NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 30~Chapter 35-UPD JUN 2nd

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: selvi1275
A very sweet update...Lashy...and the following lines reminded me of this pic...eventhough he did'nt do any such thing...His words thereafter...it felt more like 'That could've been the scene'..YOUR COVER PIC...

If only he could close in on her with two long strides, seize her wrists and arrest her within his clasp till she had no other go but to listen to what he had to say

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Kuki begum and Adwi, you both are questioning and asking about furniture and wood? 😕 instead of the person it was ordered for? 😲 Kya ho gaya hai? SL had a cyclone and you both got the brunt of it? 🤔 Or is it a type of distraction from the obvious?It? 😉😆 I sincerely hope so.

I snuck in to see over the top drooling and I see discussion on wood! 🥱

So disappointed in Azeez and 'maach bhat'! 😃 Ab Jaldi se apna naam roshan karo! Hrithik hi sahi, roshan toh karo, instead of seesham and rosewood! 🤣

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#163

Hayooo I had an apple crisis at home and pressed before I finished typing... lol... I've added more though I think no one's too interested anymore 😆

Originally posted by: Tilottamaa

Lashy di takes Dabur Chawanprash every morning, and comes prepared for all questions! Cookies or biscuits 😉😆

>>>🤣

On a serious note... She is a marvel, isn't she?! 😳

>>> 😲

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

Yes. So could i. 😳 And the 'Heera' as well. And the 'marry me' too. There is something about the reclusive manners of AMK that makes each of his whispers audible to the readers.

I wonder what will be our collective haalat when he gets passionate.😔

The drool dam of HBAS will break and no amount of rescue operation will be able to save you all! 🤣🤣

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: Jo08
Again an amazing chapter! 👏 👏

And actually the comment in red brought me back from the 'Paradise'! 😳

Waiting eargerly for the next update! 😊

Hey Jyothi... so glad to see you back... and you didn't run away from the crazy bunch that we are😆! 🤗

Oooh there's been some complaining about the red lines lol😆

Awww I am glad dear...

Feels so nice to be able to keep you all entertained 🤗

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hemakeerti

@hemakeerti

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

Yes. So could i. 😳 And the 'Heera' as well. And the 'marry me' too. There is something about the reclusive manners of AMK that makes each of his whispers audible to the readers.

I wonder what will be our collective haalat when he gets passionate.😔

Let's tag each other for an ice bucket challenge then... best time to take the challenge up 😉

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: hemakeerti
'Your anger is justified, Begum Sahiba... I gave them away to achieve my means... that was incredibly self-indulgent of me...' he huskily whispered over her shoulder 'but where I truly became selfish was with the final sweet... Vaid Sahib is mistaken... I did save one... the best one... kept it for when I was hungriest to relish it most... ate it by myself when no one was watching... took my time... didn't share it... didn't even tell Azeez about it, though he had been travelling all along with me... I'm never selfish with food, but this one instance was an exception... that last one was mine and mine alone to enjoy - every... last... crumb... of... it!'

No pinning to walls, no passionate touches, no intense eye locks... no cheesy flirting either... yet, at the end of it I found myself gulping, TWICE, to wet my parched throat...
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU x 224718712 times FOR saying this!!!! I could squish you so tight for this one sentence right now!!! Thank you for noticing... reading my mind... whatever you might call it...

You've an exceptional knack of arousing readers with simplest words Sahiba... This paragraph alone speaks volumes of your prowess. Take a bow!

Really? ☺️ So, today was Jhanu's dhak-dhak day?

But you shouldn't have ended there... I was never before so disappointed with that customary note than I was today.

7500 words with a proper tata from AMK...
what more could be included here😆

I love ya but will love you more if you don't stop at such vital junctures in coming updates 😆

Achaa? Heera was climbing stairs in slow motion, not Mt Everest... it had to end here na😆

ETA: The last line highlights the significance of editing/punctuation...
the ellipsis between each word took that sentence to a whole new level...
I could literally hear Akbar's husky whisper there...😉

Again... THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU x 224718712 times FOR saying this!!!! I could squish you so tight for this one sentence right now!!!
You noticed... ☺️

Love you so much for this!!!!🤗

Edited by lashy - 8 years ago

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: lghosh
Kuki begum and Adwi, you both are questioning and asking about furniture and wood? 😕 instead of the person it was ordered for? 😲 Kya ho gaya hai? SL had a cyclone and you both got the brunt of it? 🤔 Or is it a type of distraction from the obvious?It? 😉😆 I sincerely hope so.
I snuck in to see over the top drooling and I see discussion on wood! 🥱
So disappointed in Azeez and 'maach bhat'! 😃 Ab Jaldi se apna naam roshan karo! Hrithik hi sahi, roshan toh karo, instead of seesham and rosewood! 🤣

Why should "maachh bhaat" drool when all of you're here? She's here to watch all the drama and melodramas that'll be unfolding now 😉😆...

Edited by Tilottamaa - 8 years ago

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

Yes. So could i. 😳 And the 'Heera' as well. And the 'marry me' too. There is something about the reclusive manners of AMK that makes each of his whispers audible to the readers.

I wonder what will be our collective haalat when he gets passionate.😔

I have two koschuns for you lovely ladies... I know Jalal and PBDJalal/Mahesh Babu aren't going to mind if I borrow you both for a second.. 😆

AMK... has reclusive manners - is this why his advances have this effect? Or is he predictable?

[On a side note - Jhanu ka, I know... but Sandy your lines above were such a 'pleasant' surprise to me, you cannot imagine... 😉]

Edited by lashy - 8 years ago

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Jo08

@Jo08

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: lashy


Hey Jyothi... so glad to see you back... and you didn't run away from the crazy bunch that we are😆!🤗
Oooh there's been some complaining about the red lines lol😆
Awww I am glad dear...
Feels so nice to be able to keep you all entertained🤗

This JA forum is full of talented people n not crazy ones!

I have read so many FFs n OS here. All of them r amazing!
Im glad to read such beautifully written FFs! 😳 😊