NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 32~Chapter 37-UPD JUN 28th

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

SO AS PER LANA'S REQUEST, I HAVE DECIDED TO PICK MY BRAINS TO COME UP WITH SOMETHING CREATIVE

I AM NOT A CREATIVE GENIUS, BUT I DO WRITE HINDI POETRY OFF AND ON

SO HERE GOES THE INTRODUCTORY PART OF MY EFFORT IN BINDING TO RHYME, IN HINDI, THE SUPERLATIVE STORY THAT LASHY HAS CREATED (TRANSLATIONS PROVIDED)

AAJ TUMHE MAIN KATHA SUNAOON PARNAGARH KI SUTAAON KI
KATHA NAHI, EK GAATHA HAI YE, TEEVR BUDDHI AUR VEER BHUJAAON KI

(Today I will tell you the story of the daughters of Parnagarh. It is not merely a story, but a saga of the intelligence of mind, and of the valor of powerful arms/bravery)

PARNAGARH SAMPANN RAJYA THHA, HISSA THHA MUGHALIYA SHAASAN KA
SUNDAR GHAATIYAAN, KACHCHA LOHA, SHAANTI AUR SAUHAARD KA AASAN THHA

(Parnagarh was a prosperous kingdom, a part of the Mughal Sultanate. It had beautiful valleys and was rich in iron ore. It was also a place of peace and warmth)

MANSABDAAR, SHRI JAGAT PRASAD JI EK SULJHE HUE SE NETA THHE
SHAHENSHAH KE VISHWAASI THHE, AUR PRAJA KE LIYE TRETA THHE

(The Mansabdaar, Shri Jagat Prasad was a just and great leader. He enjoyed the trust of the Shahenshah, and was akin to God for his subjects)

UNKI THHI DO LAADLI BETIYAAN, DURGA AUR HARKHA, AISI KHAAS
DONO NE MILKAR RAJYA SAMBHALA, JAB HUA PITA KA SWARGVAAS

(He had two daughters, Durga and Harkha, who were special in so many ways. Together they managed the affairs of the whole kingdom after the death of their father)

HAR KAARYA MEIN DAKSH YE DONO BEHNEIN, MILJULKAR SAB KUCHH KARTI THHI
SHAHENSHAH KHUSH THHE, PRAJA PRASANN THHI, SANTUSHTI HARDAM BEHTI THHI

(both lsisters were extremely talented and used to manage the show. The shahenshah was happy, as were he subjects, and contentment flowed all around)

It's superb work 👏 you literally wrote in a manner as gatha sung

And stopped were i want to read more. Waiting for other part. 😃

Edited by melovesja - 8 years ago

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Kuki715

@Kuki715

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#272

Lashy di... 🤗 This time around I really don't know what to say, the spinning has stopped but not the grinning. And I'll admit the chapter was long but not that long😆.

One could very much relate to Heera all alone on the horse with nothing to talk about... had she not initiated the talk would they have spent 2 hours silently 😲. Sometimes this Akbar is 😆... But then his reasons for traveling this way was so logical and caring . He knows what is best for her ⭐️ Bahadur was equally careful... 😳

That store room/hideout will we get to read more about it 😛

Because Khan Sahib... I'm travelling with a man, who loves to be surrounded by his work - morning, noon and night!' Heera gradually raised an eyebrow with a mark of confidence 'Such a man... staying away from his businesses? His offices? His men? His stables? For half a day? Merely to show me something?' she paused 'I don't quite see that happening!'

Now Heera too has starting to guess Akbar's moves, so much so that he was left without any comeback 👏

Akbar's plans for the canal were ⭐️ and the fact that Heera also had thought of it was a pleasant surprise😃.

When they both got carried away in their banter it was such a lovely read❤️.. him opening about his pastime and for the first time Heera listening and observering this side of him without the fears /doubts/anger.. ...

Then the water episode, baba re he thinks over so much before actually doing something especially with/ for her,thinking of the best approach, be it helping her out or going for the kiss😲...

And then the ... it was unexpected and enough to make me go ...

