NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 30~Chapter 35-UPD JUN 2nd - Page 25

Originally posted by: Tilottamaa

All of us would love to visit this Paradise, won't we?! 😛... Am I mistaken, or was your write up shorter than usual? It finished fast...

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Main bhi na

I didn't know that 🤔

I offer her something healthy now 😳

Thank you lashy di for correcting me 🤗

Originally posted by: Kuki715

selecting rosewood(Rose di..after being in bowl of cold water ,his favorite sherbet ,now you would be hiding his secrets too, lucky you😆)

😲 Rose there too?? 😲

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Aww 🤗

For you ...

My sweetie!! 😳 🤗

Originally posted by: lashy

Bindup that's a huge range of alcoholic cocktails you're offering her 😆 there's even nimboo on the side!

she'll surely doze off... and someone handsome will have to carry her back home!😆

Chellam... Remember I'm still in that Sanyasini avatar!! 🤓 Shiva shiva shiva... abachaaram... abachaaram...

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 35.

The story goes thus..

What a wonderful treat, our author has given

Making all the readers love-smitten

☺️

How the couple draw near each other

She caring for him and he caring for her

How can there be a more meaningful romance

Than the two understanding each other at a glance

What am I supposed to add to this Periyamma!

We stop before proceeding to the next scene of her writing

Unless we're satisfied with a second or third reading..

Really? I'm getting emotional with wet eyes

Her greatness is revealed when she orders his cabinet

The best wood available with the best workmanship (put) in it

Yes...

She corroborates his clever lies to safeguard her community

She admires him for his tactfulness and his sincerity.

👍🏼

He found a haven for his horses royal

She understands his motive to be so very loyal

We cannot separate them and study them as two

As they are intertwined as one in their view..

Kakasa's signature laddus and Vaid kaka's folly

Give the readers the moments of happiness and jolly

😆

Fun intended but, we could see his embarrassment

She watches it with eyes filled with puzzlement

He is drawing towards her step by step

To convince her carefully avoiding any misstep

The last laddu , playing the part of a cupid , is not so dumb

" The last one was mine..and I enjoyed it to its last crumb!"

With Khan Sahib in her mind and Samart Singh in her lips

Whatta line!

She feels the metamorphosis taking place in her without any fuss

The metamorphosis took place also within me

Teenage Periyamma!😲

But in the reverse order making me a teen!

Such is the effect of the Author's pen

That has won our hearts and (made us) read it again and again

The red lines according to some, are like the "stop" signal

We enjoy the sojourn by guessing what the story would foretell..

Thank you so much Periyamma... with every one of your story so far... I go red redder reddest! Not the tomato man red... but the Heera style red!

🤗

Love you!

The protogonists in your story are so well described by you that it makes us dream about them all the time. Lashy i have no words or talent to comment on the chapter. But want to say that each and every chapter of HBAS is a gem and precious.

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

The protogonists in your story are so well described by you that it makes us dream about them all the time. Lashy i have no words or talent to comment on the chapter. But want to say that each and every chapter of HBAS is a gem and precious.

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Lashy di 🤗...I so wish I was in Parnagarh ...watching them..it was magical⭐️⭐️.

Oooh don't worry Azeez made it magical for you too... here he's taken you flying to Parnagarh

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Chellam... Remember I'm still in that Sanyasini avatar!! 🤓 Shiva shiva shiva... abachaaram... abachaaram...