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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: melovesja
Beautiful stuti👏 it's like mirror to all youth who were careless towards their life to enjoy their life without given another thought to what they do.😭 very sad and painful but with awesome msg at end.

Thank you so much Di!😳😳😳 Yeah you're right! 😔 When my grandma was in hospital I have witnessed so many youngsters coming there in critical condition due to bike accident and all... Really feel sorry.

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: binduprasad41
Such a emotional and painful OS 😭
But so beautifully written stuti 👏
Touching concept .
This os based on reality.
Everything is so true in this os.
These days young generation so blind by their own belief .
In the end their families life only suffer.
One selfie cost one life. So many incidents and so many life lost because of one selfie these days .
I hope now atleast people don't play with their life just for fun and style.

Thank you stuti for this amazing os.🤗
I love reading your one shot which give always very strong message.

Thank you so much for your review dear!🤗 Yes this types of incidents are so common nowadays. Everyday you will find some young boys in the roads riding bike recklessly without thinking about their consequences. And the biggest sufferer of these are their family... When I visited my grandma in hospital I have seen so many accident cases like this. 😔 And selfie is also a new craze nowadays. Even I have friends who are obsessed with this that they do not think about the situation while taking selfies... Strange! 😔

Thanks for all your words...😳 I was not much satisfied after writing actually as I felt I missed the thrilling part in the whole sequence which I intended. But anyway, this has become emotional and you all liked it, so I am happy!😳

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

After reading your note, I was prepared for a dark OS. And it was one all right.

Using the prevailing selfie craze as the subject of the OS was an ingenious idea.

With this OS ,you have successfully highlighted the hazards of being obsessed with clicking selfies, to the detriment of one's safety.

They had too much joy, they had too much fun ,living life in the fast lane and the end of it was all too tragic.

Thank you Stuti for this heart-wrenching OS- it made for a very interesting read.⭐️

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-
Res Di

Unres Di

Amazing os Di

Emotional too

Way of writing is fantastic

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Unres Di
Amazing os Di
Emotional too
Way of writing is fantastic

Thanks for pm Di

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Thanks for pm Di

Sorry for the late reply Di

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 7 years ago

#27

stuti dearest...🤗

sooo proud of u...😃

ok the title itself gave me hints & the whole scenario was penned up so well...👏👏👏

yet the surprise element was there...😳

in start i felt it to be jo who is gone , but it turned out to be jalal...💔

some heartfelt dialogues , that realization...😭

so finely u hv taken two protagonists who very much depicts the youth of this day & the mindset very much similar to present times , deals with a very sad incident . their momentary hindrance & the madness costs them sooo high , that its only penitence left & sadly they could do nothing to save themselves from this catastrophe...

& yess its the family who gets left behind & had to suffer the losses , this pain is just...no words can express...😭

am soo happy that u took up this topic , in a way its ur contribution to the society as u're spreading the awareness in ur own unique way...😳

i hv always admired the thoughtfulness of urs , all ur works hv certain depth in them which i love to savour , so big thanx for that .

also it reminded me of the selfie advertisement by the government where nitin gadkari himself asks people to value their life & keep themselves away from the selfie madness .

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

selfie maine le li aj... sarpe mere rehta taj... selfie maine le li aaj!!!

comme t later baby!!!

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: roseraja1915
After reading your note, I was prepared for a dark OS. And it was one all right.

Using the prevailing selfie craze as the subject of the OS was an ingenious idea.

With this OS ,you have successfully highlighted the hazards of being obsessed with clicking selfies, to the detriment of one's safety.

They had too much joy, they had too much fun ,living life in the fast lane and the end of it was all too tragic.
Thank you Stuti for this heart-wrenching OS- it made for a very interesting read.⭐️

Thank you so much for such a beautiful review DI! 🤗