Heera's reactions was completely justified the kind of emotions she is been facing after marriage are and his too. I liked his little outburst, it made him more human😆

After the initial rude awakening, he figured out soon enough that it was only a slip-up from her

Okk I am seriously asking, is it humanly possible to have this level of understanding. 😲

He left and Heera will miss him more than she thinks an..d..and has he taken my Azeez too with him, kya 😒

Thank you so much for this beautiful chapter, you have no idea what your updates do to us.. ❤️

My guess for the letter- Bansi, Mahendra, Khalil or maybe AMK since he won't be in Parnagarh 😕

Edited by Kuki715 - 8 years ago

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Kuki715

@Kuki715

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: Bindu.

@bold:🤣

Good morning Lana,have a wonderful day!🤗

🤣 so chalo😲

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Kuki715

@Kuki715

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

wonderful start lavanya di...👏

it reminded me of the mahishmati anthem...😛 , oops again BB i hope lana di spares me...😆

Same here, di😆

Lavanya di... Simply superb👏👏

@red.. ⭐️⭐️

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: selvi1275

Oh dear...you didn't know PBD was updated...Well, it was like this... read HBAS ch:37...went Thud...had just regained consciousness, when PBD was updated...so Back to Back Stellar updates...

@bold...CS is not in Parnagarh...What are you going to do?

I am singing in the valley of Parnagarh,

O sathi re.. tere bina bhi kya jeena

Tere bina bhi kya jeena

Phoolon mein, kaliyon mein
Sapnon ki galiyon mein
Tere bina kuchh kahin na
Tere bina bhi kya jeena

Have got my assassin outfit out, will be leaving soon in search of CS!! It is too painful and full of void without him!!

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: lashy

Double 😲 to read the line in pink, Selvi!! Even I am surprised!! But good for you!! 😃

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#277

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Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

SO AS PER LANA'S REQUEST, I HAVE DECIDED TO PICK MY BRAINS TO COME UP WITH SOMETHING CREATIVE

I AM NOT A CREATIVE GENIUS, BUT I DO WRITE HINDI POETRY OFF AND ON

SO HERE GOES THE INTRODUCTORY PART OF MY EFFORT IN BINDING TO RHYME, IN HINDI, THE SUPERLATIVE STORY THAT LASHY HAS CREATED (TRANSLATIONS PROVIDED)

AAJ TUMHE MAIN KATHA SUNAOON PARNAGARH KI SUTAAON KI
KATHA NAHI, EK GAATHA HAI YE, TEEVR BUDDHI AUR VEER BHUJAAON KI

(Today I will tell you the story of the daughters of Parnagarh. It is not merely a story, but a saga of the intelligence of mind, and of the valor of powerful arms/bravery)

PARNAGARH SAMPANN RAJYA THHA, HISSA THHA MUGHALIYA SHAASAN KA
SUNDAR GHAATIYAAN, KACHCHA LOHA, SHAANTI AUR SAUHAARD KA AASAN THHA

(Parnagarh was a prosperous kingdom, a part of the Mughal Sultanate. It had beautiful valleys and was rich in iron ore. It was also a place of peace and warmth)

MANSABDAAR, SHRI JAGAT PRASAD JI EK SULJHE HUE SE NETA THHE
SHAHENSHAH KE VISHWAASI THHE, AUR PRAJA KE LIYE TRETA THHE

(The Mansabdaar, Shri Jagat Prasad was a just and great leader. He enjoyed the trust of the Shahenshah, and was akin to God for his subjects)

UNKI THHI DO LAADLI BETIYAAN, DURGA AUR HARKHA, AISI KHAAS
DONO NE MILKAR RAJYA SAMBHALA, JAB HUA PITA KA SWARGVAAS

(He had two daughters, Durga and Harkha, who were special in so many ways. Together they managed the affairs of the whole kingdom after the death of their father)

HAR KAARYA MEIN DAKSH YE DONO BEHNEIN, MILJULKAR SAB KUCHH KARTI THHI
SHAHENSHAH KHUSH THHE, PRAJA PRASANN THHI, SANTUSHTI HARDAM BEHTI THHI

(both sisters were extremely talented and used to manage the show. The shahenshah was happy, as were he subjects, and contentment flowed all around)

Lavanya OMG!! You got to be kidding me!!! You are such a proficient in narrating a story with perfect fluency in Hindi tongue!! 👏👏 Simply WOW!! I can imagine a man sitting amidst the town center back in old days singing this in a rhythmic manner in one tune telling the story to the people and young kids!! This is more than beautiful and awesome!! I want to see and hear more!! If I had not probed you, I wouldn't have been able to see this side of you! You are one talented house and you said you are not a creative genius!! 😲 If this is not creativity then what is??!! Keep writing, I want to read the whole story in this form! So get going!! 😃 Thank you!! 🤗

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#278

kuku ur review...

