn't decode the teaser correctly. C48 actually landed by crushing this poor Chellam.. 😭 😭 😭



😭😭 😭 My Akeera.. .😭 😭 😭 😭 The gloomy is not only in Parnagarh... It spread acroos entire world.. including this teeny weeny SL too...😭 😭 Look above... Savi too crying alone in her room.. 😭 😭


As if already existing three villains not enough, you added Farooq also to the villian side... 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 Why Chellam why??? 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😭 😭 😭 This Farooq 😡 😡 He and his so called principles.. 😡 😡 You're the people should get kill by Khalil... And I wish Khalil would kill Sandy's Mahender too... now that he knows about his backstabbing . 😈 😈 😈 So that my AMK will have easy win...oh no... my AMK all alone... 😭 😭 😭



I don't have to worry when I know "Kannah Paninga Thaan Kootama Varum Singam Single ah Thaan Varum" (Literal translation: Only pigs come in herds. The lion always comes alone)



But still Chellam, I can't stop worrying for him and Heera... 😭 😭 😭

Still no news from Tejraj 😭 😭 😭 So AMK only taking Azeez with him... Leave Mirza for Heera's safety.. I pray Sayyid too get well soon... If khalil comes again, what will they do... OMG what am I going to do than just crying 😭 😭 😭 Here my Akeera all alone... And they are not even together... 😭 😭 😭 What a painful farewell... 😭 😭 😭



What a emotional write up kal di 😭😭😭
Me too can't stop worrying for Akeera 😭


Originally posted by: Unbeknown

Here goes what i felt reading

What was the point of Farooq travelling to Mecca if he cannot understand the ulterior sense humans are one sans religion? Unfortunate that religion is still deeply rooted in the society where it shows its ugly head during all critical issues. Having known Khan sahib for 10 years, Shehzade should understand that whatever his reasons were for the treason, his Ustad would put himself in the front to protect Shehzade, if the need arise. But alas, truth was revealed to Shehzade in such a twisted way. What is Khalil planning to do to Heera? Hasn't he committed enough crimes that he is eyeing on a married female; that too his Ustad's wife? It clearly explains what all people could do to gain power/position be it Mahendar/Kalil 😒

Amongst all the critical happenings at the capital, a blueprint of the canal at Parnagarh is a respite 😊 One could clearly visualize how would this canal be dug up. His men proved time and again that they are dependable and the work would be done at any cost but sadly Ustad had to lose eight members of his group. He is a true mentor/leader that he re-instigates faith and belief in them during their lows.

Little did Heera knew back then that her naivety would cost her so much at a later point of her life. But true to being Ustad's wife, instead of grieving for what has been done, she chose to be his strength at the time of adversity and did not succumb to her yearning to be comforted by him before his departure 😭 Also the Ustad's finesse in explaining the probabilities and measures to be taken in those situations is commendable and also his inner turmoil to keep his begum's character intact without being tarnished as a traitor is 👏 Your portray of our leads emotions is so admirable that I wouldn't be able to do justice to what you've written by trying to explain what I felt reading it ⭐️ Azeez, though mischevious, knows what his Ustad/bhabhijaan needs at that time frame.

Have to wait for what part 4 of the book has got and how our Ustad is going to turn gears to protect his begum and himself 😊


Superb write up Aparna di 👏
Very well said about Farooq sahib and Khalil .😭




Originally posted by: lghosh



Kawsi, I will not be able to take it!! You know what AMK is to me! To see AMK down, beaten up mentally and physically, and it will happen, I will be the one facing the blows!! 😭 And it is only the beginning! I am sure worst possible events are awaiting him!! 😭
And I don't want to spoil the mood of the house!! Let me cry in my lonesome corner!! 😭



Lana di 😭 🤗
Your write-up is so touching and emotional 😭
I can feel you trust me.

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