NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 40-Chapter 45(2 part) 11th Feb

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selvi1275

@selvi1275

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Posted: 7 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: lashy
^^^ Didn't come out anywhere as close to expected Pallu😒... so didn't save/put it on front page...

But yes... in that sort of Parchment scroll... in Lavanya's words... he left behind what she read...

Lashy...This is Superb...I've saved it...Thank you...

I've created a bland one...If you see that, you'll fall in love with this...

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#542

I'm game!

Nothing too technical... not grammar lessons or anything... but just the words we often hear through TV medium, I'd like to know the meanings of! 😳

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Sandhya.A

@Sandhya.A

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Posted: 7 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

EVEN THOUGH EVERY LANGUAGE IS UNIQUE AND COMPLETE IN ITSELF, I DO FEEL, AT TIMES, THAT USING HINDI OR URDU CERTAINLY BRINGS ABOUT A DRASTIC CHANGE IN THE WAY THINGS ARE SAID, MORE SPECIALLY URDU. AS A LANGUAGE, URDU IS MUCH MORE GRACEFUL AND NUANCED

Sanskritised Hindi and Urdu give completely different feels to the same content though they follow the same grammar. For that matter each language has an inherent shade.

The Urduised version of Khan Sahib's letter has lifted the romantic feel up by 10 notches.😳 Just imagine if it was in shuddha Hindi!😔

Kal Ratri hamare ati sundar yatra ki awadhi mein, humne kayi smritiyaan ikatta ki hai ( Lavanya, shouldn't it be jama ki hai or jodi hai in urdu?) Jitni kalpana ki thi usse kahin adhik kuch bhaavnaon ki kuch nikatthaaon ki

Aur in sabhi smritiyon ke liye Akbar Mahmoud Khan ke paas kayi bhaavnayein hain jinhe woh apni patni ke saath baantna chaante hain.

Abhi ke liye hum in sabhi bhaavnaon ka saar ek shabd mein vyakt kar rahe hain - hriday se dhanyawaad.

Hum us samay ka aaturtha ke saath pratiksha karenge jab hum aapki nayanon mein drishti daal kar aapse yeh sabhi bhaavnayein prakat kar sakein. Parantu tab tak hum yeh aasha karte hain ki hamara yeh patra hamare bhaavnaon ki dheemi goonj aapki kaanon tak pahunchate rahe.

Aapka

Akbar Khan.

Romance down by 10 notches.

Edited by Sandhya.A - 7 years ago

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: selvi1275
Lashy...This is Superb...I've saved it...Thank you...
I've created a bland one...If you see that, you'll fall in love with this...

Here you go... tried to make a clearer better one... but it's difficult to insert all that amount of lettering into an image..

still not as good as what I'd imagined... but better than last

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A
( Lavanya, shouldn't it be jama ki hai or jodi hai in urdu?)

After all this editing you better not tell me that some words need to be changed 😡😆

Edited by lashy - 7 years ago

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@old_charm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: lashy

After all this editing you better not tell me that some words need to be changed 😡😆

😆😆

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#547

Good Morning dear Girls!

"...They dropped to the floor like a pile of autumn leaves,hurriedly dragging forth a step-stool in their midst so their mistress would sit down..."

The 'pile of baisas..and Lashy in the middle..' Image result for pic of a pile of autumn leaves

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#548

Super fantabulously written...👏

I am.nit a fan of action sequences but the way you own down those makes.me read them

Heera with her dasis was something really interesting

Mansabdaar returns back after mission to savour homely feeling may it be good or his Begum Sahiba's arm abode

While he was exploring her he remembered about the kunwarsa and she disclosed her humiliation infront of the whole sabha that was done by Mahendras

Khan Sahib ensured her that he would be punished for all the deeds taking his Begum in his possessive grip...

Letter in Urdu from the ustaad to his Begum had so much of love and longing

Loved it and continue soon...

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

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Posted: 7 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Good Morning dear Girls!

"...They dropped to the floor like a pile of autumn leaves,hurriedly dragging forth a step-stool in their midst so their mistress would sit down..."

The 'pile of baisas..and Lashy in the middle..'

Omg

Perfect

Aww lashy di looks lovely