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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Woow superb...👏
akbar heera ka part soo lovely ... oho heera is back on akbar past... 😛
continue... i love ur novel yr...😛 😉
Thanku too... lets wait for next part uptoo... 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good afternoon, Sahibas! 🤗

It is update day- so nothing follows the norm!😆

Came online this morning - saw the update up and everything went haywire. Did not do any HW and went straight to the update.😃

The prelude to the chapter - the picture of AMK stroking her fingers- itself sent warm vibes , making the reader ponder on the wonder of the upcoming update.😳

After reading this chapter, I am tempted to have my class debate on the topic - The pros and cons of binoculars!😉

The thrilling events at the Mansabdar's chamber- pure reading pleasure. ☺️

How Heera knows which of his buttons to push to get her way, the personal board games ( have never come across such an analogy- brilliant) they played, his blurting out that she knows little of his past which led to Heera undertaking the task of getting some answers from two of his most-trusted men.😊

And AMK is still in Parnagarh!😲

Wondering of the dire consequences of this revelation when AMK gets wind of it.

Lashy Sahiba - a triple Wah! chapter! 👏 👏 👏 🤗

Will be back later in the evening to finish the HW!😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 42

Image result for painting of fairy tale romantic lover couple

The Story goes thus...

"Breathtaking!"

Knowingly or unknowingly the author

Suggested the apt title for her chapter

It is really "breathtaking", to say the least

Penned with the style that is always her best.

A centre theme for Baisas' "Take five" on "breathtaking"

And the follow up comments with imaginations wild running.

The author, with her magical wand has designed the chapter

That delights the readers with its wonderful rapture.


She playfully uses the 'funny lens' gifted by him

Enjoying the distant scenes with joy filled to the brim

By chance she glimpses his room where he gets ready

To go on a mission which he decided already

But there he is in two minds to carry out his mission

Since it is concerned with her secret messengers in question

He has to take a decision , perhaps on every occasion

Setting aside his dilemma, not giving room to passion..


She meets him in his chamber on his invite

The news she hears from him doesn't give her any delight

She begs for another chance to free her messengers

Very tactfully convincing him that she is their well-wisher

What follows next is a treat hosted by the author

He guesses that she knew about his assignment earlier

And she saw him getting ready, using her binoculars


The next are some intimate moments between them

That speak of the love that is growing between them

He takes leave of her and wants her to wish him success

She feels the invisible wall between them still has remnants

" Any soldier's wife would wish him luck when he leaves on errand

But I cannot be like 'any' wife , can I ?" she opens her mind

He tries to convince her about his loyalty to his master

Slipping a few words about the shehzaadi by whom he was fostered


She becomes curious to know about his past

Meets Chachajaan and his friends at last

Learns from him about his painful past that made him lead a life aloof

And how ' he even went against Huzoor to keep her safe!'

She couldn't trust what she has heard about his mother

Who lives comfortably elsewhere without any bother

Thus finally the author has let the cat out of the bag

Giving rise to expectations by the readers without any snag!


So we will wait for the next chapter very eagerly

Hoping to read it not very late but early

Baisas posting quizzes and perdictions

With one shots and fan fictions

Fun posts , poems, pictures and musings

A mini serial in parallel ' running'

All revolving around one Romantic fiction

Our author Sahiba presents us with beautiful diction!


Karkuzhali.


Edited by karkuzhali - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Chapter 42

Image result for painting of fairy tale romantic lover couple

The Story goes thus...

"Breathtaking!"

Knowingly or unknowingly the author

Suggested the apt title for her chapter

It is really "breathtaking", to say the least

Penned with the style that is always her best.

A centre theme for Baisas' "Take five" on "breathtaking"

And the follow up comments with imaginations wild running.

The author, with her magical wand has designed the chapter

That delights the readers with its wonderful rapture.


She playfully uses the 'funny lens' gifted by him

Enjoying the distant scenes with joy filled to the brim

By chance she glimpses his room where he gets ready

To go on a mission which he decided already

But there he is in two minds to carry out his mission

Since it is concerned with her secret messengers in question

He has to take a decision , perhaps on every occasion

Setting aside his dilemma, not giving room to passion..


