NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THD 35~Chapter 40-NewOS 'Diwali'pg161

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Good Morning sachu patti, Jyothi and all my lovely sweet friends.
Happy Thursday 🤗

Good evening lana di 🤗

Thank you so much Lashy di for update and congrats for new thread.
Now please take rest
Good night
Sweet dreams 🤗

Good Morning Periamma, Bindu, Kuki and all my Baisas!! 😃

Good Evening Lana!! 😃

Yay new home new chapter.. Many congratulations, Baisas!! 🥳

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Double treat!! Day after morning scene and then the ride together on Bahadur!! As sweet as the ride was but my highlight was the morning scene. I so wanted to see this tangled entwined bodies from the night's sleep. It was raw, it was sweet, it was loving, beautiful, emotional, and passionate in awakening the forced subdued feelings! Specially in him, the controlled and unperturbed AMK! I could really see the 'want' for her in his eyes and the masterful stroke of observing her minutely with his eyes forming the scenes in his mind that he wanted to do! It was as bold as it could get so far!

Today I have an urge to write something in Hindi!! I hope you will understand Author Sahiba!!

Yeh Ishq ka toofan idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,

Yeh chehera ki nazrane ki tamanna idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,

Yeh tanhai ki aag idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,

Yeh Chahat ki sholay idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,

Yeh Khwaish ki betaabiyaan idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,

Yeh aarzoo do lamhon ki idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,

Yeh garam saansein idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,

Yeh chhupaayi nazrein idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,

Yeh zoron si dhadkan idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,

Yeh Dil ki bharakti aag idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,

Yeh 'aap ko mehsoos' karne ki khwab idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,

Yeh guzaarish do pal saath ki idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,

Par chahate huye bhi yeh ho na saka, ho na saka, kyun ki -

Yeh andekha dil-on ka deewar idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi!!!!

Sigh!!

She was influenced like us with his 'hmmm's' and so she started with 'Hmmm' this time and he reciprocated later while riding on Bahadur! Lot of first times happening, first kiss, first time sharing of the same bed, first morning after scene and feelings, first riding on Bahadur together and first time she drank from his water bag - they shared water together involuntarily, unknowingly, first time he openly chuckled with her and that too on and about her!! 😆 Right from the canal banks to here on camel ride!! 😆

Poor Heera, she suffered so much here just to feel and experience the miraculous powers and wonders and that too because of her KS!! To get him closer emotionally and physically erasing the misunderstandings and the invisible wall! For every power and wish one has to pay and she had to pay with her life almost! Hopefully, she gets better soon and her vision returns fast. What a price to pay to be nestled in his arms in safety and wonder!

I will come back with more later! Let me calm down my breathing a little! 😆 And for this update Author Sahiba you were doing so much of drama!! Seriously??!!! Next time I will know what to take seriously when you write about unsatisfied, not happy, not up-to-the mark etc etc!!! 🥱

Rose, high-five to you!! Both of our predictions came right, the sleazy villains were not the cause of the mishap!! 😃 It was simply an accident and I even guessed Heera was unwell! 😉 But somehow this upcoming mission of KS is ringing a warning bell in my mind! I hope I am wrong! 🤔

I loved the chapter Author Sahiba!! Though it was Aunty's belated Birthday gift, it is Diwali gift for all of us and maybe some other assumed gift as well! 😉😆 I loved it all the more because it was so full of both of them! And their Love shone all throughout the chapter, their untold love story, their heartfelt love story, their forlorn love story, their forbidden love story, their sensitive love story, their not-so-ordinary love story, their strong love story! It is a paradox of life they face where no one is the barrier between them but they themselves! Fantastic job, as usual Lashy! 🤗 It was very touching for me. And as usual, I get bowled over every time seeing the control He has over himself! And oh, forgot, see all those who get surprised, if AMK wants, he can chitchat as well! Of course only if He wants to and with whom He wants to! 😉😆

Now go and take some rest Lashy, you completely deserve it!! 🤗

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: lashy

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Edited by lghosh - 8 years ago

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binduprasad41

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Lashy di 🤗

Thank you so much for this magical update

I can't explain how i am feeling right now after reading the chapter

Something which we can't explain through words but we just can feel the magic.

