NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 30~Chapter 35-UPD JUN 2nd

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 35.

The story goes thus..

What a wonderful treat, our author has given
Making all the readers love-smitten
How the couple draw near each other
She caring for him and he caring for her
How can there be a more meaningful romance
Than the two understanding each other at a glance
We stop before proceeding to the next scene of her writing
Unless we're satisfied with a second or third reading..

Her greatness is revealed when she orders his cabinet
The best wood available with the best workmanship (put) in it
She corroborates his clever lies to safeguard her community
She admires him for his tactfulness and his sincerity.
He found a haven for his horses royal
She understands his motive to be so very loyal
We cannot separate them and study them as two
As they are intertwined as one in their view..

Kakasa's signature laddus and Vaid kaka's folly
Give the readers the moments of happiness and jolly
Fun intended but, we could see his embarrassment
She watches it with eyes filled with puzzlement
He is drawing towards her step by step
To convince her carefully avoiding any misstep
The last laddu , playing the part of a cupid , is not so dumb
" The last one was mine..and I enjoyed it to its last crumb!"

With Khan Sahib in her mind and Samart Singh in her lips
She feels the metamorphosis taking place in her without any fuss
The metamorphosis took place also within me
But in the reverse order making me a teen!
Such is the effect of the Author's pen
That has won our hearts and (made us) read it again and again
The red lines according to some, are like the "stop" signal
We enjoy the sojourn by guessing what the story would foretell..

Karkuzhali.

Brilliant, brilliant , sachu patti 👏👏👏

So so beautifully written with adorable picture

Thank you so much for this treat 🤗

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 35.

How the couple draw near each other
She caring for him and he caring for her
How can there be a more meaningful romance
Than the two understanding each other at a glance

We cannot separate them and study them as two
As they are intertwined as one in their view..

The last laddu , playing the part of a cupid , is not so dumb
" The last one was mine..and I enjoyed it to its last crumb!"

The metamorphosis took place also within me
But in the reverse order making me a teen!
Such is the effect of the Author's pen
That has won our hearts and (made us) read it again and again
The red lines according to some, are like the "stop" signal
We enjoy the sojourn by guessing what the story would foretell..

Karkuzhali.

WHAT'S IN A VERSE, IF THE LINES RHYME NOT?!

WHAT'S IN RHYME, IF IT'S DEVOID OF THOUGHT!

The entire poem was a beauty, but the lines I have quoted rang the sweetest. 😊

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1003116

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
 

Good Morning Periamma, Bindu and all my Baisas!!🤗




Good evening Lana, Jahnu and Pallu!!🤗

Good morning kal , Rose , bindu & all other sahibas. After such tantalizing update, I am still sizzling, butterfly effect in my tummy , trust me Lashy sahiba and kal is going to agree with me, it is these flutters that take you to new zenith. It is all together different feeling 😳 and you achieved that feast just by one simple, truthful confession plus the husky voice of course 😉 .
Love you for such extraordinary update and making readers feel what leads are feeling 🤗 👏 .
Lep waale pyaar se Laddu waala pyaar hume behad padand aaya
😆

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: lashy

Wohi tho😆

Bold :Oh, Chellam, no ...no... don't apologize, darling! 🤗

It was HBASdrama at its best and it warranted the reactions that it did!👏

What a breakout performance, Chellam!👏

So, all is well and the status quo stands .😃

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: al_pal
Good morning kal , Rose , bindu & all other sahibas. After such tantalizing update, I am still sizzling, butterfly effect in my tummy , trust me Lashy sahiba and kal is going to agree with me, it is these flutters that take you to new zenith. It is all together different feeling 😳 and you achieved that feast just by one simple, truthful confession plus the husky voice of course 😉 .
Love you for such extraordinary update and making readers feel what leads are feeling 🤗 👏 .
Lep waale pyaar se Laddu waala pyaar hume behad padand aaya
😆

No doubt Pallu darling.. I agree I agree I agree... Just one Laddu but the entire universe is I meant Australia to US.😉

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
Yeah!! 😭

Flashback:
Wait.. what? Did she just say I'm a chatterbox... **Chellam reads carefully word by word then letter by letter...** No.. She said both.. Okay!!

😆 😆 😆 😆

Bold : Chellam & Sandy Begum : Both of you are the EXCEPTIONS to the rule! 🤗🤗

Edited by roseraja1915 - 8 years ago

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Bold :Oh, Chellam, no ...no... don't apologize, darling! 🤗

It was HBASdrama at its best and it warranted the reactions that it did!👏

What a breakout performance, Chellam!👏

So, all is well and the status quo stands .😃

This picture... 🤣 😆 🤗

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 35.

The story goes thus..

What a wonderful treat, our author has given
Making all the readers love-smitten
How the couple draw near each other
She caring for him and he caring for her
How can there be a more meaningful romance
Than the two understanding each other at a glance
We stop before proceeding to the next scene of her writing
Unless we're satisfied with a second or third reading..

Her greatness is revealed when she orders his cabinet
The best wood available with the best workmanship (put) in it
She corroborates his clever lies to safeguard her community
She admires him for his tactfulness and his sincerity.
He found a haven for his horses royal
She understands his motive to be so very loyal
We cannot separate them and study them as two
As they are intertwined as one in their view..

Kakasa's signature laddus and Vaid kaka's folly
Give the readers the moments of happiness and jolly
Fun intended but, we could see his embarrassment
She watches it with eyes filled with puzzlement
He is drawing towards her step by step
To convince her carefully avoiding any misstep
The last laddu , playing the part of a cupid , is not so dumb
" The last one was mine..and I enjoyed it to its last crumb!"

With Khan Sahib in her mind and Samart Singh in her lips
She feels the metamorphosis taking place in her without any fuss
The metamorphosis took place also within me
But in the reverse order making me a teen!
Such is the effect of the Author's pen
That has won our hearts and (made us) read it again and again
The red lines according to some, are like the "stop" signal
We enjoy the sojourn by guessing what the story would foretell..

Karkuzhali.

Periyamma, this treat that you have given us in the form of The story goes thus is no less magical than C35!

Which line/lines should be picked as the standout ones in this exquisite work when all mesmerize the reader in the same manner as the leads' actions do? 😃

A salute to your creative talents and our love to you, darling Periyamma! ❤️

Thank you so much for beginning our weekend by winning our hearts with this capture of Chapter 35. 🤗

And the painting: Love birds, love birds, love birds, love birds, thakka thimmi tha!

( Tune : An Anbe Vaa Song) ❤️