Originally posted by: lghosh
Okay finished Part 2! I devoured and relished it just like KS did his lunch!! 😉😆 The whole interaction between them was so sweet!!
And Lashy he is sooo sooo Shaana!! 🤣 I was so grinning away while reading noting his every gesture, moves, expressions, looks, smiles and so many THUDs I experienced!! Ooofff, yeh aadmi mujhe maar daalega!! I could envision him in front of me doing his things actions of all sorts!! 🤣 And it is your writing that creates this magic!! 👏 The pun that was there "I am very hungry, in fact ravenous" had me in splits!! I was like 'KS, really, it is you'??!! 🤣
And I loved his scroll, it was from his heart, simple and meaningful!! It was not flowery and exuberant but grounded just like KS himself is!! 😃 A simple 'Thank you' says it all for the emotional and intimate journey he shared with her! 👏
And another edit you put up!! Did this picture take you so long?? I love his physique, Ya Khuda, he will be the death of me!! Ab iss se zyada yehan kuch likh bhi nahi sakti!! 😉😆 I just look and wipe the drool away from the side of my mouth! 😆 And then look again and sigh! Lashy you got her in front and he masked by her partially, any particular reason? 😉 But I love it and specially the hue which reflects it is daytime!! Night scene was all blue and daytime it is bathed in a golden hue. 👏 This is called the eye for details! 👏 And his expressions and face, mashallah!! Half hidden in her hair and her hand stroking his face!! While the other hand intertwined with her fingers! Two bodies, one soul! Gosh!! Sigh!! Meri raaton ki neend gone again!! 😆 And I will be bugging you Lashy! 🤣 And Lashy that description of her bare back borrowing the gold glint from the sun was mindblowing! It was very sensual and erotic! Could make someone like AMK lose his patience and control! 😳 And I like the fact their discovery of each other is still on and it should be! They are very new in the arena! 😉😆
I tell you I see Heera in you and you know why!! Every birthday thread I see you have some special gifts for the person, so thoughtful and unique!! And Heera too had this beautiful gifts for him, for him to remember her by in his missions. Not that he will need any help remembering or reminiscing but nevertheless a tangible reminder. 👏 And his gift to her that followed is the cherry on the cake!! 😳😆 Loved her thought behind the gift!! And Pallu this time I am the perfume of C45, made specially by Heera!! 😆
Also loved the thought she put in to prepare that lunch for him!! All the same dishes he ate in Aidabad!! First time openly he did an 'adaab' to her in front of everyone directly looking at her! It was another top favourite scene of mine! And this time the 'adaab' was of a different nature!! 😉
And her reaction when she saw the strangle marks was so genuine and affectionate and real!! We will all react that way! First, prayer to the Lord to keep him safe, then fear for his life and then experiencing his pain through herself and automatically tears will form!! 👏 So so related to it!! 👍🏼
He came to know from her why she refused Royal Piggy in Bansi!! 🥳 And he found a silver lining in all of that episode! And yet showed his empathy, possessiveness, promise to take avenge followed by his ruling passion for her!! God, why can't I find one like him?? He is so MINE!! 😳😆 And no one dare cast an eye on him!! 😡
I loved how Heera wanted to tell him all the details stopping him midway with her fingers. I got reminded of C44, 'Say something' and here she stops him by saying something herself! 😆 And she revelled in how he said he will make sure Royal Piggy gets his due for his vile treatment of Heera!! I could hear the firm menace in his voice and tone while muttering it softly to her making a solemn promise! It is exactly not what he said but HOW he said it!
And that teaser description still has its charms, his mellow smile while his mouth is nuzzling in her hair half hidden creates a very suggestive picture in mind!! That mellow smile is an aftermath of the passionate session he had earlier!! 😳 I can so clearly distinguish the difference from the two emotions in him and through him in Heera too! 😆
I am not writing about the teaser part because I already wrote about it!! The feelings are still the same if not more intensified! 😃
And I liked the way she tried getting his attention by playing with his hands, his ring, then taking it off and putting it on her and then back on him again!! It so reminded me of a Man who lets his loved ones do whatever they want to with him and his not saying a word. I know he was preoccupied with the thoughts in his mind but it painted a very cosy picture. 😃 And also shows how she knew him already so well, she knew he was deep in some serious thoughts. She wanted to break his thoughts and be a part of them and finally asked him so. A good understanding between them both! 👍🏼
And I forgot to mention, I protected him from the dagger stab outside the inn!! My life had met its purpose! 😆 That first action scene was nothing less than any movie action scene!! I had my breath caught in my throat!! I could feel his pain and strangulation!! And saw him in one push how he got that guy off and had him up with his dangling feets in the air. All right in front of my eyes!! Lashy he killed 2 guys, what happened to the 3rd guy? Is he still alive and saw everything?
And oh god, that escaped man from the safe house found a house and will relay to Royal Piggy in the vicinity!! Oh, the cosmos is planning against ou duo! 😒 This doesn't sound good!! 😔 But at least AMK guessed it was Royal Piggy who met Khalil and it was Khalil's men who took the life of Chhota Faizan. And the way he took the life showed his love, concern and protectiveness about his men, how much they mean to him!! It is not only they work for him but they are his own children!!
One thing in Part 1 I loved how he deduced about Royal Piggy's involvement with Khalil! How he deciphers one point from another and connects the dot between them. A typical successful CIO! 👏 No wonder he is the Ustaad Sahib!
And for this brilliance, you were worried and editing for the last 6 days or so?? 😡Nothing can be anything less than excellence as far as you are concerned!! I know what a perfectionist you are till you are satisfied you will keep working on it neglecting everything! You know I feel indebted to you from the bottom of my heart for this hard work you put yourself through every month and at times I feel guilty for making you undergo that phase!! 🤗 Loved it is an understatement! Every word is golden to portray the actions, passions, feelings, emotions, betrayal, villainy...everything is so realistic and can be related to! It doesn't remain fiction anymore! 👏All I can say is a heartfelt 2 words, 'Thank you'! 😉😆 And it is not because you wrote in a renowned accomplished manner but also because slowly you are fulfilling my wishlist one after another slowly and steadily!! I wanted him to know why she refused Mahandra and you did it! Her seeing his scars and going through his pains in healing him, you did!! Their union as one making it a dreamy sequence you did that too! So seriously 'Thank you'! 🤗 But till then, I hope the words in my review will whisper my silent thoughts of gratitude to you. 😉🤗
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