You know you are the perfectionist and magician . You do magic with your words.

My my what sweet twist in khan sahib and heera life.

Something not but lot change in their life.

Desire is mutual between them .

If only both heera and khan sahib read each other minds then things are so different na ❤️

Both are sounds so adorable sometimes.

I cherished each and every single details in this chapter.

I will comment later . Right now i am too busy in cleaning my home for diwali despite that i read your chapter secretly that's the magic of your writing.

Love you for this.

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binduprasad41

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: lghosh
Double treat!! Day after morning scene and then the ride together on Bahadur!! As sweet as the ride was but my highlight was the morning scene. I so wanted to see this tangled entwined bodies from the night's sleep. It was raw, it was sweet, it was loving, beautiful, emotional, and passionate in awakening the forced subdued feelings! Specially in him, the controlled and unperturbed AMK! I could really see the 'want' for her in his eyes and the masterful stroke of observing her minutely with his eyes forming the scenes in his mind that he wanted to do! It was as bold as it could get so far!
Today I have an urge to write something in Hindi!! I hope you will understand Author Sahiba!!

Yeh Ishq ka toofan idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,
Yeh chehera ki nazrane ki tamanna idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,
Yeh tanhai ki aag idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,
Yeh Chahat ki sholay idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,
Yeh Khwaish ki betaabiyaan idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,
Yeh aarzoo do lamhon ki idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,
Yeh garam saansein idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,
Yeh chhupaayi nazrein idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,
Yeh zoron si dhadkan idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,
Yeh Dil ki bharakti aag idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,
Yeh 'aap ko mehsoos' karne ki khwab idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,
Yeh guzaarish do pal saath ki idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi,
Par chahate huye bhi yeh ho na saka, ho na saka, kyun ki -
Yeh andekha dil-on ka deewar idhar bhi hai aur udhar bhi!!!!

Sigh!!

Woah this is sooo beautiful

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melovesja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Ah!! lashy ! What you have done with your words dearie. First the hmmms and now the chuckle and that too was supressed😛my darling Heera 😳she keep herself awake to avoided emmbresment but to enjoy the marvelous, mirecules, wonderful ride👏

The morning scan was so beautiful and loving the losing lover of the beauty and first time not only wish , little yearning but strong desire bring quarry to be her not to be only righteous but truly get his wife. His holding of desire was ⭐️ her all go red with smile was 😳

Loved the incident you narrate from starting with and her spirit through fear and called out for him in difficult situation was heart touching, so warming in the manner as she feel trust and relaiable on him in this situation. And the listening of noise in unison by pet and those mummers by owner👏 then after the relaxation of restlessness and silent yearning of both the heart, the upwards hand was touchy but the pause was heart scratching and then the wrapping of shawl was 👏 not to forget her wish in any situation⭐️.let go of ego and delicate hold of waste the emotion through the touch everything was absolute loving. Their talks the glimpse of her khan shahib😳😛 her cover up of guffing up by mahenders talk brings another aww to me.

End was really feels like Heera but was absolutely 👏❤️ the way you showing of his murging personality , the fact of reality and lighting over their relation in feature and hidden hint to her thought.

And both time the realization of thin wall was 👏⭐️

As always loved the transitional muaah !❤️

Edited by melovesja - 8 years ago

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melovesja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Woah this is sooo beautiful

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Uffo he knows about poetess Bindya.. ☺️ Shy coming.. And you all know why.. ☺️ 🤣 Okay let's get into the story than the sub stories.. 😆

Uffo what a beautiful chapter loaded with awesome beautiful moments.. only to end next... Not merely a gentle end. But an 'abrupt' one. 😭 how mean both Khan Sahib and our author ... we poor Heera and readers who don't know how long to wait to get the next glimpse. 😡 😆

We get to see Heera's no-baisa-mode behaviors whenever Khan Sahib around.. It's so sweet to see her like this full of life and mischievous .. And Khan Sahib chuckling.. ☺️ Uff what a sight.. Uff I wish I'm Bahadur to watch all this..

What a magical early morning treat to us.. I couldn't wipe off --> 😃 from my face...😳 Love you, Chellam.. ❤️ 🤗

Edited by Kalgi22 - 8 years ago