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Appy@Ayman

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

superb update dear..

so ja asked for forgiveness.

jo is still angry.,but ja want her to be save so send her with soliders in this way he will be atleast aware of her wellbeings.

hope jo's anger get finish

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Appy@Ayman

@zynahsiddiqi956

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

tnx for PM dear.😉

cont soon..

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JodhaAkbarRox

@JodhaAkbarRox

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Akdha_Saumya
You didn't replied to my previous comment as well 😭
Pls reply to this one

I didn't reply to your previous comment because:

1. If I would have there would have been major spoilers.

2. I wanted you to read the chapter before I did this...

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JodhaAkbarRox

@JodhaAkbarRox

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Akdha_Saumya
Amazing kiss
I think this is a dream
Is it..??
Lovely chappy
Jalal asked for forgiveness
But u told he wont be able to ask for forgiveness
I really believe that this all is a dream
Thanks for pm
Update soon
I really love reading this story

And the award for "The Best Guess" goes too...

@Akdha_Saumya

This girl is AWESOME!!!! HATS OFF!!!

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JodhaAkbarRox

@JodhaAkbarRox

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Akdha_Saumya
Let me tell u one thing
I love u bhot sara
Bhot bhot sara
Aur usse bhi zyada your story
I love ur story bhot bhot bhot sara
Pls update soon
Thanks for pm
Really lovely chappy
I m so happy that i was right about the previous chspter
Thanks for updating
U know curiosity will kill me
So pls pls pls update soon

Thank you! Love you too😃 bahut bahut saare!

I am soo happy that you loved the chapter.

Yes you were right.

And I will try my best to update soon and hope that writer's block doesn't hit me again because in the middle of that chapter I was and I had literally no idea how to go about. So pray to God for that and till lets see if you can answer the questions I asked at the end of the chapter. Time pass ho jayega.

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Oh so that was a dream

Jodha left palace n a guilty Jalal behind

Loved the way Sujamal maintained a tone of an enemy as well as brother in law

Well scripted dear...

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JodhaAkbarRox

@JodhaAkbarRox

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Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh
Oh so that was a dream
Jodha left palace n a guilty Jalal behind
Loved the way Sujamal maintained a tone of an enemy as well as brother in law

Well scripted dear...

Thank you! 😃

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JodhaAkbarRox

@JodhaAkbarRox

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Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: JodhaAkbarRox

Thank you! Love you too😃 bahut bahut saare!
I am soo happy that you loved the chapter.
Yes you were right.
And I will try my best to update soon and hope that writer's block doesn't hit me again because in the middle of that chapter I was and I had literally no idea how to go about. So pray to God for that and till lets see if you can answer the questions I asked at the end of the chapter. Time pass ho jayega.

Actually let this be a kind of challenge or game for tp. I have asked some questions at the end of the chapter so everyone can come up with possible theories and I will answer them within the chapters! Lets see who accepts the challenge. The game BEGINS!!!

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Zainab Hanjra

@Zaini_Hanjra

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Posted: 7 years ago

#59

Res...

Unres...

It was awesome!

Huh so that hot sequence was just day dreaming!😭'

OMG jodha is leaving agra but jalal didn't intervened! She indeed needs some time!😉

I loved the scene between jalal and sujamal!

Waiting eagerly for jodha and jalal's reunion!😳

So cont. soon and thanks for pm!😊

Edited by Zaini_Hanjra - 7 years ago

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Saumya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: JodhaAkbarRox

I didn't reply to your previous comment because:
1. If I would have there would have been major spoilers.
2. I wanted you to read the chapter before I did this...

No problem 😳