NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THD 37~Chapter 42 - Upd 2nd Dec - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Chapter 42.

'"No' he was tempted to retaliate, while steadily withdrawing his palm from her grasp. So, THAT was what this was about. She hadn't forgotten herself. She was aware of what she was doing. Rather, HE was the one who'd forgotten himself for a bit, bewitched in the spell of her clutches. ... "
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What an expressive description of his emotion! kudos to our author Sahiba!

KK.


Oh 😲

Suda suda reply... thanks for highlighting that part, Periyamma ☺️

Btw, did you come across the part of his parting 'smile' that you'd highlighted in a similar poem? The one that we discussed about? 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Because it breaks my heaet to see u doing it to urself...😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lashy, I will do it one by one.. When I was doing the first reading, these lines touched/impressed me..A very beautiful way of describing the lover's expectation/disappointment/ emotions.. So I immediately responded. I also remember Vatsy's quiz about the future chapters, where she mentions about his flashback to appear in the forthcoming chapters..

Periyamma.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good Morning! The sun has risen!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I am chewing over several emotions right now, mixed feelings. Will definitely get back.

Loved the part where the current of the afternoon changed, it had frosted and yet ice and water was elementally the same!

We see a tussle in a young 17-year-old wife whether to drool over her husband or not!! 😆 Fikar not Baisa, the whole feminine gender is ogling at him and drooling on him without any official license or right, at least you are officially entitled to, so go ahead and ogle, check him out and wipe away the drool like I do most of the time! 😉🤣 And I almost adore this talking out loud or thinking out loud quality of Heera! Every time she gets into a fix in front of AMK for this! 🤣 And I am not ashamed to say that he was opening his tunic knots one by one, 1, 2, 3, 4 and with a parched throat, my heart was going 'dhak, dhak-dhak, dhak-dhak-dhak, dhak-dhak-dhak-dhak'!!! 🤣 I can imagine your state back then! 😆

The entire encounter in the room was superb! The way He deciphered about the entire binocular scenario was beyond exceptional! True Ustaad style! 👏👍🏼 And walking her back to the wall without laying a finger was electrifying! Kudos to Heera for managing to keep standing on her 2 feet without slipping on the floor is praiseworthy!! 😆 Simply adored and devoured the almost kiss encounter and was actually happy the kiss did not happen! 😃

It reminded me of the pose of the HBAS banner!! His leaning over her and she must have looked up at him before closing her eyes and her hands on the wall going numb! She was not holding him but the wall! So the picture immediately came to mind! 😃 He was leaning in to look at her, drink on her features and his right hand rested on her right side!! The chemistry, the longing, the yearning could be sensed and cut through by a knife but that is what made it so goosebump worthy! 😉😆 The expectations about the real thing went up by several notches! 😆 And his self-control!! It kills me every time!

What I loved was the dilemma and tussle between a husband and Ustaad! He was firm and yet not completely overpowering!! That is commendable, no-nonsense attitude but not ruthless!! No wonder I flip for him! 😉😆And of course, the Husband won!! The coquetry and wiliness of Heera were brimming to optimum, she managed to sway the steeliness nature of the Ustaad! 😉 Unthinkable! But never underestimate the power of a common wife! 😉😆 And finally, all your sighs and ahems on Selvi's DP came out in the opening!! Knew it!! 😉😃 The beautiful part was the stroking by him on her knuckles by his thumb! I don't remember on which OS, but I wrote like this on similar lines, his stroking her knuckles!!

The last departure scene with his parting smile which told her he was not as affected as she thought he would be. It was a hopeful thought of a hopeful wife praying for a hopefully safe mission and hopeful rock solid marital relationship henceforth and hopeful about lot more. I almost expected him to say 'Abhaar' to her when he turned and smiled but he was not in a state of mind! AMK's slip of tongue!! 😲 Difficult to digest!


And Mirza Sahib I have a new found respect for you!! Adaab! 👍🏼 Your dedication, your devotion, your respect, your love, your trustworthiness shone through your reaction and words and I completely, solely and wholly admire you for this!! I don't expect anything less from the men of AMK! No wonder he trusts and depends on you all with his life and near and dear ones! 👏 Rose Bhabijaan, you are right, your Mirzajaan is made of astute material!! 😉😆 And my salute to him for that! 👏 I am only wondering what will be AMK's reactions when he will hear of this entire scene! 🤔

And I found my new inanimate object that I want to be!! The shiny, glinty steel vest of AMK!! 😳 And I am the first one to claim for it!! Now everyone will want to be this!! Sab ke sab peechhe jao, dur, bahoot dur!! Koi nahi aayega haq jamaane iss par!! 😈 It is me and only myself who will cover him and protect him from dangerous blows taking it all on myself!! Yep, this is 'giving' in love!! So Heera Baisa, don't worry all the danger has to go through me before it can touch your husband!! I am a shield for him be it any danger or any of these girls flocking for him calling him public property!😡 😉🤣 He will be safe from one and all!! 😆

Errr...ummm...Author Sahiba, I am almost twiddling my thumb when I am asking this, but I hope Heera will not be anything like Jodha Begum doing 'bhala', who will run after his mom, find her out, bring her in front of him for a hope of a happy reunion?? 🤔 Now, will she?? 🤔 As far as understanding AMK's scarred childhood and neglected background are okay but anything further...!! 🤔 I am not disgracing you by any chance by comparing you with the show's CVs but just the fact that I don't have any sympathy or empathy for that lady who deserted her own son at that tender age to pursue for her own pleasure!! Sorry, whatever her reasons were, it pales in comparison to the need of a vulnerable child to whom a Mother is the whole world!! I know you will have something completely magical and different up your sleeves!! 😃
And another shocker, AMK is still in Parnagarh?? 😲 What?? Why?? Where?? 🤔That is the next enigma to haunt our and Heera's mind!! 😃
Edited by lghosh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 42.
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Haikus:

Sunday with updates
He and she seen everywhere
Chapter forty two.

Story flows smoothly
Selvi's GMs come to mind
Lashy's magic pen!

The lovely couple
Who has the most tender heart?
Akbar or Heera?

Heera's new found joy
The binocular-effect
Very lovely scene.

KK.

Edited by karkuzhali - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Good Morning! The sun has risen!

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Beautiful


Good Morning sachu patti and all my sweet friends. 😳
Happy happy Sunday 🤗

Good evening lana di, Aparna di and Vathsy di 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Many many congrats everyone for new home 🤗
Thank you so much Lashy di for update. 🤗
Now please take rest
Good night! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Chapter 42.
Image result for painting of fairy tale couple

Haikus:

Sunday with updates
He and she seen everywhere
Chapter forty two.

Story flows smoothly
Selvi's GMs comes to mind
Lashy's magic pen!

The lovely couple
Who has the most tender heart?
Akbar or Heera?

Heera's new found joy
The binocular-effect
Very lovely scene.

KK.


Omg picture
Beautiful haikus patti 👏👏👏
Thank you for morning treat 😳

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