& the emojis...naughty girl...😆 , keep it up...👍🏼

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: lghosh
The journey was quiet and long,
the silence was poignantly strong!
She wanted him to converse with her,
Feelings in her heart longed him to stir!
He kept going, keeping a hold on her,
He walked aside on foot, not going afar!
He could have ridden on a mare but he did not,
He wanted her safety and that is what he got!
She broke the silence, he had a smile,
expecting her questions now for a while!
Curiosity broke its spell, she probed his whim,
He was surprised at her estimation of him!
He showed her the valley and his plan was told,
She asked for a blueprint to feel the map unfold!
Once satisfied she probed for some more,
to know about him, to feel his core!
He admired her regal beauty and poise,
Both wanted to muse, away from all noise!
He revealed his passion of riding at night,
His preference for solitude came to her sight!
He was intrigued, at her interest for him,
Is her heart thawing? His heart went to beam!
On his query she started to laugh,
Riding at night for her is very tough!
To stop her laughter she bit her lip
Seeing this, his heart swelled to take a dip,
In that ocean of nectar, her lips offered,
To taste them fully his heart long suffered!
He gazed at her cheek, her tresses and nape,
He couldn't control his desire that took shape!
Both of them got carried away,
the awkward pause made its way!
She laughed at her own self all upbeat,
Then she was all thirsty from the heat,
He offered his water bag to quench her thirst,
She choked on the water, coughing aburst!
He helped her to regain her normal breath,
But he lost his control and his self-faith!
Her eyes showed admiration luring him in,
did it reflect a belonging to him from within?
He needed to hold her face and tresses,
grazing her cheek and beholding her graces!
He made the promise to protect his Heera,
Never to let her suffer...was it a chimera?
He asked her to trust him over and over,
Pledge made, his jawline on her's went rover!
Finally he gave into his demanding desire,
to taste those lips that aroused his inner fire!
It was heaven when he first pressed a kiss,
He felt in paradise enveloped in a bliss!
He lingered more in his first act of passion,
He wanted to continue in that fashion!
But he wanted a peek to see how she felt,
He saw more tears and his heart then melt.
After the passionate stupor, mistrust grew,
reality dawned, her heart leapt and she knew,
What will happen to her heart? Her feelings?
Will she be shattered with Ustaad's dealings?
The mistrust and doubts crept crawling back,
half-hearted words uttered! He was taken aback!
She wanted to clarify but could not do so!
He cleared his point of view feeling very low!
He freed her from the marital corporal ties,
But she could not tell him where her heart lies!
He knew she was not wrong to think of him so,
He has not been a true soul from the get-go!
Quickly he forgave her, letting go of his ire,
He can't remain angry on her, even if he so desire!
He pledged not to be carried away again,
by temptations, till her trust is regained.
When she accepts her marriage and him,
he will fancy in his desire and his whim!
Till then he sets his way apart from her,
the third point was to be away and afar!
On business, he leaves her in pain and tears,
She longs, he longs but none of them hears!
After high comes the low, everyone knows,
Readers are floating on air and it shows!

lana di...🤗

ur words , ur take...❤️

am just blissed out...

thoroughly enjoyed it along with the choco rolls...😆

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: lghosh

Oh dear...you didn't know PBD was updated...Well, it was like this... read HBAS ch:37...went Thud...had just regained consciousness, when PBD was updated...so Back to Back Stellar updates...

@bold...CS is not in Parnagarh...What are you going to do?

I am singing in the valley of Parnagarh,

O sathi re.. tere bina bhi kya jeena

Tere bina bhi kya jeena

Phoolon mein, kaliyon mein
Sapnon ki galiyon mein
Tere bina kuchh kahin na
Tere bina bhi kya jeena

Have got my assassin outfit out, will be leaving soon in search of CS!! It is too painful and full of void without him!!

& then lana di'll sing ,

Gumnam Hain Koi Badnam Hain Koi
Kisko Khabar Kaun Hain
Woh Anjan Hain Koi
Gumnam Hain Koi Badnam Hain Koi
Kisko Khabar Kaun Hai...😛

Edited by --cute.manasi-- - 8 years ago