She meets him in his chamber on his invite

The news she hears from him doesn't give her any delight

She begs for another chance to free her messengers

Very tactfully convincing him that she is their well-wisher

What follows next is a treat hosted by the author

He guesses that she knew about his assignment earlier

And she saw him getting ready, using her binoculars


The next are some intimate moments between them

That speak of the love that is growing between them

He takes leave of her and wants her to wish him success

She feels the invisible wall between them still has remnants

" Any soldier's wife would wish him luck when he leaves on errand

But I cannot be like 'any' wife , can I ?" she opens her mind

He tries to convince her about his loyalty to his master

Slipping a few words about the shehzaadi by whom he was fostered


She becomes curious to know about his past

Meets Chachajaan and his friends at last

Learns from him about his painful past that made him lead a life aloof

And how ' he even went against Huzoor to keep her safe!'

She couldn't trust what she has heard about his mother

Who lives comfortably elsewhere without any bother

Thus finally the author has let the cat out of the bag

Giving rise to expectations by the readers without any snag!


So we will wait for the next chapter very eagerly

Hoping to read it not very late but early

Baisas posting quizzes and perdictions

With one shots and fan fictions

Fun posts , poems, pictures and musings

A mini serial in parallel ' running'

All revolving around one Romantic fiction

Our author Sahiba presents us with beautiful diction!


Karkuzhali.



Woah
Indeed chapter is breathtaking in all means ⭐️
Isn't this is something we all always wait after each chapter 😳
what a beautiful treat patti after update. ...😳
you cover everything in this beautiful post 👏
Love to read whole chapter again in your different version ❤️
Love it so much.
Thank you 🤗


Love the picture also
Perfect find 👍🏼
Edited by binduprasad41 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Good Morning Banjaras and Baisas 🤗

I'm able to be here at the usual time to wish you all and be here with you all... that is such a relief in itself... 😆

How's your Sunday been so far?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Vmanoh

Lashy.

I'm at the point of reading these lines right now & what sweet surprise to see the banner picture coming to life as the lines unfolded. I had to stop & look at the pic , send you a note before going back to read the rest of it.

...

!But half-a-step back and her shoulders had come against the wall, as if the forces were transpiring against her too...

bringing his right palm up, the young man plastered it on the wall to her right, effectively hemming her in.

But unbeknown to him, her fingers that were grasping at the wall behind her for support, had gone sweetly and utterly numb...
..


Be back...


Yes..


Lashy di 🤗
Edited by binduprasad41 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: lashy

Good Morning Banjaras and Baisas 🤗


I'm able to be here at the usual time to wish you all and be here with you all... that is such a relief in itself... 😆

How's your Sunday been so far?


Sooo good..
Any day with starts with your update is dreamy
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Coming to all responses one by one... (Periyamma suda suda story so far too... ) but Lana I already knew/expected that one might walk away with mixed feelings from this...
Earlier I was quite confident of 42, but after reading Vathsy's poll and the way that everyone expected the story would take its course left me quite "😲"

In a way, it was good that everyone's expectations is different... and yet it left me worried if readers might feel confused about the progressing series of events...

I saw most expected that the first thing to happen would be the canal work... and that at the end of HBAS, AMK & Heera will have a heart-to-heart where he'd tell her everything about his past and they live happily ever after...

Hence to possibly see Heera try and find the meaning of his incomplete sentence straightaway might've left you feeling confused (which btw was not a slip of tongue Lana - it was something AMK wanted to tell her since she'd made it quite obvious that she has accepted him. But stopped, seeing the questioning look in her eyes. As we know, it is a very vulnerable part of his life and doesn't want to say any of it when he wonders if she's still being judgemental about it)
Besides, canal work will take months and years to complete... so not something that can be done so quickly.

But a few chapters on and you'll understand why everything plays out as it does... and why it was necessary for the story

As for your fears about what Heera will do... have faith Lana... and W&W!😆


Edited by lashy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

It is update day- so nothing follows the norm!😆

Came online this morning - saw the update up and everything went haywire. Did not do any HW and went straight to the update.😃

Originally posted by: swetiii


Sooo good..
Any day with starts with your update is dreamy


Awww really? ☺️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: lashy

Good Morning Banjaras and Baisas 🤗


I'm able to be here at the usual time to wish you all and be here with you all... that is such a relief in itself... 😆

How's your Sunday been so far?


Lashy. 🤗

I finally finished reading & stopped counting how many 'Thud' moments I had for variuos reasons.
Two of my wishes from the quiz also materialized. I'm on cloud 9 is all I can say before I hit the pillows.
Thank you for this wonder filled emotional update. 👏👏

You have no idea what a stir it has created for me especially the last part.
That Fab 4 Beatles song I mentioned 2 threads ago " I want to hold your hands " is playing in my head right now & i'm unable to shake it off. 😆

i have a lot to write (sigh) but it is quite late for me & have a busy family day tomorrow. Will be back later tomorrow with my thoughts on C42 & HW. Good Night 🥱

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