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Saumya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: JodhaAkbarRox

And the award for "The Best Guess" goes too...

@Akdha_Saumya
This girl is AWESOME!!!! HATS OFF!!!

Thanku thanku 😳 ⭐️

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Saumya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: JodhaAkbarRox

Thank you! Love you too😃bahut bahut saare!
I am soo happy that you loved the chapter.
Yes you were right.
And I will try my best to update soon and hope that writer's block doesn't hit me again because in the middle of that chapter I was and I had literally no idea how to go about. So pray to God for that and till lets see if you can answer the questions I asked at the end of the chapter. Time pass ho jayega.

I m already in love with the idea 👏
I m ready to answer your questions 😆

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Saumya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: JodhaAkbarRox

Actually let this be a kind of challenge or game for tp. I have asked some questions at the end of the chapter so everyone can come up with possible theories and I will answer them within the chapters! Lets see who accepts the challenge. The game BEGINS!!!

I thought it would be some kind of subjective questions 😃 😆
Now i know what you asked

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dellaakdha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Well we expected a previous update as a dream😉

Awesome Update Dear 😊

Beautifully Written..

Jodha's cold behaviour towards Jalal is the needed one...

I am ok with this separation...It will result in more love but both had to go through a lot of pain...

Whatever Jalal did is appreciable..it's good that jodha accepts Jalal's request...

I am thinking what will be in that letter?

I like the way how sujamal accepts Jalal's hospitality as a brother of Jodha...

Poor Ja and Jo..Both are in pain...

Now how will Ja repent for his mistake...May be he will go to amer for some Political reason and console jodha...

Waiting for ur dramatic twists and turns in this beautiful story...

Thanks for pm...

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Kavya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Edited by -Kavya_P- - 8 years ago

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JodhaAkbarRox

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: divyadaya13
You have every right to extent your story with twists and turns. Woh ishq hi kya jisme koi badha na ho, distance of joja will create more love and longing for each other. Only request is dont take long time to give updates😊

I will try to update in less time. And btw, I am updating today!!!😃

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JodhaAkbarRox

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-
Awesome chappy
Update soon
Hope they sort out soon

Thank you. Updating in a while.

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JodhaAkbarRox

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh
Oh so that was a dream
Jodha left palace n a guilty Jalal behind
Loved the way Sujamal maintained a tone of an enemy as well as brother in law

Well scripted dear...

Thank you! We are going to see a bit more of Sujamal here. He is going to play an important role this time. So get ready for more of Jalal and Sujamal because they are going to be partners for sometime.

Edited by JodhaAkbarRox - 8 years ago

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JodhaAkbarRox

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Zaini_Hanjra
Res...
Unres...
It was awesome!
Huh so that hot sequence was just day dreaming!😭'
OMG jodha is leaving agra but jalal didn't intervened! She indeed needs some time!😉
I loved the scene between jalal and sujamal!
Waiting eagerly for jodha and jalal's reunion!😳
So cont. soon and thanks for pm!😊

Thank you!

Yes unfortunately it was a dream, again. Jalal likes to dream a lot. Every time there is a scene where there is romance at a time where there can't be any, it is Jalal's dream. And when something is happening to Jalal extremely dramatically, it is Jodha's dream.

Jalal and Jodha will soon unite again but till that time you will see more of Sujamal and Jalal scenes as they investigate the case.

Edited by JodhaAkbarRox - 8 years ago

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JodhaAkbarRox

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Posted: 8 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: dellaakdha
Well we expected a previous update as a dream😉
Awesome Update Dear 😊
Beautifully Written..
Jodha's cold behaviour towards Jalal is the needed one...
I am ok with this separation...It will result in more love but both had to go through a lot of pain...
Whatever Jalal did is appreciable..it's good that jodha accepts Jalal's request...
I am thinking what will be in that letter?
I like the way how sujamal accepts Jalal's hospitality as a brother of Jodha...
Poor Ja and Jo..Both are in pain...
Now how will Ja repent for his mistake...May be he will go to amer for some Political reason and console jodha...

Waiting for ur dramatic twists and turns in this beautiful story...
Thanks for pm...

You have raised a very important question. What was in that letter is only known to Jalal and the scribe. But that letter can't be ignored as it is going to be very important. Now in a good way or bad way, that you will come to know in the later chapters.

Sujamal is going to stay in the palace but his stay will result in another problem. Problem for whom? That you will know in the next chapter.